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Kingdom Hearts ~ Lost Memories - Chapter 30
Old February 4th, 2005, 12:49 PM   #1
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*sigh*



Chapter 30

“Fuck you to hell!” CJ shouted, taking out his gun. Five bullets exploded from the weapons, and were sent hurtling towards one of the Heartless.
It raised its palm, and amazingly caught each bullet, one by one. “What the hell…?” I muttered. It couldn’t be; how the hell did the Heartless get here?
“Everybody, get back,” I whispered. I could see the look of worry in Mitsuko’s face.
She knew; I was going to use the Keyblade.

“What the fuck do you think you’re gonna do? You’ve just got an Uzi; what in fuck’s name is that gonna do, you fool,” Ryder said, bopping me on the head.
CJ stood completely still, staring at the motionless body and the five bullets drop to the ground as the Heartless opened its claw-like palm.
“You’re wrong; I have more than a gun.”
Boy was it awesome being like a hero or what? I unclipped the tiny black crown from my belt as all of my homies stared in confusion. “Be careful; you’ll probably kill yourself,” Mitsuko laughed. “This is no time for jokes,” I muttered, trying my best to hide my clearly bright red face.
As I stretched my hand out, the streaming dark light flooded my hand as the Heartless’ worst nightmare was unleashed.

As soon as the summoning was complete the huge Heartless lunged at me.
“Get out of the way!” I shouted as it smashed into the fence, barely missing CJ. As the Heartless lay motionless by the doorsteps, I watched as the fat man in the middle of the street began to disappear. He had lost his heart, I thought.
“What the fuck is that?” Ryder asked, staring at the blade in my hand.
“I’ll tell you what it is; it’s kick-ass!” I shouted, running at the remaining four Heartless. They turned around as I swiped at the largest one’s head. There was the sound of a sickening snap and its head fell to the ground. “Take that, bitch!” I shouted triumphantly.
I felt the blow of a tremendous kick connect with my face I was sent flying back into the house. “They’re too good. They’re gonna take our ‘hood!” OG Loc shouted, pulling at his hair. “Oh man…” I moaned, rubbing my nose which seemed broken.
“Hikaru, are you okay?” Mitsuko asked. “Oh, stop acting like a hero,” I replied bitterly.
“Well, at least I actually can be a hero, unlike yourself,” she laughed as she stepped out of the house. Damn, how much stuff did Merlin teach her?
The ground shook once again as the magnificent dragon dove down from the skies. “What? Not this again,” Ryder said, pinching himself.
The dragon roared, and with it, a huge ball of flame exploded from its mouth sending the Heartless flying into the air.
I took the chance, and I whipped out my Uzi and shot at the Heartless which had kicked me. “Take that!” I shouted as the bullets penetrated its head, destroying it before it hit the ground.
“’Cmon! Let’s tie up these fools!” Ryder shouted, grabbing some rope from his truck next door.

The four remaining Heartless sat motionless in the middle of Sweet’s living room. “So, where the fuck did you come from?” Sweet spat. The Heartless which lunged at me before turned to Sweet, blinked and looked back at its shoes. “Talk!” CJ shouted, aiming his gun at the creature’s head. “You killed our fucking homie, you muthafuckers!” Ryder shouted, getting out a huge machine gun. “Ryder, you fool, nigga. We gotta squeeze some shit out of ‘em first,” Sweet said, pushing Ryder back.
“They can’t talk,” Mitsuko said. Everybody turned to her. How the hell did she know so much? “Why not? They dumbasses or something?” CJ asked, hitting one on the head with the butt of his pistol.
“They aren’t human either; they’re people who’ve lost their hearts.”

