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| Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Nottingham UK
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | I would just like to add before the flaming starts, this is just an interpretation. It's something that I wanted to explore. You don't have to like or even agree with it. I just liked the idea of those two being related not actually one another... Mild language warning, spoiler warning for KH, Reno is from Final Fantasy VIII and Axel from Kingdom Hearts 2. I do not claim ownership of the characters. I do not state my version is by any means correct. Okay on with the random show! Strange thing dying and being blank and hollow. Stranger still was the realisation that some part of me had survived. To suddenly realise that even though I had given up what I felt was every essence of my being I had not. Perhaps the mere memory that Roxas and Sora had for me recreated me after I dissipated and retuned to the World that never Was. I didn’t believe I had a heart until it came to the point where I died. I was Nobody and I went back to being that I guess. I heard him call but I don’t remember why or how it happened. I fell to something solid; I know it now as a floor. Yeah weird stuff like that happens a lot to me it seems. He was shouting me, telling me I had to come back. I didn’t even know why. I open my eyes; some punk-ass kid with blue ones is looking back at me. “Yo cousin about time.” He says his hand bloodied, his white shirt stained and filthy. “Man you are a nightmare you know that?” The redhead was looking right at me; damn me if he didn’t look similar as hell. “Who are you?” Was that even my voice? I sound like that? Holy be-Jesus or something. “Reno, Reno your cousin from Edge?” He looked really worried. “Axel do you remember me? You… you killed yourself.” He sighed. “I did huh? Was I depressed? I don’t strike myself as a depressive person that’s all.” I honestly don’t know. I don’t sound like a depressive person but I guess with no real memory of it then I do not know. “No.” Reno helps me up, I realise that I am naked I don’t really like that. “You need some clothes. I have a set of yours at mine from last time you called. You should really stop getting in fights with fire.” I’m confused. Why on earth do I want firefights? I end up following him to his bedroom. He turns out some huge long jacket with a hood, comfy thing, now that I can see myself in. He passes me two huge circular weapons with spikes apparently mine. He hands me black jeans, boots and a nice soft shirt, also black. Softly he hands me a silver locket. “This contains what I could find of your original soul Axel. The rest is somewhere in the World that Never Was.” He sighs. I look at him UTTERLY confused. “You died, your soul was condemned. You became a traitor to Organisation XIII, do you understand any of it?” “Not yet.” I reply. I take the clothes, dress, pull my hood up and my weapons seem to slide away, I had never even thought of it. “Reno…” I tap my fingers on my forehead, trying to knock sense in to myself. “Damn it I can’t remember.” “No I guess not.” He says, I look at him. Blue suit… red fiery hair and odd tattoos on his cheeks. I look in the mirror. I have marks. We are too alike for comfort. Guess we must be related. “Okay Axel you can only stay here whilst your soul is fed on the heartless around you in the World that never Was. I can’t tell you much more. I don’t understand it all myself.” “Well you got me an existence.” I nod gratefully. “I remember… something.” I nod. “Roxas. Sora.” “That’s a good start.” He nods. “The rest will come slowly I am sure.” |
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| Dual Wielder | I liked it. It had a nice plot and just enough detail to keep you interested. I liked seeing a PoV for Axel, but I'd have liked to see some of his normal cocky attitude coming through. Not much to criticize on that I can see. Maybe a bit longer. I do have a question though. Is this a one-shot or a full length? |
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| Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Nottingham UK
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Well really just a one shot I guess. I hadn't thought much about it. I was gonna lay off too cocky thinking he was maybe a bit shocked LOL thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it! | |
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