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Old June 24th, 2009, 04:46 AM   #316
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It's okay ^^ my computer fucks up sometimes when I write reports so it takes me a while.
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Old June 24th, 2009, 05:22 AM   #317
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Hmm...

The story seems okay.

Try putting a bit more effort into making better dialog and character development. A few of the characters are a bit cliché.

Other than that it's pretty good. Nice work Xikem.
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Old June 24th, 2009, 05:24 AM   #318
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Hmm...

The story seems okay.

Try putting a bit more effort into making better dialog and character development. A few of the characters are a bit cliché.

Other than that it's pretty good. Nice work Xikem.
I'll try to work on that. Thanks.
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Old June 24th, 2009, 10:31 PM   #319
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Don't be sorry about the wait, shit happens.

And anyways, Jesus Beam makes it worth it!
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wow, this seems great so far 8)
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Okay. New one up.

Namine screamed as she drew magic to summon keyblades all around her. Her eyes were already a sickly yellow. She was training to become stronger. After her fight with Alex Shrine, Namine knew that if they fought again and nothing changed she would die.

Namine and Saix had gone off into the forest a few miles away from the military base so they wouldn’t draw attention or cause any unwanted destruction.

Saix watched as Namine’s magical aura became visible. He could probably kill Alex by himself but he didn’t want to try. Why waste your own life when you can make someone else waste theirs for you. It was a perfect chance to get rid of Namine and kill off a powerful enemy. Two birds in one stone.

“You’re pathetic! How can I ever hope to use such a weakling!?” Saix yelled at Namine.

Namine pumped out more and more magic. Darkness slowly crawled over her body. Her pure white skin was eclipsed by a black coating. The darkness slithered up to her face.

Namine screamed in pain as she started to bleed out her mouth, nose, eyes, and ears as the darkness covered her completely. Her eyes turned from a sickly yellow to blood red. Fangs grew from her mouth, and her golden locks became dark as night itself.

“Push farther!” Saix yelled. “How dare you think of yourself as my daughter when you only hold that kind of power!”

Magic erupted out of Namine and destroyed the tree around them. It tore 2 foot thick trunks apart as if they were toothpicks.

Namine gasped and fell to the ground.

“Get up you useless bitch!”

She screamed and lurched up. Her head was down causing her dark hair to fall across her face. She put out her hand. She closed it as if she was holding the hilt of a sword and pulled. A black keyblade was torn out of nothing.

The name “Malphas” appeared in Namine’s mind.

The blade was about 3 feet in length and looked like the wing of a raven. Its sick serrated blade gleamed in the light the pierced through the emerald branches. Its dark power caused 40 other blades to appear.

The dark girl held the keyblade with both hands. Namine dug her feet into the ground building up power. She launched forward and swung Malphas cutting a large tree trunk clean through. The other blades shot forward in a scissoring like motion through the forest and came back to her as if it were a boomerang.

Namine plunged Malphas into the ground. Darkness shot up from the ground and disintegrated everything in its path.

Saix’s pupils shrunk in amazement. A perfect 3 mile long rectangle of trees was no longer in existence. He smiled to himself.

The darkness quickly withdrew into Namine’s body peeling of skin as it slithered away. Namine turned to around and looked at Saix. Blood was dripping from her body. Her eyes looked lifeless.

“Daddy…” She whimpered as she fell to the ground unconscious, landing face first on the cold, unforgiving ground.

Saix walked over to her limp body and roughly kicked her over onto her back. She slowly opened her eyes and looked up at him.

“Did… did I do well?” Namine asked. She looked like a slave groveling at her master’s feet.

“It will suffice.” Saix said in an unimpressed voice.

“Daddy… I can’t move…” Namine whimpered.

“You won’t have to.” Saix answered as he yanked her off the ground by her dirty blond hair. She stumbled and fell into his arms.

“It hurts…” She said weakly. She didn’t have the strength to cry.

“The pain will pass and you will need it, remember it if you want to become stronger.” Saix said in deep voice.

“Yes sir…” Namine rasped, coughing up blood as she finished talking.

Saix smiled an evil grin. He lifted Namine up off the ground and into his arms. He didn’t like having any physical contact with Namine but for now he needed to keep her alive. If that meant giving her a rare treat of affection then he had to do it. He carried her back to base.





