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| Enigmatic Soldier | Quote:
And yes, i got a copy of the game just last week, and i'm in the middle of playing through it. good game, very unique. the title came to mind when i was revising this chapter earlier this weekend, and so i snuck it in. yes, V and Batman were both big influences on him. the latter because not only have i just seen the movie, but also because i rewatched Batman Begins. V was also a good character (in a good movie), and it just seemed fitting to put it in. yes, the final truth for Xando is learned. and the final part of the story is ready to show its head. 6 days, 6 days and the end truely begins. checkmate... with all due respect, Merlin326 The End is Near 6 Days... | |
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| ΩMΞĢΛ Naughtfire | Enjoy the experience, I say to you about The World Ends With You, as Mr Hanekoma would say to Neku about life in general. I daresay, as this is your writing, but you don't say checkmate until you've won the game. So far, it seems that check is more appropriate. |
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| I Believe In Harvey Dent Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 1 Police Plaza, Major Case Squad Room Age: 15
Posts: 1,142
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Wow. Very powerful chapter, Herr Merlin. I was thinking of something else to put here, but I can't think after that left-hook-to-the-face-of-a-chapter. |
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| FanFic Slayer, K.Theorist Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: I am human, no worries. I don't suck brain juice anyway, it's too juicy.
Posts: 1,105
Rep Power: 3 ![]() | Being invisible for once actually felt bad. I should've prepped my investigating skills instead of doing nothing for the past seven months. Even though I did some research in KingdomHearts3 Forum. =.=" Lolx. Surprisingly enough I no longer cared whether Phantasm is Xando or what. That anticipation I used to feel was gone. I'm afraid. It's happening. All the stuff I once loved was growing numb. I could still feel the thrills whenever I read a new book, but no more when I write. Splendid stories no longer held a special place in my heart. Now it was the same as everything else. Numb. God grieve, what would I become? This is horrible... I can only say good chapter Merlin, and that Phantasm is the easy part to guess whose identity. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
Posts: 685
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Hey, Kurix, how was I supposed to know what Merlin had in store? And Merlin, you're right, the dawn is coming.......in (4?) days now, I think. The countdown has begun........... |
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| Radiator! Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Doing the math homework I never finished.
Posts: 1,722
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Yes! I've finally caught up! Too bad it's almost over... I'm related to him ![]() Edit: Oops, I forgot to say how great your fanfic is! Well, it is great! I don't know what else to say besides that... Last edited by Rauxlen; 07/29/08 at 08:35 PM. |
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| | #937 |
| ΩMΞĢΛ Naughtfire | Your not supposed to know, and I never said you had to know. The author merely leaves the reader an impression of a character where the reader can then draw their own connclusions of the outcome of said situations. |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Quote:
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yeah, Destati has always been my testing ground, my test area to see what writing skills i already have down and what i should look to improve. as my first conspiracy of this nature, i doubted i could pull off the Phantasm = Xando thing the whole way. I must say, it went much better than i thought. well, the clocks ticking. in just a few days, the end will truely begin. the pieces are lined up, the lines drawn, and the odds known. in just five days, the final battle for the universe shall begin. and the battleground... will be none other than Kingdom Hearts itself... with all due respect, Merlin326 The End is Near 5 Days... | ||
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| ΩMΞĢΛ Naughtfire | The beginning of the end! Yes! But at the same time, No! |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | ah, but this may also be a beginning as well. or maybe just an ending. or both. or niether. or both both and niether. lol, kudos if you know what thats from. to put this confusing logic simply, think of the symbol of Uroboros (the snake eating its own tail). With all due respect, Merlin326 The End is Near 5 Days... |
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| FanFic Slayer, K.Theorist Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: I am human, no worries. I don't suck brain juice anyway, it's too juicy.
Posts: 1,105
Rep Power: 3 ![]() | Beginning of the end? Jesus, I thought that was old already! |
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| | #942 |
| Dual Wielder Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: The Road to Dawn
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| | #943 |
| ΩMΞĢΛ Naughtfire | Where do you know the Uroboros from? We may have even more in common than you think. Does it have to do with alchemy? |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Quote:
With all due respect, Merlin326 The End is Near 4 Days... | |
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| I Believe In Harvey Dent Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 1 Police Plaza, Major Case Squad Room Age: 15
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