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Old 12/28/07, 05:32 AM   #76
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Do you guys really need an intro any more? Well I guess it is just something that I do. Umm… blah, blah, something about my life, blah, blah, something deep, more stuff you don’t care about, something I don’t understand, inside joke for Zeezee. XD. Well now that that’s done I hope you enjoy the chapter.



Holly looked up her and saw a haze view of the ship. Her vision had started blurring and she was going to go unconscious any second.

Donald and Goofy rushed out of gummi and gasped at the horrific sight of a dazed, blooded, and confused Holly and an unconscious, blood stained Riku.

“Hurry we do not have much time. If we do not get to a healer I will…” Holly coughed once grabbing her neck as she did so and threw up blood before she could finish.

“Oh my God! Goofy get a stretcher while I carry Riku to his room.” Donald ordered tears of horror now beginning to fill his eyes.

Goofy just nodded and ran off into the ship.

“What in God’s name happened to you two?” Donald said to himself as he checked Holly’s pulse and ran over to Riku when he finished.



“Now watch when we blast chlorine into the room!” Demyx said laughing as he flipped a switch in the observatory room overlooking the gas chamber.

The infected human grabbed its grey neck as it choked on the chlorine. Demyx and Roxas laughed as it pawed at the vent.

“This is great Demyx!” Roxas said whipping tears of joy from his eyes.

“That’s nothing lets vent some X15 into the room and watch him bleed out!” Demyx cheered as he flipped a protective covering up and pressed a big red button.

A green gas flooded into the gas chamber and around the infected. The infected started to spasm out of control, it arms floundering about as its legs gave out. It clawed at its eye sockets as its now acidic green blood burned through his arms, legs, head, and behind his eyelids. It wailed a pathetic cry of pain as it fell to the ground unable to change its painful fate.

Roxas and Demyx doubled back in laughter grabbing their sides as cried tears of joy. They were laughing hysterically as they watched the test subject tap the glass as if pleading for them to stop.

“Oh man that was great Demyx!” Roxas said as he patted him on the back in thanks.

“No problem man. I mean I have been kind of a Di*k to ya and I guess this is just me saying sorry.” Demyx said still laughing a bit.

“For real I don’t think I ever had this much fun.”

Demyx scoffed “Ya should have been here when we fed the failed test subjects to the worms after we burned ‘em.” Demyx shook his head at the thought of the great memory “We put lighting fluid on ‘em so they would go up faster and boy did they burn nice. That smell was just awesome.”

“That sounds like it was hella fun!” Roxas squealed in delight at the thought of such a fun experience.

“It was it was.” Demyx got up and pulled Roxas to his feet “Come on we gotta get back before Xemnas radios us. Its all fun and games before he kicks your ass.”

With that they left the room punching each other playfully like two old college roommates.



Riku opened his eyes and looked around. He was back on the gummi ship in his cabin. ”Holly!” he thought as he rushed out the door and down the hall to the infirmary.

“Holly are you…” he stopped as he saw Holly laying on the medical table still jolting around every couple seconds. “What… what happened to her Donald?”

“She was injected with feferus.” he answered.

“Is that… bad?”

“Chrisens are highly allergic to it so yes.” Donald answered.

“Is,” Riku swallowed a mouth full of saliva “Is she gonna die?”

“If we don’t get her to a doctor soon she will.”

“Well are we going to go somewhere or not!?” Riku yelled starting to get angry.

“Of course were on our way to Hollow Bastion now to get treatment from Aki Ross and Myanmar Yoric.”

Riku took Holly’s hand in his and squeezed it.

“Then I won’t leave her side. It was my fault she’s like this. I forgot to cover her ears and the Slecs attacked us.” Riku said not taking his eyes off the young Chrisen that lay in front of him.

“Fine have it your way but she was frightened when we got to the ship. She couldn’t even look at you. What happened?”

“The darkness overtook me back at the precinct.” Riku answered.

“That’s it then.”

“What’s it?”

“Well Holly’s sister was taken by the heartless when she was little and seeing you look like Ansem the former leader of the Heartless must have drover her over the edge.” Donald said.

“Then it really is all my fault.” Riku said looking back at Holly.

Donald opened his mouth to talk but decided against it and left the room.

“I’m sorry Riku.” He mumbled to himself as he closed the door behind him.




