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Old 06/18/07, 03:44 PM   #16
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it's so awesome
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Old 06/19/07, 03:48 AM   #17
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Thank-yall sooo much again for your comments!.... Okay, as said in Angel Sanctuary, throw your hands up high and kiss the blue world good-bye!


Intro: Part 6 – Worlds Collide

WHOOSH! Avera's magic was canceled - everyone looked up, and from the center of the main island, dark winds swirled up palm trees, homes, dirt, sand, forming a storm that spit lighting in every direction!

"What’s going on?!," the chipmunks squeaked over the howling winds - Sora, Riku, and Kairi turned to Avera,

"The way is open," he said; Sora gave him a confused, scared look - the storm began to morph into a giant swirl–

"For what?!" Riku screamed. A jet of light spewed from the center of the swirl and twisted and contorted into a vortex that resembled a tornado sucking up the island from the inside out with a resonating roar, the ground began to shake, the sea trembled–just like that night from two years ago.

Avera called out his blades, "You must all go! Get aboard the Gummi Ship now!"

"Guys lets go!," the chipmunks screamed, and they ran to the teleportation point to the ship. The vortex suddenly contracted to a thin ray–then exploded into a bright burning light engulfing what was left of the island, and everything around–

...

Splinters, shards - were all that was left of pillars, thier remains showering down upon Mickey as he shut his eyes from the bright attack–Crrrsck-thk!–Mickey felt something sharp whiz by his ear, he opened his eyes and held up his Keyblade to block as a glint of the glowing whipping blade made contact with his own–Skeene!–the force of both weapons repelling each other shattered what was left of windows, and sent the hall on the verge of collapsing!

Everything seemed to slow as Mickey got a good look past the ribbon-like-blade that extended toward him from his assassin, the lady, her robes flying in tatters around her revealing a tight low cut, knee length, red dress extended with her legs in fighting stance. She had a terrible, wide, wicked smile showing sharp teeth that seemed to get longer as her smile broadened more and more. Her long black and ember hair whipped to her movements about her–and her eyes, they burned black with white slits lined with amber! She opened her inhuman mouth and a long forked tongue licked the air about her–she sent a sharp whip in her blade that lashed it back to her, "Am I what you call an ‘Evil Beyond’ your majesty?” her unnerving double voice laughed–

Minnie and the others rounded the corner and froze in shock as Mickey's Keyblade buried itself in the ground before them, they looked up, and saw the Lady of Red's arms spread dark magic into the walls that crumbled themselves around them–"RUN!" Mickey screamed, but they stayed, Daisy's Reflega* and Donald’s Aeroga* protected them from the dark magic and Minnie let loose Holy* with Goofy on the ready for extra protection with his shield up, but with a wave of the lady's arm, a strong breeze nullified thier magic,

“(*tough inhale*) Is this how you defend your system?!”

Mickey's blade came back into his hand–he blocked another blade attack from behind, SKEENE!, causing the ceiling to fall from the force as Mickey back stepped to his court–“Watch out!”–Minnie and Daisy performed Reflega*, but the lady waved her arm and again the magic once was nullified–"Wake the night*!", yelled Mickey and a beam of light shot from the end of his blade disinigrating the rubble above. Calling back on his own dark magic with everything he had, Mickey opened a Dark Portal* and shoved everyone inside with uncommon strength as the long blade wrapped around his chest like a rope, making him drop his keyblade -

"MICKEY!" Minnie screamed as the portal swirled to a close; the last thing she saw of him, was his smile knowing that his friends, and love, were now safe. Mickey was harshly yanked backwards, but he managed to call his blade back to his hand and broke out of the grip of the ribbon weapon simultaneously blocking – SKEENE! – yet another attack; the lady whipped her blade above her head, and with a flick of her wrist, it burst into corrosive, black flames, blooming lazily over the lady, and her wide smile,

“You sacrifice the source of your strength by sending them away,” the Lady laughed. Mickey went into his fighting stance. “Mh, think that blade in your hand will defeat me? That keyblade in your hand, is only in your hand because of that stupid Protection Deity that kept the real Keyblade Masters from awaking. You’re just a mere placeholder respecting the duties of Royalty, until,” the lady motioned with her finger ‘come here’, and Mickey’s blade zoomed out of his hand into her grasp, “the true Masters were settled into place.” Mickey called for his blade to return…but it didn’t so much as budge in the lady’s hand. “What I’m going to do to you is nothing compared to what I’ve done to others, be glad in that fact.” The lady crushed her grip, and Mickey’s blade exploded in light and shinning fragments. “That Protection, no longer applies to this world, or you, nor will it to your Masters once they come here, your majesty.”

*No–that’s what she’s after?!*

“Mh, I expected more from the Royalty of a system that was chosen to host a Sovereign Royalty.”

*Sovereign Royalty?*

"I really thought that since this system was given such a protective shell, the yolk within would be sweeter to drink, but then to my disgust, I find an imposter holding the weapon of light– the moment I saw you, I wanted you dead.”

"If you want me gone so badly, why not kill me before? What’s holding you back now?” Mickey was using these precious moments to internally gather the full strength of his magic, sensing his time running out…
“Before, I needed to hear the names of the Masters of this system, Sora, Riku, and Kairi,” (the lady’s voice turned exceptionally cold as she spoke their names), “For my own purposes, I must account for every Master slain. I know my colleagues would kill on sight with at least a world of this system breached, and,” the lady went into a relaxed stance and her voice simplified, “I find it rude to kill someone without giving a reason why, though my colleagues would disagree with that.”

