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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | @Acein12: Sorry >< I'll work on length, er, try too ^-^; @Lectori:................Yeah I believe this to be a small length >>; @Haku: o.o I am so honored... @Shadow: Thanks ^-^ and really Thanks guys overall ^-^ I'm glad yall still read despite evil school! >< Anywho, next chappie! I think this is like a big mini or a small small.... Nothing really all that special for this week, but the next four chappies are gonna be like a, eh, mini series explaining a few plot holes...If that's what I think they are >< Ch.9 Following Hand in Hand ???? -> Yeah now this thingy comes into dramatic use. We don’t know where we are! *No quote this time, but a bit of family history* – My brother has known this kid since like eighth grade ( my bro’s in college now), and these two peeps never got along. Seven years later, this boy just comes up out of no-where and tries to start a fight with my brother. Well, long story short, my brother ninjitsued his *** into submission; that boy never did learn that my brother was one who wasn’t going to take crap from anybody. From the grip of South Light’s false heaven, pieces of what makes a life whole were rescued by the Deities. Fate and Destiny had no use for their talents here, however, by the sudden choice of another, they were spared, and by that same choice, were just as whimsically discarded on worlds below. Ancient Forest: Feudal Era. "Ooooooh, my head feels like Beast sat on it,” moaned Donald as he pushed himself up from the moist grass. Mists from the morning sun limited his vision of large moss covering trees that surrounded him. The air was damp, but cool and very breathable. Donald looked all around him at the quiet, mysterious scenery, “Where, the heck am I?" Donald grasped his staff and tried to remember what had happened before, but his memory was scratchy, almost a total blank from the time he, King Mickey, and Goofy boarded the gummi ship from Sora's world, wait a tick,*His Majesty was worried about something*… Donald went into his thinking pose, but his memory was as stubborn as his stance - hold up - he could feel it creeping - wait, wait - something's coming - ! "Hidicros*!"- "(Frantic duck quacking)!" Donald was blown out the way as a slicing wind, carrying the swish of something think and heavy, butchered the trees overhead with loud thuds and thumps of remnants of tree-trunks landing all around; booming footsteps shook the ground with a demonic roar - "It's still up - Inuyasha!"- "Windscar*!"- "(More frantic duck quacking)!" Donald was blown out of his mind - one moment he was tumbling through the air, the next, he made hard contact with the ground - WUMP - THUNK! Donald turned his trembling head to the left, "(Frantic duck scream)!" A large monstrous face with horns and glowing red (dying) eyes looked back at him - Donald freaked, jumped up, and tore across the debris of trees through a clearing made from whatever that wind was earlier, sprinting far into a meadow where he tripped on a stone in a dirt path, “(Duck curse)!” and caught his breath lying on the ground, "(HAH, Hah, hah)." Donald, not feeling that wicked benign sense of anything approaching anymore, just laid flat on the swurvy dirt path; his nerves shot. The morning mists cleared, and the sun climbed out of its morning hover. "Well, we helped out a village, but that tip on Nauraku's whereabouts turned out to be a dud after all." "Huh, that demon looked nothing like Nauraku! Those villagers deserved to lose half thier cattle, maybe it'll teach them to keep an eye on things better - " "Inuyasha - " "What?" - "Sit boy!" - BOUF! "With half their cattle gone their gonna have a hard season, I hope you realize as your down there what they're gonna go through." "Can't be much worse than this." "Kagome, the beads of subjugation only work on Inuyasha right?" "Yeah, why?" "Look up ahead." Donald's blackout was slowly fading away to the soft tapping on the cheek from a gentle hand, "Hey, hey come now, wake up." "Give him some water Miroku." Donald felt his head propped up and water slide down his throat, he swallowed, and opened his eyes. "Hey there, are you alright?" Donald saw a girl with kind attentive black eyes, medium length black hair, dressed in a Japanese school-girl uniform. "Can you understand me?" "He doesn't smell like a fowl demon...He doesn't have a demonic aura either." Donald looked to his right and two yellow eyes blinked - "Quack!" "Inuyasha, get back!" And the girl pushed the half demon away, only to be replaced by a tiny child fox demon with big eyes, two cute ears, and a bushy tail, "Maybe he's a monk who disguised himself - " "Shippo -" "Humans turning into animals is a witchcraft if I'm not mistaken, or some type of voodoo," stated a young man with short black hair in the purple robes of a monk. "So it's a witch doctor?," asked another girl by the monk, dressed in old Japanese summer attire (she too like the other girl had medium length black hair). "I'm a magician, I am a man, and this is how I've always looked!" said Donald sitting up. The group looked at him..."You’re a man and you've always looked like that?" "Are you cursed?" "No," Donald spat; Inuyasha walked up to Donald, he had the face of young man (with yellow eyes) and little white pointy ears, long white hair, dressed in an traditional red Japanese cloth; he sniffed Donald. "Hey!" "His scent, it's so strange. I've never smelled anything like him before in my life." "Your not from around here are you?," asked the girl that was knelt in font of Donald. "No I'm not, I'm not from this world, or this system for that mat…ter," and all of Donald's memories came swarming back in one giant mesh. "Hey are you alright?" "Aw, don't cry." Donald plopped on his bum, *Oh no.*….. His staff fell limply to his side, as big pearly tears streamed down his face. The girl looked to Inuyasha with a sad face - "What? - I didn't do anything!" "I'm not saying you did anything, oh, we can't just leave him here like this.," she said sympathetically. "Come on now don't cry,” said the girl in the summer attire kneeling down by the other girl, "Why don't you tell us what's wrong?" Donald heaved a big sigh through his tears, "My world is gone, and so are all my friends, and this stupid Lady of Red is responsible for it!" Donald leapt up with his anger giving him strength. “If I ever meet her again”….he growled, “She’ll regret the day she ever crossed paths with Donald Duck." "This Lady of Red, she wasn't by any chance some kind of shape-shifter was she?” asked the monk. "Uh, I dunno, why?," asked Donald curiously. "Because the demon we're after can change disguise himself,” said Inuyasha, "Did you sense any kind of powerful demonic aura about her?" "Demonic aura? Ooh, her, her eyes, they made me feel so cold, like the person I was looking at, wasn't exactly the whole person, or, eh, true form,” Donald shook. "Sounds like Nauraku alright," spat Inuyasha. "Your name is Donald right?,” asked the kneeling girl. "Yeah." "Nice to meet you, my name is Kagome." "I'm Songo," said the girl in the summer dress. "I'm Miroku," said the monk. "I'm Shippo," said the little fox demon. "Inuyasha," said the half-demon. "Hey Donald, why don't you come with us?" asked Kagome, "We're looking for Nauraku too." "Do you think it was this, Nauraku, that did this?" "It sure sounds like it,” said Inuyasha, "He lives to destroy people's lives for his own gain." Donald leapt in place with clenched fists, “I’m in!" Inuyasha anyone? ^-^ I squeal everytime Inuyasha twitches his ears - so kawaii! ![]() Comment and Rate please ^-^ Diety North: What made me save this life? What compelled me to disobey my posts? I do not understand. But, I feel I must watch over this person...That which compells me to stray; despite his uselessness. Seritouge will not be please....and why don't I care? Or have I ever cared before? |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | _O: How the, what the.....2 MINUTES?! I like just went away to P.M. and, and....Dude you put my speed reading skillz to shame! XD Glad ya enjoyed it, and I'm sorry about like, um, being so emo with the conversation with Laxy yesterday in your club >< I'll be more responsible. |
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| Organization Member | I don't know that anime, but I love your chapter!!! |
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| Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | Squee! New Reader! ^_^ And thanks-you for your comments everyone! Well last week was fun wasn't it? >_< I didn't even get to read yall's comments if any were made before the cut - WAH! So anywho, this update is pretty big since it contains last week's chapter and the one for this week, so if you've already read 10, just rolly polly on down to 11 (EDIT: at the moment it is not up yet since something wierd is going on with my wi-fi...) I did revise 10 a little, but I dunno, I just have a grudge against it; grr, however really it's pretty much just the same, it's just a tad more emo >.