Namine looked up from her mirror as she heard someone open the door to her room. It was Axel.

“Axel what are…” She was cut off as Axel pulled her in and kissed her. She pulled away and looked up at him. “Well you’re in a bright mood.” Namine said as she put her hand over her mouth as she giggled girlishly.

“Your soooo cute Namine!” Axel said as he pulled her back in and hugged her. “Ya know… I didn’t want to see you in do’s robes but not that I do ya look kinda sexy!” he said as he smiled and rubbed his cheek on Namine’s.

Namine blushed as Axel brushed up against her.

“Umm… thank you. You look nice today too Axel.” she said not knowing what to say.

“You’re so cute, cute, cute, cute, yep ya are cute.” He said as he pinched her cheeks playfully.

“Axel what’s wrong with you?” Namine asked as she tried to push away from him.

“Nut’ns wrong with me Nami I jus love ya is all and I wanted ta show ya ‘at’s all.” He hiccupped as a beer bottle fell out of his inner pocket. “Whoops looks like I dropped some’n.”

“You’ve been drinking!?” Namine gasped as she picked up the bottle.

Axel looked over at her and grinned “Yep sure have. I gots it from Luxord’s private stash.”

“Why?” Namine said as Axel fumbled for the bottle.

“’Cause it makes my troubles go away.” he burped

“How many did you drink!?”

“A few.”

“How much is a few!?”

“Four maybe five.”

“You drank five beers!” Namine screamed at him in anger.

“And two shoots.”

Namine slapped her hand to her face in frustration.

“Yer so perty Nami.” he said his drunken grin still on his face as he rubbed her cheek and passed out.

Namine rolled her eyes as she dragged him to her couch.

“Great now I have a drunk for a boyfriend. Now I’m going to help him get off the stuff.” she said as she rolled her eyes again. “Well I guess it could be worse he could have been injected with some weird drug.”




lol irony ^. Well I hope you liked the chapter. I do not support under age drinking! Don’t drink until you of legal age. Now that I have that out of there and the Mods can’t get on my ass about it have a nice day. Like I said I hope you enjoyed the chapter this has been a Bowchickawowwow production.
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Great chapter Xikem, can't believe no one besides me has responded yet.
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Old 12/29/07, 06:36 AM   #78
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Sorry for being a jackass in the last intro. Lol. Well let’s just rush through this one so ya can read. I hope you like the chapter. ^_^



Riku looked out into space. He hated space. It was cold, dark, violent, and just felled evil to him. The first time he actually saw the great nothingness was when he joined Maleficent and the Heartless Alliance when he joined Ansem. Riku could still fell Ansem in his heart eating away at him. It was as if there was a face beneath his skin that laughed at him when he did thinks wrong and made fun of his failures. He could hear his voice now talking about Holly.

“You killed her. She’s going to die because of your in action. She hates you!” he screamed in his head.

They were on their way to Hollow Bastion to receive treatment from Aki Ross and Myanmar. They were suppose to be the best in the field of medicine and Bio research and it just so happened that Donald and Goofy were assigned to guard them in the Chrisen Revolution. Donald and Goofy didn’t talk much about the war. From the small amounts of information he could get out of Holly and the others it was a bloody war that was based on racism and hatred. It was estimated that 7.5 billion Slecs and Hollow Bastion soldiers were killed in the 5 year long war and the Chrisen loss was around 19 billion people 5.6 billion being children under the age of 10. The cost of the war was great in the number of casualties and price. The worlds Council had brought the war to an end on January 7th, 30,120 with the signing of the treaty of Saren. Saren was the Chrisen word for end. The war depending on where you lived was called the Tranas war which meant the pointless war. It was a fitting name for a conflict that never should have happened. Holly’s brother Christoph was on the front lines in the war. He had been 12 at the time. His platoon was called Rackon say oust or the boy soldiers. The commanding officer had painted mustaches on them to make them more adult and put them in pairs. One boy would carry the rifle and the other would carry the ammunition and a copy of the Ark the Chrisen holy book. If the one with the rifle was killed the other would get the gun. Riku wanted to know more but he could tell that Donald, Goofy and the other people he tried to talk with didn’t feel it appropriate to talk about.