… “Why are you after our Masters?”

“Well since you so blatantly labeled me an ‘Evil Beyond’, my purpose is to personally rip them apart, one piece at a time–”

*I know I can’t stop her,* Mickey breathed internally, *but maybe I can buy them some time.* “I know that I was just a placeholder for the Masters, but I fulfilled my duty as if I was one of them, and I was granted one gift in return from Yahena itself!”

"As if!” The lady rushed toward Mickey and whipped her weapon down in retaliation–

"Iriak dna, ukir, aros tcetorp–ahk!” *Ah, ouch, gtk–* Mickey, couldn’t stop now, he, had to finish it, “T-tcetorp, (crack, creak–crack) ot, anehay–”

From the hall beyond the struggle, a portal of dark and light opened upon the incantation carved in the Gummi Ship hanger. Something, slouching in its stride, made its way into the current hall where Mickey was being strangled to death, and a long shadow, stretched from the originator towards Mickey and the lady. “F-fo–ksa, i!” Ahh, Mickey had finished it. The lady suddenly dropped her torture, and smiled pulling Mickey up to her face,

“You waste your breath,” the lady whispered; she laid Mickey’s head back to show–
SKDGE.

...

"Reflega*!" yelled Avera and a large bowl barrier formed over everyone diving to the ground for safety, the wave of heat washing over them, "Hurry!" Chip was frantically resetting his remote to the ship to board five people,

"It's not responding!" he squeaked, and from where the light exploded, a door of fire burst open, and a steed of fire and ruin, a stag of grace and death, a bull of rage and power, and a wildebeest of haste and temper, leapt from the door, thier presence upon the island, the world, everything, burned in wild flames of black and gold, everything began to disinigrate into darkness as they, and thier robed masters aboard, urging thier unruly steeds forward, charged directly towards Sora and the others. The blue wildebeest’s shrill unworldly cry was melodious with the red bull's roar and the black horse's vicious WHIIIIIII!

"For love of life and king!," yelled Dale, "give me that!" He snatched it, smacked it, and it responded -

"Go!" yelled Avera as he took up a double bladed stance with the riders nearing, thier steeds now running with frantic pace towards them. Sora could see the burning eye of the Black Rider looking straight through his soul as they drew thier weapons. The ship finally cast its beam upon them, and the last image Sora saw of the islands, his home, was the riders and thier wild fearsome steeds bathed in the destruction around them, rear over Avera as he slashed his glowing blades–

WUMP! Sora landed on his bum as he now looked about the interior of the Gummi Ship; Chip pulled back hard on a gear,

"We are out of here!" and the ship blasted forward. Sora, Riku, and Kairi dove to the window and witnessed thier world collapse into itself, disappearing in a swirling dark mass that left not a trace of its existence. A space as empty as a sky with no dawn; stars glistening all around as if nothing had happened...Stinging emotions tapered off, and their minds attempted to begin to absorb what just happened.

"We've got to get back to Disney Castle before that crazy woman kills everyone!," cried Dale from thier original mission, "You've got to stop her Sora!"

"Wha - wha -?!" Sora's mind reeled from the double blow.

"Kill?," cried Kairi.

"Radio a signal to the castle,” said Riku.

"We can't, the signal antenna got damaged when our world merged with some other freaky world," said Chip.

"Merged?” asked Riku.

"Yeah, pieces of worlds coming together on stable worlds, it's a last ditch effort that a system uses to preserve its worlds from being eradicated from existence," said Chip.

"It was probably our sister system that merged with us, that’s perhaps why yall’s world got the boot–"

"But I don't remember the By-Laws saying anything about those wild riders, and hey, who was that boy with the wings?" asked Chip.

"I hope he’s okay,” said Dale.

Sora's mind was an internal mess with thoughts pressing themselves on his battered emotions, his world, thier home, was gone–again. Avera, did–did he get away? But those riders...how could he have–and, who the heck is this woman trying to kill his friends?! Who are any of these people?! He held his blade tightly, focusing in on current matters, *She better not of touched any of them.*

"There's Disney Castle!" piped Chip.

"What’s left of it," mumbled Dale. Sora, Riku, and Kairi looked; the world had an amazing black growth consuming it, it looked nothing like its glory before, "There's only one transportation spot open, the hanger, and it's not in the best of shape,” said Dale.

"Everyone watch yourselves, that lady is nuts!" Chip and Dale set the ship for orbit, no way were they docking, the plan was to bring the court out alive and then to head for Wonderland, the nearest world, and sort things out from there.

"Yall stay here," said Sora to Chip and Dale.

"Right,” squeaked Chip

"For a quick get away,” added Dale.

Sora, Riku, and Kairi were beamed down into Disney Castle.

Chip and Dale went to the window, and watched as thier world seemed to get eaten more and more by the dark mass.

