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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Okay this is the third chapter of broken chain of memories. As you can pry tell now this story is going to be extremely sad for Roxas and Namine. Trust me when I say they will go through hell, cerebrally assonated, and tortured through the entire story. Well now that we have that out of the way here is the chapter. Lol. Axel opened his eyes slowly as he sat up from his seat on the couch. He looked over at Namine with a sad look on his face. He thought about the day he was picked up by the organization. “Join us and you will have a purpose. You will be the organization’s fist.” Xemnas had said that to him when he had first joined the organization. He had no idea that they would torture him through the rest of his nonexistence. He walked to the corner of his bed where Namine still lay sleeping. Axel remembered last night and how she cried her eyes out. She had been so terrified and confused that Axel had to sing her a lullaby to get her to go to sleep. It was one of his favorites when he was a kid before the organization, before Axel, and before the war. He looked down at Namine and smiled as she turned over and faced him. Axel saw her chest rise up and down peacefully as she slept. “So cute.” He thought as he brushed a lock of hair out of her face and rubbed her cheek to wake her up. “Come on its time to wake up Namine” Axel said soothingly as Namine opened her eyes. “I wanted it just to be a dream.” She said looking down at the floor while she talked. “I miss my friends.” Axel kneeled down to look at her in the face. “Hey” he said raising her chin with his thumb and index finger to make her look into his eyes “You have one right here.” Axel said. Namine’s face turned a bright shade of red as she gazed into Axel’s eyes. She pulled him in for a hug, squeezing him as she did so. “Thank you… so much.” Axel hugged Namine back and took her hand. “Come on we got a gummi ship to catch.” And with that said Axel and Namine walked out the door and towards the docking bay. Roxas woke up to a loud buzzing sound, his eyes darting around the dark room trying to see what was going on. He screamed out in pain as an electric current shot through the bed knocking him to the hard metal floor. “Get up get out of bed its time to assimilate the day.” A computer voice said through the speaker system above Roxas’s bed. Roxas looked around the room and saw his robes. He put them on in a hurry; he didn’t want Xemnas to get mad at him if he was late. Roxas rushed out the door and fell to the ground as he hit another organization member. The man Roxas looked up at was a big man with wide shoulders. He looked to be seven feet tall and really strong. The man looked down at Roxas with a disgusted look on his face, his long black hair flipping into his face as he turned his head. “Watch where you’re going you little shit sack!” The man said as he picked Roxas up by the neck and pushed him into the wall, pinning Roxas’s arm with his massive paw of a hand. “Xemnas might have hand picked you himself but that wont stop me from tearing you’re eyes out of you head and impaling you on one of my spears if you get in my way again!” Roxas rubbed his shoulder as the man walked away. He pushed it to the back of his head and began walking again. He looked down at a card he had found in his room. It said: “REPORT TO MAIN CHAMBER” on the front in big boldfaced letters. Roxas’s thoughts were interrupted by the cheers of a young man. Roxas looked over at where he thought the sound came from. He saw a huge machine in front of him. It had the words FLIGHT SIMULATER on the side of it. Roxas could hear the cries of the computer pilots begging for mercy only to be met with the blasters of a V75 fighter. “Ha ha ha… smoke and fire smoke and fire!” The man laughed as he shot down another fighter. He stepped out of the flight chair, the yoke pulled back into a slot in the machine. “Ah I love it when the scream, oh who are you?” The man said looking down at Roxas. Roxas looked up at the man and said “Hi my name is Roxas. Xemnas picked me up yesterday.” “Yeah whatever kid,” the man said dismissingly “My name is Demyx. I thought I heard Luxord and Xigbar talking about some new member. I have to say I wasn’t expecting a weakling like you though.” The man said as he flicked Roxas’s nose in mix of laughter and disgust. “Oh yeah!” Roxas snapped as he pushed Demyx away from him. “I bet I could beat your time on that stupid simulator.” “I’ll do you one better you little punk ass I’ll fight you. Then we really will see who the weakling is!” Demyx shouted back pulling a sitar out of the air. “I can’t wait to see you begging for mercy.” Demyx laughed at the thought of Roxas in pain. Roxas smiled an evil grin “Come on get over here.” He pulled Oblivion out of the air and readied himself. He