TLK's song thread

TheLastKnight · 10/31/07, 02:15 AM

This is a song I wrote, about 3 months ago, I finally dug up my notebook, and saw it...(It's cool if I post this here, right??)Wherever it says "*" that means repeat from the "*" (chorus)

"The World's Gone Mad!"

Nothing's what it used to be...
That's what I've seen.
Now, it's destrying me...
But to you, it's something to keep you busy....

Just some announcement...
The world's gone crazy...
It's just for their amusement
I can tell everyone's lazy...

*Why has the world gone mad??
It's no longer gleaming...
Why's everyone so sad...?
It's cause everyone's dying...

Why can't these people tell?
This world is just an illusion...
This world seems like hell
It's full of dellusion...

Why can't people understand...
What's going on...?
Why can't people say they stand...
instead going like a bomb?

*

anyways, that's it...Non-edited...I just now found this notebook, it has others in it too, I'll post some more if ya want...

EDIT: 25 views...no replies...wow...I'd like some replies

**Ban Mido** · 11/05/07, 07:22 AM

Well, what kind of music would go with it? Or is there any type of tune inparticular that goes along with it? it's kind of hard to tell an opinion with just the lyrics.

TheLastKnight · 11/05/07, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allstargamer

Well, what kind of music would go with it? Or is there any type of tune inparticular that goes along with it? it's kind of hard to tell an opinion with just the lyrics.

whoops, I missed that, it's heavy metal

**Ban Mido** · 11/05/07, 10:55 PM

It's Interesting. I like it.

TheLastKnight · 11/05/07, 11:42 PM

hahahaha, thanks, You're the only replier I suppose

Dantés de Divinity · 11/06/07, 09:20 PM

^Not true dude because I'm here too. Good job just missing music. Do you own a guitar or know a person who dose? If so play what you think it should go with and put the music for it on youtube.
bowchicka Hope to see it err... hear it:thumbsup:

TheLastKnight · 11/07/07, 02:28 AM

I know, I'll do this one 1st though...It's called

"The Ultimate Love Song"

I'm going to sing a song for you...
I know to my heart it isn't true...
I know you're probably think "now way..."
But it's what all the rockers are doin' today

I know love never happened to me,
But that never stops me from singing...
I know I shouldn't be singing this love song...
But why can't we all just sing along?

I'm going to say I missed ya babe
I'm going to say you never came...
I'm going to say you left me
Cause I know I wouldn't be singing truthfully

I'm going to sing and lie...
We were never a couple, you and I...
I have to sit up here and sing,
cause lying was what I was actually thinking...

So when I was sitting down writing this song...
I never thought about you...all day long...
I didn't make a chorus so I wouldn't repeat...
I've described my thoughts, I've been discreet

This was suppose to be an acoustic solo, but may change, I'll try adding music to it...this was also unedited
as I said before...It's based on the fact that every song you hear now, is pretty much an emo song, or a love song...

**Ban Mido** · 11/07/07, 02:33 AM

Do you know anyone who could play the song for you? I'm kind of curious as to what they would sound like.

Samber · 11/07/07, 02:44 AM

I like the two songs you have here. I too would like to see... Well rather hear, how they would sound like when sung.

iloveyou502 · 11/07/07, 03:08 AM

Those songs made me laugh.

TheLastKnight · 11/07/07, 03:34 AM

made you laugh, how? only the second one was worth a giggle to me...not even that much...

a good way, or a bad way? and I'll work on the 2nd one, musicly

Dantés de Divinity · 11/07/07, 09:00 PM

What samber said dude. Once you do that then we can tell you what you need to improve on or if its perfect the way it is.
bowchickawowwow

TheLastKnight · 11/08/07, 03:11 AM

yeah, I know...I'll try adding music tomorrow, I'm gonna need to get a webcam though...or something like that...I was at my friend's house all day...I'll work alot this sunday, I'll have an accoustic guitar then (at my mom's) which is what the song was written for, I just need to add actual chords, and learn to keep my mind on the words AND the music

It'll be like a person who's not great at guitar, trying to play...

Dantés de Divinity · 11/10/07, 04:52 PM

Can't wait!
bowchickawowwow

Samber · 11/10/07, 04:58 PM

I second the notion! I'll be patiently waiting.