Intro: Part 7 – It’s Not So Small a World Anymore

In a state of disbelief, all three walked out of the crumpled hanger to the desolated hallways of the castle. Sora looked all around, was this, really Disney Castle? *This…can’t be happening,* Sora breathed internally. The low moan of a breeze sifted through the hollow hallways, no birds were chirping, no other sound was made, except for the crunch of glass as Kairi stepped forward,

"King Mickey! Donald! Goofy!," called Kairi, her voice echoed in a radiant tone among the dead walls, the stones moaned of exhaustion from the vibration of her voice, "Queen Minnie? Daisy?" The only reply was silence, "Pluto! Come on, here boy!"

"Lets get moving, take different directions, the faster we find them, the faster we can get out of here," said Sora.

"Hold on a sec," said Riku, "we have to take into account that woman, if she's crazy enough to take on the King, then she must be packing some kind of strength."

"Unless she's just plain crazy," said Kairi.

"Leave her to me then," replied Sora, "I'll show her who she’s messing with."

"I think we should stay together, we don't know what we're up against - I mean look at this place, what could do something like this to Disney Castle?" Kairi stated. Riku looked to Sora,

"She's right, we've never faced something like this before,” said Riku.

"Okay," Sora exhaled, and they made thier way down the hall. The ruined structure of Disney Castle sent a deep sad feeling within them; it felt so heavy.

They were walking down the hall where the struggle took place; they walked over the splinters left from the Brooms, where Holy* was canceled, and where Mickey opened the Dark Portal*...The carpet, originally red, hid any and all traces...If the castle could speak to them it would have screamed for them to turn around and run, but it sat, and watched as Sora, Riku, and Kairi passed over these grounds without a second thought. The castle, seeming to know that what it witnessed before may become thier same fate, sat with tension tangled in the air about its quiet, mutilated halls.

The three walked down hall, after hall, after hall, with no trace of the King, Queen, Donald, Goofy, or Daisy, or even Pluto, and thier hopes grew saturated with a deep, choking sadness. "They've got to be here somewhere," said Sora, his voice cracking, "They can't have just disappeared."

"Maybe they got out somehow," said Kairi, her voice high and wavered.

"We'll just keep looking," said Riku, even his voice had a waver in it.

The air suddenly turned very cold, and a long loud sound, like a person with a dead rotted throat, exhaled its high breath all around them. Riku and Sora drew thier blades up, and Kairi had her rose one appear from Riku to her. Down the hallway, in the creases of double doors, a light came on - they dashed for it, weapons up, Sora and Riku burst the double doors – and froze to an abrupt utterly horrified stop as thier eyes were hit with an image that defied what couldn’t possibly be allowed in all that was of the Disney System…



A rude cliffhanger I know but next update will finish off the intro - finally!

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Old 06/19/07, 04:28 AM   #18
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Good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, and then the real story will start.
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Old 06/19/07, 04:34 AM   #19
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Awesome chapter, wow the chapter hasn't started yet and its already this good xD.
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Old 06/19/07, 05:31 AM   #20
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new reader! this is an amazing fan fic. i laughed a few times at what Sora and co. did back at the islands lol. but seriously this is really good keep up the great work!
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Old 06/19/07, 05:26 PM   #21
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This is so great,
I really really really want to know what happens next
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Old 06/20/07, 04:45 AM   #22
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Thank-yall sooo much again for the comments! I'm so glad yall enjoy my fic, and I'll do my best to keep these installments nice and neat ^-^
(Squee! New Reader ^-^)

Okay, here we go, the conclusion of the Intro!

Discliamer: There is cursing here, but it is not said, it is edited like so -> **** the only cursing I'll type are the "d" word and the "h" word and nothing else!
Disclaimer 2: There are scary images, but are only implied, and certain words are left out as not to impose any graphic images (hopefully your imagination won't get carried away), basically I'm gonna dance around it.

Intro: Part 8 – End of the Innocence

Sora dropped his keyblade (turning back to its humble state of a keychain), and fell to his knees. All the strength derived from him of shock. His mind played over and over the reaction, refusing to accept…

Kairi wobbled back and forth trying to stand as if her motor skills had been depleted. Her hands came up to her face to cover the upcoming scream, but none came.

Riku took two steps forward, his legs then refused to move any more. If he got too close, the image may become real. His misty eyes blurred the vision into something even more horrible and he shut his eyes, they do not lie...

They were in the throne room; no other room in the castle was this big. The tattered Royal drapes were dripping. It was splattered all over the high chairs, and the decor, and wall. The roll of carpet leading to the thrones was choking it. The mess expanded out like thick veins easily snaking thier way around on the white marble floor. Sora's feelings were merging with his realization, and upon all fours, bracing this sudden impact–like a child discovering the murder of his parents–screamed, enough so that his outburst seemed to cover Riku and Kairi's grief and horror; his cry turning into uneven sobs. Kairi sank by Sora, and Riku dropped down by his side. Together, even though leaning upon each other, thier strength paled to shoulder an emotion so heavy…The darkness outside produced the sound of rain; the world had joined them in crying.

"Rain? Not very many people can coax the will of a world to feel. So then, that means yall are the denizens of light that protect this system, the one of Change -"

Riku slowly looked up -

" - the one of Security -"

Kairi slowly looked up -

" - and the one of Balance."

Sora slowly looked up at the thrones, and in the left Royal chair, sitting in the liquid, was not this Lady of Red, but a beast, it’s sharp, incisive yellow eyes a piercing contrast to its black body. This creature was large; he sat like a dog upon the throne; however his butt barely fit, so he wobbled playfully.