jumped at Demyx with hatred in his eyes. Demyx leaped out of the way of Roxas’s slash and strummed his sitars strings. His fingers flew up and down the neck as if they were fire ants looking for a fresh meal. Roxas feel to the floor in pain, blood poured out of his ears and eyelids as the supersonic blast rocketed through his ear canal. “Ha you stupid kid. You can’t dodge sound. The second you hear my attack it’s already too late!” laughed Demyx as he did a windmill strum, blasting out another super sonic note. Demyx laughed again as Roxas flipped over in pain. “The notes target you inner ear and cochlea. Through that the sound travels through your entire body through the blood stream. Your arms become useless and you can’t move.” He squealed in delight as Roxas screamed in pain. “Yes that’s it scream! Dance water dance!” With that water creatures came out of the air and pulled Roxas’s hands away from his ears exposing him completely to Demyx’s melody of death. Roxas closed his eyes in pain. He could feel a power growing in his body as the barrage of sound pelted him. He opened his eyes. They were now a sickly yellow color. He pushed the water creatures off and pulled his Keyblade out of the air. He once again dove at Demyx slashing not at him but his sitar. Roxas’s Keyblade cut through the sitar like a knife through butter; the wood fragments flying everywhere as the neck was broken. Demyx fell back his pupils large at the sight of the young man before him. He crawled over to Roxas’s feet and begged for forgiveness. “Please don’t kill me. I… I was just kidding about what I said.” He groveled. Roxas felt something hit him in the back and he fell in pain. He looked around and saw Xemnas standing over him. “I hate having to wait for people. If you want to kill Demyx do it on your own time not mine!” He said in a booming voice. He looked over at Demyx and sighed “And you… you’ve been in the organization how long now? You were just nearly killed by a new comer. You disgust me. Leave us before I finish the job Roxas started.” Demyx scurried away clutching his broken sitar to his chest as he ran. Roxas’s eyes returned to normal as he turned to face Xemnas once again. He was met by a stern face and angry eyes. “If I ever see you do something so foolish again I will kill you myself do you hear me?” Xemnas scolded. “Ye…Yes sir understood.” Roxas stammered. Roxas followed Xemnas towards the main chambers still thinking of that strange power he had felt in his fight with Demyx. Namine’s face turned bright red as Axel bent down to strap her into the copilot seat. Out of all the people she had seen here where ever she was Axel was the friendliest. “I’ll be right back Namine I forgot my supplies back at the room.” Axel said as he walked down the landing ramp of the gummi ship. Axel walked into the main hallway and saw Xemnas and some new blond kid. “My gosh he must be Namine’s age.” He thought as Xemnas motioned for him to come over. “This is our newest member Axel. His name is Roxas.” Xemnas said resting his hand on the crown of Roxas’s head. “Uh… hi Roxas. I’m Axel.” said Axel sticking out his hand to the young man. “Hi.” murmured Roxas as he shook Axel’s hand. Xemnas put his arm around Axel and pulled him over to the side away from Roxas. “Axel, Roxas is a project I’m working on. Now this experiment will be compromise if Namine finds out Roxas. If you allow this to happen you will be tired as a traitor and killed if you are found. Is that understood?” “Yes sir understood.” Axel said as Xemnas turned back and started to walk over Roxas “Sir,” Xemnas turned to face him “Sir if you don’t mind me asking… why?” Xemnas walked back over to Axel “What I am about to tell you is highly classified but you have proven yourself as an organization member so I’ll tell you. They are brother and sister and if they were to fight against us at their full potential it would mean the end of the organization. Namine has the power to warp memories and her brother has a strange power inside of him. I have only seen eyes like he has once before and they were Terra’s.” he whispered. Axel’s eyes grew large. “Yes thank you sir.” Axel looked back at Roxas for a second and walked back to his room to get his supply bag. He quickly rushed back to the gummi and boarded it. “All set?” Namine said in a high pitched voice. “Yes let’s just go.” Axel said nervously. “How can I possible keep this secret from her? She’s so nice… no they would turn me into a dusk if I betrayed them.” He thought as he started the gummi and plotted a course for Castle Oblivion. Axel couldn’t bare to look Namine in the eyes as he pulled the control yoke back. “At least she’ll get to meet Sora.” He said to himself. With that they flew out of the hanger leaving Nobody Castle behind. I hope you like chapter 3 of Kingdom Hearts Infinities: Broken Chain of Memories. The next chapter will be out next Sunday. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production. |
