Legacy Of The Worlds - Page 3

TheLastKnight · 12/13/07, 10:20 PM

lol, That, I care about. It's just I only LOVE writing, and I typically hate reading.

Ah well, You could still read it, right?

Dantés de Divinity · 12/14/07, 11:21 PM

Of course dude. ^_^
bowchickawowwow

TheLastKnight · 12/14/07, 11:37 PM

Heh, This will probably be my last Fic, after this, or sometime during the time I write this fic, I will finish the world, I presume that this one is better, anyways

Black Rose · 12/17/07, 12:46 AM

its a good story so far TLK, but i feel its a little rushed. just slow down the story a little bit.

its really interesting though. i like where its going keep it up ^^

Sonja~Soulheart · 12/17/07, 10:58 AM

nice chapters :'D keep it up :3

(snowdog already pointed out the things you should do :3 )

TheLastKnight · 12/18/07, 10:05 PM

Sorry I haven't gotten anymore chapters in, I've been watching Bleach and Death Note alot...I'll try working on it

12/13/07, 10:20 PM	#31
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds lol, That, I care about. It's just I only LOVE writing, and I typically hate reading. Ah well, You could still read it, right?

12/14/07, 11:21 PM	#32
Dantés de Divinity Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive Posts: 1,967 Rep Power: 4	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds Of course dude. ^_^ bowchickawowwow

12/14/07, 11:37 PM	#33
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds Heh, This will probably be my last Fic, after this, or sometime during the time I write this fic, I will finish the world, I presume that this one is better, anyways Last edited by TheLastKnight; 12/16/07 at 11:30 PM.

12/17/07, 12:46 AM	#34
Black Rose raise your hands together Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Running and not looking back Age: 17 Posts: 2,831 Rep Power: 7	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds its a good story so far TLK, but i feel its a little rushed. just slow down the story a little bit. its really interesting though. i like where its going keep it up ^^

12/17/07, 10:58 AM	#35
Sonja~Soulheart Speed lvl- snail Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Where angels lose their way Age: 15 Posts: 1,582 Rep Power: 4	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds nice chapters :'D keep it up :3 (snowdog already pointed out the things you should do :3 )

12/18/07, 10:05 PM	#36
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: Legacy Of The Worlds Sorry I haven't gotten anymore chapters in, I've been watching Bleach and Death Note alot...I'll try working on it

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