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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | It's kinda confusing, seeing as how Aerith is alive in Kingdom Hearts, and all..... |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | I know the second I saw that in the game I thought ''Wow... isn't she dead?'' I also saw that there was no mention of Zack. I thought the emotionaly crippled man was a good character for Cloud so I kept it. As the first infinities was really happy like a Disney movie I wanted the second to be dark and sorta Sin City like. I also though through Sora and Kairi, Cloud could come to peace with his past. How that happens I'm not going to say because that would be telling. lol I will say this though, in this story it’s not the destination that matters most... it’s the journey. If you can tell what world all this is going to end at I would be amazed! There is a big wide story to all of this. This is also the only Infinities that will have a direct Sequel that follows this ''What if?'' story line. Since all the other non KH characters are from both Xikem's and my other work this story holds true to the ''Cross over character'' format. Think of it like Tsubasa or KH with even more confusion. O_o Free cookie to anyone who can tell what the hell I just said! (Because I didn't understand it either. XD) |
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| | #198 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Well, you'll probably have to explain Aerith's death somewhere along the line, seeing as how Sora met her in KH1. Also, this'll make her not be in KH2, should you choose to make a fanfic of that from this story. |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Well Infinities is the story of KH if one thing changed or had gone differently. Infinities is just the events that took place after the change. Like in the first one Sora didn't come back after becoming a heartless. Because that happened Riku wasn't free from Ansem, The organization was able to grow stronger since it took more time to resolve the conflict, and Kairi had to fill in for what Sora should have done. This change was Sora didn't get his memories back and Riku has to get over what he has done and save the worlds in an act of repentance. Along the way he meets people that he influenced when he was one with the Darkness, and Maleficent. I wanted to expand the universe of Kingdom Hearts by adding in more worlds and people. Prejudice between the Chrisens and Humans is one of the main things in the story along with Trevor and Summer's past. Holly is also an influence character since she is the princess of the Chrisens and has aligned herself with a Human. Riku, Holly, and River simplified to two words are a ''Love Triangle'' Whoever Riku picks will influence what will happen in the Kingdom Hearts Universe politically. This story is the only one I will do a back story for and a set of sequels. (Yes this story is looooonnnnngggg!) The infinities for 358/2, Kingdom Hearts 2, 3, and Birth by Sleep will have nothing to do with the first or second Infinities. As you can see since Kairi isn't the keyblade power house she was in the previous Infinities. It’s like the character's personality changes with the style of the universe. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Well, if it were up to me, I'd pick Holly........she sounds........beautiful....:blush::blushing: |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: My location is my location and that is my location. Age: 13
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() ![]() | So... when is the next update going to be? Or did she die on us? Last edited by The Liberator; 09/19/08 at 03:50 AM. |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | I’m sorry it took soooooo long guys. I’ve had to deal with a lot lately. School is… >_> here is the new update. Saix was sitting on the floor of his room. Being the commanding officer had its perks. He was alone and cold. That’s how he liked it though. The cold was cheap and unforgiving; it was something he had modeled his life after. Alone… he had always been alone. No one to take care of, no warmth. He only needed himself. Saix stood up and took up a defensive posture. He swept his hands through the air as he moved his feet. Saix leaped up into the air and landed on the bedpost, pulling his left leg up as he landed. “Daddy.” Saix fell off the bedpost and landed in a heap on the floor. “That damn girl is doing this to me. Her pathetic love is making me weak.” Holly pushed herself up again and again. Her brother had always told her a free minute was a minute to become stronger and to her that meant pushups. It had been a day or so since Riku went missing. They had looked for him but it was a big city and he could be anywhere. There was very little hope of finding him now. Holly stopped to readjust herself. She had put River on her back for weight and she wouldn’t stop moving. “River if you keep moving like that I wont be able to push myself up.” Holly groaned as her muscles strained to life the tiny cat girl up. “Its… its just…” River pulled her tail closed to her chest “WAHHH!!!” she cried as she started to cry. Holly screamed as she hit the ground. She rolled over to yell at River but stopped as she saw the girls face. It was just… so sad. Holly smiled a crooked grin “You really like Riku don’t you?” “Uh-huh.” River said shaking her head. Holly pulled River into her arms and hugged her. “Don’t worry River we’ll find him.” “Are