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| Organization Member | okay.....say your g'byes to this fanfic. cause it's gonna end....in this last chapter. Ep.8-My Resolution Chapter 2/2- Rika's Destiny..... "Hmmm.....where the heck is Rika?, I haven't seen him, he's always hanging around but now....he's not?, and we'd all level up to 50, and he's still not......i think," said Betel searching around for Rika, "you know what....i have a bad feeling about this, we haven't heard about him," said Rona, "hey guys.....i heard some people that, in an area some guys had an extreme battle, and something about epitaphs!, and someone that we all know uses it," said N0thing running to them, "Darn, why is it that when i hear epitaphs, i feel something?," said Betel to himself, "Wait!,is it....Rika?!," said Rona looking really worried. "And something about Haseo coming back," TLK said also running towards them, with all the members of the Abyss squad. "Hmmm....so we're all looking for Rika.....," said someone ontop on one of the buildings, with 4 other people. "Who the heck are you?," said Xugoh pointing at him. "Me?, they call me the Grim Reaper, Zelfar," said Zelfar introducing himself, "and this are my comrades, anyway they have important bussines to do, go...," added Zelfar "Let's go guys!, said Orlax. "The Grim.....Reaper, I heard about a title name about that, he uses a thing named Skeith," said Navix. "Skeith is not a thing, he is an......Epitaph," said Zelfar, Betel then feeled something again. "So......you can feel the Epitaph flowing through you....Betel?, or should i call you.....The Propagation?Magus!," said Zelfar, he then casted a spell to stop the untamed Epitaph, "Inzu Rem!,". "Now......we can't do anything anymore.....Rika is now....a member of...the Chaos8, a group whose goal is to rule the whole net and revive their God-Heine, if that happens......Heine will not only live in the world, but......he will also live in our "real world" , now that Rika has joined them......they can now revive heine......but...they have lost their Epitaphs....for now," said Zelfar, all of them reacted to what they said, "but what about you and me?, we are also Epitaph users, what is our importance?," asked Betel. "I know who are the ones who uses all the phases, but Rika posseses the most important.....the Rebirth.......,". In another Area: "Hmmm......so Rika....you finally decided to join us?," said the C8 leader "Well....there is no more way to go, and this is my only way to save my sister," said Rika "a Wise Choice!, we just need to revive our Epitaphs back.....and we can summon the God.....Heine!,". "Understood," said Rika, "But....first.....Wile Ran!," said the Leader casting a spell making Rika look like a true member and his personality changed from good to Chaos Evil. "Now...... i want you to kill the 7 Epitaphs of Morganna!,". "YES....Master!," ~~~~~END~~~~~~~ Last edited by PKKzelfar; 01/16/08 at 10:12 AM. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth ^_^ Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | nice part-chapter, zelfar...still can't wait to see how my idea will appear in the ending of the fanfic and how it ends...oh n u can count on me joining vol. 2^^ |
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about......ooppss....almost gave spoilers there!hehehe | |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth ^_^ Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | okay!^^ can't wait 4 vol.2 then!^^ |
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| Organization Member | Ok.....now this thing is FINISHED! NOW I WANT EVERYONE TO POST ON WHAT YOU THINK! |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth ^_^ Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | god cliffhanger, can't wait till vol. 2 appears and my idea appears in it, contiue with our good writing skills and i'm sure the next vol will be even getter then this one! Keep rockin on and if u need any ideas, pm me to just post at my ff, k...oh n thanx 4 joinin my fanfic, really appreciate it:thumbsup: |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | I think that so far the story is great but the length of the chapters should be alot longer if you can manage. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Oblivion Castle - Pool house Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | It was a nice read. Thanks for the story. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth ^_^ Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | AAH! helo Zelfar! there's 2 ppl saying my new fanfic's a RP coz' it has fan-characters in it...HEEELP! |
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| Organization Member | anyway........i thinked of something.... i'm gonna release the secret ep. of this fanfic....so better watch-out! |
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| Organization Member | Legacy Ep. "Hmmm....now you are still too low-leveled?, maybe we need to do something about that," Said the leader, he raised his hand and casted a hacking spell, it made Rika level 100 and beneath his Chaos Dress was a dark armor, he changed to the hacked form....Chaos Xth form!. "This...this is...this is the hacked form!,...the Chaos Xth Form!," Said Rika of amazement. "So you know this thing..very good...now...i need you to train with one of our new members...her name is Leonous..., go to Keoz: Real Chaos' Cemetary!," said the leader, "Yes sir!," said Rika, he looked to Leonous, she had blonde hair with a ponytail, her class is the Macabre Dancer, "(what a real boss-kisser!)," said Leonous in her mind, they both walked out of the room and gone to the area. "We need to beat everyhting off this field!, you go there...i go here!," said Leounous pointing to two sides, "Yeah, yeah!, (what a brat!)," said Rika to himself, "I Heard you about that!, they don't call me mindreader for nothing!, now go!," said Leonous, she ran to the other side of the field "Dang...what the hell team-mate fighting is this?!," said Rika he walked away from the other side also, he then looked at how Leonous fights, she beated up every monster with chain hits. "Chain Hits?, that's a new attack system in the game!, i never tried that one!..hmm..maybe i'll try it too!," said Rika he rushed towards the battle area and attacked the monsters..but... he got really beat up because the monsters there were lv. 120 but he was 100..he couldn't do anything he had little HP left but Leonous came to rescue him. "HIYAAH!!!!," she slashed them with her fan, chain attacking them till they got beaten and said. "HHmm..what a real weakling..i thought you were stronger than that!,". Rika looked very insulted and walked away of the field, he then walked around Icheon and gone to the Harbor side of Maine, he thought all of his other friends, and everyhting that he left. "I can't take it anymore!!!!!!," He shouted very loud in the harbor looking at the sea. The Next Day..... Riak go up and put on his headset and played "The World". "Hhhmmm...an announcement?, the Bronze Wing tournament is starting in Gladi Oen! maybe i'll get some of the members to join!," said Rika. When he got to the room of Chaos, the other members were talking. "Maybe this tournament is what he needs!,". "Are you sure?,". "Yes!, i'll send Leonous and Tridea, it would also get us some rep. points!," "ok..it's settled then!,". The members also knew that Rika was listening and then made hem register, because it will start already. "Ohhh....so we need to finish the team rumble and then...8 teams left will proceed to the next battle!," said Tridea, his class is a Hacked Shadow Warlock. "This will be over in no time!," said Leonous..she rushed through the players while slashing them up with her sharp fans, "Ready New Guy?," said Tridea, he casted a chaos spell that summons a big plant eater(or player eater) that crunched up many players, Rika stared at their own power, after that 8 teams were left. They conquered all their battles and all that was left was the finals!. "the players left were the Team Chaos!, and team Zelfar!," "WHAT!!!?, Zelfar!?, he..he...is...here?," said Rika that just realized about who he is gonna face. "HHmmm....Rika...you have gone so powerful...this is gonna be a fun match!," END CHAPTER ! Last edited by PKKzelfar; 02/14/08 at 07:22 AM. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Earth ^_^ Age: 19
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | hmm...interesting...i hope trey appears in this chapter...and about ur request, zelfar...sure, why not?^^ |
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| Organization Member | Err..hello! just saying that my secret ep. chapter 1/2 has been finished! Read it and i hope you enjoy it! |
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