FF7: Angel's Child

[Rika17]

thanks, i'm planning to put the orginal characters in my story along with some new ones

[Nelo Angelo]

i just cant wait to see vincent.
so that girl was sukie was it.

[Rika17]

giggle, you'll just i have to wait and read, giggles
Back to the story
Chapter 1

The Blonde man walk at the end of town to deliver the package, at the end of the town was garage called Kalm's Autoshop, it was a small shop not as big as the other shops that the blonde went to, to get his bike fix up but pretty well structured
"I guess this is the place," he said
The man enter the shop, inside the smell of oil and trasmission fluid filled up the shop, a few automobiles were park inside with hoods up, and several tools were on the floor
Inside the shop a women with long black wavy hair sat at a desk doing some paperwork
The man went over to her
"Um...hello there,"
The women looked up and smiled at him
"Oh...hello, may i help you?"
"Uhh...yes, i'm here to deliver a package for..."
The blonde man looked at the name on the package
"uhh...sukie...?"
The women smiled at him
"Oh...she not here right now, she left a few minutes ago, but i can take the package for her, i'm her big sister, Mina"
The man looked at the women
"oh...okay then,"
The blonde handed her that package and gave her a clipboard
"Just sign here,please,"
Mina toke the package and signed the clipboard
"here you go and thank you for the package,"
she gave the man back the board
The man smiled
"your welcome, have a nice day," he said
"You too," Mina replied and wave at the man as he left
The man walk out of the shop and head back to his bike, he got on his bike and turn it on, but suddenly the bike went dead and the ignitnion wouldn't turn on
"No, not now,"
He tried to turn it on again and again but it the engine wouldn't turn on, the man sighed
"Great..."
The man looked at the end of town saw the autoshop
"Well...I guess, i'm just gonna have to take it to the shop"
The man got off his bike and pulled it into town and straight to the shop

[Nelo Angelo]

aw come on make em a bit longer. i get really into it, cuz i can imagine it in my head, but then its finished. make the next chap a long one, i think this is a good fic.

[Rika17]

alright, it just, i like to take my time, and i'm still thinking of what should i put in next
Chapter1

The blonde man pull into the shop with his bike by his side
"Hello?" he asked looking around to find the same women on the desk
The women looked up to see the man again
"Oh hello again, do you need any help?"
The man looked at his bike and then back at her
"Well...umm...yes...sorry to bother you...but my bike...sort of went dead on me,"
The women look at him in sorrow
"Oh my...that's terrible, here why don't you put your bike in the garage, the mechanic should be here any minute now,"
the blonde man nodded
"Thanks i appreicate it,"
He toke his bike to the garage and set it to where are the other vechiles were, he then went to the desk were the women sat in and toke a seat by her desk
He then turn to her
"So where is the mec..."
Just the man was rudly innterupted by another female voice
"HEY MINA! HAS MY PACKAGE COME IN YET, CAUSE I REALLY NEED IT!!!"
Mina and the blonde turn to look at a girl with long black hair and glasses
The blonde man stared at the girl and thought to himself
"Hey, it's that girl that bumped into earliar,"
"Oh Sukie, welcome back" said Mina
The young girl just brush her off with a quick response
"Yeah, yeah, where my package?"
"Oh right," Mina went under the desk and picked up the package
The girl toke the package
"Ah thanks" Sukie went for the door
"Sukie! Wait!" Said Mina
Sukie stop right at the door and turn her head around
"Whaat? Can't you see that i'm in rush here?"
Mina just stood still
"I know and i can see that, but you have a customer,"
Mina pointed in the direction of the blonde man
Suki went into shock
"It's YOU!" Suki pointed her finger at him
Mina just looked at both of them and smiled
"Ah soo you two know each other?"
The blonde man and sukie just stared at each other
"YOU, you were the one that bumped into me!"
The blonde man just sat there wide eye
"If I may correct the problem here, you were the one who bumped into me,"
Sukie just shoke her head
"Nooo, you were the one who bumped into me, you were just standing there in a daze,"
The blonde man stood up and just fire back at her
"You were the one running, you should of watch were you were going!"
Sukie threw down her package and went towards the man
"At least I don't stand in a daze and wait for people to steal my wallet!"
The man walk towards her
"At least i have the couresty to say excuse me, when i'm in rush!"
Sukie was in the man face
"Well at least i move out of the way, when i see a rush hour!"
The man was in sukie face now
"Well at i have the privilege, of asking someone if there okay when they fell down, like you did!"
They two of them just kept going at it until Mina couldn't take it anymore
"QQUUIIEETT!!!"
They both stop bickering at each other and turn to look at Mina
Mina clear her throat
"Sorry, but you two really needed to stop,"
Sukie put her hands behind her head
"I don't see why you have to apologize, Mina, it was absolutely this man's fault"
The blonde man turn to sukie with anger in his eyes
"My fault, anyone with eyes can see it was mostly your..."
Mina got fustrated again
"ENOUGH!!!"
Sukie and man turn their attention to Mina
Mina had her hands on her hips
"I swear, the both of you act like brother and sister,"
Suki just turn around and went for her package
"Whatever," she said and pick up her package and went for the door
Just then Mina stop her
"Just wait right there sukie! You have a job to do!"
"And just what is that, i'm already busy as it is!"
Mina pointed to the man
"This man's bike has broken and you need to fix it,"
Sukie glared at the man
"Whaat!?"
The man also had the same expression
"Wat a second..."
The man turn to Mina
"Are you telling me that this girl is going to fix my bike?"
Mina looked at the man with a sure look
"I'm sorry i forgot to tell you,"
The man looked at her with wide expression
"So you mean..."
"Yep,"
They both turn to suki and mina introduce her to him
"I would like you to meet Sukie, the mechanic of Kalm's Autoshop"