“<Prince Kalvera do you know why we have called you to stand before our council?>”

“<Are you planning on taking more power away from me and my people?>” Christoph said in a defiant voice.

“<How dare you! If you weren’t royalty we would have the guards execute you where you stand for such a reply! Questioning our holy order makes you a heretic!>” the lead elder screamed.

“<Last time I checked your corrupt system has forced me to sign laws that oppress the people! Your acts have been everything but holy! Tell me what you want or I’m leaving.>” Christoph yelled as he drew his sword.

“<You insolent boy!>”

“<The worlds are at war once more lord Kalvera. We must choose a side!>”

“<Why!? Why would you have our world go to war again!? Billions died in the last war we had with Slecus and Hollow Bastion!>” Christoph replied harshly.

“<We wish to take sides with Organization XIII and their allies.>” The lead elder said in a commanding voice.

“<Did you forget the last decade? Did you forget what Slecus, one of their allies, did to our people? Do I even have to mention the camps!? If the organization has made a deal with Slecus out of similarities then we can’t side with them. They will use us and then slaughter us when the war is over!>”

“<The organization has promised us expansion of borders, untold riches, and so much more.>” the elders said in unison.

“<No! I will never side with them! If they think they can buy loyalty of the Chrisen people then they are bigger fools than I had thought before! We have been fighting heartless since we declared ourselves a sovereign world. The organization uses nobodies and HEARTLESS! As far as I’m concerned we are already at war with them.>” Christoph said firmly. He stood before the intimidating group of men unwavering in his beliefs.

“<Leave us! We will deal with you later!”>

Christoph grinded his teeth in anger, bowed low in a mocking gesture, and walked out of the council chambers. Once he was out of earshot the council spoke amongst themselves.

“<We will need to deal with the Prince. He has stood against our rule for too long.>”

“<Yesss but za people adore him. If we execute him they will turn on us.>”

“<We will set him up and appear a traitor. We will make it appear that he has sold the people out to the Slecus government.>”

“<We do have a written agreement with the Organization that keeps us from slavery correct?>”

“<Of course we do.>”

“<Yes, of course we do!>”

“<It will a grand day when we obtain supreme power while the prince and princess meet their sister via glock oil, feferus injection in a Selcus slave camp.>”

The council grunted in agreement. They started to laugh at the thought of the prince and especially that spoiled brat of a princess begging for their lives.






Axel’s thoughts were all on Namine. He missed her more than anything. He hated that he was not strong enough to keep her away from that bastard Saix. He twisted her mind. He would kill Saix one day even if it was the last thing he would ever do.

“Deet, beep doint dat.”

Axel looked over in the direction of the noise. It was T5-61.

“T5… is Namine doing okay?” Axel asked.

“Doot… zat plu plu.” The machine replied.

“That bastard! He shouldn’t be allowed to do that! I swear to God that I will kill him!” Axel screamed.

“Do be do day?”

“With my chakram in his neck.”





Alright. Kinda short I know. Hope you liked it. The next chapter will be up in a few days.

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Hmm... Saix is an asshole.
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Alright let’s get this done.


Joshua had a half grin on his face as he set the last explosives around the building top that he had been told that he was to meet Rhyme at. They were remote activated and as he finished programming the detonator in his hand Rhyme walked through the rooftop door.

She was hugging herself shyly as she approached him. She was obviously nervous. Joshua already knew what she was going to say. Honestly he didn’t want to hurt Rhyme, in fact he kind of liked the young girl. She was cute to him… in a punk lolita type of way.
Joshua was torn from his thoughts as she began to talk.

“Uh… umm… Joshua I… I have something to tell you.” Rhyme stammered in a tiny voice.

“Oh man!” she thought as she started to blush, “I’m stammering. I bet he thinks I’m an idiot. Oh God, does he see me blushing!?”

“I lo…”

“You know, you’re kinda cute.” Joshua said as he interrupted her.

“What!?” Rhyme said surprised.

“I really like you.” Joshua said, putting up the best concerned voice he had ever done.

Rhyme couldn’t believe what she was hearing. The older boy that she liked was confessing to her! She blushed even more as he took her hands. Her bliss was cut short as Joshua whispered something in her ear.

Joshua leaped away from her and hit the detonator.




