Crystal Fate - Page 3

Ultima Star · 08/11/07, 11:05 PM

Oh thanks Riku ^^ I'm so glad you like it and I hope you continue reading it =D

Shadowysights · 08/12/07, 12:25 AM

This is getteg really interesting now...continue it soon.

Ultima Star · 08/12/07, 12:28 AM

Oh thanks Sora and thanks too acein^^
I'm typing the prologue to chapter 4 now..will upload it later ^.^

Silent Avera · 08/12/07, 02:55 AM

*New Reader* *Sniff* Sad how it begins...but this is gonna have a happy ending right? ^-^ So I'm all for it! *Waiting patiently* ^-^

Ultima Star · 08/12/07, 03:03 AM

Thankies!! I'm glad you like it =D
Um..well...there are two ways to end this story a sad one and a happy one D=

Silent Avera · 08/12/07, 04:38 AM

* Radios in* This is S.A. Foreverkingdom giving you permission to post - S.A. over and out XD!

Ultima Star · 08/12/07, 04:39 AM

Ok sorry if I'm double posting but this is the prlogue for chapter 4 and as I'm leaving now I felt that I needed to post it :/
ok let's go.

PROLOGUE TO CHAPTER 4
WILL YOU BE WITH ME?

“Staring at this sky, being next to you, feeling afraid
My only fear now is being alone, I don’t want to be away from you
Not now…not ever, stay by my side that’s all I want, don’t leave me
Promise me again that you’ll always be with me, I want to hear that once more
I sound corny, I know it…but these words…are from deep iside my heart”

-Crystal

And so, Crystal wrote this words on a notebook she had, she wrote them thinking about Zafiro and her, more exactly about their bond.

That night Crystal decided that whenever she felt sad, happy or alone she would write down what she felt in her heart. It was decided, now she would start a new life…a life that she hoped would last more than the previous one.

She heard someone getting near to her, it was Zafiro, who else could it be anyway? “What are you doing Crystal?” he asked.

When she listened to his voice she inmediately closed her notebook “uhh…nothing!” she answered with a smile on her face.

Zafiro smiled too “What’s with that notebook?” he asked, looking at Crystal who seemed to be hiding something “So?”

Crystal looked at him in a low voice said “I won’t tell you…it’s a secret…”

The boy only crossed his arms and smiled “It’s ok if you don’t want to tell me” he said “Now let’s go to sleep, it’s really late” he added.

“I guess…so…” she sighed. The girl sat next to a tree and looked at her longtime friend “Come here….you have to sleep too” she told him.

Zafiro sat next to her and then touched her hand “Alright, let’s call it a day” he said and while looking at the sky he fell asleep.

Before going to sleep Crystal looked at Zafiro and in a low voice said “Will you be with me?”

Zafiro suddenly woke up “Did you say something Crystal?” he asked feeling confused.

The girl blushed and looked at another direction “Nope I didn’t say anything” she answered and trying to act like if she was annoyed she looked at him “Now C’mon sleep!” she ‘demanded’.

The confused boy only smiled “Alright then, night Crystal” he replied.

2Night Zafiro” she said then she fell asleep.

Both kids spent that night like if it was the longest night ever and waited for morning to come.

-----------------------------------♥-------------------------------------------

Ok that's it =D hope you guys enjoy it =D

Silent Avera · 08/12/07, 04:41 AM

Wow, I posted just in time to save ya!

A little short, but I think this will become a great love story *Still hoping for happy ending*

SORA RULEZ!!!! · 08/12/07, 04:41 AM

Wheres the prologue yo!?!?

keybladerxiii · 08/12/07, 04:50 AM

I like it
i can actually imagine these scenes in my head
you use enough detail for that to happen
keep it up i want to see how this ends

Lectori Salutem · 08/12/07, 01:41 PM

It's getting interresting now!

Chapter four was a little short....

Ultima Star · 08/12/07, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silent Avera

Wow, I posted just in time to save ya!

A little short, but I think this will become a great love story *Still hoping for happy ending*

Well yeah =D thanks Silent Avera if it hadn't been for you I would have double posted XD

Quote:

Originally Posted by SORA RULEZ!!!!

Wheres the prologue yo!?!?

On post above you ^^;

Quote:

Originally Posted by keybladerxiii

I like it
i can actually imagine these scenes in my head
you use enough detail for that to happen
keep it up i want to see how this ends

=D I'm so happy you like it =D yeah I will continue it, now I have more readers too so yeah ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lectori Salutem

It's getting interresting now!

Chapter four was a little short....

It wasn't Chapter 4...it was the prologue to Chapter 4 hehe ^^;

Chapter 4 will be up by the end of the night if I manage to write it ^^;

Shadowysights · 08/12/07, 08:19 PM

Pretty good...................

Hikari713 · 08/12/07, 08:53 PM

YAY!!!! *applauds* i'm loving this so much can't wait for more you constantly keep me hanging!!!!

Ultima Star · 08/12/07, 10:17 PM

I'm so happy you're enjoying it =D I'm just writing Chapter 4 now =D

08/11/07, 11:05 PM	#31
Ultima Star Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17 Posts: 2,314 Rep Power: 8	Re: Crystal Fate Oh thanks Riku ^^ I'm so glad you like it and I hope you continue reading it =D

08/12/07, 12:25 AM	#32
Shadowysights Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15 Posts: 2,088 Rep Power: 5	Re: Crystal Fate This is getteg really interesting now...continue it soon.

