PROJECT SUPER SMASH BROS

[kingdomkeylight]

This is my first time really doing this sort of thing so really what this is based on is all characters from Super smash Bros i hoped the people who read will post what they think about it i"ll begin


Chapter 1: The Starting of the Beginning


"Take this", said Pikachu in his mind. As he ran from his assalint after sending a thunder shock at it. Direct hit Pikachu saw the figure go down. Once Pikachu got close to the figure he saw it was just a Koopa. "Don't these things live in Mario's world", Pikachu said as he remembered his old friends when he was choosen in his world to go battle in the Master Hand Tournaments. Then out of nowhere a big figure came out of know where. Pikachu say that it was a bigger verision of the Koopa he had knocked out." How are these thing gitting here". Pikachu thought as he avoided a kick by jumping away. then with all the agility he could muster he jump above the Big Koopa and gave it the down to earth shock of its life. Once hitting the ground Pikachu saw something impossible, the Big Koopa turned into a stick figure and turned into purple dust." It can't be the only person able to make a creature out of a stick figure is Master Hand, and I saw Mario, Kirby, Link and myself take him down with Powered up Browser", Pickachu said to himself.
" Your right only master Hand could do that Pickachu", said a voice. Pickachu turned around to see a person in a black cape. He looked like he was 12. "But of course there is a nother way to do his tricks", Said the kid.
"How do you know what i am saying only other pokamon and kirby can speak my language", said Pikachu in thought pattern to this mirteriuse figure.
"True, true question though do you reckonise this", as the figure lifted his right hand. Pikachu was in shock he realized that glove it was none other then Master Hand but way smaller. "Knew you of all people would reckonize this"." I found it the day after your friends gave there power to 4 of you to defeated MH and PB all you really did was get rid of Browser though". "Know I will ask once and only once will you join me in worlds of roling or be turned into a statue so i can us your form to get close to other Fighters". "Whats your anwser", he said. It only took Pikachu a second to answer,
"Never". "Fine then I am your new enemy Brose now you shall die get him", Bros said as 5 BIg Koopas appeared.

Pikachu did his ultimite dash move to get away knowing Koopas were not as fast as him. The Koopas getting ready to go after him were stopped. "Give up you guys will never catch him know that fighter is known for speed, instead I'll send these", Brose said as he flicked his fingers making a metal version of Pikachu appeare.
"I serve you master", Said metal Pikachu said as he powed after the real pikachu. "Lets see how long you live now", said Brose with a laugh. Pikachu say something catching up. then from the right came a metal shock. Pikachu went flying to a tree. Bammmm. Pikachu slowly got up,
"Oh what hit".... BAM as Pikachu was attacked by Mpikachu. As they both got up they right away got there battle posses. Pikachu jumped as his metal form ran at him. Thunder shock WAM as MPikachu went flying from the exploshone. Pikachu didn't wait he did a jump up in the air foir his down to earth move to see his oppnent already did it. SSLLAAMMM. As Pikachu hit the ground in agony he metal form was to strong he closed his eyes as he say MPikachu running at him. BAM Pikachu saw Sheik in front of him as metal Pikachu slowly dissappeared into thin air.
"Are you ok", said Sheik in a worried tone as Pikachu fainted with a last cry for thanks to Shiek "Pikachu don't let them get you", said Sheik as she picked him up hold on for a few more minutes, sheik said as she pulled out a warp star and dissappeared with the onconshes Pikachu. "Lucky little virmine", said Brose from afar.

Well thats it for now hope you like it post your thought about it i had to up date it is this better

[Haku]

You should firstly split up your chapters into paragraph form instead of being just one huge block of text, also it needs to have proper sentence structure meaning whenever someone is talking put that sentence in quotes.

[TheLastKnight]

..................I couldn't read that...I didn't comprehend much...

[Ban Mido]

And start a new line when ever somebody different starts to speak.

Edit: It's a little better, but not by much. I like the premise though. A Smash Bros. Fan fic is something I've never seen before.

[kingdomkeylight]

Ok Ok ok i made some changes to what you guys said is it better i said this is the first time i have done something like this i am trying my best

[Ban Mido]

Like I said, It's an interesting premise. But you should leave a space between paragraphs. It'll be easier to read that way.

You're doing better.

[kingdomkeylight]

Well hears the next one i will up date it again so it will be a longer chapter i got a surprise on the next post


Chapter 2 The Gather Up

As soon as they disappeared Brose disided to get to hes followers for a new stage in his plans. "What have you figured out so far Wario," he asked the fat person in front of him.
"So far we can send people to only halve of the worlds we want right now," he said with a look.
"Good that will do for now." Brose said as he took out a weird looking sword.
"Captain Falcon can I trust you to take care of Sheik and Pikachu",He asked the person siting in a chair in front of him.
"Don't worry I can take them both on better than your metal creatures Master hand" Falcon said as he entered the machine that Wario was working on.
"You ready there birdy" Wario said in a jerkish manner. Wario then entered cordinates that led to where the 2 fighters escaped to. "Have a nice trip," said Wario sarcastic as ever.

VROOOMMM. Sheik landed on

[Ban Mido]

It's got to be longer than this. and don't be affraid of going into details.

