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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Well, you don't have to wait for the next chappie. I got it here! This is the last chappie until Monday. So, hope you guys enjoy it, cause you're stuck w/ it till Moday! Here it is....it's long, but i like cliff hangers, & thought i'd leave you guys w/ one, so anyways, here's the chappie!Chappie 13 “Hey, you’re back! It only took you twenty hours.” Anna said sarcastically as Riku walked in the doorway. She took one of her earphones out of her ear. “I was gone for an hour; you’re just bad with keeping time.” Riku joked as he sat down by Anna. He reached over and grabbed the bottle and the small cup. He poured half of the green liquid in the cup and held it out to her. “Just get it over with.” He said, sympathizing for her that she had to drink the stuff. She took the cup from his hand. She gulped the scentless liquid down as fast as she could. “I knew that would be gross. I feel like a two-year-old taking medicine. Where’s some water?” Riku could tell by her expression that the stuff tasted horrible. Riku looked around, seeing no water in the room. The kitchen was on the other side of the castle; so it would be useless to go get some from there. The taste would be out of Anna’s mouth before he got back. “Never mind. I’m fine.” She said. She swung her legs over the side of the bed and slowly stood up. “I wanna do something. Don’t tell me I should stay in bed. I’m not dying anymore. And I’m tired of sitting.” She said as she looked at Riku. He laughed some as he stood up. “Let’s go find the Queen. You probably want to get clean clothes.” He said, looking at the large bloodstain on her clothes. She nodded her head and followed Riku out of the room. They saw Melanie after a few minutes of looking around. “Hey, how are you feeling? I’m Melanie, by the way.” Melanie asked calmly as she walked up to Anna and Riku. “Fine. Have you seen the Queen by any chance?” Anna asked. “She’s in the library.” Melanie replied. “Oh, we better go lock the door before any more come.” Anna said suddenly, looking at Riku. Melanie looked confused, but Riku knew what she meant. “We have to go. Thanks for helping!” Anna yelled back to Melanie as she and Riku ran down the hall. They quickly locked the door to the world, Disney Castle, when they were farther away. They didn’t have to leave yet, though. Keyblade bearers were the only ones who could go through the locked doors to a world, so they could leave any time they wanted to. They just locked the door to prevent heartless from entering. They ran to the library and opened the doors to find Queen Minnie sitting at the desk. “Oh, I’m glad to see you’re doing alright! If you don’t mind me asking, what is your name?” She walked up to Anna. Anna smiled at her. “Anna. And I don’t mind at all. I was just wondering if I could get some new clothes before we go.” Anna asked, ready to get out of her bloodstained clothes. “Of course. Follow that broom and he will lead you to the sewing room. You’re new clothes will be hanging in the closet. Come back and visit!” Anna thanked her, said they would visit, and then started followed the broom the Queen had pointed out. Riku walked beside her. The broom led them down a few halls then into a large room. When Anna and Riku walked in, the broom left. Anna wondered through the room. It was full of sewing stuff. Everywhere you looked, you saw neatly folded stacks of fabric, baskets full of spools of thread, and sewing needles stuck in pin cushions cushions. Anna found the closet in the back of the room. She walked in and shut the door. Riku waited for her on the other side of the room. “Let’s go.” Riku almost jumped. He turned around to find Anna standing right behind him; she must have snuck up on him. She had on an outfit that was the same as her previous outfit. “Yea, that looks a lot better without a giant red spot on your stomach.” Riku joked. Anna smiled. “We better go. The sooner we get done with all the worlds, the better.” She said as she walked out of the room. Riku followed her out. A few minutes later, they saw Melanie yet again. She was smiling with the familiar calm look on her face. “You guys are headed out, huh?” She asked. “Yea, we need to leave now. Thank you so much for healing me.” Anna said in reply. “I’d do it again any time. It’s my job.” Anna smiled. “Well, we should go now.” Riku said. They waved as they ran back to the gummi ship. When they were out of sight, Queen Minnie walked up beside Melanie. “Do you think they know?” Melanie looked down at her and smiled. “They