10/31/07, 02:15 AM	#1
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	TLK's song thread This is a song I wrote, about 3 months ago, I finally dug up my notebook, and saw it...(It's cool if I post this here, right??)Wherever it says "" that means repeat from the "" (chorus) "The World's Gone Mad!" Nothing's what it used to be... That's what I've seen. Now, it's destrying me... But to you, it's something to keep you busy.... Just some announcement... The world's gone crazy... It's just for their amusement I can tell everyone's lazy... Why has the world gone mad?? It's no longer gleaming... Why's everyone so sad...? It's cause everyone's dying... Why can't these people tell? This world is just an illusion... This world seems like hell It's full of dellusion... Why can't people understand... What's going on...? Why can't people say they stand... instead going like a bomb? anyways, that's it...Non-edited...I just now found this notebook, it has others in it too, I'll post some more if ya want... EDIT: 25 views...no replies...wow...I'd like some replies Last edited by TheLastKnight; 11/03/07 at 02:10 AM.

11/05/07, 07:22 AM	#2
Ban Mido I Support President Elect Obama.* Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: *Don't Like it? Then SUCK IT!! Posts: 4,237 Rep Power: 12	Re: TLK's song thread Well, what kind of music would go with it? Or is there any type of tune inparticular that goes along with it? it's kind of hard to tell an opinion with just the lyrics.

11/05/07, 10:55 PM	#4
Ban Mido I Support President Elect Obama.* Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: *Don't Like it? Then SUCK IT!! Posts: 4,237 Rep Power: 12	Re: TLK's song thread It's Interesting. I like it.

11/05/07, 11:42 PM	#5
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread hahahaha, thanks, You're the only replier I suppose

11/06/07, 09:20 PM	#6
Dantés de Divinity Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive Posts: 1,967 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread ^Not true dude because I'm here too. Good job just missing music. Do you own a guitar or know a person who dose? If so play what you think it should go with and put the music for it on youtube. bowchicka Hope to see it err... hear it:thumbsup:

11/07/07, 02:28 AM	#7
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread I know, I'll do this one 1st though...It's called "The Ultimate Love Song" I'm going to sing a song for you... I know to my heart it isn't true... I know you're probably think "now way..." But it's what all the rockers are doin' today I know love never happened to me, But that never stops me from singing... I know I shouldn't be singing this love song... But why can't we all just sing along? I'm going to say I missed ya babe I'm going to say you never came... I'm going to say you left me Cause I know I wouldn't be singing truthfully I'm going to sing and lie... We were never a couple, you and I... I have to sit up here and sing, cause lying was what I was actually thinking... So when I was sitting down writing this song... I never thought about you...all day long... I didn't make a chorus so I wouldn't repeat... I've described my thoughts, I've been discreet This was suppose to be an acoustic solo, but may change, I'll try adding music to it...this was also unedited as I said before...It's based on the fact that every song you hear now, is pretty much an emo song, or a love song...

11/07/07, 02:33 AM	#8
Ban Mido I Support President Elect Obama.* Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: *Don't Like it? Then SUCK IT!! Posts: 4,237 Rep Power: 12	Re: TLK's song thread Do you know anyone who could play the song for you? I'm kind of curious as to what they would sound like.

11/07/07, 02:44 AM	#9
Samber Your Mom's Mom's Daughter Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando Florida Age: 16 Posts: 1,275 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread I like the two songs you have here. I too would like to see... Well rather hear, how they would sound like when sung.

11/07/07, 03:08 AM	#10
iloveyou502 Ruler of Light Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Battling my inner demons....and winning thank you very much, sir. Age: 15 Posts: 575 Rep Power: 2	Re: TLK's song thread Those songs made me laugh.

11/07/07, 03:34 AM	#11
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread made you laugh, how? only the second one was worth a giggle to me...not even that much... a good way, or a bad way? and I'll work on the 2nd one, musicly

11/07/07, 09:00 PM	#12
Dantés de Divinity Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive Posts: 1,967 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread What samber said dude. Once you do that then we can tell you what you need to improve on or if its perfect the way it is. bowchickawowwow

11/08/07, 03:11 AM	#13
TheLastKnight You Swear To Listen Join Date: Apr 2007 Age: 16 Posts: 2,291 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread yeah, I know...I'll try adding music tomorrow, I'm gonna need to get a webcam though...or something like that...I was at my friend's house all day...I'll work alot this sunday, I'll have an accoustic guitar then (at my mom's) which is what the song was written for, I just need to add actual chords, and learn to keep my mind on the words AND the music It'll be like a person who's not great at guitar, trying to play...

11/10/07, 04:52 PM	#14
Dantés de Divinity Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive Posts: 1,967 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread Can't wait! bowchickawowwow

11/10/07, 04:58 PM	#15
Samber Your Mom's Mom's Daughter Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando Florida Age: 16 Posts: 1,275 Rep Power: 4	Re: TLK's song thread I second the notion! I'll be patiently waiting.

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