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| I Support President Elect Obama.* | Looks good. I think the story is picking up a little. Though your Xaldin is very different from the one in my fic. |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Thank you and as a Thanksgiving gift to you guys I will post a new chapter on thurs-sunday here. (I going to take a sick day to hang with my little bro.^_^) Hope you like the story. Oh and since 358/2 won't be come'n out for a bit I hope you enjoy the Final Mix of the first Kingdom Hearts Infinities. It will be put up in full novel form the sunday after Broken Chain of Memories's last chapter. Don't worry though that won't be for awhile.lol. Thanks once again. bowchickawowwow |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Okay here is the chapter. Enjoy hope you like it. ^_^ Roxas moved around in his chair. It was way too big for him. He looked around and saw that a few chairs were empty but came to the conclusion that they were out on missions. There were sixteen chairs in all in the audience chamber. He had been told that there were suppose to be two more members and yet there were sixteen chair as if some one else was suppose to sit there. Roxas couldn’t shake off the thought of what the organization must have done to that person that was suppose to have his chair. His thoughts were interrupted when Xemnas appeared on the highest chair. The one at the top was more of a throne then a chair but Roxas feared what would happen to him if he made a comment on it. “Now then,” Xemnas said in a booming voice getting the members attention. “It has come to my attention that a few of our brothers are planning to over through me.” He looked around the room at the worried faces of his subordinates “You would not be that person would you Xaldin?” He said in an angry tone. Xaldin put his hands over his non-existent heart. “I’m surprised that you would say such a thing lord Xemnas. I mean I would never think of such a thing.” Xemnas laughed “Oh I knew it was not any of you. The real threat has been identified as the members as of now residing at Castle Oblivion.” Xemnas looked around at the shocked faces of his fellow members. “No need for worry my brethren the manner has already been dealt with. Axel will dispose of them quickly and retrieve the Keyblade master.” “What makes you so sure that Axel dose not have thoughts of treason my lord?” Luxord exclaimed. “Because he has…” Xemnas began to say but was interrupted by Demyx. “Yes I second the notion. I mean we all remember what happened last time you asked him to take care of a member. How do we know he has no thoughts of treason himself? Interjected Demyx “How do I know that you don’t!?” snapped Xemnas. Demyx sunk into his chair and put his hood up trying to hide his shame. He murmured something but it was not noticeable to anyone. “Now then it has come time to decide who Roxas’s partner will be. Since Axel is already training… I mean to busy to handle an apprentice and there Demyx’s partner is about to be killed I purpose that Demyx takes on Roxas for a partner.” stated Xemnas in a commanding voice. “What I have to be with him!?” Demyx and Roxas screamed in unison as they pointed at each other nearly falling out of their seats as they did so. “Oh I’m sorry gentlemen but I don’t recall ever needing permission to pass my judgment on you.” He said as electricity gathered in his right hand. “That was not a suggestion it was a command.” Xemnas boomed squinting his eyes in anger as he finished. Both Demyx crossed their arms and sunk deep into their chairs in a mix of disgust, anger, and frustration. “Meeting adjourned.” stated Xemnas as he teleported out of the chamber via a dark portal. Roxas and Demyx stayed in the audience chamber after the others had left. They looked over at each other. They had eyes for each other but not the romantic kind. No this was the look one would give a murderer who had killed his family. Demyx stood up on his seat and looked over at Roxas. Roxas did the same and started to jump up the seats up towards Demyx. Demyx saw Roxas and started to jump down after him. They met at the tenth chair and looked each other in the eye. They were literally nose to nose. Demyx and Roxas pulled their weapons from the air at nearly the same instant. Roxas put his Keyblade to Demyx’s neck. Demyx followed suit as he put the round blade finger board of his sitar up to the neck of Roxas. They stood there looking into each others eyes for what seemed like hours before they lowered their gaze and weapons. They turned their backs to each other and opened dark portals before them. “Don’t think us being partners’ changes anything.” Demyx said with out turning around to face Roxas. “If I get the chance I won’t hesitate to kill you and use