don’t know about me yet; I think it should stay that way for a little longer.” __________________________________________________ ___________________________________ Five months had passed. Riku and Anna had been to every world except for Port Royal, Atlantica, and Halloween Town. The gummi ship kept getting sabotaged by heartless, so they had to stay at most worlds for at least two weeks until it was fixed. Luckily, they found it could be fixed with magic, but it took a really long time to work. They hadn’t seen Sora and Kairi since Maleficent took them. “How long until we get there?” Anna asked. “Five minutes.” Riku answered. Anna reminisced over the last five months. They hadn’t seen the King, Donald, or Goofy at all. They hadn’t seen Sora and Kairi since Radiant Garden. They had, however, seen the mysterious man a few times. At Traverse Town, the imperial palace in China, and at the Pride Lands, and he never stayed there long enough to even fight him. She smiled when she recalled what her and Riku looked like in the Pride Lands. He was a dark silver lion that looked the age of between a cub and an adult lion. Anna was a light yellow color that was close to resembling Nala’s coat color, and she looked as old as Riku did. She laughed when she thought about how long it took her and him to learn how to fight holding their keyblades with their tales. It took a while for them to even be able to run. “You just can’t get over that lion thing, can you? It’s not that funny. Well, it kinda is, but you laugh about it all the time.” Riku said, guessing what she was laughing about. He was now used to her laughing a lot. Not when things were serious, but just at random things, although she had a good reason to laugh about this. Her blue eyes sparkled with laughter now, and they sparkled every single time she laughed. He had grown to like her so much that he would die for her, and he felt like he’d known her forever. He kept remembering seeing a little girl that looked like Anna back on Destiny Islands when he was a little kid. He never remembered anything about her after the darkness came to the islands, though. But Riku just ignored the strange memories; they weren’t important now. Anna noticed he was looking in her eyes again, and she waved her hands in front of his face. “What is so special about my eyes that makes you stare at them all the time?” She asked, partly joking. “Everything.” He answered as he smiled. Anna blushed. “I think that’s the nicest thing any boy has ever said to me.” She said softly as she looked down, afraid he would see her flushed face. She felt him lift her chin up with his fingers. She let him lift her head up. He gazed into her bright pale blue eyes, while she gazed into his calming greenish-gray eyes. He pulled her a little closer, until their faces were inches away from each other. Anna suddenly jumped when she heard a loud crashing noise outside the gummi ship. Riku and her looked out one of the windows to find they had landed in Port Royal already. They heard swords clashing outside, and resolved there were pirates nearby. Riku sighed inwardly and leaned back some. However, Anna leaned closer and kissed him on the cheek. She then grabbed his hand and pulled him up out of the seat. She opened the gummi ship door and led Riku out. She looked around, and saw pirates farther away. Riku tried his best to look cool and calm as he always did, but he could only stare at the ground. He never expected her to do that. His whole body was tingling. She instantly started running towards the pirates as Riku collected himself and ran behind her. “And who are you two?” Anna’s mouth almost dropped. She turned around quickly to find a pirate that looked like it was part of the sea standing behind Riku. Chills ran up her spine. “Fine. I don’t care who you two are, but I’m taking her nevertheless.” Riku knew he was talking about Anna. “Riku!” He turned around and saw three pirates that looked like the other pirate holding Anna. He got out his keyblade. “Let her go!” He yelled. “If you fight, she dies.” Riku heard the pirate’s cold words clearly. He let his keyblade disappear. The pirate laughed the cruelest laugh Anna and Riku had ever heard. “Now we know how to keep you under control.” He said as he walked past Riku and stood beside his crewmen. Anna was trying to break free, but the pirates’ grips were so tight, it was useless. “Don’t hurt her.” Riku said, the anger rising inside him. “I’ll hurt her if you try to follow, for sure. She will make a great captive. Davy Jones will be pleased.” He said frigidly with a crooked smile. Anna’s eyes opened widely. She had seen the Pirates of the Caribbean movies. She knew what Davy Jones was like. It gave her chills to think of being his captive. She elbowed one of the pirates so hard that he lost his grip on her arm. Anna reached out with her free arm as far as she could towards Riku. She tried to scream as the pirates dragged her off, but she felt a cold, hard hand keeping her mouth shut. Riku could only stand still and watch them drag her off till they were out of sight. |