*I am thee that waits in your home - *

At first glance, he looked like a simple evil cross between a dog, cat, and...rabbit? (His nose, along two wispy long parted ‘things’ that resembled rabbit ears, were the only rabbit characteristics). The creature walked down off the throne on all fours, the liquid dripping from his fur, then stood up to his full height -

*When you think you’re safe, and all alone*…

- it looked like he was built to walk on two and four legs; his long haired wolfish tail flicked about with play. His front arms looked a little long and ended in big paws, his back legs were strong, and athletically built, ending in large three toed paws with very sharp claws. His whole body was limber, but his neck was bent like a hyena. He had a moderate head like a mane-less lion along with those wispy ear-like things, and, freckles up front by his nose, (the bunny nose). On his chin it looked like he had a small goatee. His chest had a puff of black fur, while the rest of his body was all light black with short fur (except for the reddish black that dripped off); his smooth continuity broken by ruffs of fur along the back of his seemingly long bent neck.

*I can’t wait till you fall asleep -*

The creature bent down and gave a kind, menacing toothy grin showing his sharp teeth, and out of all of the creature’s features, Sora, Riku, and Kairi were fixated on his big eyes that were outlined in heavy jet black eyeliner; his bushy brows pressing them into a slanted diamond shape.

The white of his eyes contrasted with his yellow cat-iris’, and his black slit pupils.

-*and bound your soul in my teeth.*

The creature nodded his head up, “‘Bring forth the three that can calm the tide, wake the light, and seal thier guise. They who have seen both light and dark, who have ended a malicious start, and followed the path of a noble heart….And let me add on my behalf, that this By-Law is complete trash. T’was created on a noted wind, to give the ignorant, something, to believe in.” The creature shook the liquid off him, flicking his tail last to make a red period in his poetic statement. “Yes, a most pathetic By-Law, one writ in verse to purposely have its meaning twisted, but in that context, I guess you can say all the By-Laws are rather stupid. I think they do more harm than good really, but they totally screwed over this system, the only ‘Keyblade Master’ my missus and I had the fortune of meeting wasn’t even a Master at all.” The beast gave a giggle from his sly maniacal voice–

*King Mickey.*… Feeling was coming back into Sora's hand.

“The phony Master sent his court away to save them from the assault of my missus, the Lady of Red–”

*So they got away,* Sora breathed internally, *But then–*

“But then, my colleague caught them as they traveled through the Dark Portal, she has such a way of detouring people from their paths, it wasn’t troubling for her at all, and she tore them apart from thier hearts, bodies, and souls, here, looky.” Nefero pointed a claw at them, its tip glowed a weird blue, and an image flashed into their minds - Kairi grabbed her stomach. “By the nauseating looks you have on your faces, you can’t possibly picture such pure, clean, un-soiled beings at their dripping end, and I don’t blame you, this system was always a beacon of uncontaminated light, but now, there is an unmistakenable red smudge over it, as you can see.”

…“You’re lying.” Sora’s felt the feel of his fingers around his blade.

“I would never,” the monster replied in false repulsion, “What reason would I have to lie? This is the truth of the trap this system fell into when it sacrificed its Astral Order in exchange for Protection, mh, not that there was much gall left anyway, you see, from some mousie’s witchy point of view, had some certain people, with a certain weapon, been here to defend the Royalty, they might all still be alive.” – Something inside the three snapped – the beast threw itself into a drama pose, “And alas, what comes to oppose the evil that murdered its Royalty is still not the Keyblade Masters, but some hero thrown jerks” – the beast felt a sting by his neck as Sora’s blade buried itself in the wall behind the thrones, chipping the throne where the beast once sat, nailing the drapery behind it. The Keyblade returned to Sora’s hand, and the beast, was now being stared down by three, very upset –“Keyblade Masters,” he breathed, “Sora, Riku, and Kairi.” All three were on thier feet in fighting stance, shaking with anger from within, each gripping their blades tightly.

"You, are going to pay for this," Sora's voice shook.

“That rat’s wish disguised your entities from me–Oh crap so he was able to make Yahena honor his wish–damnit–my missus will not be happy about this,” Nefero spoke to himself, “She wanted–”

“Listen to me you monster–tell us what you really did with our friends!” Riku yelled.

“I did, they’re dead, they’re gone, their lives came to an end, get that through your heads, or were yall hoping for that rhetorical miracle which will send everyone skipping off into the sunset hand in hand, (*Sigh*), since I can’t really do much worth a flyin’ flip, sit down here children, and let me explain how deep the shelter you have been living under.” Nefero snapped his paw and invisible hands pushed Sora, Riku, and Kairi down. “Believe it or not children, beyond the world borders, beyond this system’s borders, are other worlds and other systems – foreign places native to only the skies themselves. Tell me, yall know of your sister system right?”

The three Masters looked back empty.

“Oh my god, we are not that ignorant on Astral Order one-o-one,” said Nefero quickly -

“That wasn’t rhetorically meant, I want you to answer me–”

“Listen we were never aware of anything beyond this system until today!” blurted Kairi, “Then all this starts happening and you tear our world and our friends out from under us! Why are you doing this?!”

