Kingdom Hearts-Birth By sleep-

[Divine Light]

yo this is a KH: BBS fanfiction hense the title lol:toungesmile: so i hope you enjoy.

Prologue-

a tall man with tanned skin walked through the halls of the Order of Lights stronghold. today was of utmost importence for today...was the day they would be chosen. this mans name was Xehanort. he had yellow eyes and long silver hair his dream was to asend the ranks all the way to the top and become Master Xehanort one day. Xehanort entered a huge room filled with chairs sat in by the leaders of the Order of Light. in front of everything stood a high screen that went to the celling. if only we could have done it in a more traditional way said one of the council. but time is short we must do it now. Xehanort knew this room well. this is the very room where the next 3 keyblade wielders would be chosen. back when he was discovered they had diffrent ways of finding bearers of the powerful keys. but times had changed and new faster ways were found.(just so you know the councill members outfits are like organization 13's only they are completely white. Xehanort right now is also wearing one of these cloaks) now do it young Xehanort commanded one of the council. Xehanort approached the huge screen. he clicked a few buttons and it began. there was a load huming sound then the screen flashed suddenly. the screen showed millions of childern. after a few seconds Xehanort hit the button and it stopped. three faces were shown on the screen. one with short Brown hair another with short spiky blond hair. and another with blue spiky-ish hair. a full picture of the brown haired one came up with his Bio age likes dislikes ect. the same with the others. these three..named Terra Aqua and Ven though his name said it was short for Ventus. would be the next ones to wield the keyblade. they would be the ones to set the plan in motion. it is done sighed a councill member.

end of beginning.-
so what did you think:toungesmile:

[nojerom_14]

wow i really liked that, very cool. [liked the white cloaks, something out of the ordinary like that always catches my eye for some reason hehe]

some tips, Dude: you might wanna edit it.
1. edit it.
2. separate talking into different paragraphs.
3. please use quotation marks.
4. please explain a bit more, it was a tad bit confusing.
but good nonetheless!!! keep going, Dude!!!!! :thumbsup: