Legacy Of The Worlds

[TheLastKnight]

Don't worry...I'll still finish "The World" but, first, I had another idea...I hope I can have 2 fics to work on at once...and not affect me in any way. This is the prologue

Prologue, Have you ever?


Has anyone ever asked you... "Do you really think there are life on other planets?" you would normally respond saying, "no" right? Well, what if someone asked you, "Do you believe in any other planets other than all the ones confirmed?

You, again, would normally respond, "no"

Have you ever wondered, "Maybe there IS some life on other planets...?" or "Maybe there ARE other planets out there..."

We just never know...There could be...several worlds, that share the same sky... We may never find out... Or will we? It's hard to predict, isn't it? You're probably puzzled from what I'm asking you, you're probably thinking, "What the hell!? Why in the world would he ask us something like this?"

You may think I'm asking you a little bit insane questions.

"No...of course there's not anything else but us!" would be your normal response...so...what about having a change of thought? I will prove to you that you're wrong...

[Sonja~Soulheart]

^ cool prologue :3 this sounds interesting :'D will watch out for this when the chapters come out :'D

[TheLastKnight]

lol, thanks.

just one so far, ah well.

I MIGHT have the next chapter up..if I can think of better character names

[Max/souleater]

still thinkin of what to name my new fick, hopefully it will come to me, i want to start it...
anyway, nice job dude, sounds like it'll be okay.

[Dantés de Divinity]

Hmm... well this should be interesting.
bowchickawowwow

[TheLastKnight]

I might have the first chapter up, later...I'm going to my mom's this weekend, I'll type it out there...

[snowdog]

Ooo, nice. Is this gonna be KH-related or original?

<3

[TheLastKnight]

it's basically original, but there will be some KH elements within it, as well as some "Star Ocean: Till the end of time" elements as well

[TheLastKnight]

Chapter 1, The opening of an awesome story

I was in my bed, sleeping...I was thinking of what happened two years ago... You want to here how it goes? Then here it is
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I was sitting on my chair, the room around me was dark, and purple, with a couch right beside me. All of a sudden, the phone rang, It was my girlfriend.

"Do you want to hang out?" she said, "Or are you too busy playing that battle simulator?"

"No, haha, I can hang out, where?" I said.

"Where do you think Scar?"

"Sorry Edai... I'm a little out of it today..." I said, "What time?" I reached for my daily planner. I began jotting down the time, and the place she said.

"Hm...three sound okay?"

"Sounds great, I'll be there," I thought to myself, "I can't believe I forgot the place she usually wants to hang out...at the hotel...I guess I should get ready..."

I got ready...and I left for the hotel. I met Edai there, and she looked so beautiful... Jaw dropping. I asked her, "What do ya want to do? Go to the beach?"

"Yeah, I'll be right back!" She said, excitedly. I waited quietly... "I'm here!" she screamed. She was in a smoking hot bathing suit.

We had such a great time swimming. "It's so much fun, here on earth!"

"What are you talking about?" I asked.

"Nothing..." she replied.

Edai was a childhood friend of mine, who gets really excited, very easily... Just then, my friend Steelic walks around, and we spot eachother.

"Sup Steelic," I said.

"Hey there Scar!" he said.

"What are you doing here?" I asked him.

"Just hanging out..." he replied. Edai was in the changing room.

Just then, the hotel started shaking! Edai came out of the the changing room, in a robe. "what's going on?!" she asked.

"I'm not quite sure..." I replied. A man in black came from the shadows! He was dressed in a long, black robe. He had a huge scythe for his own weapon. He turned to face me...

"I've come for you..." the man said.

"What for??" I said.

"Just come with me..."

"What if I say no"

"I'm afraid, I must insist... Get on the ship..." I got on the ship...scared to death... They put such hard and tight cuffs on me...It hurt so badly.

"Ha, we got him..." I heard someone telling their leader..."Now, when we get there, you will be able to assassinate him..."

"..." I thought to myself. "Such an experience,"

Steelic was soon shone on the radar and cameras. I thought, "To the rescue..." I was so god damn joyful! I couldn't believe it...

It was dark...With computers all around, and communicators.

We finally lifted off...With Steelic on the ship, I felt worried. I never felt this way before... we entered some type of space... Did someone ever tell you it takes however long to get to a planet? They were lying...It doesn't take more than a week to fly from earth to another close planet...

"We should land in Elic soon... " I heard them saying, I was still chained up still.

I thought, "Elic...what's that?" I saw Steelic enter the room. I was relieved. I couldn't believe it. He asked me if I was okay...and I said I was...

"Let's blow the place!" Steelic knocked out every black robed man, and destroyed all of the computers, as well as crashing the entire spacecraft.

"I guess we'll land on that underdeveloped planet over there!" Steelic said.

"Huh?" I asked.

"I'll explain later..." Steelic replied.

[Dantés de Divinity]

Hmm... nice names. Can't wait for the next one.
bowchicka see ya for now

[TheLastKnight]

really? it was good? hm...I expected to get a little bit more help

please, if you didn't really like it, just tell me what to fix

[TheLastKnight]

here is my new chapter, it's alot better than chapter 1...and I wouldn't mind some critique...I can take it...

Chapter 2, Jailed

I was feeling as if we were going to die! but Steelic managed to guide the ship to safety, and we survived. We soon got out of the ship, and Steelic turned to me...

"You may need a weapon...I can fight with my bare hands," he said with a smile on his face, "A sword?"

"Yeah...I guess...What happened?" I asked, "What is this placed...?" I started looking around, it looks like I was in the middle of a forest.

"Did you ever believe there was another planet out there?" he asked me, "There are millions, scientists never wanted us to know..."

"Wow...and you said this one was underdeveloped?"

"Yeah...They haven't done much with it...It's got very low technology..." He answered, "It's nothing like earth...which means no battle simulators..." He got done making the sword, "Here...I made it through the ship...Let's blow it up" he set up another bomb in it.

So, here I am...on an underdeveloped planet, which is scary enough...But we were in the middle of a forest. Wouldn't you be scared too? You'd, trust me on this one.

"Anyways, you played the simulator enough to know how to fight, so let's go..." Steelic said, with a moment of excitement.

"Okay... I'll go..." I've never had to face REAL monsters before. Something with sharp fangs started crawling up to us.

"Slash it now!" Steelic yelled. I slashed the monster upward, and destroyed it, "Good job, I think one of the villagers heard me yelling though..."

"We don't know if this civilazation is nice or not...What are we gonna do?" I asked.

"We'll test it out," he said, "Let me do the talking..."

A boy came up to Steelic.

"Hey, my village's mayor wants to talk to you..." The boy said, acting excited, "Come with me, please?? He really wants to talk to you both!"

"Okay...show us the way..." Steelic said. The boy started walking...But, there were more, and more herds of monsters. We killed them all, Steelic with his fists, and me with my sword.

We got to the village, and the little boy showed us to the mayors house. "Hello, mayor, I've brought them..." the boy said.

"Ah, yes...have a seat children..." The old man said.

"Can we help you?" Steelic asked, "Why do you need to see us?"

"It's about the other boy," The mayor said. I perked up.

"Me? What do you want with me?" I asked, "I'm not that special am I?" I kept asking myself about the men in black robes as well.

"Many people are after you...Do you know about the organization?" The mayor asked, "They're the men in black robes of which were chasing you..."

"How do you know this stuff?" I asked.

"I just do..." The Mayor said, "That is none of your concern...Stay and fight with us...we are at war...The other side wants you too..."

"...We need to get off here..." I whispered to Steelic.

"I know..." He said, "Sorry, we can't help you," he told the mayor how it was.

"Very well, guards...take them away..." He commanded.

"Yes sir!" said the guards. The guards took us away to a jail, it had two beds and a barred window. Hey, you got to have fresh air, right?

Just a few hours later, I keep hearing footsteps around, and it wasn't the guards'. It was someone else. But, we don't know anyone else from this planet.

It was a one of the men in black robes!! I couldn't believe which was worse...being captured by those guys...or Being captured by these...I didn't know...But the man said he'd free us, if we came with him...
I didn't know what to do...Steelic even told me it was my call.

I ended up going...The mayor would just let us rot in the cell. I figured we could try escaping again...
When we got to the ship, he brought down his hood. It was a powerful man, with two daggers as weapons. "I am not here to take you to Elic, I'm here to take you to my world..." He said.

"Yours'?" I asked.

"Yes, my leader wants to talk to you..." He answered, "My name is Axilor,"

"My name is Scar," I said, "This is my friend Steelic..." I had introduced us both. "Shall we be going now, then?"

"yeah, let's go..." Axilor said, "Oh, by the way...You can call me Ax..."

"Okay...then, Ax...What is your world called?" Steelic said.

"My world is called, Spike, it's a fully developed planet, just like earth..."

"Spike, eh?" Steelic said, "Never heard of it..."

"That's okay, you'll see it..."

We boarded the space craft. "This thing has everything, make yourselves at home...My leader needs to have a conference with you both...You don't need to talk on an empty stomach, There is food in the storage place..."

"No thanks," I said refusing. Steelic sat down, and gave me a wierd look, as if he was saying, "Why did you make this decision?"

Anyways, Ax said, "It will be a few days...Better get some sleep..."

"Okay...you sure you won't slit our throats in our sleep?" Steelic asked.

"I won't good night..." He replied.

[Ultima Star]

Nice thanks for telling me about this TLK I'm looking forward to it is very interesting and I like those names..you're very creative ^^

[TheLastKnight]

They're from another thread I made...I like'd em, so I used them

and still, wouldn't mind some critique...if it helps me

EDIT: I'll have the next chapter out sometime this week

[Dantés de Divinity]

Interesting. I like where this is going. I'll check back in a few days or so for the next one. Take your time though. Good chap dude. ^_^
bowchickawowwow good