After Sora: Age of Darkness Remake

[Merlin326]

your last chapter was good. sorry i didnt read it sooner, but my subscription thing only emails me when a new post shows up, not an edit. hope to see the new chap soon.

with all due respect,
Merlin326

[Question!]

Yeah, it is okay. I didn't want to double post earlier, but I guess that I was forced to anyway.... Thanks.

[Davy Jones]

Nicely done, Wae. The intrigue in this story is astounding!

[Question!]

Yes, I am sorry about not updating sooner. With the holidays, and me getting rubber bands on my braces (Curse you rubber bands!), I have not had much time to write. Anyway, here is the stunning new chapter of: After Sora: Age of Darkness Remake!

Chapter 5: The Adventure Finally Begins (No, really this time)

Clones are different than everything else. They are powerful, but will eventually fade into darkness....

Radiant Garden

“Whoa!” Sora awoke with a start, finding himself in a strange room in a strange place. The room was empty, except for the bed that he was laying in and the door in the middle of the wall. The last thing that Sora could remember was meeting the strange creature, Death, in his mind. As he thought back, he remembered the mission that he had been sent on.


“Sora? You awake?” Cloud’s voice said from behind the door.


“…. Yeah.” Sora replied, his mission troubling him. “I’m….. Awake. But, man, am I sore.”


“Well, our little fight went a little wrong.” Cloud said, opening the door and stepping inside. “I thought that you were dead, for a second.”


“Oh…..” Sora stated, ideas swirling through his mind. Death himself wanted Cloud dead. But how could Sora perform the task? And why should he?


“Anyway, I figure that we’d better start heading to find this Xemnas bastard that you talked about.” Cloud looked down, somewhat uncomfortable. “I picked up some potions. A few precautions don’t hurt, right?”


“Yeah. Let’s… Let’s go.” Sora jumped out of bed, landing on the ground with a thump. “So, where is the Gummi Garage? I haven’t been here in so long.”


“I’ll show you.” Cloud stated, walking out of the room. Sora quickly fallowed suit, leaving the barren room behind for a long, long time.

Twenty Minutes Later…..

“So, this is it, huh?” Sora asked, fairly amused by the small building in front of him. “This is the great Gummi Garage?”


“Yeah, wait till you see the ship. It beats the crap out of all the ships that you ever had.” Cloud retorted; unlocking, grabbing, and pulling open the door in one swift move.


“Holy shit.” Sora stated as he looked inside. Before him was the greatest Gummi Ship that he had ever seen.


“Yeah, it’s the good old Invincible Lv. 444. Classic Model, of course.” Cloud boasted, pulling out his keys.


“When the hell did that come out?” Sora asked, his face even more amazed.
“I only had an Invincible Lv. 3…..”


“You were way behind the times. Anyway, let’s get going.” Cloud said, unlocking the doors and jumping inside.


“Can I drive?” Sora asked, hope in his eyes.


“There is no way in hell that that will happen. Ever.” Cloud laughed, turning on the great beast…

Castle Oblivion

The sun never shines at Castle Oblivion. Sleep happens at it’s own time, when the nothingness is at it’s most extreme. People, after a while at Castle Oblivion, begin to lose something. The ability to tell time.


A boy awoke, the thin nothingness drawing him into consciousness. The boy looked around the small, cramped room, taking in the familiar sights. After a few seconds, the boy stood up, out of bed, and sighed.


“Another day in the life of a clone.” Alex yawned, his red hair shaking slightly. He turned toward the long, blue cloak which was hanging on a rack near the door. “When will it change?”


Silence answered him. Pure, intense silence.


“Well, I guess that I wasn’t expecting an answer, anyway.” Alex laughed, pulling on the cloak. “Man, before I know it, I’m going to be crazy from all of this talking to myself.”


Once again, silence spoke. Silently, of course, nothing happened. That was the way things went at Castle Oblivion.


Suddenly, a slam came from outside the door. Alex jumped from the combined strain of unexpectedness and loudness. Quickly, Alex opened the door to see what had happened.


The hall was empty.


“I must just be imagining things, I guess.” Alex chuckled nervously, leaving his room and the noise behind him as he walked to his daily duties.

Port Royal

“Sorry, mate, but I ain’t seen your friend in ages.” Captain Jack Sparrow spoke to his guest, slightly annoyed. “Now would you please stop asking? If I see or hear him, I’ll send a message, okay?”


“But he helped you, right? Isn’t that true?”


“Yeah, If you call freeloading helping, then aye.” Captain Jack said, walking away from the strange guest. “Now then, I have things to do. Port Royal isn’t going to loot itself, you know. By the way, what was your name again?”


“I am known by many names. I prefer to be called by my real name, though. So, just call me Mickey. Mickey Mouse….”

[Haku]

That was a really remarkable long awaited update good job overall with the final outcome.

[Davy Jones]

Good job. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

[MasterofShadow]

This story is brillant! PLease continue!!!!

[Question!]

I'm sorry about no update. Should be updated tomorrow, though.

[Mephisto39]

This is awsome! Can't wait for the rest.

[Merlin326]

Originally Posted by Mephisto39

This is awsome! Can't wait for the rest.

im afraid you might have to. you're the first post in this thread since Febuary...

with all due respect,
Merlin326

[Mephisto39]

Originally Posted by Merlin326

im afraid you might have to. you're the first post in this thread since Febuary...

with all due respect,
Merlin326

I know. I' pretty new here, and i just read it. Sweet avatar btw. That movie was extremely awsome!

[1-up salesman]

crap. I was just reading through this, and it was great. I wish it could be finished.