08/12/07, 12:28 AM	#33
Ultima Star Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17 Posts: 2,314 Rep Power: 8	Re: Crystal Fate Oh thanks Sora and thanks too acein^^ I'm typing the prologue to chapter 4 now..will upload it later ^.^

08/12/07, 02:55 AM	#34
Silent Avera Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20 Posts: 622 Rep Power: 3	Re: Crystal Fate New Reader Sniff Sad how it begins...but this is gonna have a happy ending right? ^-^ So I'm all for it! Waiting patiently ^-^

08/12/07, 03:03 AM	#35
Ultima Star Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17 Posts: 2,314 Rep Power: 8	Re: Crystal Fate Thankies!! I'm glad you like it =D Um..well...there are two ways to end this story a sad one and a happy one D=

08/12/07, 04:38 AM	#36
Silent Avera Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20 Posts: 622 Rep Power: 3	Re: Crystal Fate * Radios in* This is S.A. Foreverkingdom giving you permission to post - S.A. over and out XD!

08/12/07, 04:39 AM	#37
Ultima Star Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17 Posts: 2,314 Rep Power: 8	Re: Crystal Fate Ok sorry if I'm double posting but this is the prlogue for chapter 4 and as I'm leaving now I felt that I needed to post it :/ ok let's go. PROLOGUE TO CHAPTER 4 WILL YOU BE WITH ME? “Staring at this sky, being next to you, feeling afraid My only fear now is being alone, I don’t want to be away from you Not now…not ever, stay by my side that’s all I want, don’t leave me Promise me again that you’ll always be with me, I want to hear that once more I sound corny, I know it…but these words…are from deep iside my heart” -Crystal And so, Crystal wrote this words on a notebook she had, she wrote them thinking about Zafiro and her, more exactly about their bond. That night Crystal decided that whenever she felt sad, happy or alone she would write down what she felt in her heart. It was decided, now she would start a new life…a life that she hoped would last more than the previous one. She heard someone getting near to her, it was Zafiro, who else could it be anyway? “What are you doing Crystal?” he asked. When she listened to his voice she inmediately closed her notebook “uhh…nothing!” she answered with a smile on her face. Zafiro smiled too “What’s with that notebook?” he asked, looking at Crystal who seemed to be hiding something “So?” Crystal looked at him in a low voice said “I won’t tell you…it’s a secret…” The boy only crossed his arms and smiled “It’s ok if you don’t want to tell me” he said “Now let’s go to sleep, it’s really late” he added. “I guess…so…” she sighed. The girl sat next to a tree and looked at her longtime friend “Come here….you have to sleep too” she told him. Zafiro sat next to her and then touched her hand “Alright, let’s call it a day” he said and while looking at the sky he fell asleep. Before going to sleep Crystal looked at Zafiro and in a low voice said “Will you be with me?” Zafiro suddenly woke up “Did you say something Crystal?” he asked feeling confused. The girl blushed and looked at another direction “Nope I didn’t say anything” she answered and trying to act like if she was annoyed she looked at him “Now C’mon sleep!” she ‘demanded’. The confused boy only smiled “Alright then, night Crystal” he replied. 2Night Zafiro” she said then she fell asleep. Both kids spent that night like if it was the longest night ever and waited for morning to come. -----------------------------------♥------------------------------------------- Ok that's it =D hope you guys enjoy it =D

08/12/07, 04:41 AM	#38
Silent Avera Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20 Posts: 622 Rep Power: 3	Re: Crystal Fate Wow, I posted just in time to save ya! A little short, but I think this will become a great love story Still hoping for happy ending

08/12/07, 04:41 AM	#39
SORA RULEZ!!!! Ruler of Light Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 579 Rep Power: 2	Re: Crystal Fate Wheres the prologue yo!?!?

08/12/07, 04:50 AM	#40
keybladerxiii Sidekick Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my own little KH Fantasy World Age: 18 Posts: 343 Rep Power: 2	Re: Crystal Fate I like it i can actually imagine these scenes in my head you use enough detail for that to happen keep it up i want to see how this ends

08/12/07, 01:41 PM	#41
Lectori Salutem Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Waiting for the snow to fall... Age: 16 Posts: 765 Rep Power: 2	Re: Crystal Fate It's getting interresting now! Chapter four was a little short....

08/12/07, 08:19 PM	#43
Shadowysights Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15 Posts: 2,088 Rep Power: 5	Re: Crystal Fate Pretty good...................

08/12/07, 08:53 PM	#44
Hikari713 Organization Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Hiding. Who ever finds me first gets a cookie! Age: 16 Posts: 381 Rep Power: 3	Re: Crystal Fate YAY!!!! applauds i'm loving this so much can't wait for more you constantly keep me hanging!!!! Last edited by Hikari713; 08/12/07 at 08:53 PM. Reason: I messed up. DUH.

08/12/07, 10:17 PM	#45
Ultima Star Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17 Posts: 2,314 Rep Power: 8	Re: Crystal Fate I'm so happy you're enjoying it =D I'm just writing Chapter 4 now =D

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