“Well it looks like were here.” he mumbled to himself as the entered Hollow Bastion controlled space. “I’m going to save you Holly.”



“Eeeeennnnnnn… errrr are… ouuuuu… I…n’t… fiiiiiinnnnnnn… ouuuuu my ve… eeerrrraaa oh eeerrraa I... sh… ouuu er re.”

Roxas woke up. He had drifted off when he set his ship to autopilot. He shook his head trying to get over his exhaustion. He had that dream again. Roxas thought the voice was a girl’s and that it was getting clearer with every passing day. He wanted to know what she was saying to him. From what Roxas could tell the girl looked really pretty and had a lovely voice. He looked out at his window again and saw a blue haired girl in the reflection of his ship. Roxas looked behind him as fast as he could but nothing was there.

“Great now I’m having weird hallucinations about beautiful young girls. Wait a second… I’m a guy isn’t that normal?” Roxas said as he scratched his head.

“Wow Roxas you’re a little perv.”

Roxas jumped up out of his seat. He had turned his head set on by accident again. Demyx had heard everything.

“What don’t you do that?” he said trying to cover for himself.

“Not like that mines all voluntary you’re just a freaky perverted teenager.” Demyx answered.

“Thanks doctor love that really helps.”

“I do what I can.”

With that they switched to radio silence until they reached nobody castle.



Namine looked around as Axel sat up.

“Oh God my head it hurts so badly.” Axel said.

“That’s called a hangover.”

“Yeah I know what it’s called it still doesn’t make the pain stop and do you have to talk so loud?”

“Sorry,” Namine said as she handed him a cup from off the side table.

“What’s this?” Axel asked as he looked at the brown liquid.

“It’s called coffee I heard it helps.”

“Yeah whatever.” he said as he downed the glass in one gulp. “Listen whatever I said or did I didn’t mean it okay.”

“You said I was sexy and you kissed me.”

“Oh… in that case I meant everything.” Axel said a lopsided grin spread ear to ear on his face.

Namine smirked and shoved a pillow at his face.

“What?” he said as he spat out a mouth full of pillow feathers “You’re cute and I love you. Can’t I show you from time to time?”

“Yeah when you’re sober you can.” Namine said one upping him.

“Fine.” Axel said as he kissed her on the cheek “When this all done I’m going to show you the best places in all the worlds and make it so that you never frown again. I promise.” he whispered in her ear.

Namine blushed a bright shade of red.

“Axel you dog we haven’t even been on a real date yet.” Namine said looking away in embarrassment.

“Do you want one?”

“What when!?”

“Tomorrow night at eight. Ask your dad when I should have ya back.” he said laughing a bit.

Namine giggled “Sure I’ll see ya then.”

“Good I’ll be sure to make it a special night you’ll never forget ever.”

Namine smiled as Axel left the room. When Axel said things like that he was usually dead on with what he said. Her fake heart skipped a beat as she thought about what they would do. She couldn’t wait. She just wished Roxas was here to be happy for her. She wanted to see him at least once.

“Aqua?”

Namine jumped up and looked around. There was no one there… no one. She shook her head and laid down on the couch.

“Great now I’m having weird visions about cute boys. Wait… I’m a teenage girl that’s normal.”



Ha ^ they grow up so fast don’t they? I hope you like the chapter. Sorry for the length. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production.
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WOW MAN SORRY FOR NOT POSTING IN UR LAST CHAP!!
I have to say that i wuved those last two!!
Lol Axel drunk,that's something new,and i can't wait for the next chap!! =3
Oh i am so hyper!!
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I couldn’t think of anything witty to say in this intro so here is a Dane Cook video. YouTube - Dane Cook - Not so Kool-Aid XD I hope you enjoy the chapter. ^_^



Holly looked around. She was surrounded by the darkness.

“<Hello… is anybody there?> Are there humans here?”

There was no answer to her plead. There was nothing but dark all around her. She fumbled around in the black for what seemed like hours before she curled up in a ball trying to make sense of what had happed to her.

“<The injection I’m un…>” she started as the world around her evaporated and shown her room back on Ciencia. Holly looked down and saw herself at age 3. She remembered this moment all to well. This was the day she had been told her cousin Strife was killed. A man walked into her room and turned off her televiewer.

“<Hey gramps I was watching that!>” she said.

