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Old October 1st, 2007, 05:10 PM   #16
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Well that's gotta give Jailtin a blow, THERE'S NOT MORE TO HIS LIFE THAN BLACKENED SCYTHES.

Excellent though seriously.
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Old October 1st, 2007, 09:40 PM   #17
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Yes. I know. That had to hurt Jailtin very much.

Thanks for the comment, Chosen!

But that poem may or may not get replaced. As may the older poems as time moves on.

I dunno.
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 03:20 AM   #18
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Truly inspiring stuff, LW. Keep them coming.

I really like "Black Rose" and "Angels Fall"
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 03:27 AM   #19
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heh, Liked'em as always! write more, if you can
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 05:17 AM   #20
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Thank you very much for the comments, Wolfy and Shadowknight.

Yes, I try and write them when I have some spare time / have a good idea / song or movie stuck in my head. =D

But anyway, thanks for the comments.
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 08:45 AM   #21
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read your recent one... and... so..so awesome! :'D
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 04:47 PM   #22
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Well, as I always say.

'You can't write poetry with your head up your ass."

Don't know why I say that though.
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Old October 2nd, 2007, 11:21 PM   #23
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Neither do I, Chosen, neither do I.

Anyway, I was bored in Math class today and wrote two more! It's quite the rare occurance for me to write two poems in the same class / hour or so. Anyway, here they are:

~"Lost"~

Lost in a sea of shadows,
Close your eyes and see the hallows

Carried out by the fateful tide
See the Angelic Demon; you try to hide

You gave up on love,
Gave your emotion to a single black dove

But you see now how wrong it was,
To lose what mattered most, because,

I followed you all the way, to Hell and back
Saved you from the sea of shadows, to lack

Only to find I wasn't close to your heart
You gave up on your hopes, and tore us apart

Now as i rise up, you try to keep me, but fail
And you wish you hadn't been lost; wished to sail

You wish you hadn't lost your emotion and love,
That you hadn't given me to that single black dove.

~----------------~

~"Untitled Happiness"~

Thinking you would find happiness,
As you unknowingly fell into darkness

You fell to the ground, breaking
Like a marionette in the making

You continued, oblivious to reality
For true love, you gave up your mortality

Never to die, never to suffer great pain,
But pain and pleasure are in the same

And then, in eternal immortality, you are alone
Without a love, without a soul, you moan

But your cries fell upon deaf ears,
For the loss of love, of fate, of me! got nothing but leers

The passion that awaited us in paradise,
Is no more, for the demons snap at you with avalice.

At one time, I rose to the skies,
Flying free, away from you, to rise.

But now I fall once again, fallen but together
For existing with you is far better
Than a life in Paradise, with Angels singing a song
Because with you, my love, is where I belong.
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Old October 3rd, 2007, 01:47 AM   #24
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wow, angels fall is amazing, great work. lovely poems Lycian.
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Old October 3rd, 2007, 02:20 AM   #25
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cool, PM if ya write any more!
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Old October 3rd, 2007, 11:07 PM   #26
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All right, will do Shadowknight ...

And thanks to both you and swizzle for the comments!

I wrote yet another one ( as some may be able to tell, I've been in the poetry mood lately ... I don't normally write this many poems in such short of a time span ... ) but alas, it's in my school spiral ... which in my locker. At school.

But anyway. Thanks.
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Old October 4th, 2007, 04:17 AM   #27
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yeah, I don't check my posts uch anymore, thanks though.
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Old October 4th, 2007, 04:42 PM   #28
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Well, it probably helps that we're Listening.
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Old October 4th, 2007, 05:09 PM   #29
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Another remarkable poem, great job.
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Old October 5th, 2007, 12:55 AM   #30
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Gracias to all of you who left comments. ^.^

I'll keep working on new ones. Forgot the other one I wrote again ... nevertheless.
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