Nefero gave an annoyed smile. “You know I’m starting to like your sister systems’ Keyblade Masters much more than yall – at least they knew that the universe didn’t end at their systems’ border! Speaking of endings, if you want really want to know why we ‘interrupted’ your miniscule daily lives sweetie – you can ask Older Sister.” Nefero flicked his paw again, and Sora, Riku, and Kairi’s suppressors became visible along with a dazzling new array of heartless–

"Heartless?!"

"You can call heartless?!"

The dragon like heartless punctured their claws into their shoulders, “Ahh!”

“Well, as the demon of Heigh-ouri-sokto–the monster of tide and comings–the beast of darkness and ruin, or Nefero, my real name (*wink*), yes I can, ‘cause that’s who I am, not that I’d expect you pathetic ****s to even know any of that - no - Keyblade Masters clueless to their Astral Order? Yall aren’t even worth a ****.”

"****?"

"I'll show you whose worth a ****!," yelled Sora as he ripped himself out of his captor’s grasp and slashed his blade sideways sending a streak of light forward – skeene! – Nefero simply knocked it aside.

“Unbelievable. I’ve seen dogs with more intrepidness than you; have fun picking your comrades out of the Morgos’ teeth,” and in a crack of thunder, Nefero disappeared–

“Sora!” – Sora turned back around to see Riku slice his blade through the open mouth of the Morgos to pull Kairi out of the grip of her captor – WACK! – both were hit by the tail of another Morgos into Sora’s arms. The new and amazing heartless surrounded them, each one looking more vicious and deadlier than the next, but the ones that caught their attention forcing their attention up (while these two heartless looked down) rivaled Darksides in height, and looked like four legged creatures with a giant cloth covering them attached to the ground, which, to make matters worse, was now swamped in darkness. The creatures swayed airily, thier circle yellow eyes looking right through Sora, Riku, and Kairi.

"I've never seen any of these heartless before!" yelled Sora as they positioned themselves back to back in defense of the horde.

"They must come from what, a-another system, or something?" stumbled Kairi. A wolf-like heartless leaped forward chomping the end of Kairi’s blade, trying to wrestle it out of her grip, but Sora and Riku slashed it back; it shook it’s head as if hardly taking any damage.

The heartless crept closer like water upon the sand, the Master’s Keyblades trembling in their hands from the intense pulse of darkness radiating off of the heartless.

Would it all end right here for you?

*What?* - The heartless leapt, rushed, and descended down like a mortician’s cloth.

Are you to die so worthlessly?

All of a sudden, Sora and Riku's keyblades shook, "Huh?" Kairi's blade disappeared from her grasp in a burst of light–

"Oh!"

The room suddenly became dark all around and everything was slowing. Sora suddenly became very dizzy, he stepped forward trying to catch his balance, but his legs gave out underneath him, and he fell backwards as the heartless (now only their eyes visible) swarmed around him. He called for Riku and Kairi but his own voice was a blur to his ears. His limp arms were thrown in front from his own weight, and then, he saw the light of his keyblade flicker along with his bracelet from Kairi – and like her blade, his also disappeared from him in a crack of light! Sora's gasp echoed throughout the darkness, the heartless dissolved away, thier remnants getting smaller and smaller as Sora fell through the vast darkness; the wind, and speed, the freedom…Sora lost consciousness as he heard the flap of wings......

Intro: Part 9 – Till We Meet Again

A heart. A heart was beating; each beat, pronounced and clear, like the beat of a drum to soothe. Sora no longer felt like he was falling, he had no feeling at all, but slowly and surely, that lost sense came back to him. The heartbeat faded away as his sense of touch returned. He was lying on a floor, not any floor of matter, shape, or texture, just a floor, pressure on his body told him he was laying on his front, his head to his side, and on a flat surface. He was barely able to open his eyes, and in the tiny sliver of light that gave him vision, he could see Riku, and Kairi, lying on this floor of darkness; some kind of spotlight was on them allowing Sora to see...."Riku ...Kairi...." Sora's voice said, but was not heard. His energy was drained from his body, but that didn't stop Sora from reaching with his closest arm out to them, the one with his bracelet, "...Riku...Kairi, answer me..." again Sora's voice was not audible. He stretched his arm out to them, surely he was so close, but...

Footsteps, like bare feet on soft tile, came pronounced and clear towards Sora, however, his mind was still set on reaching Riku and Kairi. The folding of wings was heard, and Sora felt himself being moved on his back and picked up as gently as if wind were given a mother's arms to cradle. Sora, all the while with his blurred vision, was fixed on Riku and Kairi now at an angle as he sleepishly rolled his head around to keep them in view; he was being walked away. "No, no, take me back, take me to them, please don't take me away from them, please." But there was no sound, so there was no plea. His arm with his bracelet was still stretched out for them, and Riku and Kairi only got smaller and smaller. Sora had no strength to struggle, much less any strength in the first place, leaving his arm to sink, "Please, let us go together, together, wherever your taking me, take them too!" As Sora's eyes whelped up in tears of the sharp sadness rising within, a soft hand placed itself over Sora's face, and closed his eyelids; Sora then felt so sleepy. The hand gently corrected Sora’s head position, and situated him so he could be carried correctly as well. *Who, is this?*…Sora managed that same sliver opening, but his vision was so watery, it didn’t make much difference. He felt himself in a sudden warmer embrace, like a mother embracing her infant, and then a light, strong...sweet, melodious voice, began to hum, setting the tune for a lullaby,

La La Luu

"La - la luu, la - la luu,
oh my little star sweeper, I’ll sweep the stardust, for you
la – la luu, la – la luu,
little soft, fluffy sleeper, here comes a pink cloud, for you,
la – la – luu, la – la luu,
little wandering angel; fold up your wings, close your eyes,
la – la luu, la – la luu,
and may love be your keeper,
la – la luu… la – la luu… la, la, luuu”…
Sora fell sleep, all emotion melted away in the arms of an.....

