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Old 09/22/07, 04:34 AM   #31
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Um, well...I'm going into the Destiny Isles situation starting next chapter and then maybe the next. Things shall be explained! And I would tell you, but I really don't want to spoil anything! o~o You'll find out more tomorrow. ^~^
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Old 09/22/07, 04:40 AM   #32
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*ugh*
fine
but i hate waiting
but if it is good, then it is worth it
and with what the past has been, it will be

and i agree with your sig
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Old 09/22/07, 04:46 AM   #33
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Mwaa ha ha! You know it! Roxas is the sexiest KH character in my opinion! Ch'yea! WEEEEEE~ I LOVE ROXAS!!! lol
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Old 09/22/07, 04:46 AM   #34
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crap, I forgot! I'm not gonna be here tommorow.........
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totaly!
is he gonna be like a key part in the story
if not you might lose a reader
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but it would be cool if he was in some way besides protecting the trio
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Old 09/22/07, 03:17 PM   #36
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Tehe!~
Well...Maybe he does, maybe he doesn't...It'll be revealed soon enough!
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Old 09/22/07, 04:57 PM   #37
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Oh me, oh my! Here comes chapter four!

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Twilight's Destiny: Chapter Four
Plight of the Destiny Isles



Destiny groaned, her head pounding in a infuriating way. She closed her eyes and began taking deep breath's. It didn't help her head, but it somehow made her feel better anyway. She felt the bed sink in a little and she opened her eyes and looked up just as King Mickey sat down in front of her.
"Shucks, Destiny, you gave us a scare!"

"I'm sorry, Mickey," Destiny was the only one in the room that called King Mickey just plain Mickey, "I didn't mean, too."
This came out weaker sounding than she meant for it too when she saw the look on the King's face. He grabbed her hand and looked into her eyes.

"If you don't feel up to doing anything, I can find someone else."

Destiny shook her head, slowly so she wouldn't make her migraine worst.
"I can do it. Promise. I'll be fine in a little bit, okay?"
She around at everyone in the room.
"Okay?"

Everyone nodded.
"Good! Now, Destiny, I have a question...Did you have a sort of vision when you fainted...?"

How did he know?! She nodded.
"Yes. I saw a man laughing manically and...Saix, but he's suppose to be toast...But then...I got the impression that the man laughing...Was bringing them back...Back from the darkness...And then, I saw the Destiny Isles...I saw Roxas, Sora, Riku, and Kairi."

"How do you know Roxas?"
Mickey tilted his head a little.

"I don't...I just...Knew his name...Anyway, Roxas and someone I think was named Axel were fighting...And Sora was hurt! Bad, too, I think. But I didn't see much...I woke up..."

The King nodded.
"Alright...Now to tell you what we know...The man you saw, the one laughing, we don't know his name but we do know that he IS bringing back members of Organization XIII to work for him and they have, too. A spell was put on them and if they disobey, they fade back into the darkness. We also think his plan may have something to do with Kingdom Hearts since he's trying to get rid of Sora and everyone else. And, as of right now, we've lost our only communication with the Destiny Islands. Namine. She had been telling us what had been happening on the Island while Sora, Roxas, Riku, and Kairi went to find Axel, but now...The line of communication is down and there's no way for any of us," He gestured to himself, everyone in the circle, and to Cloud, "to get in. Destiny you can get into places that other's don't want you get in in, right?"

"Well, you can say I have a certain knack for it."
Actually, she was very good at it. There hadn't been a room or place magically sealed that she couldn't get into. She usually used her Keyblade, Twilight's Destiny, but sometimes that didn't even work, but she still could get in. It was her special secret.

"We have to save the Destiny Islands and bring Sora and his friends back here. I'll give you one more chance to back out, Destiny..."


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"Ahhhh!"
Roxas fell to the ground, nearly passing out. He shook his head, then lunged at Axel, swing Oblivion at him while with OathKeeper he blocked Axel's attack. Quickly dodging, Axel launched an attack at Roxas, which hit and sent him flying. He hit the ground and skidded to a halt. He pushed himself up and stood, but could barely do so. Roxas had fought for at least 5 hours straight and it was really slowing him down. He gasped. I...Don't think...I...Can...Do this much longer...I'm...So sorry, guys...