you sure?” She cried. “I’m positive.” Holly said as she tickled River’s ear. River giggled for a second as Holly brushed the tears from her eyes. “Holly what do you think of Riku?” River asked. “He’s like a brother. A really stupid brother.” River giggled again. “Do you have a crush on him?” “No, not him.” Holly said as she laughed at the thought of herself in Riku’s arms. “Do… do you think he likes me? I get the feeling he doesn’t.” River said her voice heavy with sadness. Holly put her finger under River’s chin and made her look at her in the eyes. “Riku likes you more than you know River. Trust me when I say that.” River smiled “Thank you Holly.” “No problem, come on lets get back to the apartment. Trevor is probably wondering where we are.” Holly said as she scooped River up into her arms and started walking. “Okay now just life the gun and set the sights.” Axel said as Roxas picked the rifle up. They had gone to the gun range to work on Roxas’s shooting. Roxas disregarded what Axel said and started to fire from his side. “No you idiot you never shoot from the hip.” Roxas turned his head and looked at Xigbar. Xigbar was one of the best shots in all the worlds topped only by Summer. “Here let be show you how it’s done.” He said in a cocky voice as he picked up an identical rifle and shouldered it. He quickly fired down range. The second the bullet left the barrel Xigbar’s right hand flew down to pick up a new round as he dropped the gun and pulled the bolt back freeing the empty round and sliding the new one home. He shouldered the gun again and fired. He continued the process until he ran out of ammunition. Roxas rolled his eyes as Roxas shouldered his own weapon. “No Roxas like this.” Axel said as he reached around the younger boy’s body and pulled the butt of the gun deeper into Roxas’s shoulder. “Now just ling up the sights.” Roxas blushed as he felt Axel’s hands on his. Axel noticed how uncomfortable Roxas was feeling and backed off. “Déjà vu.” Axel thought as Roxas raised the rifle and fired. “I’ve seen this before.” Roxas cheered as he hit the bull’s eye almost dead on. “There ya go kid. You gotta remember how much ammo you got left in a fire fight or you’ll end up dead. Got it memorized?” Axel said as he gave Roxas a ten second applause. “If you keep this up you’ll be better than Xigbar in no time.” Xigbar grunted “Yeah as if.” He said as he pulled out another belt of ammunition from the weapon locker. “Not bad though kid. I’ve seen other keyblade wielders use guns before and they are as dumb as a baby chocobo.” Roxas and Axel laughed as they too got more ammunition from the locker and started shooting. “Perfect keep it up! Yeah just like that, you got it!” Axel yelled as Roxas hit the target dead on. “Perfect keep it up! Yeah just like that, you got it!” Roxas herd the same thing in his head. Roxas’s started to feel dizzy as people he had never seen before past in front of his eyes. He couldn’t make out their faces but he could tell that one of them was a girl and a very pretty girl with Blue hair at that. There was also an older boy with brown hair holding odd shaped keyblades. “Roxas!” Roxas opened his eyes and saw the gun range around him again. He didn’t know how but now he was on the ground. “You okay man?” Axel asked as he helped him to his feet. “Yeah I’m… I’m fine.” Roxas stuttered as he picked up the rifle. “Just a memory.” Winter unstrapped his belt and took off his gloves and laid them on the table closing the door behind him. He had just gotten back from another mission to some world he’s seen too many times to kill another diplomat that history would never remember. He scratched his eyes that lay under the cloth of his blindfold. They longed to be set free from their dark prison of cotton. Winter slowly removed his blindfold. He turned and looked at himself in the mirror. He saw his face; it had been ages since he had cared what he looked like. Centuries of seeing a face that never changed would do that to you. He fell down onto his bed and looked up at the ceiling. His dark eyes starred blankly up at the dark blue paint. Blue… it was Autumn’s favorite color. Winter missed the little girl more that anything. She was the light in a life filled with darkness. He started to think of her, her voice, her hair, the way he changed when she was near him, and… nothing. Winter gasped and for the first time in a long time felt pain. He was starting to forget Autumn’s face. Her voice was the only thing of her that remained clear in his memory. Ten thousand years of faces and he couldn’t remember the only other face that mattered to him. He felt… sad. His life was nothing up to that point in his life. Winter didn’t care about anything except seeing her smiling face again. He knew he never could though. It would still be millennia before he died and when he finally did he still wouldn’t see her. No when he died he would not to the same place she did. Summer and Autumn would have to go to that place with out him. He could not follow. Winter had found Autumn on one of his many missions. She little more that a toddler when he found her. He thought her everything; how to walk, how to read, how to write, and even how to talk in his own language beside human. She had been the only other living thing in centuries other that himself to speak and understand that tongue. He had raised her as his daughter and he… he had loved her. Summer and Autumn were the only things he lived for and Autumn died calling for him to help her. A member of Organization XIII had done the deed. Winter didn’t know the face of the one who did it but he knew one thing. He used cards to kill. Summer had taken a photo of them together a few months after she joined the group. He turned his head to look at the picture on his bedside table. Winter picked it up and looked at it. Winter closed his eyes and dove down deep into his memories. Everything he was and had done flashed before his magical eyes. “<I’m almost there. I love you my daughter, my Eukiko.