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Old November 13th, 2007, 10:55 AM   #16
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I'm not much of a pokemon fanatic either, although, this fic has great potential. It is evident that you can write a good story with a plot. Keep it up!
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Old November 22nd, 2007, 02:21 AM   #17
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Chapter 3 is here after a long bout of writer's block enjoy!

Chapter 3: Preparation

“So what’s our mission today?” I asked, as I had become the newest member of rescue team Absolution and have been studying about the various pokemon for a few days. “Well Draco, we got a post that a Pichu has lost its brother Pikachu and needs someone to bring him back” Machoke said, “And who’s going?” I asked again “It’s me, you and Gallade, the rest have decided to take it easy today” Machoke explained, “Right then” I said. We made it to the pond where Pichu was and he seemed to be in a very distressed state because he was crying, “What’s going to happen to my brother if Alakazam can’t do it?” he sobbed, “I’m sure that someone will help your brother, just have faith” The Whiscash elder said, “But where are they?” Pichu said still crying, “W-Well you see…” the elder began to say. “You called?” Machoke said as we approached, “Ah! See Pichu I told you someone would come to save your brother,” he said with a smile on his face, “Don’t forget us!” a pokemon said from behind, I looked back and saw what I identified as a Chikorita, Charmander and tailing behind a Squirtle.

I stared at the Squirtle for a second thinking “Hmmm he seems different from the other pokemon”. “Team Go-Getters reporting for duty!” the Chikorita said, “Ah Team Go-getters, this is Team Absolution” “Hi!” they all said as we all shook hands. I looked at the Squirtle as he said “Hi my names Squirtle!” holding out his hand, “Draco” I said shaking his hand back, then I communicated to him telepathically “You seem different from the other two are you a human?” I asked, “You can tell?!?” he said in with disbelief, “But how?” he asked, “Because I’m a human too” I said, he looked at me with a dumbfounded look on his face, “Look this afternoon after the job I’ll explain it to you” I said, “Gotcha” the Squirtle said before we both looked back to the elder.

“Very well, it would seem that both of your team’s are up to the task” the elder said, “Don’t bet on it” a voice said from behind, We all turned around and saw three pokemon, which I identified as a Gengar, an Ekans and a Medicham “They aren’t up to the task, this is a job for Team Meanies” the Gengar said in a very blunt manner. I thought for a second “Team Meanies…” and started laughing, “What’s so funny?!?” the Gengar said in an irritated voice, “Nothing just your team name” I said laughing, “Draco!” Machoke said, I stopped laughing, “Sorry just couldn’t help it,” I said snickering. “Very well, I entrust this task to all three of your teams, but make sure that you rescue Pikachu” the elder said.

After meeting up with the other teams Machoke, Gallade and me walked towards the storage house, which a Kangaskhan was in charge of “Hi there Machoke, what can I help you with today?” it asked the voice notably female, “Oh just to take out a few items” Machoke explained, “All right then just tell me what you need and I’ll get it for you” Kangaskhan replied. After choosing what items we needed we walked away, with Kangaskhan shouting ‘Bye honeys!” which made me blush slightly which Machoke noticed and asked “Draco, what’s wrong?”, “Oh nothing it’s just that nobody besides my mom ever called me ‘honey’” I said as I started laughing.

We walked back to the pond but then Machoke realized “Oh no we forgot the Pecha scarves!” “Pecha scarves?” I asked, “Pecha scarves are special scarves that protect you from poison” Machoke explained, “But why do we need them?” I asked, “There are a lot of pokemon who can use poison type moves so it’s best if we go prepared” Machoke said. “Why don’t just go back to the storage house and get some?” I asked, “Because I just remembered that we don’t have any!” Machoke replied, “Well where can we get some then?” I asked, “Well they have some for sale down at the shop…” Gallade said jumping into the conversation, “The shop got it, I’ll get them if you want” I said, “Thanks Draco” Machoke said.

I ran to the shop and saw two lizard-like Pokemon, going through the pokemon that I had memorized, I identified them as Kecleon. “Welcome to our shop!” the Kecleon chimed together, “What can we help you with today?” The green Kecleon said, “Uh yeah um I’m looking for Pecha scarves, three of them,” I said, “Your in luck, we have three left!” the Purple one said, I let out a sigh of relief. I paid for the scarves and began walking away when the Team Go-Getters approached the shop, the Kecleon chimed their same welcome but then they said “Sorry, we’re closed to everyone today”. I turned around and said “What? But you just gave me these scarves!” the team turned around the Charmander said “Oh hi Draco”, “Hey guys” I replied “Anyway what’s this deal with you being closed?” I asked.

“Well you see, those scarves were the last things we had on sale!” the Green Kecleon explained, “Oh, so that’s why” I said, “Oh, come on guys” the Chikorita said, thinking quick I said “Hey, why don’t I ask Machoke if he can lend you something?” “Really? That’d be great!” the Chikorita said. We walked back to where Machoke and Gallade was, “Hey Draco, you get the scarves?” Machoke asked, “Yeah” I replied giving them to him, “Hey Machoke, can these guys borrow some of our things?” I asked pointing to Team Go-Getters, “Sure, we should have something for you guys to use” Machoke said.

We walked back over to the Storage House, but something was wrong, the Kangaskhan was running back and forth of the storage house. “What’s wrong?” Machoke asked, “Oh Dear, I left the shop for one second and when I came back, some items were missing!” “What?” Machoke said, “What’s missing?” I asked, “That’s the thing, the only things missing are items in your storage box!” the Kangaskhan explained. “WHAT?!?” Machoke exclaimed, I looked at the other team and said, “Sorry guys, but I don’t think that we will be able to get you anything” I watched as they sighed, “Oh well, I suppose we go collect some berries or something” the Charmander sighed.