“<Shut up you stupid girl!>” the military man said tears running down his cheeks. “<I’m… I’m sorry princess but your cousin he was killed today at the bombing of Pylon.>”

Holly’s young three year old eyes grew wide.

“<No your lying!>” she yelled as she kicked and hit him more annoying then threatening “<Christoph said he would protect Strife!>” she fell to the man’s knees crying “<He can’t die he said he would come back and take me to Twilight Town next spring break! He promised he would come back with Christoph!>” The memory faded away as the man walked out of the room carrying the note for Strife’s parents to read to know how their son died. That had been the second worst day of her life.

The next memory moved in as fast as the last one had vanished. This one was a bit happier then the last. It was the day her brother had come back. A knock came to her door and a now 4 year old Holly looked up at a tall man wearing a military jacket. She started to cry as she thought of the last time a soldier came to her room. The man walked toward her and pulled her in for a hug. Then Holly looked at the man’s face. It was Christoph.

“<Christoph I… I thought you were dead.>” Holly said as her brother pulled her closer and kissed her on the cheek and stroked her long red hair.

“<I thought I was dead too for the longest time. I saw horrible things trying to get back but it’s worth it to see you and your sisters face again. I love you both so vary much.>”

Holly looked him in the eyes. She read his heart through his eyes. He was never the same after the war. He never smiled again and he went to war again when the heartless attacked. She thought maybe he was trying to kill himself but when Stephan was taken he truly lost his mind. Just think to see your own sister pulled from your arms by hideous monsters never to be seen or heard from again. I just so happened that that was the next memory she saw.

The heartless tore through the castle killing everyone and everything. They were sent to kill the royal family. Christoph and Stephan rushed into her bedroom on the fateful and told her to hide under her bead. Christoph unloaded into the heartless that came through the door minutes later but he only had two magazines and was pulled away with Stephan.

“<No don’t you dare touch her! I’ll fu*king kill you don’t fu*king touch her you son of a bitch! Do you hear me I’ll fu*king kill you!>” Christoph shouted as he clawed at the infidels.

A week later Christoph came back to the capital bloodied and bruised but alive. Stephan was not with him.

“<Why is this happening!?>” Holly shouted as the blackness returned.



“Hey why is she twitching like that Donald?” Riku asked.

“Sometimes when you knocked out you have weird dreams. It looks like she’s having one bad nightmare.”

“We need to get her to Aki now!”

“Don’t worry we’ll be there in a few minutes.”

With that they sat back down in the ambulance and waited as they headed to the hospital.



Holly had a sad life didn’t she? Well I hope you liked the chapter. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production.
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Another great chap,i love memories!!!! X3
Yayayayay!!!!
More chaps more chaps!
Thank you thank you for posting every day^^
It gives a bit tone of hapiness in my boring life!!! =D
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Ha I think I’m lose’n it guys. Here is another video. YouTube - Red vs Blue Tucker Enjoy the chapter it’s a flashback from when Christoph was in the Revolution.




“How can you tell when a child becomes a man? By the look in his eyes and how he walks.” Trials of Gordon verse 14 of The Ark.

Christoph didn’t know why he remembered that passage from the Ark. Maybe because he was positive that he was going to die in the trench he now sat in. The Slecs had been pounding his position for days. He had lost his best friend to the constant shelling. The infidels were barbaric in their onslaught. They didn’t even leave children alive when they attacked a city. They would pull people out of their houses and shoot them; and they wouldn’t just stop there oh no they would scalp them. A child’s scalp was thought to be a great kill. He had seen a child no older then 3 be wrenched away from his crying mother and forced to watch his parents death before he had a rusty knife pulled hard across his pale forehead. A child a three year old child’s scalp was taken as a trophy for some demon infidel to be showed off to his friends. Christoph hated them with an undying intensity that would span long after he was dead onto his children. His thoughts were disrupted as his commanding officer pulled his katana from his belt and lifted high to the sky.

“<Company fix bayonets!>” he screamed making his voice hearable over the loud explosions. The company fixed their blades onto the ends of their rifle barrels. “<Charge!>” he yelled as the company stood up and rushed down the hill to the enemy position.