Author: Wanna hear it?
YouTube - Lady and the Tramp-What is a Baby/La La Lu(Spanish 1997)
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"(Sigh) The ways are all finally open, and such is an event that will touch across the stars to worlds, and places, and people who never thought that the heavens above them held such a beauty, and imagination far beyond thier wildest dreams." The skies in this world far off had a shooting star fly by above its neon signs and lighted buildings, "So you finally made it to a new system Sora," smiled the green girl, draped in cloth of the same color tone. Her dazzling yellow-almond eyes smiled, "Welcome, and don't be a stranger, you are the one who opened the door to the light after all."

Ragiel, recite for them your creed.

*Light intertwines,
Bends,
And breaks -
Then darkness tastes the ruin's wake,
But hark,
The keyblade's shinning parry -
For we all stand as the burden it must carry*



NOTE: The lullaby La La Luu is from Lady and the Tramp; in no way do I take credit for any portion of the song, I just watched the scene over and over, and quickly typed the words!

Here is the ending pic for the Intro, take a good look, 'cause this is the last time Sora, Riku, and Kairi will be together for a good while (*sniff*).

Sora, Riku, and Kairi by ~Silent-Avera on deviantART

And I hope the Spanish version of La La Lu is okay, I couldn't find the english one! But at least you can get the melody...

Halelluia! The Intro is finished! Now, the New Journey begins on the next installment! *collapses on ground*

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Old 06/20/07, 05:30 AM   #23
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Awesome chapter, finally the introduction is finished and the true story begins can't wait xD.
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Domo arigato! I'm gonna check out the first arc for a bit, but there will be a new installment tomorrow, however the other installments won't come for perhaps two days later, maybe longer, but I'll try to make it worth the wait for each piece! ^-^

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I can't wait to see how this story starts, update soon!
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you're such a fantastic writer!
Aw, they seperate again....
can't wait for the next chapter!
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Yeah the next chapter would probably be really long, but thats a good thing because it shows that you have lots of ideas to work with xD.
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amazing finale to the intro, Silent. i cant wait to read the rest.

its sad to see them separated again. but this story is really good. nice ideas you have, and good luck writing chapter 1
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Oh my, I'm so glad yall liked the ending to the intro, though (*sniff*) they are separated again...
Anywho, here we go! The start of Kingdom Hearts Anime! Yay!
Tee-hee! Thanks for the comments!
Oh, and sorry that it's kinda short, but chapter two is a doozy, so hopefully that will make up for it

Disclaimer: There is cursing here, but before, it is edited properly, and only the "d" and "h" words are typed.


RECAP: After the defeat of Organization 13, and the return of Sora, Riku, and Kairi to their home world, the Royalty of the Disney system was alerted of merges imposing themselves upon their worlds. Such tidings brought forth two Evil Beyonds which desecrated the castle and all those within. Sora, Riku, and Kairi were also displaced from their world with a message from a boy with wings, and the intrusion of the Riders. They arrived in Disney Castle only to find more sorrow. I feared that their fate would end in those walls, but thankfully it didn’t. Something saved them. However now, I feel their fate in the hands of something with a pulsing red eye, and even redder hands. That sucks. – Euphoria


Ch.1 Dive into Destination
“Where is this? Why am I crying? Hey…why is it so sad here?”- Sara, Angel Sanctuary

Across the system, a shooting star traveled without friction from time.


"(Yaaawwwwwwn)." A burly man started up a stove with a small flame. One of his arms was of machine sinew, the other was normal. “Let’s see what we’ve got here.” He was bald, but had thick brushy side burns that poked in under his eyes and ran down into a short pointy black beard. “Mh, I thought we had more than that.” He also had a ‘C’ shaped scar on the side of his right eye, and was dressed in tight black attire.

"(Yaaawwwwwwn)." A loosely built man lay on a couch with his arms behind his head, legs crossed, wearing a simple blue suit which set the perfect accent to his comfort.

"(Yaaawwwwwwn), a bath never seem so relaxing," moaned a young woman with green eyes and short purple hair as she sank into the tub, "(Sigh) why is it though, that I am so relaxed, when there isn't even soap to take a bath in! Aargh!" Her yells resonated down the halls of the Bebop spaceship.

"And the witching begins," said the burly man as he threw some mushrooms on the stove.

"I CANNOT PRUNE WITHOUT MY LOVSHIEL SOAP!"

The gangly man moaned, as did a little light tan and white stout dog; he covered his big ears with his paws and pushed himself further under the couch.

"WE, PARTICULARILY ME, ARE STARVING IN AN ATMOSPHERE WITHOUT LUXURY! HIGENE IS A THING OF NECESSITY FOR SURVIVAL!"