"Roxas!!!"
Everyone turned and saw Namine.
"Don't give up! We believe in you!"

Roxas nodded, wondering why Namine was here and not relaying information back to Radiant Garden. It hit him. The communication line must down...

"Roxas, over here! I though we were fighting, remember!"

Roxas glared at Axel as Namine ran over to Sora, Kairi, and Riku, to see if she could help.
"Yea, I remember, Axel. C'mon, let's fight."

"Whatever you say, Roxas!"
Axel spun both his chakram's, flames appearing around the edges. Suddenly, a wall of flames appeared around Roxas and Axel. He grinned.
"Just you and me, Roxas! Nothing can get through these flames. I'll give ya one more chance to come and join us!"

"No way, Axel! I don't know why you're doing this, but I won't take part in your plans!"

Axel laughed.
"Alright! Your loss."

Axel jumped back into the flames, disappearing from sight. Roxas looked around into the flames, trying to figure out where we would come out and attack. Suddenly, he felt a sharp pain in his back as one of Axel's chakram hit him, but whorled around just in time to deflect his other with OathKeeper. Taking his chance Roxas threw Oblivion at Axel. Axel attempted to dodge, but it was to late. He flew backwards as Oblivion came back to Roxas. He gasped for breath as Axel stood up...Grinning.
"You'll have to do better than that if you want to win, Roxas!"

Roxas breathed heavily. He blinked hard, trying to keep everything in focus.
"Shut up, Axel!"
He lunged at Axel again, but Roxas was getting slower by the minute and he knew it. Sadly, so did Axel. He knew that his chance to finish Roxas off, no matter how much he really didn't want too, was coming up. Soon. Axel easily deflect OathKeeper and was only grazed by Oblivion. Launching his chakram's at Roxas, he jumped back into the flames. Roxas was thrown backwards, hitting the wall of flames then falling to the ground. Things aren't looking good...He staggered up, but Axel threw his chakram's at Roxas again. He fell to the ground, trying with all his might not to pass out.

"It's the end, Roxas! Face it!!!"

Roxas was about to speak when a beam of light flew through the flame wall and it began to slowly disappear.
"What?!~ AHHH!"

Axel screamed as he was sent flying up into the air and then as a Keyblade flew up and hit him hard. Axel struggled to his feet and looked at the culprit. A short, silver-blond hair girl with black knee-height, lace-up boots, a short, black skirt, a black shirt sleeveless on one side and a strap on the other, and black gloves on both hands that went up to her elbows and only came down to her thumb joint, not enclosing her hand.

"Who are you? How did you get here? It's impossible!"

She giggled.
"All valid questions, Axi-boo," Axel raised his eyebrow at that, "but the last one I'm not willing to answer. The first, one the other hand, I'm fine with. The name's Destiny and I'm here to kick your ass."


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Author's Notes:

Okay, I'm not the best at writing fighting scenes, so sorry. I sort of wanted to leave you hanging about Desi's decision about coming the the Destiny Isles 'til the end and I just hope I've lived up to what you expect from my stories.
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Old 09/22/07, 07:17 PM   #38
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nice ending to the chapter
how old is she exactly?
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Old 09/23/07, 02:40 AM   #39
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ohh, twist at the end,..........that seems to be in a alot of fanfics. BUT ALL THE MOST AWSOME!
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Old 09/23/07, 02:59 AM   #40
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^^; I've never mentioned, have I? I mean too, but forget. She's 16 years old.
HAHA! A TWIST!!!
DUN, DUN, DUN!!! Tehe!~
My lips are sealed!~
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Old 09/23/07, 03:01 AM   #41
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gurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr at you roxi!
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Old 09/23/07, 03:05 AM   #42
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Hehe!~
Aw, don't worry. I'll try and post tomorrow. I'm at a friend's house now, so no posts tonight sadly. Doing stuff. ^~^
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I'll tell you three words.


Fight.
Destiny.
Axel.

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Old 09/23/07, 03:10 AM   #43
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cheater!
my friend has the same sig pic
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Old 09/23/07, 06:33 AM   #44
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o~O
Meep, come again? Roxi is confused.
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Old 09/23/07, 06:42 AM   #45
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my friend imablonde has yuffie as her picture too
meaning you two are alot alike
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