>; thanks to Pan's Labrynth lullaby. Ch.10 Dive into Destination II ???? “A discovery is said to be an accident meeting a prepared mind,” – Albert Szent-Gyorgyi Sleep. I don’t want to sleep anymore….I’m ready. Something inside of me pines to see the light of day, and I, I want to be released. Kairi felt as if she was floating down through water, from a cloud, emerging from a place of endless dream and memories, descending in the warm grasp of someone strong and light. A feather tickled her face as she was gently placed down onto something so very soft. She opened her droopy eyes just a crack, and light poured in causing them to severely water, yet through her watery vision, she made out a dark figure that had knelt down beside her. His face, wavy bangs? She could barely see, then her vision firmed up; he was smiling..."Sora?” Kairi immediately fell back asleep with the cling of her bracelet as her arm settled. "Wow, you really found her on a bed of feathers?" "Yeah, I don't know how she got here, but she's safe now." "Oh Tenchi, your always such a hero! Rescuing young damsels in danger!" "Back off Ryouko - " "Really all I did was pick her up from the porch and place her in my bed....." "Oh...” - "Look she's waking up!" Kairi was slowly brought to by the voices that surrounded her; she opened her eyes to a blurred view of four colorful girls, and a young man, all who curiously looked back. "Hello m’am, are you feeling alright?" asked the young man who wore a green sweater with grey jeans; he had a soft boyish face, almost tough puppy eyes, and short buzzy hair (with a tiny ponytail in the back). Kairi put her hand to her head, "My head, I think - " "Oh dear, someone's drugged her!" "There is a serial killer going around - " "Oh Tenchi, you saved her from the serial killer!" - "Ryouko! Get off him!" Kairi's eyes focused and witnessed a purple headed woman wearing a light purple and pink kimono with bright maroon eyes, hair pinned up on the side,–rip, snarl and tear at a woman wearing a grey long sleeve poofy shirt with a little pink over-dress with fantastic wild spiky grey hair and light yellow eyes who had been swooning at the young man. "Don't mind them,” came a voice from the left of Kairi, she turned and there was a short lady with long spiky pink hair with a purple headband, emerald eyes, dressed in an black shirt with a white over-vest (that had many pockets), and black pants, “They’re always like that, now hold still." The lady pulled out a stethoscope as a little girl with blue hair up in pigtails and bright pink eyes jumped up on the bed next to Kairi; she straightened out her clothes: a blue kimono lined with yellow with a black under-dress, and smiled at Kairi as the pink-haired lady checked Kairi's heart. A peculiar look came over her face…..*How strange.*… The bedroom door opened revealing two more women dressed in police style uniforms, "Oh good she's awake!," piped the blonde with big bright blue eyes, her stylish hair up in a designer ponytail. The other officer, a dark-green haired woman, stood and smiled by her partner, "Thank-goodness, we thought you were gonna become the serial killer's latest victim." "Serial killer?," Kairi asked drowsily. "Yep," said the pink haired lady putting away her stethoscope, “you’re a very lucky girl to have been rescued by Tenchi." "It was nothing really, you were just lying on the porch on a bed of feathers and I took you inside,” Tenchi replied. “Thank-you,” said Kairi (now fully awake). The little girl with blue pigtails scooted closer to Kairi, “Are you an angel? Tenchi found you on a bed of feathers – where are your wings?” The little girl proceeded to poke and prod at Kairi. “I, um – to be honest I’m just…human“, Kairi stammered…….Internally, she recalled the last time she was conscious, and the time when she……was asleep? “Sasami leave her be now,” said the pink haired lady striding over to the young man, “Tenchi, there is something really special about this girl,” she whispered, “She’s hiding something.” The pink haired lady stepped back, and said aloud, “Yep. From my examination, I can tell she is not from this world.” “You sure Washuu?” asked Tenchi. “She’s an alien?!” yelled the blonde. “No she’s an angel!” piped Sasami. “But where’s her wings?” “Alright- that’s enough!,” clapped Washuu, “This girl needs rest so all of you out – out-- out!”