>” Thanks for reading. Once again sorry the update took so long. ^_^ |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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I still don't know who will end up with Riku. River is obviously the girly one while Holly is the tomboy. Who seems more appealing to you? I can't make up my mind. I guess I'll cross that bridge when I come to it. Who knows, I might kill one of them off. Who's death do you think will hurt him more? (Laughts an evil laugh) I would concentrate more on Trevor's relationship with Holly's older sister Stephan. Riku wasn't the first person to fall for a alien girl. Everyone knows how Humans hate Chrisens. They would gladly turn the fire hoses on them rather than be friends with them. HUMANS ONLY! CHRISEN WILL NOT BE SERVED! (Lol Human restaurant prejudice) Lets see how much these kids can take before they finally break. XD Expect to see Roxas and Namine get the worst of it though. Namine does have her daddy to help her through it though. ^_^ Thank you for reading! | |
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| | #205 |
| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Okay time for the new update! =^_^= (Lol double post!) 1 ½ years ago… “Drop zone in ten, get ready people!” Lyric shouted from the cockpit of the helicopter. “I can’t wait!” Summer yelled over the roar of the rotating blades. “I know this is going to be fun!” Autumn commented as she found her place next to Winter. Normally two J.A.C. squads weren’t sent on a single mission but sometimes in high priority missions exceptions were made. A leader of a cult that put its faith in darkness had just been seen wielding a keyblade. The J.A.C. deemed him to powerful of a threat to be left alive. The cultists were a large group and no one squad could handle them alone. The music and season squads were called in to put them done. The music squad consisted of three members: Lyric, Forte, and Note. They were the second most known squad in the J.A.C. with a 94% success rate. Winter’s squad had a 100% success rate. “Go, Go, Go!” Lyric yelled as the drop ropes fell to the ground. “Get moving I have incoming anti aircraft missiles!” The teams nodded and grabbed the ropes. They repelled done pulling out their guns as they hit the ground with a loud thump. Winter acted without thinking as he scooped Autumn on his back and looked for cover from the cultists who were flooding out of the church. Summer followed them only inches behind. Summer raised her sniper rifle, aimed, and let off a round. It found its mark in the head of the machinegun man in the pillbox on the second floor of the church. With out wasting a second she pulled the lever back releasing the spent round and popped a new one in the chamber. Forte concentrated a large ball of fire in his hands and let it go into the crowd. It exploded loudly as it took out 20 or so cultists. Note followed Forte’s example and shoot a series of razor sharp ice crystals at the approaching men. Winter turned his face towards the gunfire and stood up. He passed his gun off to Autumn as he got up and started running for the entrance. Autumn jumped onto Winter’s back and shot at the men Winter was running towards. “Okay Winter I’m ready!” Autumn whispered. Today was the day she went off on her own. Autumn wasn’t even half the age of the men but she packed more punch then any of them could hope to have. She leaped off of her protectors back and into the fray. Her eyes started to glow yellow as the cultists swarmed around her. They wasted no time unloading on the small girl. Autumn raised her hands and stopped to bullets with magic that had not been seen by a human in centuries. She pulled her hands into fists and smashed the guns in the men’s hands. They screamed in pain as jagged pieces of metal sliced into their fingers. Dark clouds started to from around Autumn as she let herself be taken by the darkness. Her eyes were now red with power. She pulled a bandage from her pocket and tied it over her eyes blinding her to the spectrum of light. She now perceived with life force like Winter. One of the cultists was crawling away in pain but was caught as Autumn grabbed him with a dark magic hand. She lifted him high in the air and flung him at the walls of the church. Two others came at her with their knives. Autumn sensed them and removed her blindfold for a second. She gazed into their eyes and killed them with intense magical pressure. They disincarnated before her. There are some magic techniques for which there is no defense and bombarding magical aura onto a person was one of them. It was like overflowing a glass of water. You put too much water in and it overflows over the top washing the outside of the glass. A similar affect happened here. The body would be so filled with magic that it destroyed itself. Autumn opened a darkness portal and pulled a small sword from it. It was covered in spikes and was katana sharp. She moved faster than the men could shoot at her as she sliced her way trough them. Darkness