Christoph sprinted down to a Slec pillbox and kicked the sandbags down. He stabbed the machine gunner in the neck with his bayonet making blood splash out of his neck into large clumpy puddles. Christoph turned his attention to the next Slec and shot at him. The bullet connected with the man’s head just above his left eye. The Slec was still reaching up to his eye as he fell to the blood soaked dirt.

“<Heads up they deployed X15 but your gasmasks on!>” he heard one of his comrades’ say.

Christoph pulled his mask out of his combat bag and pulled it over his face just in time. Others in his unit were not so lucky. He passed some soldiers in his unit who had no gasmasks as the put their hands up to their mouths and noses in a desperate attempt to keep the toxic gas out as their blood melted out their green eyes and from under their fingernails. Christoph gagged at the sight of his fellow soldiers his brothers bleed out and die in such horrible unthinkable ways. Jerome the strongest and oldest in his unit stormed through enemy camp one hand over his mouth and nose and the other clutching his pistol as blood gushed out of his eyes and ears. He lasted the longest in his unit taking down nineteen Slecs’ before he succumbed to the X15. After the fight Christoph would put him in for the medal of courage the highest honor in the Chrisen military; a man like him deserved that much. Christoph looked around at the gory scene that lay before him. He watched as the Slecs’ gutted his friends like animals splashing their blood on themselves in sheer bloodlust. Then there he was alone as the Slecs’ surrounded him.

“Look at this little cricer boys! The last one. It’s a shame I was just about to have some fun.” The man looked over to his friends “Hey how much do you think his scalp will fetch for back home?”

Christoph lowered his head not knowing enough Human to understand what they were saying. He waited for death as the man walked up to him twirling his knife in his hands as he drew ever closer.

“I can’t wait till we get to take the princess’s scalp. I heard she has such lush red hair that it looks like Twilight Town sunset!”

“<Stephan, Holly! No I won’t let them take you!>” Christoph screamed in his head as he grabbed the man’s hand and bit his wrist not stopping until he tasted blood on the man’s mud drenched hand. He then took the man’s knife as it dropped to the grounded. He screamed a war cry as he stabbed the man in the heart. As he pulled the knife out of the man’s body a chunk of muscle tore from his chest. Christoph gave a quick kick to the Slec behind him as he dove on his next target. He stabbed him in the neck and moved on. The next Slec had enough sense to pull out his pistol but could only manage to hit Christoph in the ankle severing tends and breaking small bones. Christoph ignored the pain knowing that if he stopped he would be killed. He hacked and slashed at the Slecs for hours until there was just one left. A young man no older then 17 was pushing himself away from Christoph as he tried to reload his bolt action rifle. Christoph dove on top of the boy and knocked his gun away.

“No please don’t, don’t!” the boy shouted in horror looking into Christoph’s eyes

Christoph screamed as he plunged the knife into the young mans body again and again his blood hitting him in the face and splashing on to his hands and torn uniform. He stopped after what felt like hours and looked at the boy’s lifeless eyes. He looked just like his cousin Strife. Christoph put his hand to his mouth as he began to cry. He looked down at his hands and then looked around him. He was the sole survivor of the battle.

“<Fuuuuuu*******kkkkkkk!>” he screamed as he pulled the boy in as if to hug him. Christoph clutched the lifeless body until reinforcements arrived hours later. He was brought back home and called a war hero.

“<A hero… a hero of what? They all died all of my friends they died I felt their lives slip away as I clutched their hands as the died! Stop your Fu*king cheering!>” he wanted to scream as he was awarded the medal of courage. He was never the same after that battle.

“<My lord!>” said a voice.

Christoph jerked out of his sheets and looked at the face of one of his servants. He was in the castle it was just a dream. He wished it to have been just a dream but it had happened and he was still dead in side.

“<My lord are you alright?>”

“<… yeah I’m fine. You can leave now I… I need to get back to sleep.>” he said as the servant left his room. “<Holly… come back in one piece. I don’t want what happened to me happen to you.>''

With that he fell back asleep and for a short time away from his life in the castle.



Sad isn’t it. That was hard to write it really was. Well I hope you enjoyed the chapter. I wanted to get across to you just how dark my Kingdom Hearts universe is and how and why Chirstoph is how he is. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production.
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Wow,i am...shocked...man,that was tragic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Short in a way,but i am not complaining cause i know you have better things to do and no much time.
Kay back to the topic.
That was another great chap!!
It's getting more and more interesting as it's moving on!
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Its 2008 now and… well nothing has changed for me. I hope you all have a splendid new year and thank you for reading. Here is the chapter please enjoy.



