Forsaken Twilight (continued)

[Wraith]

It's BACK baby!!!!

Anywho, sugar high gone, I think I'll continue my fan fic, although I don't quite remember the first three chapters. Anywho, I'm gonna continue it, WHO'S WITH ME!? Anyone!? Agree!? Yes!?

I'm gonna re-write it, 'cause I remember the general stuff I did, so.. yeah, 1 Prologue, and 4 chapters will be up by the end of today, yay! Fans of the original version, who remember it, will notice some changes, sorry, I only occasionally have photographic memory, but I hope you like the changes!

Prologue:

More than a decade after the Sora closed the door and peace has spread. A new world has also appeared, a world that protects the door. This is the City of Light. With the Heartless gone, thanks to Sora, the Heartless have become nothing more than a story to to children to keep them in line, like the Boogeyman. But now a new danger lurks on the horizon. Twilight hour has struck and who will be there to stop the Darkness, once the door has been opened.

Chapter 1: Running Blind

It was the dead of night and a storm was brewing on the horizon. The City of Light was in the midst of sleep, in the throws of midnight. The storm grew dangerously closer. On the outskirts of town, a lightning bolt struck outside a dark window. With a sharp cry, Tai bolt upright in bed. "What... Lightning?" This was something unheard of, a storm in the City of Light, it never stormed here.

Quickly, Tai got up and threw on some clothes from the biohazard he called a room. He threw on baggy black jeans, as he searched for a shirt. Another bolt of lightning lit up the room. Tai was your average 18 year old boy. He was tall, 6'2", with messy purple hair. His red eyes had always made people uneasy. Quickly, Tai found a black jacket/shirt and threw it on. (Tai's Appearance, Based on this dude)

Tai bolted out of the house and looked inward, towards the city. Nothing... So, the storm wasn't there... Then where was it... With a start, Tai spun around as another bolt struck. There it was... An eerie storm was working it's way towards the city, filled with lightning bolts, but no rain. That's interesting, he thought to himself.

Suddenly, Tai heard movement behind him. He quickly spun around and looked into the shadows. They were moving... "W-who's there?" Suddenly, yellow, glowing eyes began to form in the shadows as the storm moved closer. Were these Heartless? But they were only stories... "Y-You're not real! J-just s-stories!!!" Suddenly a Shadow heartless leaped at him. Tai quickly put ups his hands, sheilding his eyes as a lightning bolt struck the Heartless.

Run...

"huh?"

RUN...

Suddenly another lightning bolt struck a second Heartless. Tai decided to take the voice's advice and ran. He ran deep into the City as the shadows moved around him while lightning struck, the storm coming closer. This wasn't good, and he was in trouble. Tai made it to the clock tower and ran to the top, beside the clock face on the outside. He ran to the edge and quickly stopped.

"Crap!"

Tai quickly turned around, just in time to see more Heartless form. he took a step back as the Heartless leaped at him.

Look out...

Suddenly a lightning bolt struck between Tai and the Heartless, the shockwave knocking Tai off the tower and into the air. Tai watched as the clock face moved more distant, as the world faded around him...

[Wraith]

Tell me what you think of the revised version, then I'll add more later.

[Arian]

*drools*

I hate it

.....

I cant lie can I ...... I love it :D

[Yun]

...thats so, i mean just
uhm...i...agree with Ariana ^^
i love it too...is there anything else you could say about it?
NO,...of course not!

[Destiny]

^_^ Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This time it had better not get deleted or someones gonna get pounded!!! lol

This is one of my favs!

[Wraith]

Nice... Forsaken Twilight: Revised Edition seems to have gone over well, time to continue...

Chapter 2: Boulevard of Broken Dreams

The world was complete darkness to him. Nothing... Complete and utter nothing... Tai was lost to darkness. He closed his eyes, hoping it was just a dream. While floating in the darkness, he wondered what was going on. As he opened his eyes, he wanted nothing more than to see the ceiling of his room. But when his eyes opened, he was still in darkness.

Your world...

Tai bolted, flipping around in the air.

"Who's there?"

Your world... Is in Darkness...

Tai frantically looked around.

"I don't know about you, but disembodied voices is where I draw the line!"

Don't be afraid...

"Easy for you to say..."