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| Organization Member | Crap, I missed quite a lot... It was very nice! And don't worry, it always looks shorter once you post it... |
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Hey, i'm back w/ the next chappie! Sorry i haven't posted one in a little while, i only have internet at school & we got out of school early on Monday, so i didn't get to get on here long enough to post one. I'm going to my bro's bball state tournament, so i should have another chappie up on Moday. Here it is & hope you guys like it! It's not as long as the previous few. Chappie 14 Riku stood there for a minute, not really knowing what to do. He finally decided to find someone who could help him. This Davy Jones guy was apparently not going to listen to him if he tried to save Anna. He didn’t even know where they took her. And even if he found her, he knew the pirates probably wouldn’t mind killing her. He hated to think of Anna dying. She almost died once, and he wasn’t going to let it happen again. “Those clothes do not flatter you at all; it should be a dress or nothing. And I happen to have no dress on my ship…” Riku heard someone talking farther away. He walked towards the voice and found a ship at the dock. Crewmembers were loading things onto the ship. He saw what he thought to be a young man talking to a pirate. The pirate had black dreadlocks, a faded red bandana tied around his head, and clothes that had seen better days. He wasn’t sure if they could help, but he thought he heard the pirate say something about the chest of Davy Jones. Riku didn’t care about any chest, but the pirate apparently knew something about Davy Jones. “What do you want most, Miss Elizabeth?” “To find Will.” “By finding the chest of Davy Jones.” The young woman he had thought to be a boy held a compass. “Mr. Gibbs, we have our heading.” The pirate looked at the girl named Elizabeth. He pointed towards the ship and bowed. “Welcome to the crew.” He said as she walked onto the ship. The pirate started to walk on board when he heard someone walk up behind him. “You know about Davy Jones?” Riku asked. The pirate turned around. “Perhaps. What’s it to you?” The pirate’s voice didn’t sound trustworthy, but Riku decided this guy was his main option to finding Anna. “He has my friend. I need to find his ship.” “I don’t see any profit in this for me. Why should I let you on my ship?” The pirate asked. “Oh, just let him on the ship. You need all the help you can get.” Riku looked over to see a man leaning over the side of the dock railing. “You look bloody awful, why are you here?” the pirate asked the man. The man turned around and wiped his mouth with his sleeve. He had on a filthy, messed up white wig. Underneath it, his brown scraggly hair hung down. He had on some sort of military uniform that was covered in mud. “You hired me.” He answered as he walked dizzily onto the ship. “Oh, right.” The pirate’s taking so long to decide was annoying Riku. “If you take me to Davy Jones, I’ll help you do whatever you need to do in the meantime.” Riku said, trying to persuade the pirate. “Your friend is a girl, isn’t she? And a very special girl to you, I’m sure.” The pirate said. “Yes, she is. Why?” “Because I would find it quite stupid to do such a thing as go after a someone who is not your dearly beloved. Especially on Davy Jones’s ship. Welcome to the crew.” The pirate started walking onto the ship. Riku followed him. “By the way, you my address me as Captain Jack Sparrow. And who are you?” The pirate asked as he walked through the crewmen on the ship. “Riku.” The pirate stopped walking and turned around. “You are a friend of that boy named…Zolla! Yes, Zolla, that’s his name. You know him somehow, don’t you?” Jack asked. It took Riku a minute to figure out he meant Sora. “Yes. How did you figure that out?” Riku asked as Jack started walking around the ship again. “Because no one here has a name like Zolla or Riku, and no one here has clothes like you and him do, and lastly, because you have the strangest hair I have ever seen. Wait, no, forget I said that