Axel looked in the mirror and gazed at his reflection. He smiled and practiced what he was going to say on his date with Namine. He closed his eyes and grunted.

“Man… this isn’t good I can’t go out with Namine looking like this.” he said as he looked down at his organization robes. Then it came to him “Hey… since were going to Twilight Town and I need to set things up I’ll pick up some new clothes there!” he smiled one last time in the mirror before he grabbed his wallet and rushed out the door to the gummi docks. It was sure to be the best night of his young life.



Namine thumbed through her limited wardrobe. If it wasn’t dreary it was torn and blood stained. She sighed as she closed her closet door.

“What am I going to do? I can’t go on a date in my work robes. People will think I’m some freaky emo girl who belongs in Halloween Town.” she thought to herself as she flipped her playfully laughing at the sight of her dressed up like someone from Halloween Town. “I’ll have to pick up some new clothes in Twilight Town before Axel picks me up.”



Axel ran to his shuttle and got in. He set the nav computer to Twilight Town as he tried to decide on what restaurant to get reservations at. Only minutes after his ship rocketed out of the hanged Namine too got in her shuttle and blasted off to Twilight Town not knowing she was chasing after Axel.




Axel walked around the town looking through a visitor's guide looking for a good place to eat.

“Hey dude heads up!” he heard a voice say before he was plowed down by some teenager on a skateboard.

“Ow,” Axel screamed as he put his hand up to his eking head “What the fu*k happened!?”

“Oh man, dude I’m sorry I didn’t see you until after I jumped. Are… are you okay.” the boy said as his chubby friend rushed over to him.

“Why is it that people always ask if you’re okay when you hit your head? Yeah I’m fine kid. Could you give me a hand up?” Axel said as he shook his head.

“Yea… yeah sure dude. My name is Hayner by the way and this guy is my best friend Pence.” he said as he helped Axel up off the ground.

“My name is Axel. Got it memorized?” Axel said as he brushed the dust off his robes.

“Axel… yeah I’ll commit it to memory. Hey man if there is anything I can do for you…”

“Actually there is. Do you know of any good places to eat here and a place to pick up some new clothes?” Axel smiled “I seem to be at a disadvantage when it comes to fine dinning and Twilight Town fashion.”

“What’s the occasion?” Pence asked.

Hayner slapped Pence over the head.

“You dolt! That’s kind of a personal question.”

“No that’s okay,” Axel said “You see I’m taking a girl out…”

“Girl!” Hayner and Pence said in unison as they smiled at each other “Hey leave it to us dude. We’ll take care of everything.” They said as they pulled Axel away.



Namine walked around aimlessly in a girls clothing store not knowing what to get when she spotted a young girl around her age. She decided to ask her for some help since she had no idea what was in style.

“Umm… excuse me.” Namine murmured as she tapped the girls shoulder getting her attention. “Could… could you please help me?”

The girl looked at her for a moment, smiled a nodded her head. “Sure what do you need help with? My name is Olette by the way.” she said in a perky voice as she stretched out her hand.

“Uh… hi my name is Namine.” Namine said as she shook Olette’s hand.

“Oh like the actress! Your parents must lover her movies if the named you after her.” Olette said laughing.

Namine blushed “Uh… yeah they did.”

“So what seems to be the problem?”

“You see I’m going on a date…”

“A date huh?” Olette said as she closed her eyes and nodded her head “I’ve been down that road. Let me guess you have nothing to wear and you want my help so you can find something at the last second. Is that right?”

“Yes would you do it?” Namine questioned.

“Of course I’ll help! I do it all the time before I go out with my boyfriend Hayner.” she said as she pulled Namine to the fitting room. “Come on we gotta find that special outfit before your date! I’ll go around and find some clothes while you wait here. Trust me when I say when I’m done with you you’ll be down right gorgeous!”

Namine blushed again as Olette pushed her into the changing room and rushed off to find clothes. “Well this should be fun.” Namine thought as she waited for Olette to get back.



“Look’n good Axel man!” Hayner said as he gave Axel the thumbs up sign.

