The nobody chronicles

pendragonneo · 11/14/07, 03:49 AM

basicaly a collection of related haiku's..if you guys like them, I will create a heartless chronicles or maybe keyblade chronicles i will put a synopsis at the end...

Birth

I don't remember
I don't know where I came from
All I know is dark

Slave

One more nobody
He is our one true master
But is not our friend

clubs

there are thirteen now
started an exclusive group
can't escape the death

Shadows

World that never was
A shadow fallen over
What is this looming

Memories

The thirteen have them
where are mine, where are they at
why do i now care

Heart

There's one more of me
I have the heart of his
what if we would join

Joint

we touched yesterday
he then dissapeared from sight
I feel his presence

Return

I have memories
I don't really like them
I don't miss myself

Blade

Death by the keyblade
We do not know why we die
the thirteen force us

Death
I'm no nobody
My name has been Xiphon
the thirteen will die

At last

The keyblade bearer
fought me today, thought I
was Axel, he's dead

Axel

I have killed axel
he was a danger to us
got it memorised?

saved

corridors of dark
I saved the keyblade bearer
I have died fulfilled

now, for all you who will flame me for killing axel, listen to this first:

this charecter is a nobody. he comes into contact with his heartless, and becomes whole again. He realizes his name, and his troubled past(once agin, i will expound upon this later). He realized how much of a danger axel was to his fellow nobodies, and killed him. he then took his form. so, the axel's in chain of memories and kh2 are two different people(and if you think about it, they do kind of act differently.)

**Haku** · 11/14/07, 03:55 AM

A few of those lines weren't actually Haikus since they were over or short of 1 syllable, but otherwise I thought it was good.

axia · 11/14/07, 04:32 AM

sweet... um, im kinda new in this forum, althought I suscribed in may, i hadn't posted... i think that those are more than 25 letters

pendragonneo · 11/14/07, 11:13 AM

25 letters?oh...i only thought they had to be syllables...ill fix the ones messed up

pendragonneo · 11/14/07, 11:15 AM

Heart (remix)

There is one more me
the heart I hold is his heart
what if we would join

pendragonneo · 11/14/07, 11:17 AM

At last (remix)

The keyblade bearer
fought me today,thought I was
Axel, but he's dead

11/14/07, 03:49 AM	#1
pendragonneo Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: With angelina...if she reads this... I LOVE YOU ANGELINA!!!!! Age: 16 Posts: 316 Rep Power: 2	The nobody chronicles basicaly a collection of related haiku's..if you guys like them, I will create a heartless chronicles or maybe keyblade chronicles i will put a synopsis at the end... Birth I don't remember I don't know where I came from All I know is dark Slave One more nobody He is our one true master But is not our friend clubs there are thirteen now started an exclusive group can't escape the death Shadows World that never was A shadow fallen over What is this looming Memories The thirteen have them where are mine, where are they at why do i now care Heart There's one more of me I have the heart of his what if we would join Joint we touched yesterday he then dissapeared from sight I feel his presence Return I have memories I don't really like them I don't miss myself Blade Death by the keyblade We do not know why we die the thirteen force us Death I'm no nobody My name has been Xiphon the thirteen will die At last The keyblade bearer fought me today, thought I was Axel, he's dead Axel I have killed axel he was a danger to us got it memorised? saved corridors of dark I saved the keyblade bearer I have died fulfilled now, for all you who will flame me for killing axel, listen to this first: this charecter is a nobody. he comes into contact with his heartless, and becomes whole again. He realizes his name, and his troubled past(once agin, i will expound upon this later). He realized how much of a danger axel was to his fellow nobodies, and killed him. he then took his form. so, the axel's in chain of memories and kh2 are two different people(and if you think about it, they do kind of act differently.) Last edited by pendragonneo; 11/14/07 at 09:07 PM. Reason: messed up on number of syllables

11/14/07, 03:55 AM	#2
Haku ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19 Posts: 10,178 Rep Power: 18	Re: The nobody chronicles A few of those lines weren't actually Haikus since they were over or short of 1 syllable, but otherwise I thought it was good.

11/14/07, 04:32 AM	#3
axia Heartless Join Date: May 2007 Age: 17 Posts: 5 Rep Power: 0	Re: The nobody chronicles sweet... um, im kinda new in this forum, althought I suscribed in may, i hadn't posted... i think that those are more than 25 letters

11/14/07, 11:13 AM	#4
pendragonneo Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: With angelina...if she reads this... I LOVE YOU ANGELINA!!!!! Age: 16 Posts: 316 Rep Power: 2	Re: The nobody chronicles 25 letters?oh...i only thought they had to be syllables...ill fix the ones messed up

11/14/07, 11:15 AM	#5
pendragonneo Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: With angelina...if she reads this... I LOVE YOU ANGELINA!!!!! Age: 16 Posts: 316 Rep Power: 2	Re: The nobody chronicles Heart (remix) There is one more me the heart I hold is his heart what if we would join

11/14/07, 11:17 AM	#6
pendragonneo Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: With angelina...if she reads this... I LOVE YOU ANGELINA!!!!! Age: 16 Posts: 316 Rep Power: 2	Re: The nobody chronicles At last (remix) The keyblade bearer fought me today,thought I was Axel, but he's dead

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