last part. I’ve seen worse.” Riku thought Jack had to be the weirdest pirate he would ever meet. “Do me a favor and keep a close eye on that girl over there. Her name is Elizabeth. Whatever you do, don’t trust her.” Jack looked at Elizabeth on the other side of the ship. Then he pushed Riku in that direction and with that, Jack walked into a room with a desk and some other objects in and shut the double doors behind him. Riku walked over to the young woman. “Do you know what’s wrong with Jack?” Riku asked her. She turned towards him. “He’s just a very odd man. Very, very odd. What is your name; I don’t think I’ve seen you before, and you can’t be a pirate.” She said in reply. “I’m Riku; one of Sora’s friends.” He answered. “Oh, how is he doing?” She asked, remembering Sora. “I don’t know, really. We got separated again.” “I’m sorry that had to happen. Is that why you’re here? To look for him?” She asked, looking at the sea. It was nighttime, and the crewmen started heading for their makeshift beds. Riku noticed they were some of the last people on the deck. “Yea, but right now, I’m looking for my other friend. Some of Davy Jones’s crewmen took her captive.” He suddenly got very upset. He felt like he had nothing left. Sora, Kairi, and Anna had all been taken captive. He hoped they were all okay. “Oh. So you have a friend on Davy Jones’s ship, too?” She asked. Riku looked at her, wondering who she knew on his ship. “My fiancé, William Turner, has been shanghaied into his crew. I’m with Jack so we can find him.” Riku looked around; there wasn’t anyone else on the deck. “I’m sorry. Umm, do you have any clue where I would sleep?” Riku asked, starting to feel tired. “Well, I guess you would sleep with the other crewmembers. There should be an extra hammock you can use. Well, I’m going to my room now. Good night.” She said as she walked down the steps. Riku followed her down. She walked into a separate room and shut the door. He looked around to see pirates sleeping on hammocks everywhere. He found one empty hammock and got in it. Before he had time to think about anything, he drifted off to sleep. |
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Oh, i have a few questions for you guys. The questions don't mean anything, so don't think your answer will change the story any, k? I just need to hear you guy's opinions & i need some more ideas. -What would you do if i told you there were at least 50 chappies in this first ff? (these answers oughta be good) -What would you do if one of any of the main characters dies? What if Anna dies? What if Riku dies? -How would you finish out the ff? -If you were writing this ff, & you had to kill off one of the main characters, who would you choose & how would they go? -Do you think i should write a sequel to this ff? Answer what you think, k? & please don't write out an essay to answer these questions. Keep it short & simple, or at least try. |
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | make a sequel and i think you should have anna die but when she dies she returns to earth and she still has a keyblade she can visit riku whenever she wants because of the keyblade and she and riku should become girlfriend and boyfriend |
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| Organization Member | You know what the fun is of reading? You don't know what is going to happen! So just let the story happen the way you think it should and suprise us. I'm sure it'll be good! And I'll read all the chapters, don't worry! |
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Trust me, you'll never know what's coming. I don't like ffs where you can tell what's gonna happen. That's a good idea for the ff, though, Trazin. & the name of the ff will come into the story, but it's towards the end. I'll make a sequel, i decided that in the past few days. I've sorta already started on it. & since you mentioned something about it, Trazin, i'll tell you guys this: i cannot guarantee that Anna won't die. I can't guarantee that even Sora, Kairi, or Riku won't die. But, i can tell you...nothing! I don't let stuff spill about my ff, that's just me. I'll post the chappie here in just a minute. |
