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| Virus | thnx im thinking up some new stuff now |
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| Banned | yes that was great, im also intrigued. Keep it up dude |
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| Virus | Thnx *goes to type up some more* |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16
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| Virus | Thnx well I just got done writing the next chapter now things are getting real intense. It was now dark and it was almost impossible to see outside. They all decided to call it a day, since the whole city was in ruins for who knows how long Karlis invited them to stay with him for the night, he tons of hammocks so they slept in those. Dylan told Miki what they did before hand so off to bed they went. Miki and Deren fell asleep on the tables, while Phil was still working until he heard something break upstairs. He ran upstairs, and was struck with fear at who he saw. Omega was leaning against a wall messing with his claws. He looked over to Phil. “Hello, remember me?” Before Phil could do anything, Omega dashed over and knocked him against the wall near the stairs. Phil tried to get up but he couldn’t, he had hit the wall to hard. “Not so tough without your robotic arm are you? I know about your little project, I’m here to…finish it for you.” Omega laughed as he headed for the stairs. Miki and Deren had woke up when they heard the noise upstairs. As they headed upstairs Miki yelled. ”Phil, are you ok up there?” Phil tried to catch his breath trying to speak. “The virus is back, he is going for Zero!” Omega ran downstairs and phased through Deren and Miki heading for the capsule Zero was in. “Don’t let him get to Zero, the anti-virus program isn’t complete!” Phil yelled, but it was too late, before Miki and Deren could even get near to Omega he was already taking over Zero’s body. He busted through the capsule with the water all over the floor, he had spiked hair pointing up with two pointing down on both his sides, his eyes were regular blue. He wore a red short-sleeved short with a high collar, tan shorts with straps all on them and with the wrist bands on his arms. He looked at Deren and Miki just getting down the steps. “No…were to late.” Miki whispered. “Don’t be to sure about that.” Deren raised his arm and blasted the R.G.C at him. The infected Zero knocked it away from him with his right arm in the blink of an eye. “I don’t have time to play with you two.” He spoke in both Zero’s and Omega’s voice. He rose his left hand, opening it charging a blast. The blast went right for them, the whole basement exploded. The smoke from downstairs came bursting everywhere were Phil and the dog were. He heard everything that was happening downstairs, he couldn’t stay conscious, his eye lids getting heavy. Phil could hear someone walking up the stairs, slowly. Out of the smoke it was Zero smiling. "Thanks for the body docter, I'll be sure to take good care of it." He laughed after he said that walking out the door, as he was outside he turned to Phil ignoring what the people walking around would hear what he said. "Oh by the way, I would see if the two downstairs are alright if i was you, I did go a bit rough on them." After that he vanished. Phil still couldn't move, breathing hard and slow all he could say was "You'll pay for this...virus" The next morning Dylan woke up to find everyone gone, he ran upstairs looking for them, he ran into Karlis’ room and saw him sleeping in his bed. He ran to him shaking him telling him to get up. Karlis still asleep. “Five more minutes mommy, I don’t need to go to school on time everyday!” Dylan sighed, he snatched the sheets of the bed. Karlis woke up yawning. “Yo what was that for” He said still sleepy. “Mei and Aaron aren’t in their hammocks!” Dylan yelled. Karlis jumped out of bed and got dressed. They went outside, just seeing Aaron and Mei flying away in the same hover bikes Deren’s fellow soldiers were in. Dylan turned to Karlis. “Come on we got to follow them, is there anything you have we can follow them with, my hover board’s battery is still charging.” Karlis thought for a second then it came to him. “Yes there is something, my new land shuttle, its in the back be right back.” He ran behind the garage and started it up. Dylan could hear Karlis hitting something metal in the back and talking angrily at something. “Come on you piece of –boom-.“ Smoke popped up in the air. “Ah there we are!” Dylan called for Cory, he came running out. “Ok good now we just gotta wait for Karlis.” Karlis came from behind the garage with the shuttle, it had the front of an helicopter with rockets at the end, it hovered right infront of Dylan. Karlis opened the hatch. “Come on!” Dylan and Cory jumped in and they tailed off after them. “Now If I can just remember how to drive this thing.” He forgot everything about the machine. He tried to play it off like he knew what was what but he was as clueless as Dylan was. He closed his eyes and pressed a random bottom which turned on the gas into the engine giving them more speed. Now they weren’t too far away from Aaron and Mei, Mei looked back with newly colored dark purple eyes, she was defiantly infected. She had a doll eye stare looking back at Dylan and Karlis, since she is infected she is a whole different person. Aaron and Mei cut through buildings and streets