[Nelo Angelo]

hehehe....cloud arguing like a child? never thought i'd see that. good chap there rika but you need to watch out for your grammer. keep it in the past tense if you can, cuz it seems to get muddled. but neverthless i liked it.

[Rika17]

thanks, i'll be sure to check my grammar
Chapter1
The blonde man looked at Sukie with a sock expression on his face
"What!? I don't believe it!"
Sukie turn to the man, with a whatever look
"Yeah same here, pal, i can't believe that i have to fix YOUR bike,"
The man was speechless
"But...your a GIRL!"
Sukie went paranormal and then regan herself
"OF COURSE I'M A GIRL!! WHO DO YOU THINK IS GONNA FIX YOUR BIKE!?!!!
The man just stood silent for a minute and then spoke
"Well...i was hoping that...a guy was going to fix my bike,"
Sukie started turning red
"A...guy...?"
The man rub the back of his head and looked at sukie
"Well yeah..., every mechanic i've been to was a guy and he did know what he was doing,"
Sukie started popping a vain from her forehead
"Are you suggesting that i have no idea what i'm doing?"
The man looked at Sukie with a calm look on his face
"Well...you are a girl after all...and i'm not sure if you are capable of doing a man's job,"
Just then sukie was enrage with anger
Mina started to sink down to the desk
"Oh dear..."
The blonde man turn to look at Mina
"What?"
Mina turned to the man
"I really don't think you should have said that,"
The man looked at mina in puzzelment
"Why?"
"Well...Sukie gets kinda sentitive, when people start to oppose her as a mechanic...and when they say that she can't be a mechanic...she starts...well...as you can see..."
The man turn to look at sukie, she was pissed off
"Well i hope you realize now that you can't oppose the oppsite sex, no matter what job they are doing," said mina and she quickly went under the desk
It was just the man and girl now, more rage rised insider her, as the man just kept on staring at her, preparing himself if a fight should break lose
"Where is you bike?" she finally said
The man lower his defense a little and pointed to the garage
Suki walk over to the garage, not looking at him
"I'll show you..."
The man tilted his head a little in confusion
"I'll show you and the rest of everyone here that i can be a great mechanic just like any other guy that own a autoshop,"
She walked into the garage
"I'll show you, i'll show all of you, that i'm Sukie and i'm the GREATEST MECHANIC EVER!!!"
She went over to cloud's bike and began to examine it
The man just stood the in awe as the young women began to work on his bike
From under the desk, Mina came out with a sigh of relief and lean back down on the chair feeling very well reprieve
"I'm so glad that she settle down," she said
The man walk over to her
"You seem very well relief, is she that stressfull?"
Mina turn her head over to him and smiled
"Only when she get mad, then it's chaos, it's hard to resolve her sometimes..., you see for a moment there i thought that she was going to send you to the hospital, i was very worried to see if that was ever going to happen,"
The man just started at her
"You mean, she has done that before?"
Mina smile softly at him
"Well...yes, but only when people have pushed her to far over the edge, then...well it's hard to control her anger sometimes, i have to get at least two other people to help me settle her down sometimes...if things should get out of hand,"
The man just only stared down at the floor
"Oh...I see..."
Mina straighten herself up from her chair and continue on doing the paperwork
"But...all in good hands, she is a good girl, she just trying to prove to everyone that she can be some sort of good use,"