"As are bullets," said the loose man. The fan above lazily spun, and the light from the ceiling lit the living room of the ship harboring the decor and drawl of a bachelor's pad-

"WHERE IS THE JUSTICE IN LIFE FOR THIS?!" with the faint touch of a woman.

Thump - thump - thump - thump - thump - thump - thump - a shadow suddenly obscured the light through the loose man's eyelid's, "Spiiiiiiike!" – WUMP–

"Ack!" A limber young girl wearing a small loose white shirt and tight black shorts with red wild hair jumped on Spike's stomach; her bright yellow eyes were smiling. "What is it Ed?” Spike moaned.

"Ed's Tomato sees a shooting star heading directly for us,” she piped.

"Okay, when it goes by, make a wish that we get some leads on a bounty,” said Spike assuming his position before.

The little tan dog began to whine and shoved itself even more under the couch. “What’s wrong Ein?" asked Ed slipping down onto the ground, looking at the dog crumpled underneath, “Come here puppy." Ed scooped up Ein in her arms, “Come on Ein, let’s go watch the star!" Ed scuttled off into an adjacent room as Spike gave another yawn and began to doze off. So what if they haven't had a decent bounty in a while? The peace -

"**** THIS! I'M GONNA CATCH SOMEONE RIGHT NOW!"-

-and quiet did wonders for the senses…..The light above flickered, *I thought that bulb was just changed,* thought Spike through closed eyes. The ship suddenly began to shake - "What the hell?!" Spike shot up -

"WHAT'S GOING ON?!" yelled the lady as she was tossed around in the tub -

"Spike! Faye -! " The burly man tried to settle the kitchen pots and dishes as they crinkled and cracked -

"Whooooooooooo! Here comes the star!," yelled Ed -

"Huh?!"

"Three, two, one - IMPACT!" Spike dove into the protective fetal position, as did the big burly man, and the lady in the tub - the lights gave a simple flicker......and that was it, the ship stopped shaking, the engines gave a kick and a spit, but kept right on running. Ed with Ein, the burly man, and Faye wrapped in a towel, all ran into the room where Spike was as he sat up,

"What the hell was that?!" said the burly man.

"Were we hit by a comet?" asked Faye.

"If we were hit by a comet Faye, we would not be here right now," said the burly man," Something probably did a jump close to us."

"Ed, didn't you say it was shooting star?" asked Spike.

"Yeah," Ed moaned, "but my feed got cut before I got a good look at it."

"Let’s go take our ships out and check for damage."

"Sure thing Jet."

Spike took up his Swordfish II, a nifty little red cruiser, Jet took up his Hammer-head, a long and stocky cruiser, and Faye (after quickly getting dressed) took up her Redtail, a bulky cruiser that faintly resembled a crab, and checked for damage all about Bebop’s enormous exterior. Ed and Ein went exploring the interior of the ship to the spot where her calculations lead her to believe the star had made impact. "Ed is right where the thingy made impact and...Ed sees no damage," she radioed through a modified walkie-talkie.

"Neither do I," radioed Faye.

"You’re under the ship," Spike snickered.

Ed started to rock on her heels looking about the gritty hall, “I wonder where that star went; maybe it turned at the last second.”
Ein suddenly began to sniff out a scent.

"Hey Ed, hold down the fort while we're gone," called Jet.

"Eh? Where are yall going?"

"I just got a link from an ol' buddy on a bounty."

"Finally," expelled Faye.

"Okay, bye, bye yall," waved Ed at the walkie-talkie.

"Later Ed."

Ein started to bark from another room, "What’s the matter Ein?" Ed called as she scuttled over to a small room with the door slightly cracked, opened it, and gasped. Ein was licking the face of a young boy dressed in strange colorful black clothes. Ed slowly tip-toed up to him and observed his brown spiky hair, and big dark shoes. The boy was lying on his side, and not moving…even from Ein's coaxing. Ed then noticed that there were feathers all around him, white sparkling feathers that made the boy a soft bed. "Wow," she breathed, "an alien."

...

Amongst the worlds of this system, two other lone shooting stars made thier way across the skies, holding within their flaming cores, hearts barely able to sustain a beat....

Several travelers walked a forest path at night.

"Look Inuyasha, make a wish."

"Fine."


A young light brown wolf took notice of one of the shooting star's trail -

"Hey, keep up with us runt!"


"Respond Deities, what are you carrying?,” demanded an elder voice.

“We each bear the pieces of a life. We gathered them together from the South Light’s false heaven. They must come in contact with a stable world or they will lose their forms.”

“Drop them now in the world’s you are passing, attention is needed elsewhere.”

“There are other pieces in South Light’s keep–”

“Forsake them. Both of you know the Laws, now return to your Watch immediately!”

“Understood,” they replied.

The Deities swooped down into the worlds and their guise as stars dissolved away; one burst into the Northern Lights, the other, a cloudy black plume, and from their terrain forms, dropped the pieces to re-form into the beings they once were…


"Rrrrrgh, rrrrgh, come on Ein, push!" Ed was dragging Sora by the hood of his jacket all the way to living room.