[kingdomkeylight]

Sorry i was cut of short heres the rest of chapter 2


Sheik looked to check where she landed thankfully its where she wanted to be. In Kirbys world next to the Fountain of Healing as sloly as possible Sheik put in Pikachu with care. As she watched hes wounds heal she started to think aloud.
"How can that kid control Master Hands powers. Even when imprisoned into that normal Glove that power can overwellem anyone," a she said this she transformed back into Zelda. Of course only 2 people knew this secret Pikachu and Kirby, Zelda knew her secret was save.
"Pika1", Zelda turned around to see Pikachu in full recovery. When Pikachu saw Zelda he ran to her and jumped on her lap. Slowly she petted the pokamon knowing that he was still a litte hurt from the battle.
"Don't worry Pikachu Me and a few others know like you whats happening"." Thats not his first attack but his third attack". But still I wonder how he knows where to look for us and where." she said knowing her companion was wondering the same thing with this new information.
"Oh dont worry you 2 you will not live long in this life to learn," as Captain Falcon landed right next to them with a beam of light leaving him. "Falco Punch," he went right for the both of them but before he had impact he was hit real hard in the face by a small hammer sending him on his back. "Ow ok who did that, own up," he said as looked for his attacker.
"VOIL1," said a very mad Kirby as he said as he doubled punched the surprised Captain Falcon. Then dodging a fire punch from the mad assalint he jump away and ran at theCaptain who was already powered up to punch the purple fighter.
"ZZZAAAPPPP, PPOOOWW".Falcon was hit by Pkachu's thunder attack and Zelda's magic barrier attack which ended with a dashed hammer blow from Kirbys weapon which sent Falcon flying.
"Thank heave you got my message on time Kirby," Zelda said with a sigh.
"Voa voi2,l" Kirby said after hugging both long time friends. Well come on lets regroup with the rest of the team. After a long walk the three made it to a small shack as they entered Pikachu was surprised to see Donkey Kong and Link with a meal whating for them


Well i know that at times there are languages that you wish you could understand so for the characters that don't speak words i have brought the Smash Bros device so heres its translations(note ever character that speaks in gibberish i have put a number next to it)
Pikachu1: Zelda is that you
Kirby1: take this you dirty cheater
Kirby2:Its great to see you 2 again
Next chapter will be longer because i got more characters to work with know so see the next update on wednesday so until then post your thoughts

[Ban Mido]

Don't forget the spaces between every paragraph.

[kingdomkeylight]

can people spread the word about this thread i know you just have to hope people see it and get interest but can i please have some help on it thanks

[kingdomkeylight]

Chapter 3 Allianceses

"So whats the plan man," asked DonkyKong with a smile because he knew with a new threat immerging ment that there was going to be fights.
"We first we need to learn everything we can about this Brose person and who's joined him so far because we need to learn who we can trust even if they helped us in the Master hand tournements," said Link with a comman sigh he gave to people who he trusted.
"Are you thinking some of the people we trust would help that that monster, I mean when thought out that kids got to be older than he looks way older". I mean he summoned a metal version of one of us," she looked at Pikachu who noded he's head in agreement knowing to well how powerful it was.
" Still though, should we split up and round up the ones we can truely trust man," Donkey kong asked.
"No they could take us down with real ease seperated you should know that DK", Zelda said as she looked out the window to see if there was any sign of danger.
"We will have to trust Sheiks word that he sent a letter to everyone we can trust." " Lets just hope its not to late," Link said counting how many bombs and arrows he had.
"Voa voil voa1," Kirby said as he took out he's Hammer in fighting pose as the left side of the shack was destroyed by a firery attack from Captain falcon and Gandorf who had a fire flower with him.
"He has a FF dodge and attack," yelled Link as he pulled out his Master sword and Hyrilein sheild and ran at Gandorf with Kirby.
"Come to your death fools, taste fire," gandorf said, as this happen Link held his sheild defending Gandorf's eyes to him as Kirby appeared behind Gandorf and did his absorb anything move. As Gandorf thruw the Fflower he's eye's went wide as he saw Kirby become he’s fire form.
"Voa2," Kirby said as he shot fire at Gandorf who dodged but got attacked by a bomb thrown by Link
“Come on monkey boy,” Falcon said as he thruw the monkey into the rest of what was left of the shack. After doing this he was attack by Pikachu who was back from recovery and was ready to fight again.
“You believe you could really defeated me Zelda with the help of that mouse” Falcon said as he looked up in the air “Oh great” he said as he say the mouse in the air “This is going to hurt isn’t it,” one second later he was on the ground in big pain from the thunder attack.
“Pika pika1,” said Pikachu with a smirk on his face,” as Zelda used her magic to pick up Falcon and thruw him at Gandorf. Impact then DK grabed both of them and thruw them in different directions. Gandorf hit a tree and Falcon was hit in mid air by Links spin attack and hit the same tree.
“Final move baby,” said DK as he ran with his fists powered up but was hit by The full force of Ganandorf and Falcons attack. He went down with out a fight after that hit
"Say good bye to your friends monkey" Ganandorf pulled out a weird device and the next thing that happen startled everyone DK was absorbed into the device.
"Bye bye we will be back for you later" the to disapperaed with a flash of light.
"PIIIKKKAAA2" pikachu landed in the spot where DK was and laid there.
"we dont have a choice any more we need to gather everyone we know will still be on are side I cant say that we will be victories but we have to try," as link said this he gave the others a warp star we come back here when we get as many people we can in that world good luck, and dont worry pikachu people can read understand you because your going with Zelda Kirby goes with me good luck," he said as they all went on there warp star with there partners a wondering what was going to happen toDK they didn't have time to speak about it though they new they had to just move on with out them.

"Good job you 2 but i wanted all of them o well you did your best now get some rest" Brose said as he looked at the statue of DK
Yes are lord," Ganandorf said as he and Falcon went for some rest
"One down a lot more to go," Brose said as he put the statue in a weird door in a hole the door had more hole than one though " soon my master you will be reveived i promise" as he said thi the hole that DKs statue was put in dissaepered with a solid symbol where the hole was.