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Old 07/20/07, 09:27 PM   #31
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yes....really good job, Raye-chan.

*still laughing at the Sephiroth parts*
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Old 07/20/07, 09:30 PM   #32
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lol thanks! he'll have more dont worry!
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Old 07/20/07, 09:58 PM   #33
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In my opinion it's not bad but not great. You should continue it.
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Old 07/20/07, 11:19 PM   #34
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Hello! Its pretty good!!!!! Its also something new yo!lol Im going to keep reading this!
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Old 07/21/07, 12:30 AM   #35
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lol thanks a lot, chapter 3 will be posted tomorrow! ^^
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Old 07/21/07, 01:07 AM   #36
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HAHAHHAHA!!! That's so funny! I liked that chapter!

I like how it's kinda like a diary!
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Old 07/21/07, 02:29 AM   #37
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lol thanks a lot, chapter 3 will be posted tomorrow! ^^
Alrighty will be waiting for the next one then!
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Old 07/21/07, 10:12 PM   #38
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Hey Buddy! I promised you I would read it and I did, very good fanfic! you can always write better than me XD Keep it up! I wait for more!
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Old 07/21/07, 11:11 PM   #39
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It's still confusing to read... You need to explain things more to the reader. You know the storyline, but when writing, you need to make sure you explain everything as if you didn't.

Keep writing, that's the way you'll improve. But take criticism into account, okay? =D

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Old 07/23/07, 08:31 PM   #40
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Hey Riku! Remember me? lol anyways. It's slow but it draws me in! I can't wait to read more! (and Sephiroth...very funny. Never imagined him as a father figure though...and 11 kids! wow...)
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Old 07/23/07, 10:45 PM   #41
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Hey Riku...when are you writng the next chapter?
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Old 07/24/07, 12:07 AM   #42
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ive been very busy.. so i promise that it will be sometime this week ^^;
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Old 07/24/07, 01:26 AM   #43
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I can't wait to see how it turns out.
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Old 07/24/07, 02:47 AM   #44
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ive been very busy.. so i promise that it will be sometime this week ^^;

Ok we'll wait cos I'm sure it's gonna be awesome
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Old 07/24/07, 02:58 AM   #45
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Just don't rush writing it though RD.
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