you guts to make violin strings.” He said his voice emotionless “Don’t worry I don’t. I look forward to scalping you and using the rest of you skull as a spittoon.” Roxas said. They turned their heads one last time and looked over their shoulders at one another, the hate pouring off them like a bad odor. With that they stepped into the portals they had made; leaving the audience chamber silent as corpse. Axel looked over at Namine as she gazed out past the V75’s windshield and at the countless stars and worlds that lay light-years away; far but not to far to not notice their beauty. He smiled as her mouth fell open as she stared off into space. “You keep you mouth open like that a fly is bound to fly in.” he joked as Namine looked away her face red with embarrassment. “They’re so amazing; I wish we could see them all. They’re just so beautiful.” Namine said as she looked out into to space again. “None of ‘em are as beautiful as you though.” Axel said making Namine blush again. “It’s true you know. If you’re somebody looked anything like you she must have been more beautiful then prettiest princess.” He said as he laid his hand on her cheek making her blush even more. “Here do want to give it a try?” Axel said as he hit a switch making the control yoke slide over to the copilot side of the ship. “Me?” Namine said in confusion “No I can’t its just too hard for me, I could never do it.” “Sure you can, here let me show you.” Axel said as he went behind Namine’s chair and put his hands on hers making her grab the control yoke. “See those foot petals down there?” He asked pointing down at the petals down by Namine’s feet. “Yeah I see them. What are they for?” she asked. “They’re for steering the ship when you have the landing gear on when you on the ground. That dial near your right hand shows you your elevation relative to the ground. You don’t need to worry about that now since were in space. Other then that it’s basically juts left for left, right for right, pull back to climb, and forward to dive. Got it memorized?” Axel said as he rested his hands back over hers. “I… I think so.” Namine stammered as she looked over the controls one last time. “Oh how ‘bout you take us into those dust clouds over there!” Axel said pointing over at the majestic sapphire and viridian clouds that lay to the V75. “No I can’t I just couldn’t.” She started to say before Axel interrupted her. “Stop saying you can’t. You can I know you can do it. Here let me give you a push in the right direction.” He said confidently as he moved the yoke to the right making the ship do a sharp turn toward the clouds. Namine took over the controls and flew into the dust cloud. She was surrounded instantly by the glowing wonderland. “Lets try put’n ‘er through some maneuvers.” Axel said as he pulled back on Namine’s hands making the ship pull up slightly. They flew hit up and out of the cloud and plummeted back inwards making the dust branch off into spiraling tails of glittering gas and dust. “I’m going to take my hands away now okay.” Axel said as he slowly released his grip on her hands. “No wait don’t,” Namine tried to say but it was too late, Axel had let go she was on her own. She took control of the yoke and pulled the ship into a smooth coast. She laughed in joy as she said “Axel… Axel I’m… I’m flying really flying!” she let out a loud woo hoo as she sent the V75 into a barrel roll. She looked out to the sides of the craft and saw glowing white balls swirling next to the ship. “What are those Axel?” “Those are dis-souls; they are the left over memories of pilots who fell in love with the abyss. They left their most treasured memories behind to inspire us to fly. Funny I rarely if ever see one. They must like you.” Axel said half laughing. “Pretty aren’t they?” “Yeah they are… not as pretty as me right?” giggled Namine as she pulled the ship up, the dis-souls chasing them like bees after stolen honey. Axel smiled “Yeah not as pretty as you.” After a few minutes Axel reached over again and hit a button turning the ships autopilot on. He put his head next to her ear and whispered “See I knew you could do it.” “You… you were right. You said I could do it and I did. Thank you.” Namine whispered back as she turned her head and looked up into Axel’s eyes. “No… prob…lem.” He said as he leaned forward and started to close his eyes. Namine close her eyes too and started to move closer to Axel. She felt his soft fingers lift her chin up towards his lips. They were just about to kiss when the ships guidance system interrupted them. “We have arrived at set destination.” The computer voice said. Axel and Namine pulled away their faces now a bright shade of red. They looked down at the metal floor trying not to look at each other they were so embarrassed. “Umm… I should probably take the controls back now.” Axel stammered as he pulled the yoke back over to his side of