but couldn’t lose Dylan and Karlis, they were right on them. About 25 feet away from them cars were being thrown everywhere followed by a loud slighty high pitched monsterous screech . Karlis eyes widened. “Wow that does not sound good.” Huge claws emerged from in between two buildings, and out came a huge monster with a large snout, 2 lizard like eyes with a see throw body. It’s screech cracked, the windshield on Karlis’ vehicle along with many building windows and cars. Karlis was confused and freaked out when he saw it. It was taller than the buildings. “Now that can’r be a desert beast, I know them all!” The monster had 2 arms but no legs and had the body of a snake. Dylan was almost speechless he could only utter out 3 words. “It’s a virus.” “Are you serious, that’s what they all look like!?” Karlis asked Dylan nodded his head. “No remember there are different classes this is only what some look like, but something doesn’t seem right, why would Tyler make something that big and monsterous and expect it to help people.” Karlis dodged “I don’t know but we gotta get away from it before it sees us!” It was too late, it had its eye on the car and started going after it. The shuttle was going back and forth trying to dodge all the debris and other things on the streets trying to get away from the virus. They were so busy trying to lose the Virus they forgot to follow Aaron and Mei, so they lost them. As they were cutting through buildings, in between the monsters screeching they heard someone calling for help. “Someone, Please someone help me, I can’t move!” Dylan thought of a plan, he took out his hover board and it was fully charged, he then looked at Karlis with a smile. “Karlis, I need you to go find whoever that is screaming, I’ll go and distract the virus ok?” Karlis shook his head. “Why does this stuff always happen to me.” He pressed the bottom to open the hatch. “Hurry go!” Dylan throw his hover board out and jumped on it, turning it going behind Karlis’ shuttle catching the Virus’ attention. “Hey over here!” He said. He took out a bomb and threw it right near its eyes, as it hit it screamed it pain, now it was angry. “Ha now I got your attention!” It jetted after him. "Uh oh..." He turned and went to the left while Karlis continued the other path. Now he could find out where the person in trouble was. Once again he heard the person scream, now it was started to sound like a man was yelling, Karlis heard him again. “Help please is anyone there!” Karlis went towards a nearby alleyway he knew about and saw a parts of a buildings wall thahadt fallen on top of the man crying for help, it was on top his legs. “Phew there you are!” He stopped the shuttle, opened the hatch and headed for the man. The man had long black hair down to his shoulders with a few over his face probably which probably happened from the fallen wall. He had a goatee only part on his chin, and was in a suit with a cane and his left sleeve was rolled up. “Oh thank goodness you head me, this debris fell on me when I heard a strange sreech over and over.” The man said, he was sweating all over and sounded tired. Karlis tried to think of what he could use to get the man out of there. He walked over took a deep breath and tried to lift it up high enough for the man to crawl out. He struggled a lot even for his age, finally he got it up and the man was able to get out. He got up dusting himself off. He pushed back the hair covering his face. “Thanks buddy, for a second I thought I might have been a goner,but anyway my name is Brad, Brad Tyrexil.” OCC: oooooooooooo a cliff hanger, if you guys remember Brad tyrexil is Tyler's son :p ...yeah also i keep forgetting to read over anc check for mistakes so please excuse the mess ups :p Last edited by Maverick E.S; 01/02/08 at 06:25 PM. |
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| Virus | Ok i seperated the stuff into chapters now but here it goes: “Hmm that name sounds familiar…” Karlis said, he had already forgotten about Brad, from when Dylan talked to him about it. “We’ll anyway I’m glad to meetcha my name is Karlis, you feeling ok, that wall must have really hurt you.” Brad shrugged smiling. “Ah I’m pretty tough it takes more than a few bricks to hurt me, but um Karlis I’d say we better high tail it out of here before that beast finds us.” “Ok lets go.” Karlis and Brad headed to the shuttle when Cory popped up barking. “Who is that…wait that’s right uh Dylan, wait Brad we gotta get Dylan first.” Brad nodded, they got in and went looking for him. Dylan was barely dodging the Virus’ blows. It smacked the end of his board and he went flying through a window on the top floor of a building about 20 floors high. He bounced and slid to the middle of the floor, remains of desk tables and computers were all around the room, his hover board landed on the other side of the room. Dylan was slightly cut in a few places from the glass. He got up wobbling seeing the Virus about to knock the building. “Uh oh!” He got up and started running to his board. The virus’ hand was sweeping across the floor getting closer and closer to Dylan. He was almost getting to his board, the floor started collapsing, the building began to break. Dylan grabbed his light weight hover board and tossed it out the window, jumping out right after it, he barely caught it holding on to it at the end of it hanging off it. They were falling fast and the building was