now eclipsed her entire body. She grew more darkness hands and pulled more swords out of the dark realm freeing her real ones. She cut through the cultists like a hot knife through butter as she levitated after Winter. Winter broke a man’s skull on his hand as stormed the stairway to the main room where the leader had barricaded himself. He was about to kick the door down when he thought how good of a test this would be for Autumn. He waited. A few seconds later he herd the screams of men followed by the sight of a small pitch black girl with blood smeared on her body. He smiled to himself as he motioned her over. Autumn took one look at the door and knew what he wanted her to do. She nodded a big smile on her face as she broke the door down. She was met with a hail of bullets that she stopped with ease. She walked slowly passed the last line of defense slicing them with her swords. She held her head high as she walked savoring her soon to be victory. She stopped as the last man in the room pulled a blue curved keyblade out of the air. “You’ll pay for killing all these innocent people you demon!” Piclow the cultist leader screamed as he came for her. “Lets play a game.” Autumn giggled in a satanic voice, her long black hair now in her face shadowing her face. At the last second Piclow lurched to the right as he lunged. He was obviously trained in the art of fighting with a single hilt keyblade. From who though was forever to be unknown. Autumn reacted as fast as she could pulling away. It was not fast enough though as the blade cut through her first coating of darkness. She hissed in pain as the light found its way to her flesh pealing it back like a cheese grater. Lightning erupted from Piclow’s finger tips as he leaped back. Autumn wrapped herself in a bubble of darkness to protect herself. The dark outer shell absorbed the lightning and held it. Some sparks still zapped and crackled as she lifted the bubbled from off of her body. Piclow charged at her again lurching to the right again as he lunged. But Autumn was ready for the move this time. A darkness hand sprang from her chest and grabbed Piclow around his chest palming him like a playing card. Autumn tightened her grip, crushing the man’s bones like twigs. She smashed him into the marble ceiling and back done to the stone floor. Piclow struggled to keep himself up. Just as he righted himself Autumn ejected her lightning charged bubble at him. It pushed him back to the far side of the room and stuck him to the wall like a chewed piece of gum. The electricity crackled through his body as he wailed in pain like a beaten dog. Autumn teleported herself forward almost like blinking and stopped in front of Piclow. “Die… you bitch!” Piclow moaned as he raised his blade for a last desprate strike. Autumn put up her own darkness eclipsed hand and caught the blade. She froze and broke it like it was nothing. She rested her hand on Piclow’s head and shot bolts of lightning and darkness trough of his body killing him in the most gruesome way possible. The second Autumn felt the man’s pulse stop the darkness reseeded back into her body. She turned and looked over at Winter. He had his arms open waiting for her to run to him. Autumn ran into the ancient man’s arms. Winter lifted her into the air and praised her without end. “I did it, I did it!” She cried “I found how to control my darkness on my own!” “I did it, I did it!” And she had. The mission was over. Her reward was a memory that she and Winter would never forget. 1 year later she died. Kinda short but I hope you liked it anyway. I wanted to write about Autumn (Eukiko) so I did. XD Thanks for reading! ^_^ |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Autumn............Luxord, you murderer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Missed out on quite a lot of action the chapters have been a bit short but I can overlook that considering they're filled with many memorable sequences, great work. |
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| | #208 |
| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 19
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | Very nice ^_^ |
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| | #209 |
| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() | Sorry its been so long since the last chapter. Ever since school started up I don’t seem to have a minute of free time. Junior year too, if I mess up this year well… lets not waste time talking about that and get to the chapter. V_V 1 year ago… “Papa, look at that one! It looks like a chocobo!” Eukiko said, her finger pointing up at the white puffy cloud above her. “And look at that one Mama that one looks like a muggle!” Winter had been through much in the last few months. The J.A.C. had sent him on many missions regarding some organization of nobodies. Not only the that but Ansem had gotten bold and has tried to spread his empire. There was word that he had attacked the Chrisens. Winter looked up at the clouds that Eukiko had pointed out. He needed to just get away from that life if only for a few hours. He had taken Summer and Eukiko to a special meadow on the farm world of Granja. It was the only place he felt at peace. He loved his squad mates. They were the only two people that he cared about and the only people he could be around with his blindfold off. They had been exposed to his darkness and proved able to handle it. Winter sat up as Eukiko picked some of the flowers around them. She slowly twisted the stems and fashioned herself a crown. Winter smiled as the young girl giggled. He pulled her in for a hug. “I love you too papa.” She said as she kissed him on the cheek. Summer smiled as she saw the loving father, daughter moment. Winter opened his other arm up inviting Summer to get in on the hug too. Summer moved closer. They hugged and for a single second there wasn’t any war, politics, or J.A.C. There was just them. Eukiko snuggled into Summer’s arms. “I love you mama.” She said as Summer rubbed her back. “Thanks for brining me here papa, and thank you mama for buying me this new white dress.” She said as she stood up and did a little twirl in the flowers. The scent of the honeysuckle was brilliant and embracing. “<Eukiko, do you know what honeysuckle symbolize?