Beat was chilling out leaning on the wall of the building adjacent from the one his sister had gone into. She said she had to do something important and that she had to do it on her own. He didn’t like the idea of letting her go off on her own. He wanted to protect her from things as long as he could. He just wanted his little sister to be happy.

BOOM

Beat looked up towards a large explosion on the top of the building. Beat needed to get there fast. He had no idea if Rhyme had been hit in the blast but he wanted to be sure. He quickly looked around and saw an old skateboard wedged into the curb of the road a few feet away from him. He jumped on it and pushed of the curb with all his strength.

“Please let Rhyme be okay!” He begged to whatever god would hear him.


“What the hell was that noise!?” Trevor yelled as him and the others sprinted towards the no fading center of dark energy.

“It sounded like a bomb going off.” Holly answered.

Trevor cursed under his breath as he ran. “Dr. Myanmar, go towards where the bomb went off and see if anyone needs help.” He looked over at Holly, “Holly will go with you to assist you and give you protection.”

“Sure thing lad, you just be sure that Riku is alright. I don’t want to come back from shrapnel and burns just to see a broken arm or leg.” The doctor said playfully as he and Holly headed the other direction.

Trevor pulled out his handgun and made sure he had enough bullets. He didn’t want to go into a potential kill zone only to realize his gun was as useful as a rock.





Sora and Kairi stood in front of a group of the new S.O.L.D.I.E.R 3rd class recruits. Although Shinra was the one who made the S.O.L.D.I.E.R. program Hollow Bastion’s government took control of S.O.L.D.I.E.R. after the company’s failing. To be a first class was to be the pinnacle of the Hollow Bastion’s military. Sora was deemed fit to be lower level first class and Kairi high second class.
This being the case Sora was ranked as Lieutenant Colonel and Kairi was ranked as the Major below him. Sora still couldn’t believe that in less than a year he went from a normal kid to keyblade user to a high ranking member of the largest military power in the known worlds.

“Everybody get ready! Colonel Strife is coming” one of the third class officers shouted as he walked into the room.

Cloud walked in a few moments later. Everyone snapped into attention and saluted. Sora could tell that Cloud didn’t like being a Colonel or being responsible for any number of people’s lives. He had accepted the post because the military was short on trained men ever since the fall of Ansem.

“Okay men, you have been given the title of S.O.L.D.I.E.R. because you are the best your nation has to offer. We will not fail in our quest to rid the worlds of evil. As we fought with all our strength to remove Ansem from power so too will we do so against the
threat Xemnas and his organization pose.” With this Cloud raised his fist up into the air. “We are strong!”

“WE ARE S.O.L.D.I.E.R!” the men in the room replied.

“Make sure your weapons are clean and loaded because by this time tomorrow you will be on board a cruiser in enemy territory. Dismissed!”

Sora waited for the 3rd classes to leave before he spoke to Cloud.

“Cloud was it easy to adjust to this kind of life?”

Cloud laid his hand on Sora’s head and smiled.

“Adjusting is never easy, but its better when you have good friends to help you.” Cloud said in the soothing voice that Sora and Kairi had both grown to like.

Sora felt someone hug him from behind. He knew it was Kairi. She squeezed him tightly.

Cloud understood that that was his cue to leave the two of them alone.

“Kairi…”

“I’m not gonna let go!” she cried.

Sora had picked up on the fact that Kairi was afraid of war. She wasn’t afraid of being in a war but she was terrified of him being in a war.

Sora took her hands, turned around, and looked at her.

“Nothings going to happen to me.” He said calmly as he wiped away a tear with his thumb.

“You don’t know that!” She cried as she pushed herself against him and hugged him harder.

Sora gently wrapped his arms around her light almost fragile frame. He rubbed her back comforting her in this way.

“Kairi look at me.” He put his hand under her chin and made her look at him but she just buried her face in his shirt again, “Come on… look at me.” He did so again this time succeeding.

Her eyes were so big and blue. They were the prettiest eyes he had ever seen.

“I’ll never leave you…”

Kairi put her hands on Sora’s shoulders, quickly leaned up towards his face, and kissed him firmly on the lips and pulled just as fast.
The stood there holding each other in silence. Neither of them wanted to let go, but as it grew later they slowly let go and walked back to their rooms. And as Sora closed his eyes to go to sleep he thought of how Cloud must have felt when he lost Aerith and how he would feel if he ever lost Kairi. Tonight he truly understood what a loss that must have been.





