K.h.a - Page 22

Silent Avera · May 14th, 2008, 04:03 AM

Thanks Biz, you're so detailed in your responses *_* I'm reading your tale too right now ^_^

*Still on chappie 2....>>; Gomenasi......*

.......Yeah, my chapters can get....long....really long......really, really, really long......(just wait dude, just wait) >_<

That's my main fear, the length of my story, 'cause goodness knows it does no good to have a long story and that's just it - long. -_- That's why when it comes down to it, I try to make the story as interesting as possible.....I'm also worried there's way too many characters........>>;

But then again, I have wonderful friends who are reading my story *Gets emotional*.....

*Goes back to work - AHHHHH!*

Here's a bit of bad news, my dog, my beauitful wonderful dog decided to EAT some key elements of my story that I has written down on paper...............T.T I'm hoping they will return to me in the middle of the night.

Omen? ><;

EDIT: Cef-chan, huh? I'm confused...... ><

Coldman9 · May 14th, 2008, 07:10 PM

Hey I like long chapters, and I don't have a short attention span. I like how you write your chapters SA.

Silent Avera · May 14th, 2008, 10:36 PM

Thank-you Coldman *sniff* I'm not accusing anyone of having a short attention span, it's just a fear I have for a future story I wanna post - and god knows my attention span is about the same capacity of a gnat's which is why it takes me a whole week to finalize a chap - otherwise I'd get these puppies out alot faster

>_<

Ugth, once I get into the world to word arc, things should be much better (I have so much planned! It should be fun ^_^) - for the first arc, I winged almost all of it after the intro with my pitiful guidlines >_< praying it would all just tie together somehow >>;

The chapter this week is looking good so far, read at yer own risk:

[Spoiler]It's a Kairi chap! Whoooooooo! With extra pickels and onions!........
Interpret that as you please - we are getting out of these worlds and into the next!
Y'all know where Kairi is going next yes?
What about Riku? Riku's is an animal mecha! :D[/spoiler]

EDIT: AH! Cef-chan I just understood your post just now >_< sorry

[Spoiler]Tee hee, I just like stuffing them together so they can get to know each other better -
they're gonna be with one another for a long time! There's no backing out now!
Once you're on Sora's crew, funny things will happen to you.......*Ominous wind*......
You might even find yourself suddenly six feet shorter than everyone else O_O[/spoiler]

bizness86 · May 16th, 2008, 01:58 AM

Chapter 4: I listened to Destiny Islands once again, and during the encounter with Avera, The 13th Floor, KH Re:COM.

Progression, and the Destiny Isles trio are finally introduced to peeping eyes. There were a few dialogue quotes which I do not know who spoke what; other than that it's yet other chapter that's easy to follow.
Until Chapter 5,
bizness86

Silent Avera · May 16th, 2008, 05:59 PM

T.T

My laptop is broken. That means my K.h.a files are all in some pit of doom that I can probably never get back.

I'm very sorry. I know I just came back with this story, but now it's going on hiatus, or however you spell that, I don't know, quite frankly I'm in a bit of shock right now because that laptop was very important to me - it had ALOT of important files that I had yet to back up - k.h.a being one of them.

So, I don't know when I am going to continue this story, right now I am just gonna go somewhere and do what any person who has been delt a blow like this does - CRY!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

T.T

Haku · May 16th, 2008, 06:03 PM

o_O I'm so sorry to hear about your laptop T_T that must be EXTREMELY frustrating knowing that you have to start all over again coming up with the same exact ideas about what was going to happen next before your computer crashed on you, but good luck though =D.

Coldman9 · May 16th, 2008, 06:44 PM

If you'd like SA I have another idea that can buy you some time for whatever you need. I'll PM it to you and if you give me your OK I'll go ahead with it.

Silent Avera · May 16th, 2008, 08:12 PM

Thank-you guys for your support *blows nose* and Coldman9 I p-m'ed ya :D

Now that I've cooled off somewhat, I do have a saved file of this story - but's ancient as heck.....I've changed so much......It IS going to be somewhat hell getting all those anime facts back....

*Please god let the data-retrieval work!*

Oh well, I have the true story in my heart any way - this is just really gonna test my skills as a writer-

I shall overcome!...........WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! But I still need to go cry some more! >0<

I'll overcome just a bit later.......