>” Winter asked as he too stood up, Summer following him. “No papa. What do they symbolize?” Eukiko asked, her voice filled with childish curiosity. “Devoted affection.” Summer finished. “<How do you know that?>” Winter inquired. “Back on Hollow Bastion if you loved someone truly you would give them a paopu fruit and honeysuckle. They were to show your devoted affection and undying love for that person.” Summer answered. Eukiko picked more of the honeysuckle and handed it to her mama and papa. “There!” she said “Now we are really a family!” Summer and Winter looked at each other now on the verge of crying. They hugged in unison. “We don’t need some flower to show how much we love each other Eukiko. All we need is our memories of each other.” Summer said as she kissed her on her forehead. “Really!?” Eukiko said her eyes filled with innocence. “<Really…>” Winter said as he lifted her into the air. Eukiko cheered in excitement. “Higher papa higher! I wanna touch the sky!” This was a day of love and the last that they would a real family. Present day… Winter looked down at the flower before him. It had wilted and was a dark brown. He sniffed the pages of the book he had put the flower in. They stilled of that day and the fresh honeysuckle. He held the flower in his hands and kissed hit and pressed it to his heart. “<I like you forever, I love you always, my daughter, my Eukiko…>” Saix pulled Namine by the hair to his room. She had disobeyed his orders to discipline one of the soldiers. He would have to show her the price of doing such an action. She kicked and screamed as he tugged at her golden hair. “No daddy please don’t do it. I promise I’ll never disobey you again. Please!!!” She crooked through her cries. Saix snapped his fingers and one of his men pulled a dog cage out and opened it. He dragged her into it and locked the steel link door. “Get the hose.” Saix ordered as he kneeled down and looked at the terrified face of his “Daughter”. “Please daddy let me go!” She cried again as she pushed her fingers through the openings in the cage. Saix simple laughed as he pushed her fingers into the steel and rubbed them on the sharp edges; tearing her skin on her palms. Saix breathed in deep as he heard the young girl howl in pain. “I have the hose sir!” The soldier said as he walked through the door behind Saix. Saix took the hose from the man. The hose he held in his hands was strong enough to remove the over coat of cement on a sidewalk. It was used to get engraved dirt off the sides of tanks. He turned it on and a steady bar of water spurted out of the rubber hose. “Are you sorry Namine?” Saix asked spitefully. “Yes daddy! Namine is really sorry!” Namine said her eyes fixed on the column of water. “Will you let me out daddy?” “Yes Namine.” “Really!?” Namine said cheerfully as she rubbed the tears off her cheeks. “No!” Saix yelled as he turned the hose on her. Namine screamed as the water hit her in the face. She choked and coughed as the water found its way into her mouth. She put her hands up to try to protect herself but the water only tore at the already ripped skin. Saix laughed hysterically as Namine screamed in pain. The punishment continued for hours. Occasionally Saix would order the soldier to gather up some stones and dirt to through into the cage at the terrified teenage girl before him. He just loved the way she screamed and moaned in pain. Eventually he stopped. “So Namine do you have anything to say?” Saix asked as he opened the cage. He wanted to see the girl try to attack him for doing what he did. That was his favorite part; seeing them try to get revenge. Namine crawled out of the cage. The entire outer layer of skin on her arms was gone leaving only a leathery red appearance. She folded her arms around Saix’s legs and held them as hard as she could. “Well?” Saix said again as he looked down at the pathetic girl. “I…” She started. “I?” “I love you daddy.” Namine said as she passed out at his feet. Saix felt a pain inside him as she said those words. He couldn’t move for minutes. Finally he snapped out of it. He looked over at the soldier that had been with him in her punishment. “Take her back to her room.” He said in a low almost sad voice. “Y-yes sir!” He picked her up in his arms and walked out. Saix fell to the ground and tossed the hose down. He hit the wall behind him as a single tear dropped down to the ground. Thanks for reading. Sorry it was so short. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: My location is my location and that is my location. Age: 13
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() ![]() | shit, I forgot about this thing. and WTF? is Saix starting to turn nice? I thought he was Himmler. |
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