“What? You mean they’re not people?” Ryder asked in astonishment. “Well, they don’t look or act normal,” OG Loc said, staring at the pitch black faces and bright yellow eyes of the Heartless. “They try and take living peoples’ hearts. Nobody knows why; they just do it,” Mitsuko explained.
“Since when did you know so much about these things?” I asked, rubbing my head.
“Merlin told me. You’d know too if you didn’t sleep so much,” Mitsuko joked.
“So these guys wanna rip our hearts out or something? Sounds like some horror movie or some shit,” Ryder said, lighting another cigarette.
“No, they want you spiritual heart,” Mitsuko corrected. “Ah, fuck it. We don’t give a shit about your mumbo jumbo. Just tell us how to kill them,” Sweet hissed.
“You just kill ‘em like normal people. They’re just stronger,” I quickly replied before Mitsuko could. I needed some of the spotlight. “Wrong.”
My face drooped as my cheeks went bright red. “They don’t die like we do. They have the same amount of resistance to attacks on their whole body; unlike humans who die if their vital organs get injured enough. Their resistance is much stronger than ours, so it’s a bit harder to kill them,” Mitsuko corrected. “I was about to say that…” I muttered under my breath.

“So, we just blast their heads off, and game over,” Ryder said, suddenly blowing a Heartless’ head off. “What the fuck?!” Sweet said, jumping up and barely dodging the bullets. The creature’s body went limp and faded as a tiny heart drifted out through a window. “Easy. Let’s go ice these fools for good!” Ryder shouted, rounding up his homies. “Yeah, I said, let’s go.”

We all made our way out after realising that we’d never get any information from the Heartless. CJ had made sure they wouldn’t escape with the help of a shotgun.
“So, where’re we gonna find these fools?” Ryder asked, loading his gun. “I have no idea; let’s just look around,” I suggested. As we stepped out, we saw what we would’ve never expected. A purple sky, burning buildings, and Heartless. “What the fuck?!” CJ shouted.
“No… this is just like home…” I muttered. It was almost like what happened at Twilight Town, but instead of white, there was black.
“We have to leave this place. The Heartless have taken control,” OG Loc said, hopping on a motorbike. “Hey, you guys, get those bikes over there! Ryder, come with me,” OG Loc said, pointing at the two bikes next to in CJ’s garage. The problem was, there were six of us, and only two people could fit on a bike. “Hey, go jack a bike off somebody,” Sweet suggested, hopping on a bike with CJ. Two other homies took the last bike.
“What do you mean jack?” I asked, suspiciously. “He means steal a bike!” Bono shouted from inside my pocket.
“Steal?” I muttered.

As if on cue, a police bike began to approach. How could I get him off? I didn’t want to kill him. “Let me do it,” Bono said, taking out the Uzi from my pocket. “Hey, Rufus, hold it for me,” Bono said, putting both of his tiny paws on the trigger. “No!”
It was too late. The man fell off his bike, and the vehicle came skidding to a stop by my feet. “Let’s go!” Rufus shouted, putting the Uzi back into my pocket.
“Hurry up, fools!” Ryder shouted in front of us. Mitsuko was silent.
I reluctantly hopped onto the bike, and waited for Mitsuko to get on. Normally, I’d feel all tingly and strange to have a girl so close to me, but this time, I didn’t care. Someone had just died. I kicked the pedal and the eight of us drove off into the distance as the police sirens blared in the distance.

----------------K-Y-L-E---------------

He slowly opened his eyes, and found himself in his room back at the 13th Order headquarters. What the hell happened? Kyle thought, getting up. His coat was lying on a chair next to his bed. Looking up at the clock, he realised that over a day had passed.
“The job’s tiring, you needed the sleep,” said a voice. Kyle turned to the door, finding Axel. “Hey kid, how was your mission?” he asked.
Kyle looked down at his bed sheets. “I think we failed. We had to come back here because we were outnumbered.”
“Heh, we always fail,” Axel laughed. Kyle had no idea how or why he’d laugh about his own failure. “So, what did we find out?” Axel asked, sitting on the chair with Kyle’s cloak. “Well, Larxene and Zexion told me that the Heartless had come to that place and have got tattoos or something,” Kyle said, trying to recall all of the details.
Suddenly, the door burst open, and someone stepped in. Axel turned around. “Oh, hey Marluxia!” He didn’t look happy. “How could you? Your fail has pretty much destroyed that world!” Marluxia shouted. “I’m sorry. I’m new, give me a break!” Kyle retaliated. “Do not speak to your superior like that,” Marluxia hissed bitterly. “Oh no…” Axel muttered, slowly stepping into Kyle’s bathroom and closing the door.
“We had no choice! We were outnumbered!” Marluxia s******ed.
“Do you know why you were truly sent back? You were in the way. Larxene and Zexion could’ve easily destroyed all of those people, and then they’d be able to rid that world of the Heartless. It was because of you telling them not to hurt your ‘friends’ that they had to leave. Not only that, but your lack of strength burdened those two. They had to retreat, since the Leader has classified you as ‘important’ to Destiny. I highly doubt that though…”