“Trevor! Oh thank God you’re here!” Riku rasped as he crawled over to him the best he could.

“Riku!” Trevor shouted as he picked up speed.

“Wait there’s a magic barrier!”

Trevor stopped and pulled out his pistol and fired in an open area away from Riku. The bullet crumpled like a pop can get run over by a truck.

“Shit that’s some powerful magic! Who the hell did this to you!?”

“Just get me out of here…” Riku slipped into unconsciousness.

“I don’t like ridding in your bag! It’s degrading!” River grumbled as she pushed the flap of Trevor’s shell case up. That’s when she saw Riku.

“Oh my God! What happened!? What happened to my Riku!?” River yelled out as she leaped down from the bag and scampered over to him.

“Don’t worry River he’ll be,”

“WHAHHH!!!! RIKU IS HURT!!!!” She wailed.

Trevor nearly jumped as he heard River cry. She was too loud. Whoever did this to Riku might still be around and he didn’t want to have to deal with someone while trying to protect her.

“River please he’ll be fine! You need to quite down.” He begged.

“BUT WHAT IF HE ISN’T GOING TO BE FINE!?” She wailed again.

Trevor realized telling her to shut up wasn’t going to cut it. He grabbed her by the tail, which made River squeal in mild pain, and lifted her up to his face.

“River… you need to be quite because the person who did this to Riku might still be around okay?”

“Okay…” River said back in a hushed voice.

Trevor set her back on the ground and let go of her tail. He shrugged his jacket off and gripped the hilt of his gunblade. He pulled the exotic weapon out of its sheath and took a fighting stance. It had been such a long time that Trevor had thought he had forgotten it. He made and extremely quick slash that looked was almost unseen by the naked eye.

The attack resembled more of a flash of light. Without all the street lamps around them to catch the metal of the blade, River would not have seen it.

The barrier lit up for a few seconds, collapsed and faded away. River couldn’t believe what she had just seen. She knew that Trevor was strong, but so strong to collapse a magical barrier with just strength alone was next to impossible. Magic barriers were designed so that you couldn’t do that. It puts up a thin layer of powerful element based magic that is focused to the point where it distorts the light around it in rainbow like affect. There are only 3 ways to break a barrier. The first was to kill the person that made it; the second was to cast a spell more powerful than that of the strength of the barrier, and the third and hardest was to overpower the field with a physical attack while pumping out a large amount of your own magical power.

Magic backed physical attacks were what give immensely powerful warriors the ability to cut through metal and anything with armor. River knew that, that was an ability that was found only in the S.O.L.D.I.E.R 1st class and SeeD, formally Darkness, agents.
River was pulled back to reality with the sound of Trevor sliding his gunblade back into its case. She quickly ran over to Riku’s side. She mewed quietly as she brushed up against him.

“Tilt his head back.”

River’s eyes darted over to Trevor.

“What!?”

Trevor pulled a healing potion from his bag.

“Tilt his head back. It will open up his throat so he can swallow the potion.” Trevor answered as he knelt down.

“Will that make him better?” River asked tears flowing from her eyes as she pushed Riku’s chin back with her arms and tail.
“It won’t heal him completely, but it will make him stable. We’ll need Dr. Myanmar to have a look at him when we get back to him.” He said in a comforting voice as he hoisted Riku up onto his back.

River scampered squirrel like up Trevor’s leg and up to his shoulder so she could be closer to Riku. She kissed Riku lightly on the cheek.

“Don’t worry Riku. Your gonna be okay.” She whispered her words separated by sniffles.





Beat could see his sister falling. He pushed himself faster and faster, but it wasn’t going to be enough. No matter how fast he pushed himself he wouldn’t make it to her in time. PUSH! That was it!

Beat put all his weight on the front of the board, bent his knees, and pushed off the board into the air. He thrust his arms out so far that his muscles hurt. His prayers were answered as Rhyme fell into his open arms. Beat pulled her close to his body and rolled in the air to get his back to hit the pavement.