“He’s right Axel you do look good. Your lady friend will sure be impressed.” Pence stated as he also gave a thumbs up.

“Well now that I have the duds all I need is a place to eat. Do you guys know anywhere good?” Axel said as he looked at himself in the mirror.

“There is a Chrisen place down in the plaza. I know the guy who owns the place. His name is Cid and if I pull some strings I might be able to get ya a good dinner fix.” Hayner said as he patted Axel on the back.

“Thanks guys I don’t know how I could ever thank you.” Axel said as he looked at Hayner and Pence.

“You can thank us by get that girl of yours to kiss ya at the sunset on sunset hill!” Hayner cheered as he slapped Axel on the shoulder.

Axel smiled and laughed “Can do.” he chuckled



“Oh you look so cute Namine!” Olette squealed in delight

“Do you really think he’ll like it?” Namine asked blushing as she looked in the mirror.

“He’ll love it!” Olette said laughing.

“Thanks Olette you’ve been a big help. How can I ever repay you?”

“By get’n that boyfriend of yours to kiss ya!” Olette said smiling

Namine laughed “Can do.”



Four hours later Axel knocked on Namine’s door. Namine rushed to get ready fixing her long blond hair as she rushed to the door.

“Coming!” she yelled as she made her way to the door and opened it.

Axel’s jaw dropped and his eyes grew large as he saw Namine. She was wearing a beautiful blue dress that looked like it could be frozen water from the bluest ocean and had her long sunflower yellow hair down flowing down the nape of her neck and down onto her shoulders instead of in the normal tied back look she normally wore.

“So… how do I look Axel?” Namine asked.

“You look… you look… umm… wow!” Axel said not knowing how to describe Namine’s beauty.

Namine blushed as she took Axel’s arm and walked with him to the shuttle.




After dinner Axel and Namine went to the top of sunset hill. The gazed up at the side as Axel held Namine in his arms as he laid his back up against a lone tree. The looked up at the majestic sight of the orange and ruby red sunset.

“Its amazing isn’t it? I mean I just can’t believe God made something so beautiful.” Namine said as she snuggled up against Axel.

“I can’t believe God made something so beautiful as you.” Axel whispered in Namine’s ear.

Namine turned around and gazed deep into Axel’s viridian eyes. The slowly moved closer until they finally kissed. It was like some one had just set off a million fireworks all at the same time. Axel thought the 1812 overture must be playing some where. After they pulled away and watched the sunset they went back to nobody castle. Axel looked up at his ceiling as he laid on his bed. It had been the best night of his life.



Awwww!!! It’s so cute! ^_^ I hope you enjoyed the chapter. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production.

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Why I'm I so late T_T, good chapters otherwise Xikem keep up the great work.
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Oh man that was so freaky awesome!
So lovely date!!!!! >w<
Oh man you just made it look so fantastic,i love this couple X3
Can't wait for the next one!!!
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I hope you all enjoyed the new chapters. ^_^ the new one will be out next sunday.
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Okay intro… Umm… what do I say? Umm… la, la, la I’m so lost I don’t care la, la, la, la, la. (20 nothing points if you tell me what I stole that from.) Well here is the chapter. ^_^



ATTENTION ORGANIZATION MEMBER 8 YOU ARE TO REPORT TO THE AUIDIENCE CHAMBER WITH MEMBER 14.2. FAILURE TO DO SO WILL RESULT IN YOUR IMMEDIATE TERMINATION.

The computer voice was more annoying then it was intimidating to Axel now. It reminded him of his father well his father before he was Axel. Axel did miss things like parents and… the first girl who had been called 14. He shook his head trying to push those types of memories back down in the darker parts of his mind. After Axel got dressed he walked down to Namine’s room to see if she was ready. It’s not like he was afraid of being late to the appointment no it wasn’t that. It was just the want to see Namine again and the hope that he would be sent on a mission with her. What doesn’t every teenage boy want to go on a psychotic rampage of destruction with a pretty blonde girl?

“Namine you ready yet?” Axel said as he knocked on her door. “Hello?” he said as he knocked on her door again.

Axel shrugged and opened the door. He looked around and saw that Namine wasn’t in her bed. He walked around the room fumbling in the dark looking for a light switch. He then found it and switched it on. Axel turned his head as he heard a sound coming from the door to his right and headed for it.