The man turn his head towards the girl and couldn't help but feel some sort of connection towards her, he then left the desk and walk towards the girl who was fixing his bike
He stood by the girl, as she examine the engine
She notice a shadow hunging over her and looked up to see the blonde spiky man looking down towards her
She lowerd her eyebows to him and continue on working on the bike
"What do you want?" she said while she was looking at the engine
"Nothing," he said "Just wanted to know what was wrong with my bike?"
The girl looked at him for a moment and then turn her attention back to the bike
She pointed out the problem to him and the man knelt down to get a better look
"The problem with your bike is...that one of the wires that goes to the engine was fried and it's need to get replace as soon as possible,"
The man looked at the engine and then back to the girl and saw that she having some sort of a problem
"It's sounds like there a problem,"
Sukie scratch her head and stood up
"Replace a fried wire, is a piece of cake for me but..."
She went to a drawer of tools and pulled out one of the shelves and there was nothing in there
"I just completly ran out of engine wire yesterday,"
The man walk over to her
"What about that package i delivered?"
Sukie looked at him
"Oh, so your the one who delivered my package?"
The man nodded
"So what's in there anyways?"
"It's nothing really, just a bunch of power tools that i needed, to get job done faster,"
The man looked down
"Oh,"
Sukie just glared at the man
"But don't you worry, i'll have your bike fixed up in no time, i just need to make a quick phone call,"
The man glance up at her and sukie made her way to the desk
"Mina!, I need to borrow the phone for minute,"
Mina looked at sukie
"Oh okay," she hander her the phone and sukie quickly dial a number
The line went through
"Hello Rick, it's me sukie, how are you doing...? Yeah listen, i need a favor from you, do you have anymore engine wire?...oh you do! thanks, talk to you later, bye," Sukie quickly hung up the phone and gave a thumpsup to the blonde man
"You don't have to worry about thing, mister, i called a friend of mines and he said he had some wire, so i'm going to go pick them up and come back to fix your bike,"
The blonde man smile
"Thanks, but you don't have call me mister, my names is Cloud, Cloud Strife,"
Sukie smiled
"Cloud, huh?"
She stretched out her arm and introduce herself to him
"It's a pleasure meeting you Cloud, my names Sukie, Sukie Monarche"
Cloud and Sukie shoke hands
"It a pleasure meeting you too, sukie,"
"I'm sorry about bumping into you earliar, it's seems that i was in bit of a rush,"
Cloud shoke his head
"No it's my fault, i shouldn't have been standing in the middle of town,"
Sukie shoke her head
"No it's my fault, i should of been watching where i was going,"
Cloud then started to ague back
"No it's mines, i was just standing there!"
sukie then started yelling back at him
"No it's mines, i didn't see you standing there!"
cloud then yelled back at her
"NO IT'S MINE!!!"
then sukie
"NO MINES!!!"
Cloud
"MINES!!"
and so on and so forth
"MINES!"
"MINES!"
"MINES!"
"MINES!"
It kept going until Mina couldn't take it anymore
"WILL YOU TWO JUST SHUP UP IT WAS BOTH YOUR GUYS FAULT!!!"

[shadow_heartless]

WOW,i'm that late lol but anyways I love it cloud arguing like my little brother thats awesome keep it up ^^

[Nelo Angelo]

cloud arguing like a kid?!
never expected that.
i like this chap. its good. got some spellin errors in there, 'shoke' should be shook. but no worries keep it up rika.

[Ultima Star]

Cloud.is arguing..like..a kid....:P CLOUD!!! he seems so cute there I like this!!!