He hit the ground elbow first with a loud thud and the cracking of bone. Beat yelled at the top of his lungs as he cradled his sister in his arms. She was in a daze. Beat saw her eyes flutter as if she were having a heart attack. Lucky for him, she wasn’t.
Just as Beat was starting to sit up he heard a voice.

“Are you okay over there!?”

Beat looked over and saw an old man and a young girl with blood red hair running
towards him. They were upon him in a few seconds.

“Please, you gotta help my sister man! She’s all I got!” Beat pleaded with the strangers.

“Don’t worry son. I’m a doctor and a very good one at that. I will help you to the best of my abilities, but first are you okay?” The old one asked as he got down on one knee and set, what Beat now new to be some kind of medical bag, down next to him.

“I think my arm might be broken, but that doesn’t matter! Save Rhyme! Save my sister!” Beat begged.

Dr. Myanmar motioned for Beat to set her down flat. He removed his jacket and put it around Rhyme’s neck. His well trained eyes ran up and down Rhyme’s little body. She had a few shrapnel wounds but nothing to major. The problem was the trauma she might have sustained in the blast.

The doctor put his ear to the young girl’s chest. Her breathing was uneven. His eyes darted to the girl’s face. She was turning blue.
“Holly!” he shouted, “Slowly remove her hat.”

Holly did as he had asked and as the hat was removed Dr. Myanmar’s fears were confirmed. This young man’s sister had sustained blunt force trauma to the head. A large burse started to form on her head. His eyes darted over to Beat.

“You need to keep her awake by any means!” not waiting for a reply he turned to Holly, “Holly, open up my medical bag. Take the vial marked with a red number 5 and put it into the syringe gun.”

After a few seconds of digging through the bag Holly found the vial and placed it into the syringe gun.

“What are you gonna do with that thing!?” Beat shouted as he saw how large the needle was.

“It’s an adrenaline potion.” The doctor replied, “You sister’s lungs don’t have enough energy to keep take in air because of the hit she took to the head. This will giver he body the ability to run without commands from the brain.”

Rhyme convulsed as the needle was stuck into her body. The shrapnel that had found itself stuck in her skin was immediately pushed out.

Without stopping to take a breath, Dr. Myanmar issued more orders.

“Holly, get the hi-potion out of my bag! It should be enough to seal the wounds. Boy, talk to her. Keep her awake, because if she falls asleep she might not wake up!”

“Come on Rhyme,” Beat said as he kissed Rhyme on the cheek, “You can’t die! I love you too much for you to die!” He held her in his arms, his tears falling onto her face. “You’re what I live for! Out of all the things in the world that I hold in my heart you’re the most important! Please don’t go Rhyme! I’m begging you!”

Dr. Myanmar handed Beat the potion. He put it to Rhyme’s mouth and let it slide down her throat. He waited and… nothing happened.

Beat began to sob uncontrollably.

“Rhyme no! NO NO! NO! NO! NO!” he begged, tapping her face gently, “OPEN YOUR EYES!”

Still nothing happened. Beat hugged his sister tightly.

Holly thought of what her older sister’s death must have looked like. Was this how it happened? Her brother on the ground pleading that she be alright? She felt tears begin to form.

Dr. Myanmar sighed. He looked at his watch. It was 5:48. A child had died today.

“Time of death is…” just as Dr. Myanmar was about to call it, Rhyme coughed.

“Rhyme!?” Beat cried as he looked down at his sister’s face. Her eyes were starting to open! “Oh Rhyme, thank God you’re alive!” he said as he hugged her again.

“Beat,” she whispered in his ear.

“What is it Rhyme? What do you need?”

“You’re what I live for too.”

With that she passed out. Unconscious but alive.




Joshua looked down on Shiki like a hawk would a rabbit. She was with Neku, but they were a pair that constantly fought about something and often separate. Lucky for him they were having one such fight now. He looked on as Shiki stomped her foot, screamed something at Neku, and stormed off as Neku did the same. Joshua smiled as he slithered down from his perch and followed after Shiki.

Joshua knew a secret of Shiki’s. Her appearance wasn’t her own. Her real body was much different than the one she has now. He knew how to take care of her too. Good thing he brushed up on some illusion magic before he got involved with his new “Friends”. He snapped his fingers.

Shiki couldn’t believe how obnoxious Neku was. She just wanted to get to know him better. She wanted to be friends with him maybe even something more. He hadn’t even told her his last name.