the ship. “A… yeah were almost there anyway.” Namine said a smile from ear to ear still spread across her face as Axel brought the V75 in for a landing. Roxas was woken up again by the familiar electric shock that ran through is bed. A computer voice said something different this time as he fell to the floor in pain. “Report to main audience chamber with your partner to receive an assignment card.” It said in an eerily calm voice. Roxas stood up and walked out of his room. “God I hope I don’t bump into Xaldin again” He thought as he pushed his left arm through his cloak’s sleeve. He was meet only by air and the low pitch hum of the generator that lay sixteen floors below him. He made his way to wards the portal room. He had realized that the only way to warp anywhere in Nobody Castle you had to be in a one of the many warp rooms. There was one on every floor of Nobody Castle. They all functioned as makeshift elevators. The only actual elevator in the castle was on the first floor and it only took you to the fifth floor. He wanted to get to the top floor in the castle, floor sixteen. Roxas walked into the thirteenth floor warp room and stepped into the portal that had the words sixteen written above it. He was transported directly to his seat in the main audience chamber. He looked up and saw only two other people with him. As Roxas had thought they were Demyx and Xemnas. “Good now that you are both here I can give you your assignment.” Xemnas boomed as he took a card out of his cloak pocket. “You will be going to the ruins of Castle de Bastion to find a set of experimental heart chambers that were used by my heartless Ansem to suck the life force out of the Princesses of Heart. These may prove useful in the future and will be an easy first mission for Roxas.” Xemnas spoke as he flung two copies of the cards at Roxas and Demyx. “You must be stealthy in your visit to Hollow Bastion for the town has been taken back by the local inhabitants. A simple go in, get the goods, get out mission.” Demyx and Roxas nodded and started to get up when Xemnas spoke again. “Before you go Roxas you must make your own dusk solders. Demyx will prep your V75 for launch while you make your dusk. Report to the room of power in 3 minutes; and don’t keep me waiting.” Xemnas stated as he teleported out of the room. Roxas too opened a portal and stepped through it. He would be there early for his lesson. Roxas lifted his head up when he heard Xemnas’s voice crackle over the sound system. “Roxas it is time to make your own dusk. You dusk will answer only to you and will do anything you ask of it. It is a members bread and butter if you will.” Xemnas said. “Now concentrate you hatred into you finger tips and think about power then just let you anger take shape.” Roxas did as he was told and concentrated his anger into his finger tips. His hands stated to glow red as a grey blob appeared in front of him. “Good now give your hate a shell.” Xemnas instructed over the loudspeaker Roxas closed his eyes and thought of what he hated most. Then it came to him “The Katana dusk. Katana… Samurai… Samurai dusk.” He thought. The blob in front of him took the shape of a humanoid samurai warrior. It pulled one of its swords out of its hilt and stuck it in the metal floor. It rested its hands on the bottom of the hilt, kneeled down and bowed its head. “What is it that you ask my liege?” a voice said in Roxas’s head. “Good you’re ready to go to Hallow Bastion.” Xemnas said his voice as emotionless as the dusk’s Roxas looked at the abomination of artificial life that he created kneeling before him. He smiled as he looked down at his still glowing hand. “This is going to be fun.” He thought as he walked out of the room laughing. He was ready for his first mission. Well that’s the end of the chapter. I hope you like it. The next chapter will come out tomorrow. Check back to see how Roxas’s first mission and Namine’s trip to Castle Oblivion go. This has been a Bowchickawowwow production. |
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| I Support President Elect Obama.* | Looks great Xi. Hey, If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for you. |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Oh Gawd... double posting on my own fan-fic... oh well I guess in can't be helped.lol Okay here is the new chapter. Hope you all like it. ^_^ Roxas was starring into the gun metal black abyss of space from the cockpit of his V75 Shadow Caster class fighter. His thoughts were interrupted by Demyx as his voice crackled over his helmets headset ear piece. “Hey keep your eyes up front! I may be your partner but I’m not going to baby-sit you on this mission. Do you understand or do I need to repeat myself?” Demyx shouted sarcastically over the headset radio. Roxas flipped to radio silence. He saw Demyx pull up to him, shouting and making motions with his hands of