collapsing too. Dylan had an activation button on his right glove he took his left hand off the board and pressed the button, the board activated and it jetted off barely away from the building, but the weight Dylan had on the board made it go down horizontally and fast. The virus caught eyes on Dylan again falling to the ground. Dylan made his feet hit the ground first so the board and him self wouldn’t get damaged too badly. When he hit the ground the board fell out his hands de activated, and he tumbled right next to it. He layed on the ground to right his side, he looked at the Virus heading for him. “Im not done yet.” He took out his pulse launcher from his back, and saw the big dent it had from the fall. He stared at it trying to fire, but it wouldn’t it made these jammed noises. “I’m dead.” He looked around for something he could possibly do, he thought of something, he looked at the building the Virus was about to pass, he sat up straight and dug in his pockets for any pulse grenades, he had only 3 left. With those last pulse grenades he threw them at the building hoping the angle thrown would make it fall on the Virus. The grenades hit the building, the first half close to the middle was gone, it fell down then it started to lean, slowly but effectively it fell down, and the Virus was too concerned about Dylan to noticed the building falling. It hit it right on the head, and they both fell down, the virus’ eyes closed slowly and its screeching stopped. Dust came from the buildings collapse came flying towards Dylan, he put his hands up covering his face. After it cleared, he breathed in relief. Then he heard someone calling him, “Dylan buddy you alright?!” He looked up to see Karlis waving down. He waved back as Karlis flew the shuttle down, they landed and hoped out to help Dylan. Karlis looked at the virus knocked out with the building on top of its head. Chapter 14: The search for Mei and Aaron Karlis jumped back. “Woah…dude did you do that!” Dylan smiled. “Yep, with these fists of mine, I punched the building and it fell on top of it.” Karlis: “You used your grenades didn’t ya!” Dylan laughed. “Yeah those were my last ones, and the fall I took messed up my pulse launcher.” “Be glad you survived this class A’s rampage.” Brad said. He was just getting out of the shuttle along with Cory who came out licking Dylan. “Ooooh so that’s a class 3…wait who are you?” Dylan asked As Karlis picked Dylan up Brad introduced himself. “My name is Brad Tyrexil I’m the one who was calling for help earlier.” Dylan turned around surprised. “Wait your Tyler Tyrexil’s son right?” Brad nodded. “Yeah, I’m not surprised you know him, he was a very well know man. There is something wrong though, that is not a class A virus that my father made, I think someone might have copied my his designs or maybe they are changing or growing.” “Well whatever the case I’d say we better get out of here befo- oh no we got to look for Aaron and Mei.” Dylan said. He grabbed his Hover board. “Karlis, you look on this side of the city and I’ll look on this side.” Dylan said. Without waiting a response he jumped on and went in the other direction. “Ugh lets just hope that virus doesn’t wake up.” Karlis said annoyed. They got in the shuttle and started checking everywhere for them. Unfortunantly they were not in the city but slightly outside the city in an abandoned laboratory. They walked inside and saw their leader for the mission, Omega. Virus-Mei spoke first. “I see you found a body for yourself commander.” Virus-Aaron spoke next. “Sorry, but the others did not make it, they were captured.” Omega stepped outside the shadows. “You misunderstood my orders, I told you to keep going to the city and spy, but it doesn’t matter now with this body we can complete our mission, to find Lydan and destroy him before he finds the other ZA class. Stay here and watch the other virus’ prototypes I’ll be back” After saying that he opened up a portal disappearing. Dylan stopped on top of a building to get a better view of where they could be. He saw Karlis coming back. He pulled up in front of him and opened the hatch. “No dice we didn’t find them.” Brad said. Dylan frowned, trying to think were they could be. “Ok go for another look if nothing then we will have to look somewhere else.” “Alright.” Karlis closed the hatch and drove off. As soon as Dylan lost sight of them, he heard a familiar sound. “No not again!” |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | cool.I can't wait to read more,Maverick! |
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| Virus | Thanks i should more up maybe tommorow in the afternoon or something |