“Oh wait!” the Kangaskhan said “I got something that I saved for you!” she said as she held out a bag and three Pecha Scarves, “Here these are Corsola twigs and pecha scarves, I’m sure you’ll make good use of them!” “Really? Thanks!” Chikorita said as they took the items, “Anyway we better gather some berries for the trip” the Charmander said, “How about we help you gather them?” I suggested, “Really, you’ll help us?” the Charmander said “Sure! How about it guys?” I said looking to Machoke and Gallade, “Sure I suppose we could gather some for ourselves” Machoke said.

For the next half hour, we gathered all the berries we could find until both our toolboxes seemed to be brimming with berries. “Well that seems to be enough” Machoke said, “Thanks for helping us!” the Chikorita said, “It’s nothing, we need to support each other after all, it’s our duty as a rescue team” Machoke explained, “Then we’ll see you at the Sinister Cave then!” Chikorita said “Sure” Machoke said as we walked away. We began walking for a bit towards the outskirts of town, “They sure seem like a friendly team” I said, “Yeah they’re new to this, as well as us” Machoke said. “Well, once we do some jobs, we’ll become more well known and might even get Gold Rank!” Gallade said, “Yeah, but that’s probably still a ways away” Machoke said, listening to their conversation, I heard a commotion, it sounded like Team Go-Getters. “Umm guys I think that the Go-Getters team might be in trouble” I said, “Really?” Machoke said confusingly, then they heard it too “We better find out what’s going on” Machoke said, “Right” I replied.

Walking to where the noise was coming from, we saw Team Go-Getters being hassled by Team Meanies, “Team Meanines, what a stupid name for a rescue team…” I said, “Shhh!” Machoke said as we looked on. “How do you expect to get Pikachu back with a bunch of dumb berries?” the Medicham said, “Hey! Berries are good for you, they’re easy to carry, they don’t go bad and they’re good for ya too!” Charmander said in defense, “Well, we’ll just see about that… Go Ekans!” the Gengar yelled. The snake pokemon snatched up the toolbox and ate all the berries, “Hey what are you doing?!?” the Chikorita said, “Stop it now!” the Squirtle added, but it was too late, the Ekans had consumed the whole box of them except two.

“Grrr, you’ll pay for that!” the Squirtle yelled firing several bubbles at high speed, but the Gengar unleashed a beam of darkness that disintegrated the bubbles, “Now you’ll know what happens to those who mess with us!” the Gengar said in a sinister tone as he fired another beam of darkness at Team Go-Getters. “Agh! I’ve had enough of this!” I said as I dashed towards the Gengar, “No, don’t Draco!” Machoke yelled but I paid no attention to the warning. As the beam nearly hit Team Go-Getters, I sent a blast of light towards the darkness which cancelled it out, “What the-!” the Gengar said looking around, he saw me but only before I hit him three times, sending him sailing into a nearby tree.

“What was that for?” Gengar said in a demanding tone, “You guys disgust me, picking on Pokemon smaller than yourselves!” I said angrily, “This has nothing to do with you!” Gengar said as he charged his attack again, I summoned several fireballs and aimed them at Gengar, “Now you better get lost before I decide to beat the living daylights out of you” I said in an angry voice, “Tch, fine… let’s go Meanie’s” Gengar said as they walked away. Machoke and Gallade ran over, “What was that?” Charmander asked, “I know more abilities than just the one’s that are associated with your run of the mill Lucario” I said. “Thank you for that” Chikorita said, “It’s no problem” I replied, then I looked at Gengar’s team slinking away and said “I despise anyone who picks on others just for the sake of fun”. “Oh they only left two Oran berries…” Charmander said looking in their toolbox, feeling sorry for them I asked Machoke “Hey can they maybe come with us? It could make the rescue easier too”, Machoke stood there thinking for a second and said, “Sure, I don’t see why not” in reply.

“Hey why don’t you come with us? It would make the rescue easier” I said to them, “Really? Is that okay?” the Chikorita asked, “Sure, it would make it a lot easier to rescue Pikachu” Machoke said, “Great!” Squirtle said. “Well we better get moving if we want to rescue Pikachu before Gengar’s team” I said, “Sounds like a plan” Machoke replied, and with that we started to make our way to the Sinister Cave.

Meanwhile…

“Xonic, wake up…” a voice said, “Xonic, snap out of it!” the voice said in a more serious tone. Xonic woke up to a red humanoid insect creature. “Ahh! What the hell?” Xonic said jumping up in surprise, he then realized he was flying “What a minute, I don’t have wings…” Xonic said, then he looked at his hand, it looked like a dragon’s claw. “Oh god! What the hell is going on here?” Xonic exclaimed, “Well it looks like this world we fell into has changed our physical forms” Mega said, Xonic looked over to Mega but saw that he resembled a large lizard with plant life growing on him.

Xonic looking around saw the transformation that each of them had gone through “Okay everyone just say their name so I can identify you all” Xonic said. “Roxas” a creature holding two slightly bent spoons said, “Ray” the red insect creature said, “Elle” a horse like creature said, “…Zetssu” a penguin like creature said. Okay then that’s everyone then” Xonic said, “I suppose we better find out where we are then” Roxas said, “Yeah and also see if we can find Draco around here” Ray added.

So with that they walked along a path hoping to find Draco and also a clue as to where they were.

To Be Continued…
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