“Namine… is that you?” he said as he opened the door just in time to see Namine get out of the shower.

Namine screamed as she pulled up her towel and closed the door on Axel’s face, her faced bright red embarrassment matching Axel’s.

“Sorry!” cried Axel as he put his back to the door.

“What do you want!?” Namine asked in mix of minor anger and embarrassment.

“Umm… Xemnas wants us to report to the main chamber.”

“Okay the message didn’t get through because the water was running. Just let me get ready.”

“Well I’ll see you there.” Axel smiled “Nice by the way.”

Namine punched the door hitting Axel in the face “You perverted little pig!” she screamed. “Just get down there I’ll meet you there in a few minutes.”

Axel smiled again as he walked out the door. It was already a perfect day for him.



“Do you know why I called you here?” Xemnas boomed.

Axel and Namine looked at each other. “Umm… no; how ‘bout you fill us in.” Axel retorted rolling his eyes.

Xemnas glared at him. “We need to open up relations with the government of Tyrantes. This meeting needs to go perfect and I wanted to send a person they couldn’t say no to.”

“Let me guess you want to send Namine because if the government of Tyrantes sees that a teenage girl has joined our ranks then they might be persuaded to side with us more then they would if you sent a psycho like Demyx. Is that right?” Axel asked.

“That’s precisely it.” Xemnas said still glaring at Axel. “Of course I can’t just send her because she might run away; so I’ll be sending you to go with her.”

Axel and Namine looked at each other with large smiles on their faces.

“To make sure you don’t have any thoughts of treason I’ll be sending T5-61.” as Xemnas talked a little round hovering robot appeared before them. This is a prototype of an assassination machine made by the Slecs’. It will make sure you don’t turn against the organization on your mission. It will also function as a guide and translator on this mission.”

Axel exhaled as he looked at the little robot that now floated in front of him. “Well I guess its still work but hey I get to do grunt work with a hot blonde by my side.” Axel thought as he teleported out of the room and to the gummi docks.





Namine giggled as she pushed T5-61 up and down and watched it respond.

“Aww I think its kinda cute Axel.” she said as she tapped the little robot with her finger nails.

“Cute isn’t the word I would use for it but okay. You do know if Xemnas wanted it to it could kill you right?” Axel said as he pulled the gummi ship out of its birth.

“Yeah but it doesn’t make any less cute looking.” Namine said smiling.

“Well when you piss it off I’m sure you’ll be awing at it as it comes after me with God knows what.”

Namine just smiled at him and ruffled his long red hair.

Axel typed in the coordinates on the autopilot and sat back in his chair trying to ignore the hum of T5-61’s motor. “This is going to be one hell of a trip.”



“So what’s wrong with her!?” Riku questioned as the doctors wheeled Holly away behind doors Riku couldn’t get passed.

“She’s having an allergic reaction to whatever was injected into her blood. What were you thinking taking her to Slecus anyway don’t you know they hate Chrisens?” Aki said looking at Riku.

“That’s beside the point is she going to be alright!?” Riku yelled.

“At this rate she’ll be dead in a few days.” Aki said in a sad tone as she looked at the ground. “I’m sorry.”

“Can’t you do anything? What about Myanmar?”

“He’s been gone for some time. He’s at Tyrantes now teaching advanced healing spells at some university. He can’t be called over now. The military has been on alert since some ace violated Hollow Bastion airspace.”

Riku pushed past Aki and into Holly’s hospital room. He took her hand in his and squeezed it as he stroked a lock of her ruby red hair out of her face.

“Don’t worry Holly I’ll find a way to save you.” Riku managed to say just before he was torn away from her and thrown out of the room.

After awhile Donald and Goofy showed up next to him.

“So what do you want to do now Riku?” Goofy asked.

“Were going to Tyrantes.”



It looks like Riku and Axel are going to the same place I wonder what will happen. Well I hope you liked the chapter. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production.
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Its been awhile since the last update but this was another great edition to the already long list of awesome chapters.
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*pant* I am here *pant* and late DANG IT!!!!
Oh wells,i have to say that i rly liked this chap.
I laughed hard is true,and i can't wait to see what it will happen xD
Poor Namine-chan! XD
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