[Rika17]

thanks, i'm glad that you all like it :), I'll try to make this story as funny as i can
Chapter1
Once Cloud and Sukie stop aguing at each other, sukie went into an office and pulled out a tan duffle bag
along with some long leather leashes and a metal chocobo brace
Cloud watch her as she prepared her things
"So, where is that your going anyways?" He asked
Sukie put all her things into the bag
"That called i made is a friend of mines who sells auto equiment as well as other things, if i should ever need anything or run out of equiment all i have to do is call him and he'll have it ready for me,"
"So where exactally does he live?' said Cloud
Suki zippered up the bag and swung it over her should
"He lives 20 miles south from Kalm,"
"20 miles! That a long way, how do plan to get there?"
Sukie smiled at him
"By chocobo of course,"
Cloud gaze at her
"Chocobo!, you have one?"
"Yeah, theres a chocobo ranch just outside of kalm, my chocobo is in there, i need to get him,"
Sukie grab a hat that hang on the wall got out of the office and walk towards Mina
"Mina, i'm gonna be gone for a little while, tell the others guys i'll be back,"
Mina nodded
"Sure,"
Sukie turn to cloud
"Well...see you later, i'll be back in a bit, just stay here and relax for a while,"
Cloud stared at her in shock
"What a second, your going all by yourself?"
Sukie looked at cloud
"Yeah...I always do,"
Sukie went for the door and headed outside, cloud followed her
"So you go off on your own by yourself, doesn't you mother worried that you might get hurt?"
Sukie suddenly stopped in her tracks and turn around to looked at cloud
"Listen, I don't need an adult to esscort me everywhere i go, i'm 17 years old and i can take care of myself, so if you WOULD PLEASE EXSCUSE ME, i have to go, see you later," she said and stomped off out of town
Cloud just kept on following her till she reach the chocobo ranch
"I'm sorry, but i can't let you go off alone, what if you get hurt?"
Sukie just kept on walking
"Why are you so worried?, I do this mostly every other day!"
Cloud went into shock
"You Do!?"
Sukie look back at him
"Of i do, the monsters on the land don't bother at all, i can handle them myself,"
Cloud just shoke his head, he couldn't let this girl go off into the wilderness alone
"I'm sorry, but i can't let go alone,"
Sukie stopped and turn to looked at him, with frustration in her eyes
"Fine, since your so worried about me, i'll let you tag along, but i'm telling you that i can take care of myself!"
Cloud smile and nodded to her
"thanks, that sound like a great plan,
sukie just rolled her eyes to him and kept walking till she went inside the chocobo ranch
Inside the ranch was stables for each chocobo to settle inside, on the floor grass and hay was everywhere, making each step you take a cruching sound
Sukie reach the end of the ranch and in a stable a black chocobo nestled into it's hay sleeping peacefully and undisturbed
Sukie went up to the stable and called for the bird
"Dasher, get up, it's time to go on a trip,"
The black bird blinked it's eyes, picked up it's long neck and yawn, the chocobo shoke the his head to get the sleep out of him and the turn to sukie and called towards her, he then stood up and walked to her
Sukie smiled at him as the bird lowere his head toward her
"Oh i'm sorry, where you sleeping, i'm soo sorry, but we have to go out of town today," she gently patted him on the head
The chocobo just cooed at her and nuzzel her face
Sukie hug his head and went to open the stable. The chocobo walk out of the stable and sukie put her bag down and toke out the brace and a leash
"Okay, buddy it's time to put this on,"
Dasher lowered his head and Sukie slip on the brace and hook it, she then got the leash and place it on the brace
"Okay, were almost ready, we just need one more thing,"
Cloud looked at her
"and just what is that?"
Sukie looked at him and smiled
"A wagon for you silly,"
Cloud looked at her in shock
"Why do i have to sit in the back?"
Sukie put her hands on her hip and looked at him
"Because i'm the driver and your the passager,"
"Well why can't i be the driver, i know how to ride a chocobo," said cloud impatiencatly
Sukie went over to Dasher and petted him
"Because Dasher won't let anyone else, besides me on his back,"
Cloud went over the chocobo
"Whatever, anyone can ride a chocobo,"
Cloud jumped on Dasher and settle himself on his back
Sukie looked at him and tried to stop him
"Cloud i wouldn't...do that...dasher doesn't like when other people on his back,"
Cloud didn't lister to her, instead he kick dasher into the ribs, when dasher felt this, he lean his back and started jumping around, cloud tried to hold himself, but dasher just kept on jumping around until cloud was throw off the chocobo and hit the floor, sukie went over to him and dasher finally settled down giving Cloud a dirty look for kicking him.
Cloud sat up with hay all over his body, hair, and mouth
Sukie look at him and shoke her head
On the land Sukie drove while cloud sat in the wagon that was attached to Dasher
"See i told you that Dasher only lets me on his back and nobody else,"
Cloud sighed
"This is so humiliating," he said shamefully
And they continue on heading south

[shadow_heartless]

Wow you made it longer AWESOME!!!!!!!!! i love it

[Haku]

Great chapter there were a few things here and there that I found but otherwise good.

