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[Deeman]

You make it sound like publishing a book is simple. I'm entirely sure that it's not.
You might want to research such an option, as it requires time and effort.

After scanning through some of your chapters, I agree with giuocob. Your writing needs much work. Take heed to giuocob's advice; practice, practice, practice. Expand your vocabulary and work on sentence structure. I see a lot of fragments and run-on-errors (sentences that have been extended far too long, where they should have been split into two or more separate sentences).

I have noticed, however, that you have improved since your first post. For that, great work. ;D

Also, as giuocob said, your book is not publishable. It needs a considerable amount of revision before it can be placed in such a category. I advise you not to think about publishing until after you have completed your fiction and have prepared it accordingly.

In the meantime, take time to read some well-known books out on the market. Try to see what needs improving on your part, and use those books as an aid for your writing. (For example, a great book is called Eragon. It was written by a fifteen year old and is quite amazing.)

Don't give up. If this is what you want to pursue, then pursue it. But no desired field can be achieved without constant effort and improvement.

[Maverick E.S]

Well like I said before Im not publishing it anytime soon, right now Im just working on finishing it then go on to editing everything.

As youv'e seen i have improved greatly though i have added more vocab in it and expressing characters differently, my lateest entries prove so but i knew from the beginning my book wasnt publishable I was just saying like once it is it will be published but i guess i shouldve been more specific. Im still not sure on wether or not im gonna keep posting my work here so far its high on no so I'll have to wait and see...

[Maverick E.S]

Sorry to double post but the thing wouldnt let me edit my last message. I just wanted to add that Im not trying to make the publishing sound easy, I already know how hard it is cause this has been in progress for about 6 months.

Because of concepts, major thinking and writting everything that ive done and then editing or changing it.

[Maverick E.S]

ok, ive made a decision whoever wants me to continue will just have to pm and if i dont get too many(which is 9/10 gonna happen) then i just stop wasting everyones time posting it here

[Maverick E.S]

Ok well time i up, this thread is now dead...officially....sorry to waste everyones time and myself's