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Old 11/14/07, 03:49 AM   #1
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basicaly a collection of related haiku's..if you guys like them, I will create a heartless chronicles or maybe keyblade chronicles i will put a synopsis at the end...




Birth

I don't remember
I don't know where I came from
All I know is dark


Slave

One more nobody
He is our one true master
But is not our friend



clubs

there are thirteen now
started an exclusive group
can't escape the death


Shadows

World that never was
A shadow fallen over
What is this looming



Memories

The thirteen have them
where are mine, where are they at
why do i now care



Heart

There's one more of me
I have the heart of his
what if we would join



Joint

we touched yesterday
he then dissapeared from sight
I feel his presence



Return

I have memories
I don't really like them
I don't miss myself



Blade

Death by the keyblade
We do not know why we die
the thirteen force us



Death
I'm no nobody
My name has been Xiphon
the thirteen will die




At last

The keyblade bearer
fought me today, thought I
was Axel, he's dead




Axel

I have killed axel
he was a danger to us
got it memorised?




saved

corridors of dark
I saved the keyblade bearer
I have died fulfilled






now, for all you who will flame me for killing axel, listen to this first:

this charecter is a nobody. he comes into contact with his heartless, and becomes whole again. He realizes his name, and his troubled past(once agin, i will expound upon this later). He realized how much of a danger axel was to his fellow nobodies, and killed him. he then took his form. so, the axel's in chain of memories and kh2 are two different people(and if you think about it, they do kind of act differently.)

Last edited by pendragonneo; 11/14/07 at 09:07 PM. Reason: messed up on number of syllables
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Old 11/14/07, 03:55 AM   #2
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A few of those lines weren't actually Haikus since they were over or short of 1 syllable, but otherwise I thought it was good.
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Old 11/14/07, 04:32 AM   #3
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sweet... um, im kinda new in this forum, althought I suscribed in may, i hadn't posted... i think that those are more than 25 letters
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Old 11/14/07, 11:13 AM   #4
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25 letters?oh...i only thought they had to be syllables...ill fix the ones messed up
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Old 11/14/07, 11:15 AM   #5
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Heart (remix)

There is one more me
the heart I hold is his heart
what if we would join
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Old 11/14/07, 11:17 AM   #6
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At last (remix)

The keyblade bearer
fought me today,thought I was
Axel, but he's dead
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