My story.

[terra2.0]

Sorry if this is in the wrong section im still new.I wrote a story a few days ago.Tell me what you think and if you guys want me to put up chapter 2.

Birth by sleep my story.
inspired by the info given to me by KHInsider Thanks guys.

Terra slowly approuched the corpse. The nobody lay there motionless.Terra a keyblade wielder along with his friends,Ven and Aqua,two other keyblade masters are in pursuit of a rogue keybearer and his Wayward apprintice.
The nobody corpse was now at the feet of Terra. The nimble dusk swiftly moved behind him and struck. With a jolt, Terra regained his footing knocked the dusk down and jabed it with force. The dusk twitched twice then faded back into darkness.
Ven and Aqua approuched Terra."Any clues?" Ven asked Terra responded with a sighing "No."
Ven then left in a huff.
Ven incountered three samuri and killed them quick.The trio have ben looking for Xehanort for a long time and found clues rarely.With the Dark soldier Xehanort was hard to find. And now right in front of Terra was...

TEll me what you guys think and tell me if you want ch 2.:thumbsup::thumbsup:

[KingdomSealer]

pretty good although i think nobodies didn't exist during BBS, still good story i'd like to read chapter 2 to see how it continues. :D

[Key-Blade]

I really like it :thumbsup:i would like to read a second chapter. Many thanks for showing.

[Shadow Fenix]

Originally Posted by Key-Blade

I really like it :thumbsup:i would like to read a second chapter. Many thanks for showing.

Ditto man that's cool :thumbup: But as KS already said nobodies didn't exist back then.

[terra2.0]

My bad didnt get my facts straight it was just at the top of my head.

[gottaluvkh1992]

you can change it when we know the names of the new enemies init?