“Does he not trust me that much?” She thought, “I guess I keep things from him too…”

Shiki was pulled from her thoughts as she saw a person on a bench with their backed turned to her crying.

“Are you okay?” Shiki asked in a nice, comforting voice.

“No.” the person said firmly as they stood up, “My friend stole everything from me.”

Shiki gasped and her eyes went wide as the person turned around. She looked just like her.

“Eri? But how!?”

“You stole everything from me! My face, my body, my voice, even my personality!” Eri screamed interrupting Shiki.

“Eri… when you went away.”

“What,” she interjected again, “You thought you could just become me? You were always jealous of me! I knew you hated that everyone liked me more and wanted to be me. Well guess what Shiki? You’re a loser and will always be a loser even if you do have my face.”

“Eri I’m…”

“Oh and don’t think I didn’t see that boy you were with. He only keeps you around ‘cause you look like me. If he saw the real you the he’d drop you like a bad habit. Of course no boy in their right mind would ever fall for you. You’re ugly and not appealing in the slightest.” Eri said as she circled Shiki.

Shiki fell to her knees and started to cry. Everything Eri said was true. She was a fake. Everyone hated her and the only person who did like her was Eri. With Eri hating her she had no friends, no real ones at least.

“Yeah that’s right! Sit there and cry! That’s the only thing you could ever do anyway. You’re useless and even that boy knows your useless.” Eri taunted, “I’m sure he’s told you that plenty of times.”

Shiki fell to the ground and curled up into a ball. She hated everything about herself. She closed her eyes.

Eri smiled. Shiki was in total shutdown. She walked away into an alley laughing. When she was finally far enough away she snapped her fingers. Her body flaked away until nothing remained of her and Joshua had taken her place. He smiled an evil smile.

“Four down… one to go.”

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Saïx is my favorite Organization member, but he's pissing me off big time in this. I mean, I was liking him at first, but he's taking it too far. Poor Naminé, :c don't lose your innocence! D:
What an asshole.
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threat Xemnas and his organization pose.” With this Cloud raised his fist up into the air. “We are strong!”

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“Four down… one to go.”
Or so Yoshiya thinks, Beat may have a broken arm, but I don't think will stop him for too long. As for Neku, my epic senses are tingling...

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Saïx is my favorite Organization member, but he's pissing me off big time in this. I mean, I was liking him at first, but he's taking it too far. Poor Naminé, :c don't lose your innocence! D:
What an asshole.
He thinks of Namine as a tool and at times a toy. A thing to play with, kick around, and used in whatever way he sees fit.

Malphas is actually the grand president of Hell who appears as a Raven and commands 40 legions. That's the reason why Namine's new keyblade looks like raven wing and has 40 lesser blades that appear with it.

Just about everything in the story has something behind it. ^_^

I have to say my favorite character to write about is River. In my mind she is the perfect character for this story. I sorta based her off Mikey (Dantes de Divinity). A bit of her is in Holly too with a mix of other people I know.
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My computer is broken! I'm doing this off a crap computer in my local library. Thanks to my job being easy and having a lot of free time I have been able to write chapters so expect some of it up by tomorrow. Sorry for not posting for a long time.
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He thinks of Namine as a tool and at times a toy. A thing to play with, kick around, and used in whatever way he sees fit.
What a cold-hearted bastard......I hope you make him suffer greatly in the story.
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“I want every unit, every gummi ship on alert!” Saix yelled furiously, “We are going to find this Alex person if we have to napalm that entire forest!” He pounded his fist on his desk as he clicked the radio off.

Saix shoved the paper work on his desk to the floor. Just then he heard a knock at the door.
“Enter!” he growled.

His second in command walked in holding a piece of paper.

“What is it!?” Saix ordered.

“The governor would like you and your daughter to stop by his mansion for lunch sir.” The young man revealed.

“I can’t catch a break today can I?” Saix mumbled.

“It would seem not sir.”

“Thank you Hans, you may go.”

Hans saluted and walked out.

Saix picked his radio up and clicked it on.

“Send my daughter to my office at once.”

“As you command sir.” The voice on the other side answered.

Saix sighed. “I want this Alex dead. I don’t have time to deal with that fat, old, racist governor.”