what he was going to do to him once they reached Hollow Bastion. Roxas gave him the finger and pulled in front of Demyx. He was going to be the first down on the surface. Roxas pulled into the world’s ionosphere. The heat coming of his ship was so hot it was easily visible. It flaked off the impurities of the fighter as Roxas crossed deeper into the world’s inner stratosphere. As Roxas pulled into a steady glide a few thousand feet above the round a voice blasted over his headset. “This is Leon commander of the Hollow Bastion defense force. You have entered restricted air space; you will be escorted away from the inner city or be shot down. Please comply.” As the man finished his transmission two Gully Spark fighters pulled up alongside his wings. The men inside motioned with their thumbs for Roxas to pull down to the runway below. Roxas pulled back on the throttle hard making the Gully Sparks over shoot him and fired at their exposed six o’clock. Roxas shot a rocket straight into the Gully Spark on his right engine, sending it spiraling into the airfield below. Roxas barrel rolled to his left and fired at the last Gully Spark. He hit it twice in the tailfin and once in fuel pipe; the ship caught fire and spun out of control towards the ground bellow. “That’s it you little asshole, if you want to play like that then will play!” Leon screamed at Roxas. Roxas looked down at the airfield and saw the towers both in the airfield and city sprout anti-aircraft turrets. They fired up at him with out hesitation and with out mercy. Roxas went in low and zoomed through the city. He flew above the main streets in the city, using the buildings for cover. Roxas saw on his scanner that three more Gully Sparks were coming up on his six. Roxas fired at one of the skyscrapers; the weakened building collapsed under its own weight and crumbled into the street below. Roxas was rewarded with one of the red dots on his trace scanner going out. “Two more,” he thought as he pulled a hard right at an intersection. His vision faded for a few moments as the blood in his head rushed to his knees as he pulled back from the turn. Roxas had lost one of the Gully Sparks but the other one was coming up on his tail, he needed to shake him or he was as good as dead. Just as Roxas was about to start praying he heard a girl’s voice over his headset. “This is Yuffie of the Hollow Bastion defense force land you craft now and we will go easy on you.” Roxas pulled back on the stick hard sending his V75 Shadow Caster into a climb, the Gully pilot following after him as he did so. The G-force pulled at his skin and made his vision fuzzy as he cut the ship’s engine. As he had planed the Gully over shot him; he fired up at the Gully’s tail pipe. The Gully served out of the way at the last minute as Roxas took his thumb off the trigger. “Hmm… she’s a good pilot. But not good enough!” Roxas thought as he executed a flying scissors on his opponent. Roxas missed on his first pass but got the Gully in the side wing in his second pass, crippling it. Roxas saw the crippled vessel leak hydraulic coolant as its pilot ejected from the cockpit. He caught a glimpse of her as she drifted down to the street below. She had a headband on over her jet black hair, and wore a tight shirt, shorts, and knee high socks. She starred up at him with angry eyes as she hit the ground. Roxas flipped a switch and turned towards the direction of Castle de Bastion. As Roxas pulled in above Valley de Bastion he heard a strange sound; it was a high powered P15 Rocket. Before Roxas could maneuver out of the way or even identify his attacker the rocket hit. It irrupted as its nose his right wing, spewing bits of metal through the Shadow Caster’s windshield. Roxas screamed in pain as a mixture of glass and steal flew into his eyes. He clawed at his eyelids as he steered his ship towards an exhaust pipe that he thought was an entrance to the castle. The ships tailfin broke off as it connected with the top of the pipe. Roxas crashed down onto the castle floor sending chunks of his ship everywhere. Roxas kicked at what was left of the windshield as a stray spark started a cockpit oil fire. He threw himself out his broken V75 and landed on the hard metal floor. Roxas rushed over to an exposed dripping water line and washed the shrapnel from his now bloodshot eyes. As Roxas pushed the heavy door to the main hallway open a warped computer voice blasted from a less then perfect audio system. “Intruder detected, activating defense system.” The voice said as spikes and columns shot out of the walls and floor. “You gotta be shit’n me!” Roxas thought as he jumped up and landed on one of the columns. He leaped up the rest of the columns and rolled into the next room. “Oh my God!” Roxas yelled as he looked across the heartless filled room. With out hesitation the heartless pounced on their new pray; clawing and