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Old 07/28/08, 09:58 AM   #931
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I honestly thought that one of us would suggest a volunteer. Perhaps Xuan?

Also, now that I have Final Fantasy IV on my DS, I finally understand the Spoony Bard.

Do you use the title 'The World Ends With You' not just to suit the scene, but also because you have played the game?

I knew it! I f##cking knew it! Hahahaha! Take THAT, Riku Fan.

Mooore Batman Quotes? And he's reverted back to the V stuf from the beginning!

Your rant is by all means warranted.
At least now, even in death, we know a little bit more about Xando, the Prince of Shadows and his Tragedy.
Yes, the spooney bard thing has quite the history behind it. the melody i referred to with im (in chapter called Melody of the Flute) is the song he plays on his harp thing now and then (and is titled Melody of the Lute).

And yes, i got a copy of the game just last week, and i'm in the middle of playing through it. good game, very unique. the title came to mind when i was revising this chapter earlier this weekend, and so i snuck it in.

yes, V and Batman were both big influences on him. the latter because not only have i just seen the movie, but also because i rewatched Batman Begins. V was also a good character (in a good movie), and it just seemed fitting to put it in.

yes, the final truth for Xando is learned. and the final part of the story is ready to show its head. 6 days, 6 days and the end truely begins. checkmate...

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Old 07/28/08, 10:32 AM   #932
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Enjoy the experience, I say to you about The World Ends With You, as Mr Hanekoma would say to Neku about life in general.

I daresay, as this is your writing, but you don't say checkmate until you've won the game. So far, it seems that check is more appropriate.
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Old 07/28/08, 05:42 PM   #933
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Wow. Very powerful chapter, Herr Merlin. I was thinking of something else to put here, but I can't think after that left-hook-to-the-face-of-a-chapter.
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Old 07/28/08, 06:04 PM   #934
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Being invisible for once actually felt bad. I should've prepped my investigating skills instead of doing nothing for the past seven months. Even though I did some research in KingdomHearts3 Forum. =.="

Lolx. Surprisingly enough I no longer cared whether Phantasm is Xando or what. That anticipation I used to feel was gone.

I'm afraid. It's happening. All the stuff I once loved was growing numb. I could still feel the thrills whenever I read a new book, but no more when I write. Splendid stories no longer held a special place in my heart. Now it was the same as everything else. Numb.

God grieve, what would I become? This is horrible...

I can only say good chapter Merlin, and that Phantasm is the easy part to guess whose identity.
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Old 07/29/08, 04:47 PM   #935
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Hey, Kurix, how was I supposed to know what Merlin had in store? And Merlin, you're right, the dawn is coming.......in (4?) days now, I think. The countdown has begun...........
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Old 07/29/08, 08:20 PM   #936
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Yes! I've finally caught up!
Too bad it's almost over...

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John Proctor (The Crucible, also a real life figure)
I'm related to him

Edit: Oops, I forgot to say how great your fanfic is!
Well, it is great!
I don't know what else to say besides that...

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Old 07/30/08, 05:59 AM   #937
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Your not supposed to know, and I never said you had to know. The author merely leaves the reader an impression of a character where the reader can then draw their own connclusions of the outcome of said situations.
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Old 07/30/08, 08:33 AM   #938
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Yes! I've finally caught up!
Too bad it's almost over...

I'm related to him

Edit: Oops, I forgot to say how great your fanfic is!
Well, it is great!
I don't know what else to say besides that...
really? It's a small world after all, it seems. It's amazing what one can learn by searching down the family tree.

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Your not supposed to know, and I never said you had to know. The author merely leaves the reader an impression of a character where the reader can then draw their own connclusions of the outcome of said situations.
well said.

yeah, Destati has always been my testing ground, my test area to see what writing skills i already have down and what i should look to improve. as my first conspiracy of this nature, i doubted i could pull off the Phantasm = Xando thing the whole way. I must say, it went much better than i thought.

well, the clocks ticking. in just a few days, the end will truely begin. the pieces are lined up, the lines drawn, and the odds known. in just five days, the final battle for the universe shall begin.

and the battleground... will be none other than Kingdom Hearts itself...

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Old 07/30/08, 08:46 AM   #939
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The beginning of the end!

Yes!
But at the same time,
No!
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Old 07/30/08, 08:49 AM   #940
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The beginning of the end!

Yes!
But at the same time,
No!
ah, but this may also be a beginning as well. or maybe just an ending. or both. or niether. or both both and niether. lol, kudos if you know what thats from.

to put this confusing logic simply, think of the symbol of Uroboros (the snake eating its own tail).

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Old 07/30/08, 02:12 PM   #941
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Beginning of the end? Jesus, I thought that was old already!
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Old 07/30/08, 10:12 PM   #942
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to put this confusing logic simply, think of the symbol of Uroboros (the snake eating its own tail).

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So, the story shall go on, then........
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Old 07/30/08, 11:54 PM   #943
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Where do you know the Uroboros from?
We may have even more in common than you think.
Does it have to do with alchemy?
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Old 07/31/08, 01:13 AM   #944
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Where do you know the Uroboros from?
We may have even more in common than you think.
Does it have to do with alchemy?
Im sure ive heard it from several sources, but the main one that got me to look it up was when it appeared in Megaman ZX Advent. from there, i did some basic research.

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Old 07/31/08, 04:11 AM   #945
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ah, but this may also be a beginning as well. or maybe just an ending. or both. or niether. or both both and niether. lol, kudos if you know what thats from.

to put this confusing logic simply, think of the symbol of Uroboros (the snake eating its own tail).

With all due respect,
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The End is Near
5 Days...
Is the whole beginning of the end thing in one of the Series of Unfortunate Events books? It just sounded Snicket-esque in its syntax
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