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| Virus | Next part up and ready to go: He waited for Karlis to pop up hoping it wasn’t what he thought it was. He saw him jet across the corner of the building. Karlis spoke though speakers he had on the shuttle, Dylan hear it loud and clear. “Dylan goes now! The virus is awake!” Dylan jumped off the building with his hover board now under his feet, he tried to start it up but it wouldn’t come on. “Ah no, work come on.” He was falling at least 3 floors every 3 seconds. He kept pressing the button but it wouldn’t respond. He keeps trying but nothing, Karlis and the Virus get closer. Lydan commented. “Dylan you never turned in on!” Dylan smacked his forehead and pressed the button on his glove. He blasted off going right beside Karlis and barely infront of the Virus. Dylan had no more weapons and Karlis’ machine wasn’t equipped as a weapon ship. “Were gonna to have to lose it, Stay close behind me and stay on my trail!” Dylan bursted in front and they headed deeper into the city. Cutting behind and beside buildings that the virus just was just knocking down. “You think all this running around the virus would get tired by now.” Karlis said Brad: “My dad made these virus’ to never get tired, the only ones that can actually are the ZA class but the others don’t since their less complex, less like a real being.” The virus just kept screeching and screeching. The were on one of the borders of the city, on their left there was mountains, all the way down to the other side, Dylan saw a dark spot closing in. “A cave!” He thought. “It won’t be able to follow us in there!” Dylan pointed over to the cave. “There is a cave down there maybe we can lose it in there!” Karlis and Brad understood completely what he was saying. “Ok get ready for a sharp turn.” Dylan and Karlis turned in but the turn in for Karlis ended up banging up the side, it would be able to fly but it needed to be fixed soon. They drove in deep enough so the Virus’ arms couldn’t reach them. They stopped and could only wait for the Virus to give up. Chapter 15: Cave mysteries The virus clawed, trying to get to them. It screeched one more time before it gave up. It left but it wouldn’t be a good while until he left for good. “Its still going to keep us cornered, were trapped in this cave until we either find another way out or until he gives up.” Brad said “So how long might that take hmm?” Dylan asked. Brad scratched his head shrugging. “A few minor day or two.” Dylan turned around without a comment and grabbed his hover board riding it deeper into the cave. “C’mon guys we better start moving, we still need to find, Mei and Aaron.” Meanwhile at Phil’s lab, Phil had just woke up. He was able to move now and he remembered what happened. “Miki…Deren can you hear me.” He said. He ran downstairs seeing nothing but the ceiling on top of everything. He starting lifting up the debris, hoping they were still alright. He saw Miki’s hand first, he pulled up everything until the top half of her body was visible and there she was, dusty, bruised, cuts everywhere and eyes closed. He quickly checked for her pulse. “She’s alive!” He said thankfully he quickly uncovered her and took her upstairs and laid her down on a desk, then he quickly ran back down hoping Deren was still there too, he tried the spot right next to Miki’s, soon he found his head then the he uncovered the rest of him. Once he got him upstairs he had to put them in capsules to heal. He had two capsules but the dog was in it, but thankfully he was done for a bout an hour. He drained the water and took the dog out; he would have to care for it after he took care of Miki and Deren. He placed them into the tubes slowly and in minutes they were ready and healing. Phil took out a hair dryer that he stopped using when he started going bald and used it on the dogs fur as he did this he wondered if what will happen now, his strongest creation has been taken into the wrong hands, now that the virus’ have that kind of power and more, Phil thought it was all his fault, and because of what he did, he almost lost some of his closest friends. Dylan and the others were in deep enough where they couldn’t even see the light back where they were anymore. They got into a chamber of the cave with pools of water, violet crystals hanging from the ceilings, and the sound of bats echoed throughout the cave. “This place is creeping me out; I never did or ever will like caves!” Karlis said he was kind of claustrophobic also afraid of the dark. “Your friend seems to be scared easy.” Lydan said. “Ah! Quit scaring me like that, isn’t there a way you can talk without just popping outta nowhere” He thought. “Sorry bout that” Lydan said. “But anyway, I can scouter ahead if you want me too, I’m gonna need you to distract the others they might think the wrong thing if they see me.” Dylan thought for a second something that would distract them. He turned quickly pointing at the crystals. “Guys what’s that!” “Go!” Dylan said. Lydan flew out his body and down the pathway. Brad and Karlis looked around seeing nothing but the pools and crystals. “I don’t see anything, nothing but crystals.” Brad said. “I thought I saw something” Dylan said shrugging. “Buuut I guess we better just move on.” A couple minutes later of going down the same path they came to two tunnels. “Pst” Dylan turned around. It was Lydan behind them. Karlis shined one of the shuttles lights down the right tunnel. “Hey Dylan which one should we take.” Brad said. Dylan went back. “Uh hold up a sec.” He said. “Lydan did you find anything.” Lydan nodded. “Yeah don’t go down the right tunnel” Dylan: “How come?” After he asked, howling began, more and more louder. “That’s why.” Lydan said, he fazed back into Dylan. Shadows began moving towards them. Dylan came up and past Karlis. “Time to go!” |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | sweet.Did you write another chapter up yet? |
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| Virus | Actually the one before your post is the one i did LOL i should have another part tommorow too if i can get my stuff done for school lol unfortunantly i couldn't get anything done except for that chapter i posted and a concept for what Lenzo looks like |
