Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regret

[Sonja~Soulheart]

so btw, when will the official chapters be posted on?? :3

[Lycanthrope]

Within the next few days. I need to find some time to sit down and actually feel like typing out a long chapter.

[Sonja~Soulheart]

oh okay then. :3 going to be anticipating for it !!! :'D

[Lycanthrope]

That's good.

Congrats on almost being Premmie.

[Samber]

Yeah Eddie, I'm anticipating the next chapter!!!

[Lycanthrope]

Again, within a few days.

[princess namine]

Sounds cool, I started typing up CY but some of what I wrote didn't make sense so I'm going back over it.

[Lycanthrope]

Yeah. I don't think I'm completely caught up on CY.

[Gullwing Yunie]

Very nice start!

Loving the descriptions here. Was a bit short, though, but a lot of prologues tend to be short.

And also:

Well, no one can beat I,Xonic Cryoliz."

Should be a space after the comma there. Just pointing that out.

Otherwise, this is really good. I look forward to reading more! =D

[Lycanthrope]

Gah! Damn my accursed punctual and grammatical mistake *edit*

[princess namine]

I predict their will not be that many guys on because of Halo 3


Try living with 2 brothers and a dad who play video guys non-stop

[Lycanthrope]

I don't have 360, so i can't play Halo 3 (DAMNIT!!!!!!)

Will be up tonight or tomorrow.

[Lycanthrope]

Chapter 1

It was a chilly, brisk October morning. There was a bit of fog overlaying the dew on the fields. The bitter taste of the air seemed to melt on the tip of your tongue. Quite refreshing.

A young woman is spotted walking outside in the field, enjoying the fantastic day. She looks to be around her mid 20's. She had beautiful straight brunette hair, about mid spinal chord length, along with gorgeous green eyes. She was about 5'5 in stature. She was wearing skin tight garments made of leather that were tainted blue. She had high heels, just the perfect height for doing anything necessary. She had two earrings to an ear, one was a stud at the top, the other a hoop. She had a necklace made of gold with a 24 carat diamond centered in the middle.She also bore a blade in a pouch on her back.The blade was one of great precision, as it was not to long, nor not too short, and it was narrow in width.

She lay down on the grass, still wet from the dew drops. Didn't bother her at all.

Moments later, a man in golden armor is strolling towards her. The man goes by the name of Stalgamin. "Hello, Danielle. How are you on this fine morning?"

"Oh, hey Stal. I'm doing great. Still can't believe about what happened to the Deep Jungle the other day," Danielle said. Her voice was sweet and pure.

"I know. Darkness seems to be the conquerer of everything these days. This King of Darkness fellow is extremely mysterious. I mean, he wears a mask and entitles himself as a King?!?! Poppycock. He won't even reveal his name. His identity."

"He will in time, Stal. A name isn't everything, you know."

"I know. But it bugs me nonetheless."

Danielle looked at the sky. She noticed what seemed to be a spec of darkness zoom across the sky in a straight line, seeming to head toward the castle, which overlooked the village. She blinked, and there was no trace of the streak of darkness. Was it an illusion? A trick of the eye? Only time could tell.

"Well, Stal, just relax. It's not like the Darkness has reached us on Zimora yet. We still have plenty of time."

"Danielle, I don't think you get it. Your optimism is very comforting, but you don't seem to comprehend the seriousness of what is happening in the universe."

"Without optimistic people, the world as we know it would basically be emo and deteriorate. You know that."

"true," Stalgamin said. "Anyway, I best be on my way to the castle. Father won't take it very well if I am late for the ceremony."

"Let me come with you, Stalgamin. I want to see what these ceremonies are like. I mean, its not that often the King of Light passes his title to his heir," Danielle said.

"Alright, but hurry up."

Danielle and Stalgamin headed into the east, where the castle lay. Danielle had forgotten about the streak of darkness, but it would soon come back into her memory and be revived.

[Eternal Snow]

Coolz Eddie, Good description and as far as I can tell good grammer too. I'll keep reading! ^^

Cool, I'm going to have to post CY or get my ass kick by angry fans.....and Sammii

I'm not THAT violent you know! Geez, Lilli is the violent one. I'm just good at flaming! XD

[Lycanthrope]

Yay! A member already committed to reading. *Chains Sammii's soul to this FanFiction*