- “Hey!” – And Washuu shoved them all out (except for Tenchi) and locked the door. “There we’ll be able to talk in privacy now.” Washuu made a fist and banged her hand against the door. “Ma’m, are you sure you’re feeling okay?” “Yes,” answered Kairi stiffly, “Um, can you tell me where I am?” “This is the Masaki Household,” said Tenchi, “My home.” “No. I mean what world am I on?” Tenchi took a subtle glance over Kairi “….She’s really not from this world.” “And that comes as a surprise to you? Look at us,” said Washuu, “At all the other females in this joint.” “No I mean, she’s not, eh, I don’t know how to describe it, m’am I’m sorry for being so upfront.” “It’s okay.” “I think what Tenchi is trying to say is that you are not a run-of-the-mill human ,” said Washuu. She walked over and casually pointed at Kairi’s heart. “Is something wrong with her heart?” asked Tenchi. “I feel fine,” said Kairi in a high note. “I’m sure you do feel quite fine young lady. Anyone would feel fine with two heartbeats.” HUH?! “She’s pregnant?!” “THERE’S NO WAY I’M–” “No no no, nothing of the sort,” stated Washuu rubbing her ears, “It’s like your heartbeat has an echo to it. There is something beating within your heart, with your heart. Think of it like a heartbeat within a heartbeat.” Kairi’s hand went over her chest. “A heartbeat within a heartbeat?” Kairi’s voice was high and elated with disbelief as tingles rushed throughout her body to try and detect anymore double abnormalities. “Yes, there is defiantly something echoing within your heart, but don’t worry young lady, we’ll figure out your case, for now, why don’t you tell us your name and where you came from?” “My, my name is Kairi, and I’m from…from….eh, I’m from–!” But Kairi’s throat would not allow her to say Destiny Islands…. “The Natakschoule System?,” asked Washuu carefully. “Huh? No, uh, um the, Disney, System….No, I’m not from there.”….Kairi felt so strange, her answer spoke from her mouth, not her mind…She had become a melting pot of unnerving and confused emotions, icy feelings, she was free-falling in place. The grasp on her chest became tight as she felt herself become separated from her own conscious… “Oh, eh, I…” “Calm down Kairi,” said Washuu; Tenchi took a seat next to her, “Everything will be okay, you’re here, and you’re safe. If something is after you, it can't find you here, this a very, very secret world." Kairi's mind suddenly felt heavy: *Safety was all we ever wanted for you. Safety was what we sacrificed for you.* Kairi’s stomach dropped, and the hair on the back of her neck stood straight up. Her heart beat furiously. That voice, it just suddenly spoke within Kairi’s mind, and chilled her to the bone. It sounded so sad, so wounded, where did it come from? Within? From within her heart? Why? What is this? Where’s Sora? Where’s Riku? Where’s Destiny Islands? Her home. Where was her home? Why couldn’t she, why couldn’t she – “What is happening to me?!” Kairi began to cry. Tenchi placed an arm around her. The girls that stayed, and quietly listened outside the door, felt sorry for her. “Poor thing,” said the purple haired lady. And yet another lost soul has been gathered here,” said Ryouko ( the grey haired lady). “Oh, I hope another girl doesn’t fall from the sky!” said the blonde, “It’d be bad if they hit their heads!” “Why don’t you go outside and place some pillows just in case?” teased the green-haired officer, but a large sob from inside the room snapped her out of her play… “Sora. (*sob*) Sora, where are you? Why are we all separated again?” Her bracelet glistened for her, but that’s all it did. Ah, Tenchi Muyo has arrived ^-^....In kinda a sad atmosphere >< Once again, here's the vid with the lullaby that helped inspired this chappy:YouTube - lullaby Okay 11 is not up yet because my computer is acting dumb - please comment anyway, then I won't have to edit ^_^ Thanks! I shall return tomorrow with 11! 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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | >_< I know Acein, I'm sorry, but ah, here's some new stuff ^_^, and this one is my favorite ^^ Ack! I didn't announce Tenchi Muyo in the end >< Thanks Haku, that helped remind me >>; Meep, kinda long...I guess >>; Disclaimer: Cursing. Ch.11 Following Hand in Hand II ???? Some history of mine this time again, I emailed this boy one day that I haven’t heard from in like forever, and we picked up where we left off five years ago...then we lost contact again, perhaps this time, forever. From the grip of South Light’s false heaven, pieces of what makes a life whole were rescued by the Deities. Fate and Destiny had no use for their talents here; however, by the sudden choice of another, they were spared, and by that same choice, were just as whimsically discarded on worlds below. Thunder rumbled in the distance as droplets of rain began to wet a city ruined by nature and man. Grey skies carried a light cold rain as people walked about the broken side of the city looking for shelter, or just a drink to make them think there were somewhere else. In the back alley of the slums, the rain awoke Goofy who was leaning against a rusted stairwell. Aching, confused, and now sopping wet, Goofy suddenly sprang to his feet– and bumped his head on the stairwell above–"Yowch!" The rusted metal's echo of impact scared a few mice away from looking for a meal in the trash. Goofy looked all around him, but the coldness of the rain and air about him focused his mind on shelter; he picked up an old cardboard box and used that as a would-be umbrella. "Gawrsh, were in the world am I?," breathed Goofy looking around at the alleyway and the tired buildings that created it. He walked out onto the street: people went about in trench coats, umbrellas, or simply the bare cloths on thier backs, there were no smiles, all looked as the turmoil in thier lives had crushed thier spirits long ago. A street bum pushed by Goofy almost knocking him over–"Oh excuse me,” replied Goofy–“Oof!"