slashing at the air as they fell back to the ground. Roxas pulled Oblivion out of the air and charged into the crowd of heartless screaming war cries as the heartless clawed at his exposed face. “What have I gotten myself into?” Demyx sat back in the chair of his V75 Shadow Caster. He thought he would let Roxas clear the way for him and then swoop in and get the goods. Demyx closed his eyes and hummed a tune to himself as he thought of what Roxas must be going through right now. “Get off of me! Oh God get them off of me!” screamed Roxas as the heartless bit him on his legs and arms taking out chunks of skin with every bite, and clawing at his eyes with no mercy. “Hello, is anyone in here!? Hey is anyone in here!?” said a voice somewhere far off in the distance. “Help me whoever is there get them off me… please get them off me!” yelled Roxas as he kicked a heartless away from his leg. “I’m over here!” “Oh my God!” screamed the voice as gunshots ran out in the room. Roxas punched a heartless in the face as the strange man took out the rest with his hand gun. Roxas looked up at his rescuer as he helped him to his feet. He was a short man about five feet nine inches and wielded a 32 caliber hand cannon peacemaker. The man handed Roxas a potion which Roxas downed in a matter of seconds. “Are… are you okay son?” The man asked in a kind voice. “Yea… Yeah I think so.” Roxas stammered. “God damn what you doing in a dangerous place like this son?” the man asked as he looked over Roxas. Roxas thought for a second. He needed a good excuse to tell the man; he was healed but he still was not up for a fight. “I… I’m looking for my… friend. His name is…” “Terra,” a dark voice in his head said “His name is Terra. Have you seen him? We just got here and our ship crashed out in the valley.” “Sorry son I haven’t seen him.” The man put out his hand “My name is Miska by the way.” The man said as he shook Roxas’s hand. “What’s yours?” “I’m…” “Ven,” said the voice again, “My name is Ven.” “Ah… like the war heroes.” Miska said. “Uhh… yeah like the war heroes.” Roxas said in a voice just loud enough to be heard. “That’s nice, not too many men travel together these days. They all think that they will kill them and steal their munny. I never carry munny on me. Most places take gill charge cards anyway.” Miska said laughing to himself. “Come on we’ll look for you friend together.” He said with a smile on his face as he holstered his gun. Axel walked down to Namine’s room with a present hidden behind his back. He knocked on her door. Axel didn’t have to wait long before Namine opened the door. He had been surprised that the other members had let Namine have a room of her own. But ever since they had gotten rid of the last person to have that room no one had put anything it. Axel smiled as Namine squealed in delight as she saw the face under the hood. It had been a few days since they had gotten to Castle Oblivion and since they got there they had not seen much of each other. Axel had either been away scouting out Sora or helping Marluxia prepare for the inevitable visit with Sora. Marluxia had visited Sora just the day before and laid the seeds for his arrival. Namine had been locked in her room until Sora comes and only he and Marluxia could talk to her. Axel pulled the present away from behind his back and handed it to Namine. “Here,” he said “I thought how bored you have to be and I thought this might help.” Namine took the bow and paper off and saw that it was a big notepad and a pencil. Namine’s face lit up as she flipped through the pages of the notepad. Finally she had something that she could call her own and Axel had given it to her. Axel smiled “I took you for the drawing type.” he said half laughing. Axel was met with a hug from Namine. She wrapped her arms around him and squeezed him lovingly. Axel blushed a shade of red almost as vivid as his hair as she did so. “Thank you,” She whispered “I love it.” Axel smiled and hugged Namine back and kissed her on the top of the head as he brushed her golden blond hair. They stood their in each others arms until their legs got tired. Soon Axel broke away from the hug; he laid his hand on Namine’s head and ruffled her hair. He was rewarded by the cute laugh that he had missed so much. They hugged one last time and said goodbye. Axel remembered that moment so vividly because that was the one of the last times that he would see Namine that happy. “Are you sure this is where you thought you heard his voice son?” Miska asked as Roxas led him into the main chamber. “Yeah… I’m positive.” Roxas responded. “Just a little more time,” he thought “Just a bit more time and I’ll be fully recovered and I can kill this fool and get the chambers.” They made their way into the final room of the castle and that’s when Roxas saw the heart chambers. His nonexistent heart sunk into his stomach as he noticed that all the