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Hey, here's the next chappie. Hope you guys like it! Chappie 15 “You! Help them with the sails!” Mr. Gibbs yelled. Riku ran over and did what the other crewmen told him to. It had been a week since Riku walked onto the Black Pearl. He had learned how to do most things on the ship, and he was definitely strong enough to do them. Jack was checking the compass Elizabeth had been using to give them a heading. It was supposed to lead her to the thing she wanted most; which Jack had convinced her was the chest of Davy Jones. Riku had promised to help Jack do whatever he needed to do as long as they found Anna; so he had to help with finding the chest. Elizabeth had told Riku they would eventually find Davy Jones’s ship, but they had to get the chest to lure Davy Jones in. Jack had talked a few times about getting Davy Jones’s heart and making him call the Kraken off; yet Riku was mostly clueless as to what this whole thing was about. “Jack, there it is! The island!” Mr. Gibbs yelled. Jack ran awkwardly to the starboard side of the ship. He spotted a land mass a long way off. “Get us there as quickly as you can. And hurry.” Jack said quickly. Riku looked at him. Jack had been acting really strange for the past few days, like he was hiding from something. Riku didn’t trust Jack at all, so he decided to ask Elizabeth about it. She told him she knew just about as much as he did. “We will go ashore. Stay here and mind the ship.” Jack said. They were a mile or so away from the island now. Jack, Elizabeth, two scraggly pirates, and the man named James Norrington climbed down a ladder and got into the row boat. Riku sat down on the other side of the ship. He was kind of tired; some pirate had snored too loudly last night for him to sleep at all. He tried to stay awake, but he dozed off quickly. “It’s the Flying Dutchman!” Riku woke up to the sound of someone yelling. He stood up and looked where the pirate pointed. His eyes opened widely as he saw a ship submerging from the ocean. The ship looked like part of the sea itself. “That’s Davy Jones’s ship, right?” Riku asked no one specifically. A pirate told him yes as he ran down the steps underneath the deck out of fear. At that moment, only one word raced through his head – Anna. He had to get on that ship somehow. Maybe Will could help him get Anna out. Will would probably want out too, anyway. But before Riku had time to think about how to get over there, he found out he wouldn’t need to. A pirate that looked like it was from Davy Jones’s ship walked out of the mast and appeared in front of him. Two other crewmen from his ship walked out behind him. Riku’s eyes opened wide when he saw that one of the pirates was holding Anna. Her eyes opened wide when she saw him, also. The pirate who was holding her had his hand over her mouth so she couldn’t speak. “So you are the young man who is trying to rescue this girl, hmm?” “Yea.” Riku said, trying to suppress the anger already coming across his eyes. “And why do you see a need to rescue her?” The middle pirate asked. “I don’t have time for your questions, just let her go!” Riku yelled, whipping out his keyblade. “So you don’t have a need to rescue her? Alright then, I’ll kill her. She was of no use on my ship. We don’t need her.” The middle pirate said, taking out his sword and holding it across Anna’s throat. “No! Leave her alone!” Riku yelled again as he charged at the middle pirate. He moved his sword quickly to block Riku’s attack. “Do you not know who I am? I’m Davy Jones! Tell me, why would you risk your life for this girl? And make it a good reason; because the last thing you want to see is the girl saying goodbye for the last time, I’m sure.” Davy Jones pushed Riku’s keyblade back, forcing Riku to stumble backwards. He swung his sword back at Anna’s throat. She could feel the cold, sharp steel on her skin. She looked at Riku. They must have told her they would do something bad if she tried to move, because she stood still. “I need her.” Riku said, looking at Anna. She would have blushed, but the sword at her neck sort of stopped her from even thinking about blushing. Davy Jones lowered his sword slowly. “So you need your dearly beloved.” Davy Jones said coldly. Riku was very annoyed. “What do you want from me?” He asked crossly. “Tell me; has anyone on this ship gone onto that island? And do not lie; it would not turn out good for you.” “Why should I tell you?” Riku asked as anger blazed in his eyes. “Because it wouldn’t turn out good for you. I could kill you here on the spot, boy. Or, I could kill her and leave you in torment for the rest of your days. So answer my question truthfully or give your last goodbye to your beloved.” Davy Jones said as he laughed. “Yes. Now let her go. You got what you wanted.” But Davy Jones didn’t give Anna to him just yet. “You got what you wanted; let her go!” Riku yelled. Davy Jones didn’t say anything. Instead, he turned to Anna, grabbed her by the throat, and lifted her off the floor. “Have