[Rika17]

thank you
Chapter1
As Sukie and Cloud continue down south, Cloud sat back in the wagon thinking to himself how Sukie became a mechanic at such a young age, curiosity just kept building up in his head until Cloud just turn around at her and began to ask
"Hey Sukie,"
She turn her head to him
"Yeah?"
"I was just wondering...how did you became a mechanic, at the age you are right now?"
Sukie look up toward the sky and ponder about his question
"Well...ummm...let's see..."
Cloud turn his full attention towards her
"Well...ever since a was little, i've always like tinkering with toy cars, y'know the ones that you rind up,"
Cloud nodded and remeber playing with those toys
"Well...when they would break, i would always take them apart and figure out what was wrong with them, when i toke them apart i would alway find the gears jamed together or one of them broken and needed to be replace, after i fixed the broken car up, i rind the toy back up and started playing again. Then as the years went by and i got bigger i started working on bicycles for kids who bikes had broken, i would fix them up for them and they were happy to see that their bikes were repair and would ride off on it and into town again,"
Cloud looked at her with a thrilling expression on his face
"Ah... so i see, that's great to know that you were helping the other kids in town when they were in a bind,"
Sukie smiled and looked down in embarassment
"Yeah...it is great, isn't it?"
Cloud smiled at her and had more questions to ask
"So...when did you start working on vechicles?"
Sukie turn back to him
"Well...as i was growing up, i've alway like going to my neighbor Jame's house, you see...he was the head mechanic in our town and if i couldn't figure out what was wrong with the toy car or bike i went over to his place and asked for his help, he was more than happy to show me what was wrong with the object, as he showed me what was wrong, i started learning from him and help him repaired all kinds of vehicals when i wasn't fixing toys or bikes, i was mostly at his house everyday, he became my teacher and i became his student. Then they day came when wa old enough and he asked me if i could work at his shop, i was thrilled and full of excitement, I agreed to his offer right away, since then we became the greatest mechanics in town, everyone was happy to know that we could help them if their vechical were to ever break down, we were more than happy to help, everyday was a new experience for me, James taught me all kinds of stuff about the vehicals and how they can be fixed and repaired, i was soo happy to work for him, he was man full of generious and compassion...but...then...,"
Sukie looked down to the ground
"Two years ago, the stigma got to him...and...he...died...,"
Cloud had shocking expression on his face
"Everyone in town mourn for the lost of his death, but...i...was more devestated than anybody else in town and Icouldn't eat for a week, but after the week went by and Mina help me back on my feet, i started working in the shop again, to see the people of Kalm smile once more. When i went back to work, less than a few people came to see me,"
Cloud titled his head
"Why?"
"Well the fact being i'm a girl and when people see me working in the shop they just burst out laughing or have a surpise look on their faces and go somewhere else to get their vehicals fixed,"
Cloud looked down and remeber what happen earliar in the shop
"Oh...sorry to hear about that," he said solemly
Sukie clutched her fist
"If only they knew that I'm just as great as james was, business would be burning by now, but since i'm a girl, business is just as slow as ever and nobody thinks i can do it,"
Cloud looked at her and gave her some comfort
"Hey don't worry about it, one day you'll prove to everyone that you are a great mechanic and then they'll see how silly they were for ever douting you,"
Sukie look at Cloud and then turn towards the sky, seeing the sun shining all over the land
"Someday when i have enough gil, i wish to travel the world and help people fix up their vechicals and then everyone will know and respect me as The Great Mechanic Sukie! Everyone will want me to help them repair their vechicals, and then when that day comes i will be more than happy to, for everyone will see how great i am and how i will never turn them down when they are in a bind, i will try to help them in anyway that i can, you'll see, I'm gonna be the greatest person this world will ever known!!"
Sukie threw her fist in the air as Dasher called out and Cloud just smiled
"Someday," she said " I will be the greatest"
The sun hover over them and the three of them finally made down south of kalm

[Nelo Angelo]

wow. thats an awesome chap rika. very heartfelt. sukie seems like a graet original chaaracter. im impressed. still a few grammatical and spelling errors. dont rush it. take your time. it'll be even better than it is that way.