chambers were broken. Smashed the glass and bits of steal were everywhere. His first mission was a complete and utter failure. “What, what happened here!?” Roxas said his voice unable to hide his anger. “Oh this here is the aftermath of Ansem’s defeat.” Miska said in a confident and happy voice. “God awfully man he was. The reason I came back here is together my work. Ansem had enslaved most of the scientists to make his many ships for his armada and machines.” Roxas’s face brightened. “What… did you work on here Miska?” Roxas asked as he heard the nocturnal hunter heartless returning from the shadow now unafraid of Miska and him. “Oh me? I worked on these babies right here,” He said as he laid a hand on one of the heart chambers. “I picked up the blueprints just before I met you Ven.” He laughed as he patted the heart chamber. Roxas smiled an evil grin. “So you have the designs on you right now?” He asked in a deep voice. “Yeah… why?” Miska said now curious of Roxas. “Oh nothing… my father worked here too,” he lied “’cep he worked on the outer defensives. That’s why I came here to live with him.” Roxas said saying whatever came to his mind to try and throw Miska off about his true intentions. “Oh poor fella I heard that job was terrible.” Miska said as he turned his head back to the entry way. “Hey was that the heartless?” Roxas bent down and picked up a broken steal pole “Yeah I think it was” he said in an eerily calm voice. “Well come on son we had better…” Miska was cut off as Roxas jammed the pole through Miska’s right hand. Roxas grabbed Miska’s gun out of its holster as Miska screamed in pain. He turned the gun towards his former comrade and shot him through the left shoulder and his legs, making him defenseless against the oncoming heartless onslaught. Roxas picked Miska’s bag off the hard metal floor, checked it for the blueprints, and slung it over his left shoulder. He laughed as he lightly slapped Miska on the cheek. “Thanks for getting me the designs Miska,” he laughed “Now bye-bye Miska.” He said. Miska turned his head up at him as Roxas made his way over to the window. “Wait” He screamed “What about your family Ven? What would they think of you if they found out about this!?” Roxas turned his head and laughed manically. “My only family is Organization XIII, and they will praise my name when they find about how well my mission went!” Roxas cheered as he sat on the windowsill. He leaped down and grabbed on the windowsill with his hands, his feet dangling below him. “Oh and by the way,” Miska turned his head and looked at him with dazed eyes. “My name is Roxas!” Roxas screamed as he pulled himself back up on his feet, jumped backwards, grabbed Oblivion out of the air and sunk it into the castle wall as he fell. He slid down the side of the wall; the only nose was Miska’s screams of pain and pleads for Roxas to come back. “Please stop… don’t!” His cries stopped after one last loud bloodcurdling. The only nose that followed was the munching of flesh as the heartless tried to get at the man’s dead heart. Roxas reached the bottom of the castle in only a few short minutes. He spotted a small level one class gummi ship. It was big enough for three people and could easily fit him and Miska’s bag. “Hmm… this must have been abandoned in the fight with Ansem.” He thought as he closed the cockpit windshield and installed the organization friendly credentials onto the craft. “This won’t stop Demyx from shooting at me but it should prevent me from being shot down the second I get into Organization airspace.” And with that he took off and headed back to Nobody Castle. Wow I bet that really wasn’t what you thought was going to happen on Roxas’s first mission. I hope you like the chapter. This has been a bowchickawowwow production. |
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| I Support President Elect Obama.* | Miska? is that from Mickey Mouse's clubhouse? Great read Xi!:thumbup: |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Uhh... (Looks around) No... Piff I... I don't watch Mickey Mouse's clubhouse. What you talk'n... Stop looking at me like that!lol. For real no just came to my head. The next chapter will be up in about... ahh... I would say 27 hours or so.lol bowchickawowwow |
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| I Support President Elect Obama.* | lol, I don't know if you're telling the truth or trying to cover. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: On a stage with a guitar Age: 15
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Incidentally I love the fact that Roxas is "evil." Makes him fit more into Org. XIII which is how I always thought he should be. *Laughs insanely.* Just keeps getting better and better. Incidentally, xikem, when the heck did your rep power get up to 2? Or am I just going insane? | |
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