you seen the boy named William since he disappeared?” Anna didn’t say anything. Davy Jones tightened his grip around her neck. She struggled to breath. “I said let her go!” Riku charged at Davy Jones again, but the other two pirates stood in his way. He tried to get rid of them, but they wouldn’t budge. Davy Jones looked at Anna with eyes that said he didn’t mind killing her. “Answer me!” He yelled in her face. She managed to say no. He let her go and she dropped to the deck floor. She slowly stood up as Riku kept trying to get past the pirates in his way. “Where is he?” Davy Jones asked her sternly. Anna said she didn’t know. He held out his sword towards her throat yet again. She stepped back some and got out her keyblade. “You wouldn’t dare try to fight me.” He said as he laughed loudly. “I bet I would.” Anna said. She got ready to fight if she had to. Riku saw her in he fighting stance and stopped trying to break through the pirates in front of him. Davy Jones lowered his sword. “Take your girl and get on my ship. I’ll take you back to your town, but if you cause any trouble, I will not hesitate kill you both.” Anna looked astounded. She never thought he would do anything like that. The two pirates pushed Anna towards Riku. She didn’t have time to catch her balance, but Riku caught her before she fell. The two pirates then grabbed each of them by the arm and walked into the wall to Jack’s office-type room. Riku’s mouth dropped when he saw they were now on the Flying Dutchman. Anna knew that the pirates could do that, so she wasn’t surprised. They felt the two pirates let go of their arms, but someone else grabbed their arms again. They turned around to see Davy Jones gripping their arms tightly. Riku’s arm started to hurt; Davy Jones’s crab-like pincher hand was painful. Davy Jones walked into the large mast. Anna and Riku closed their eyes for a moment. When they opened them, they were back by the gummi ship, but on a ship anchored by the dock. It really freaked Riku out that he could do that. Davy Jones let go of their arms and threw them to the floor. “Leave and don’t return.” He said frigidly. Riku and Anna got up at the same time. Riku walked in front of Anna and stood there protectively. Anna noticed that as he did so, a sad look came over Davy Jones eyes. She knew he remembered Tia Dolma. Riku took Anna’s hand and started walking off the ship after he realized Davy Jones wasn’t going to try and hurt them. Anna pulled away from him for a moment and Riku turned around towards her. She looked back at Davy Jones and said, “I’m sorry about you and Calypso.” Anna then ran back towards Riku and they ran off the ship, onto the dock, then towards town. A tear fell from Davy Jones’s eye. He sharply yelled after Anna how she knew about Calypso, but Riku and her were already too far off to hear. He quickly wiped the tear away, walked into the mast, and disappeared. As soon as Davy Jones disappeared, Anna hugged Riku. “You saved me again. Thanks.” She said. “I’m just glad you’re safe. I would have never let them take you away like that, but I didn’t want them to kill you.” He said as he held his arms around her. “I know.” Anna simply said. She closed her eyes. She was so happy to see Riku again. “Let’s get rid of the heartless here so we can leave.” Riku said. He let go of Anna and she let go of him. They started to go find heartless, but Anna grabbed his hand and stopped him from running off. “What’s wrong?” He asked. “You said you needed me. Were you serious?” Anna asked softly. “Yea.” He answered. Anna started to blush, but she stopped. “Riku, what is that? How did you get it? Are you okay?” Anna let go of his hand and rubbed her fingers over where Davy Jones had grabbed Riku’s arm with his pincher. “Must of come from Jones’s pincher hand. It’s just a bruise; I’m fine.” It looked like a bad bruise, but Anna knew that bruises got their worst a while after they first show up on your skin, so it wasn’t at it’s worst. There were little scratches all over the bruise from where the pincher must have cut him from gripping his arm so tightly. “If you say so.” Anna smiled at him and started running into the city. There weren’t very many heartless, so it didn’t take them long at all. In a half an hour, they were already taking off in the gummi ship. |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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| Organization Member | Nice Chapter^^ And it is mean to make us curious about what might happen... It is also a good tactic to keep us reading^^ |
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