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| Warrior of Darkness | Liked it. Good story. Continue the good work. |
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| Virus | Thanks, here goes the next part. “Yes I agree” Brad said. Karlis followed close behind as the beasts howling got louder. Dylan looked back, there wasn’t too much light back there to see what was howling. He saw them moving on two legs like a human but the shape was nothing like one. They were moving pretty fast towards them. Dylan turned to Karlis. “Karlis do you have anything to maybe slow those things down? All my stuff is gone except for this R.G.C.” Karlis nodded then spoke in the intercom. “No, this thing wasn’t built for combat just transport.” A light began to shin, on the windshield. Brad looked up happily. “Is that the way out?” Dylan sped up aligning with Karlis. “Lets hope so” They were about 20 feet away. The monsters were starting to close in, Dylan turned around, they light shined on them next showing their looks. They were very bulky with fur all over them, eyes were all white, with gorilla shaped bodies and heads. One of them jumped up, heading for Dylan. Dylan was looking towards the exit, he didn’t know it was heading for him, when he was close enough Lydan’s top half came out of Dylan and knocked the monster back down, it rolled and tripped the others that were following. They flew out the cave, the sun light brimming on them. “Finally…I was about to blank out being in the cave.” Karlis said relieved. “Ok now where do we go.” Dylan looked up the hill, there were still mountains around them, he looked up and saw a big building that looked abandoned further up. “I guess we start there.” Dylan said. Chapter 16: The Cyber virus’ Virus –Mei and Aaron stood there, waiting for Zero to return. Mei was sitting in a chair and Aaron was sleeping, she got up and began pacing back and forth. “Commander Omega sure is taking awhile.” Mei said. Whenever a person is infected, the person’s voice is the virus’ and the infected persons voice. She looked over to see Aaron sleeping, she walked over and nudged him. “Wake up, if commander comes and sees you sleeping on the job, he will get upset.” Aaron didn’t respond. Mei sighed. “Ok, I’m not the one who is going to be hurt when he sees you….I hope.” The sound of engines could be heard from where Mei was, she walked down, stepping over, cords and old books heading to a window. She wiped away the dust covering it and saw, Dylan and the others pulling up. Mei gasped and ran back to Aaron. “We have intruders, come on wake up 109!” Each virus had there marking number while the ones in command or stronger ones had there own names. He woke up. “Ugh what, is Omega here?” Mei nodded and pointed to the door. “No, we have intruders!” Aaron sat back in his chair yawning. “Then let the class c’s handle it, they are capable of it.” Mei. “hmph… if you says so” She snapped her fingers calling them. Sparks were flying, out of old computers, cords, lights and every other electric appliance in the lab. And out came the Class c virus’. These were cyber/ electrical virus’ who are able to absorb energy from anything electrical. Most of them, were mostly white with green lines on them, big hands with long arms, an off button symbol on their head that are put on mostly computer towers, and stood about 6,5 feet. The rest were shaped a bit more alien like, they had a weird type of armor on them, their left arms had cords sticking out on them, with long sharp fingers, the arm came down a little past their knees, the other arm was regular with only sharp claws. They were black mostly with cords also on their backs and oval shaped heads with a long strip slanted in the middle of their heads with one red and orange eye. Mei pointed down the room to the door. “Cyber virus’ go and destroy the intruders!” With only the virus’ making computerized sounds, they slowly moved to the door. Karlis knocked first. “Guess no one is home, lets go!” Karlis started to walk back but Dylan grabbed by his shirt, still looking at the door. “We still have to look inside.” Dylan opened the door, it creeked as it opened then fell down half way opened. “Looks like this place, hasn’t been used in years.” They walked inside, stepping over the fallen old computers, desks, papers and everything else looking around. Until Cory heard something, he bite Dylan’s pants leg tugging it. Dylan looked down, Cory was acting like something was coming their way. “What is it Cory, something wrong?” Some virus’ were hiding behind walls, others were traveling through the electrical cords still intact. They started to hear sqeeks in the floor. Terrified Karlis asked. “What was that?” “I’m betting it was some rats, or maybe something fell” Brad said. They continued walking, now they heard the computerized sounds the virus’ made. They were walking right over some cords on the floor, when sparks were heading right for them. Some of the white and green virus’ popped out of the cords, glowing at the green parts. “These are class C virus, the cyber ones!” Brad said |
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| Virus | I'll have more in soon*tries to think of more things* |
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| Heartless Join Date: Jan 2008 Age: 14
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