Kyle looked down at his shoes, facing the shame of being weak. “Shut up…” he muttered. “Hmph, just know that your mistakes have cost the lives of millions…”
Kyle stared up at Marluxia, and tears began to form around his eyes. “I-it can’t b-be all my fault…” Marluxia turned away. “Face defeat. Know that you have no use to us. If the Leader never told us to recruit you, we never even would’ve thought of choosing you.”
The door closed, and Kyle lay down. Axel’s cries could be heard silently from the bathroom. “Hey, how the hell do I open this door? It’s jammed!”
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Old February 5th, 2005, 01:12 AM   #2
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YAY!!!! CHAP 30!!!

:( i feel sorry for kyle... WTF!? im feeling sorry for everyone now! fist sora then riku... now kyle! *dies*

keep it up! ~.^
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Old February 5th, 2005, 01:57 PM   #3
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Some people make their characters almighty Mary Sues, but I make my main character lame-ass tryhards. XD

Don't worry though, Kyle will eventually be able to use his Keyblades properly.
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Old February 5th, 2005, 06:46 PM   #4
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Cool chapter 30 :D :D
Ouch on kyles part. Too bad he was flamed like that.
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Old February 6th, 2005, 12:23 AM   #5
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Marluxia's a tight-ass. :D
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Old February 6th, 2005, 03:04 PM   #6
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nice chapter man....... I really really feel bad for kyle :( . now he has to live with that for the rest of his life. anyways as always I can't wait for chapter 31 (next chapter).
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Old February 7th, 2005, 05:01 AM   #7
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Watch out for a 'song' chapter soon. ;)

Just a clue:

It's gonna be a Linkin Park song.
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Old February 8th, 2005, 10:49 PM   #8
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ok i will, so will this "song chapter" be following the story, im srry if u already explained it. I didnt c it.
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Old February 8th, 2005, 11:16 PM   #9
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Watch out for a 'song' chapter soon. ;)

Just a clue:

It's gonna be a Linkin Park song.
*pumps fist in air napeolion (sp!?) dynamite style* SWEET!!

hmmm... numb...? faint...? lying from you...? THEYRE ALL SO COOL!!

*dies*

*angry mob cheers and goes away*

>_>

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*get up and walks away happily* ^.^
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k... well anyway can't wait for chapter 31:)
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Chapter 31 is about half way done. I just haven't been feeling 'creative' lately. I'm guessing that 33 or 34 will be the 'song' chapter.

Oh yeah, all of the updates will go to http://khad.w4.clicdev.com first. So, if you want to be the first to read the new chapters, join t3h forum. ^_~

Oh, and once http://khad.w4.clicdev.com gets a bit more populated, I'm leaving here for good.

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omni is gonna leave...?

*cries*

stupid retarted email notification letter... it wont send! >o< *pouts and sends again*
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omni is gonna leave...?

*cries*

stupid retarted email notification letter... it wont send! >o< *pouts and sends again*

Okay, you can go in now. I've validated you even though you might not have the email. ;)
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teh heh! my day keeps getting kooler and kooler! god the KHU radio thing rocks... and the jump trailer is coming in 3 months (meaning i can die! XD) and theres going to be a CoM manga! ^______^ somebody shoot me!

sister: *looks at gun* >__> <__<

me: OO;; RUN AWAY!!!
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