–Another person pushed Goofy aside– "Get out of my ways–" "I'm sorry–oof–" "Watch it ya tall freak!"– "Oh excuse me–ack!–" A big burly person pushed Goofy into the street–"AAHHHHH!–" forcing him to dive out the way of an oncoming army jeep and onto the other (and more peaceful) side of the street; he clung down onto his cardboard box completely covering his head and shoulders, "Oh this certainly is very rude place I'm in, (sniff)," cried Goofy, "How did I get here?" Goofy tried to piece his broken memory together…but he then, heard the deep growl of a big dog. Goofy raised his box a bit, and a little ways away, as his vision was raised, a huge dark blue dog with a spiked collar and the brightest deep blue eyes a dog could have...barring all it's teeth to the gums at Goofy growling a vicious snarl, "Uh," Goofy shook, "Na–nice doggy..." Next, Goofy heard the one-two cock of a hunter's gun: he raised his box higher to an old man holding the dog's leash in a tan trench coat with a brown hat–pointing his rifle directly at Goofy–"DON'T SHOOT!" Goofy screamed throwing the box off of him– "What the hell?!"–The big dog leapt forward, yanking its leash, causing the gun's aim to be thrust into the air as its shot rang out–people screamed and ran for cover as the big blue dog tore after Goofy–and Goofy ran for all he was worth! "Get him! Get that ******* Blue!," the old man called after his savage dog. "What did I do?!" Goofy blurted as he ran around the corner of the street knocking down a trash can, the dog hot on his heels snarling and barking–the old man rounded the corner as well, aimed his gun and fired–Goofy was pulled into an alley as the shot grazed his shoulder–the dog slid in water, unable to gain it's traction to make such a hard turn, but quickly recovered– "Come on! Jump! Jump with me!"–Goofy barely had time to see the flash of an adolescent boy with short curved brown hair, brown eyes, yank him by his arm up, up, jumping on the walls of the buildings side to side, pulling Goofy up atop to the roof–"Shh!" The boy pulled Goofy down as the old man and his dog entered the alley way– "Where ‘es he?–Where did he go Blue?," they heard the old man huff; the dog sniffed around then whined–BAM! Goofy and the boy jumped as a gun blast rocketed by thier ears–"Damnit! Damn wolves! Damn them all!" The old man stomped away with his dog in tow. The boy and Goofy peeked over the side of the building to make sure that they were gone. "Man, you've gotta be more careful," said the boy, "You can't walk around looking like this, most people will probably shoot you on sight, like that old man." "Huh? But this is how I've always looked," said Goofy's wailing voice looking at his savior, he wore a faded maroon line shirt, and light grey-green pants tucked into dark snow boots; the boy took a good look at him back, "Whoa, I've never seen someone like you before (the boy sniffed him), wow, what a weird scent, you kinda smell like a wolf, but you sure don't look it," the boy chuckled, "so what are you? You look like a cross between man and us." "Us? What are you?" "You tell me first." "Uh, well, my name's Goofy–" "Wait, your name's what?" "Goofy, and I'm captain of the guards for the Royalty of the Disney System." The boy looked at him. "O-kay, well, um my name's Toboe." "Nice to meet you Toboe," and Goofy held out his hand for a friendly shake, Toboe took it, "Thanks a whole lot for saving my life back there." "Aw it was nothing," Toboe blushed, "Hey, where are you staying?" "Gee, I don't know, I just got here." "Well, you better come with me then, you won't last five seconds out here on your own." And so, Toboe led Goofy across the tops of the buildings to the outskirts of the city, pass a graveyard of cars, and into a dead forest. Goofy all the while was chilled to the bone from the rain (which had stopped) and the dreary images that he quickly averted his eyes from. They finally stopped in front of a hollow tree far from the city, and within it, was a young sleeping maiden. She was dressed in pearl silk that stretched partially over her skin; she also wore a simple deep pink jacket-shawl that went down to her