Coldman9 · May 16th, 2008, 08:28 PM

Just read your PM SA. What I was thinking I'd just write it but if you want to add some stuff go ahead after all it's your thread not mine.

Also is that a go ahead on my idea?

Cef · May 17th, 2008, 09:22 AM

Vera-chan knows that if she's in trouble, Cef-chan's here to help! Also, I'm a walking K.h.a spoiler, so...

KIRA FAEC!

>:-7

Xuan · May 17th, 2008, 10:35 AM

Can a good joke make you laugh!

You'll NEVER retrieve your data! NEVER! AHAHAHAHAHA!

is that funny?

...

Maybe I'll change my tone somehow, I still need to think.

By the way, complaining would do you no good. Until then...

*scurries away to make a few good jokes*

Silent Avera · May 17th, 2008, 04:19 PM

Thank-you Cef chan - the almighty walking K.h.a spoiler! Fear her!....Or am I the one who should be afraid? - Nah - You can tell Cef is you want, but use zeh spoiler boxes please ^_^

And Xuan....you're right, you're absolutely right. Complaining will get me no where, and my computer will get checked out today to see if there is a bit of hope to get SOME data back, all I want are my text files....

*About to let soul out* - But mostly I'm mad at myself for being too gullible that my laptop was fine when it was starting to act funny (that and not having what I need to fix it) but anywho, what's done is done, and that's all there is to it. THANK GOD I have a bunch of stuff written out the good ol' fashioned way on pen and paper - and my old, old back up file of the major plot points. I just put so much of my heart in something (way too much for the allowed amount) that when it gets hurt, I'm like down for days and days - thinking I will never get out of my pit of dooooooooom - but then something happens and here I am.

Nefero: She is more emo than Shinji, Tamaki on a spaz, and Death the Kid when his OCD is showing.....
How you are still around Eva is beyond me.....

South Light: Did she also mention that when she can't talk, she gets her duck to do it?

Ah, I feel better. Thank-you for hearing me rant! Onto getting this story back on track!....Again.

Coldman9 - I'm gonna p.m ya back okay ^_^ and everyone, please give what he's gonna do a chance!
It's something to hold y'all over and I am helping him with it :D

I don't know why, but I can already sense some resistence <- too early to spell check....IT"S A MOVIE VERSION! O_O Completely unrelated to the story.....kinda - but I thought it looked fun. Just take a peek it won't hurt anything I swear, and then the chappies will continue as scheduled, let's see if I can make next Saturday possible for a new chappie ( *crosses fingers*) If not then it may take a little longer - I'm going to A-kon - just what I need to replenish my anime heart!

*I am on a dinosaur computer right now....who thought this would out last that laptop....*

EDIT: K.h.a HAS BEEN SAVED!!! WHOOOOOO!

Also my lappy is kinda fixed....I just really need to be careful with it from now on >>;....

Coldman9 · May 19th, 2008, 07:16 PM

Just so everyone knows, it's supposed to be like an anime movie in the fact that it has nothing to do and won't affect the main story. I deeply hope for some support and deffently some CC on this. SA will be making proper adjustments as she sees fit. All in all it should be up in a day or two, I'll double time it for everybody (if my job doesn't get too much in the way)

Cef · May 20th, 2008, 04:15 AM

Hey, Vera! If you need any help, you know that Cef-chan's at your service! ^^

Silent Avera · May 20th, 2008, 03:08 PM

Thankies Cef-chan ^_^ *tear*

And like Coldman9 said - give his little bit a chance - it's cute ^_^ and I'll have the chappies back up as soon as I can - my laptop is, well, now I'm scared to use it >_< - I'm not on it for more than an hour to two hours so I transfer things back and forth - I use my laptop just for spell check now.....>>;

It's amazing how much you learn to appreciate things - huh? >_<

If not this Saturday, then, well, not the Saturday after that 'cause I'll be out of town, but then FOR SURE the Saturday after that and then I'll do them weekly, and sometimes bi-weelky (I'm so behind to finish this up! >_<) You are all so patient! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING ME A CHANCE!

Let's just see how this week goes....come on Tomato (what I call my laptop - I'll let whoever guesses which anime series I got that name from in on a big secret of the story)

Live Tomato live! *.*