With a scoff, Tai crossed his arms and closed his eyes. Suddenly, gravity came back into existance and he started falling again.

"Why me!?"

He cried out as he continued to fall. Suddenly, he slowed and rotated in the air, landing softly on an invisible floor. "Wha?" Tai quickly looked around, starting to get seriously freaked out.

It is time... Wake up... Seize your destiny...

"What are you talking about? Who are you?"

Suddenly, the invisible floor he was standing on shattered and he fell again. He let out a cry as he fell faster and faster, the world fading back into existance. Only this time, he was only a couple feet from the ground. He landed hard, coughing up some blood. He wiped his mouth and sat up.

"Thanks, whoever you are..."

He coughed and stood up. He looked around. He was completely surounded, and completely alone.

Darkness... You are not alone... In the Darkness...

He suddenly felt a warmth in his hand. He looked down at his hand and it was glowing.

Seize your destiny... Keyblade...

"Keyblade?"

Tai looked down at his hand again.

"...Kingdom Key..."

Suddenly, Kingdom Key formed from the glow. Completely shocked, Tai stared at it for a moment, then stood straight, holding it at his side.

You are not alone in the Darkness... Find your light...

[Destiny]

Yaaaahhhhhhhh, more more! I'm a fan fic fanatic, lol ^_^ (I don't like cliff hangers......lol) ^_^

[Arian]

*Pokes wraith*

Please post the next part :D Pwetty PWease

[Wraith]

Chapter 3: Out of Control

With a rush of air and light, the storm came crashing down all around him. The series of lightning bolts shocked Tai back to reality. He was surrounded... Darkness... There was no escape, and there was no help.

You are not alone...

Tai thought about that... Not alone... Maybe being alone was what he wanted all along... No more restrictions... But then again, he didn't want this either. A series of lightning bolts struck the Heartless in front of him. This wasn't looking good.

Use the lightning...

Use the lightning? How the hell do you use lightning? Tai was getting more confused with each passing second. Suddenly, without warning, a Shadow Heartless leaped forward, attacking. Tai managed to dodge the attack, closer to tripping then dodging, and falls to the ground as a lightning bolt strikes next to him. He groans as he opens his eyes to see a series of Shadows falling through the air towards him. "Ah... crap..."

With that, Tai rolled to the side, avoiding the attack, then managed to stand as another bolt struck. "Oh yeah... The lightning..." Tai looked down at his Keyblade, after staring at it he figured out what he must do. "A lightning rod..."

Tai quickly raised the keyblade into the air, allowing a bolt of lightning to strike the blade. He lowered the Kingdom Key an dlooked at it. The power of the lightning coursed through the blade, sparking into the air. Suddenly, the Heartless swarmed around him on all sides, even through the air. "CRAP!" Was all Tai managed to say as he raised the Kingdom Key above his head defensively. The resulting blast was a mix of lightning and a shockwave, destroying the Heartless and knocking Tai onto the ground.

That's it, keep going...

With the voice's words still in his head, Tai stood and allowed the lightning to re-charge the blade. He lunged into a series of Heartless, sending bolts of lightning out like a gun. Unfortunately, Tai was struck from behind, knocking him to the ground. The Heartless began to swarm him once again, now that he was defensless. It's all over, he thought.

You are not alone in the Darkness...

Suddenly, the sound of a weapon and destroyed Heartless came, seemingly from all directions. Tai heard a voice call out Thunder, followed by a series of lightning bolts. Without warning, the Heartless in Tai's feild of vision burst apart, leaving the image of someone in an Unknown cloak, with their back to Tai.

Don't worry... You are safe...

Tai reached out towards the person, just as the world faded and he lost conciousness.

[Arian]

I wont say Bis Bis Bis, becouse then the entire forum will reset again so you WILL have to post everything again but still:

BRAVO :D

[Wraith]

I'm saving it this time

[Arian]

:D YAY *Aplaus* BIS BIS BIS :D

[Wraith]

What does BIS mean?

[Destiny]

Yaaahhhh, i remember this part, awwwwwww, can't wait for more. ^_^
But..... i can't remember who the person is.............argggg, all the more reason to want more!

If you know Darkened Heart she'll say i'm obsessed with fan fics, lol

[Wraith]

I've only done 3 Chapters, in the original too, I haven't revealed the dude yet!