“I see Dr. Myanmar up ahead Trevor!” River yelled atop the young man’s shoulder.

“Thanks River, jump down and rush ahead to tell him we need medical attention for Riku now!”

Trevor ordered as he hefted Riku up higher to get a better grip on his unconscious body. He didn’t think the younger boy was this heavy just looking at him.

River leapt down off Trevor’s shoulder like she was asked and raced up ahead on all fours towards Dr. Myanmar.

“Doctor!” She screamed trying to get his attention, “Riku’s…” her voiced faded away as she noticed that the doctor had other patients. “Who are…?”

“Dr. Myanmar! Riku’s in bad shape. I think he’s bleeding internally!” Trevor shouted as he rushed past the dumbstruck cat girl.

Dr. Myanmar shrugged off a bit of his exhaustion and turned to face the new problem.

“Set him down on the ground slowly.” He commanded.

“Doctor?” interjected Holly.

“Bring me the bio sealer foam from my bag and ready a syringe!” The doctor answered as Trevor set Riku down on the cold pavement. A crowd was starting to form.

Holly tore open the medical bag once more and dug through the variety of death denying medical applications to find the one they needed. She smiled victoriously as she lifted the syringe and bio sealer out of the bag.

“What’s that stuff you’re putting in him!?” River questioned as she tried not quiver in fear.
Dr. Myanmar stuck Riku before he answered River’s question.

“This foam when injected into a vein flows through the blood stream and acts as a temporary glue and seals any tears anywhere in his vascular system.”

River rushed over to Riku’s side. She took his hand in her small ones. “Riku,” She thought, “You just have to be okay. I can’t imagine you not being here.” Just as she finished her thought Riku started to convulse.

“What’s going on!?” She yelled as her fear overwhelmed her.

The doctor cursed under his breath. He was afraid Riku might be allergic to the foam. He had heard that the boy was from an isolated world. This being the case he was never exposed to any of non magic based medical prescriptions. His body was rejecting the foam.

“Holly!” he yelled over his shoulder, “The chalk!”

“I’m on it!” The young Chrisen princess answered as she pulled the chalk from the bag.
The doctor took the chalk from his royal blooded assistant and proceeded to draw a pentagram on the pavement.

“Riku?” River whispered to herself.

“I’m going to have to use a purifying spell. Stand back!”

The others did as they were told. Holly helped Beat with Rhyme.

Dr. Myanmar put his hands forward and twirled them around in a circle drawing the magic around him to his hands. He gathered it in his index and middle finger, the tips of which were glowing light blue. He traced a pentagram over Riku’s chest and placed his palm over his sternum. Magic shot through Riku’s body giving it a blue aura for a few seconds.

“We’re going to have to do this the hard way.” He mumbled, “Holly there should be a blue bag in my bag. Get it out now!”

Holly did as she was told and handed the bag over to him. The doctor dug his hand into the small bag and withdrew a summon stone. He pushed magical energy into the stone and set it on the ground. A few seconds afterwards a blue moggle. The little creature jumped up onto Riku’s body and looked it over. The moggle was used specifically for its x-ray like eyes. It pointed to one of Riku’s ribs. It must have punctured something.

“Liquid lightning stat!” the doctor ordered.

His fingers locked around the new syringe and he jammed it into Riku’s body right where the moggle had pointed to. Liquid lightning acted like bio sealing foam, but it was magic based. It was sure to not cause an allergic reaction, but unlike bio sealing foam it didn’t flow throughout the body. It needed to be injected right into the wound. Hence the need for the moggle to find the internal wound with its magic eyes. And old system but it was one that always worked. Riku’s seizure stopped.

To be sure the boy was fine the doctor checked his pulse. It was slowing down to its normal rhythm. Riku still at least one broken rib, but he wasn’t in life threatening danger. He looked around at the mass of people that now circled them. They were awestruck and so were his companions. He wasn’t called the best for nothing.

Holly slowly walked over to River. She kneeled down and rested her hand on her back comforting her in this way.

River was crying so hard she was coughing for air.

“Don’t worry River,” she said in a comforting, cool voice, “Dr. Myanmar knows what he’s doing. Riku will be fine.”

River clutched Riku’s hand, her tail locked around her waist as if it were a belt. “Get better Riku. You have to.” She whispered.

Not a lot up for now. More monday.
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