Light. Dark. Light. Dark. Light. Dark. Subconsciously, Sora noticed the passing of the lights overhead, and became aware of someone pulling him by the scruff of his clothes, however he was too tired to do anything; his mind was mush, so he was dragged without any struggle. Ed stopped for a quick break dropping Sora's head - thunk.

*Ow!* The jolt sent some energy through Sora, but it was only a spark, and he barley moved to touch his head. Ein barked at Sora's animation. *A dog? Pluto? No, Pluto's voice is softer.* Ed picked up Sora by the scruff again, and continued her way dragging Sora at a higher degree over wires, door ridges, up a ladder (in which she almost suffocated him), over junk that consisted of every pointed, scratching tool of *OWWWW!* ever collected, and finally over some more tortuous objects into the home stretch. Sora, now battered, bruised, and scratched (badly) atop his mysterious exhaustion, thought with annoyed intensity, *Oooooh, when I find out whose dragging me...* Sora, dying to open his eyes, managed that sliver of light again –

Ploop. “Ugh, Ein why is this boy so heavy?” moaned Ed taking another quick sit -

*MUPH! GET OFF MY FACE!*

...

"Damn suicidal *******."

"Should've of stunned him."

"10 million woo-longs down the drain." Spike, Jet and Faye slumped down from thier ships in the hanger and slopped to the living room coming across some glitter-like substance,

"What the hell....?"

“Tsk, someone should have stayed behind to keep an eye on Ed,” said Faye.

The three of them noticed a trail of sparkling feathers leading to the living room. "Ed?" Spike called. No reply.

“She’s probably asleep, I’m gonna finish cooking,” – WHOOSH! – A strong wind blew in from behind rustling up the feathers, and fluttering up the glitter – all three froze in place from the deep chill of the wind, and upon closer inspection, as the feathers fluttered down, they were covered in specks of red; Spike drew out his gun, as did Faye, and Jet.

"Ed!"

"Answer us now,” called Jet.
Thumping footsteps came running down the crossing hall ahead and Ed flashed by carrying blankets and pillows. Spike huffed and put his gun away going after her.

"Hey those are mine!" yelled Faye. The plop of linen could be heard with the muffle of a second voice.

Spike, Jet, and Faye ran to the living room and found the mound of blankets dumped on the couch, and moving. They stood, awkwardly, as they turned to Ed, who was standing like a dog that had completed her master's command.

"Ed found the alien up where the shooting star made contact and dragged it all the way back here!" she piped.

"Alien?" The mound was still struggling with its muffled voice.

"Yeah! It was lying on a big pile of feathers, but he felt so cold, so Ed got a bunch of blankets, so now he's warm!" All four turned to the struggling mound....

"It sounds like a human Ed," stated Spike.

"Like a boy -"

"Like a stow-away."

"He's an alien!"

*Wha -? Who are those voices? Ugh, it's so hot!* Sora grunted internally.

"Get these blankets off of him, before he suffocates," said Spike as he went over and began to chuck the blankets off -

"Be gentle, it might really be an alien,” Faye tossed.

Sora felt the weight being lifted from him, but he also felt hands brushing by–*No! I don't want anything else touching me!*–The last blanket was removed flooding Sora with light and he flung his arms out–both his wrists were grabbed and jerked him up to where he was limply on his feet–he blinked his eyes open, his body still from shock of the strong hold about his wrists.
The light blinded his eyes, but he was determined to keep them open; they watered into four blurs, then melted into silhouettes which focused into four individual people as the light subsided to normal. Sora's eyes were watering so much that when he blinked from his stupor, two tears came down his face. His breath was left hard and uneven from the excitement subsiding in his body.

Faye took a curious look at Sora, especially at that pretty, pretty bracelet around his wrist, whereas Jet was a little more annoyed, *How the heck did he get aboard my ship?* he pondered.

"Its okay,” said Spike who held him up so strong, "you’re alright." Sora's mind went on slow and was focused on the man who held him up. He had dark eyes and wavy dark, dark green hair. He wore a blue thin jacket with a faded yellow shirt underneath, and he also wore dark blue pants. He was loosely built, but obviously there was muscle under his simple attire. Sora began to shake; the energy within him left a sudden gap of strength. "It's all right," the man casually smiled, "Your a real fighter aren't you? You almost bopped me in my face." Sora's mind settled, but was still a blank slate on what to make of all this. "I'm gonna set you down now." Spike slowly let Sora down on his rear with his body wobbling unstably. "Can you understand what I'm saying?" It was as if Sora's mind was on reset, his memory kicked on and went to an insane fast forward trying to get up to speed–his friends–the eyes–Avera–the horsemen–the castle–the Throne Room–Nefero-heartless–darkness–They're gone!–They're gone!–Don't take me away–!

"Catch him Spike!"–KLONK. Darkness.

Above the others, in an invisible form, Avera watched as Spike settled Sora on the couch. It was no wind with a mother’s arms, but Spike made sure Sora was totally on the couch. Avera’s eyes suddenly became misty; he clutched his chest, and then vanished.

...

*Sora? Where’d you go? Are you close by? Sora?...No, please, don’t let his voice leave me a second time!*




Ah, yes first to (fully) arrive on the scene is Cowboy Bebop ^-^, so that cursing disclaimer is gonna be up for quite some time...
And I'm gonna apologize again for it being so short >_<
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I thought that was a very interesting chapter, can't wait to read what happens next.
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