waist. Her short pink hair accented her fair skin which gave the touch of a child, though she was clearly older. She laid in a calm sweet sleep. "Cheza, wake up, there's someone I want you to meet," said Toboe gently. She awoke, and Goofy caught his breath at her gorgeous fully red eyes as she leaned curiously towards him; Goofy froze under her light touch upon his face. "This one, this one is indeed a friend," said Cheza with a little childish smile, her voice as soft as a whisper, Goofy gulped, "I feel, that you are a protector, aren't you?" "Well yes m’am I am, I protect from the darkness,” said Goofy now blushing. "You are here to protect," Cheza smiled. "Well, I guess that’s why I'm here, I don't really know how I got here, my memory is all scratchy since I left with my friends to go back to our castle." Toboe jumped in front of Cheza, "Do you work for a noble?!," Toboe gasped. "It is alright Toboe," said Cheza petting him, "he is our friend." Toboe settled by her side. Goofy suddenly heard padded feet dash through the dead forest–a flash of gold eyes–white fur – teeth!–WUMP!–"Kiba do not hurt him!" Cheza pleaded. In a flash, Goofy, once again, found himself starring down the sharp teeth of a, wolf. The white wolf removed himself, Goofy's vision blurred, and a young man with lengthy brown hair, blue eyes, wearing a dark green jacket and jeans, looked back at him with a cold stare; he looked to Toboe who flinched, "Who is he?", the young man asked in a stern voice. "A friend," said Cheza, and Kiba’s expression immediately dropped it's coldness to a simple look, and accepted Goofy as is; Goofy stood back up, shaken. More rustling was heard from the brush and two more young men stepped out and froze at the sight of Goofy, "Who the hell–?" "What the hell is that?" "Tsume, Hige, it's alright, Cheza said he's a friend," Kiba stated, his voice was like a soft and strong whisper. Tsume, the young man with yellow eyes, and buzz cut silver hair with a tiny ponytail, wore tight black sleek revealing cloths, and gave a look of confusion and almost disgust at Goofy. Hige, the other young man with brown eyes, wavy light brown hair, wore a yellow sweatshirt and light grey sweatpants, (he also fashioned a large collar around his neck), and gave Goofy a look that was all confusion. "Can you tell us what this friend is?," asked Hige. "A friend," piped Cheza and she gave a big smile, Goofy merely wobbled in place, trying to keep from fainting as his eyes blurred in and out of focus revealing something very special about the young men: they were wolves, disguised as humans. Goofy's vision finally settled on thier human guise. "Kiba, they're coming this way," said Tsume tearing his attention away from Goofy. "Then we should get a move on," replied Kiba. "Is this ‘friend’ coming with us?," asked Hige. "Yes," smiled Cheza, Toboe smiled at Goofy who gave a weak smile back. Kiba, Tsume, and Hige looked at Goofy with an indifferent face now that Cheza had her say, but the fact still stood, Goofy looked goofy, and that apparently wasn't about to change. "So how are gonna do this?," asked Hige, "I mean one look from this guy and we'll have bullets breathin' down our backs." Tsume looked around; the wind had blown in some garbage from the city. He stepped to the side, picked up a brown bag, and poked two holes in it, "Here," Tsume handed Goofy the brown bag, "This does not come off until we are totally clear of things." Hige intercepted the bag, took out a marker from his pocket, and wrote on it 'leper'. "There, now everyone won't even think of bothering us." said Hige triumphantly. Toboe snatched the bag from Hige, turned it inside out, and gave it to Goofy, making sure to put the leper word was on the back; and Goofy, put it over his head, the two cut out eyes giving obscured vision, "Well?" "It's okay," moaned Goofy. "Let's get going," said Kiba. Cheza gave a smile at Goofy as Kiba walked her along. Goofy started to walk, when Tsume suddenly stomped his foot in font of him, "Back of the pack," he said, and walked on. Toboe walked with Goofy, unable to see Goofy trying to fight back thick pearly tears. Hurray for Wolf's Rain! Boo for Tsume being mean to Goofy. =/ Ah, next week, will show one last person, and yall can probably guess who it is ^_^ Comment and Rate please ^-^ |
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| Organization Member | Two chapters!!! They are amazing as always! |
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| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | What the.....I have no clue at all what "wolf rain" is....where the heck do you see all this anime. Great chapter and all. |
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