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Old January 31st, 2005, 01:51 AM   #16
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Ya but in the other one you wrote, you had more info on him, well not like bio you know but just a little bit more anyway, and i had guessed who he would be, thats what i had ment, lol.
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Old February 1st, 2005, 12:13 PM   #17
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Quote:
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What does BIS mean?
Again I hink

Bis Bis Bis is what people saywhen they want something to be repeated, when they like it so much that is
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Old February 6th, 2005, 07:51 PM   #18
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euhm

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Please write some more PEULEASE*poke poke*

((I just love poking ey))
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Old February 6th, 2005, 11:20 PM   #19
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Yeah, you seem to love poking... poking me to be exact, anywho, I'm at a mini writers block, so Ariana... I'm stealing your idea, and making an RP of this, hopefully it will give me ideas.
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Old February 7th, 2005, 04:53 PM   #20
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Joined your RP
to give ya ideas
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Old February 15th, 2005, 02:18 AM   #21
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(I AM........................INSPIRED!!!! Yun, you shall be the first character to be worked in. Don't worry if it doesn't seem exactly like your character, but I'm molding it into my fic.)


Chapter 4: I Never Told You What I Do For A Living

With a start, Tai sat upright and opened his eyes.

"Ugh... My head..."

He reached up and scratched the back of his head.

"What happened?"

With great effort, Tai managed to look around at his surroundings. He was in the middle of town square, in front of the Clock Tower. Suddenly, an image from the night before flashed into his mind.

"That was just a dream... Wasn't it?"

Then an image of the cloaked figure came into his head.

"Wooh!? Where!?"

Tai jumped to his feet, searching his surroundings. Where did that man go, who was he, and why wasn't I dead? These were the questions racing through his mind. He looked down at his hand, in his grip he found the Kingdom Key.

"You've gotta be kidding me..."

Suddenly, a loud cry came from behind him. It was more of a happy cry then a sad one.

"TAI!!!!!!!!"

A female voice called out from behind him, strangely familiar. Then it hit him...

"Oh god no!!"

The sound of two running footsteps could be heard before Tai was tackled to the ground by his childhood friend, Julia. Tai groand out, "Why me!?", as he got back to his feet, followed by Julia.

"And your so happy because...?"

Julia smiled and showed off her new outfit that she was wearing.

"What do you think, Tai? My dad just bought it for me! He's given me a huge allowance, in fact, I didn't know we had this much!"

Julia shined like a gem, happy in her bliss. Tai was the observent sort, and he had seen Julia's father when he thought no one was looking. He was in bad shape and getting worse. This must be his last gifts to julia, Tai thought, his farewell present. Tai just smiled at Julia.

"Sometimes ignorance actually is bliss..."

Then he spoke louder, so Julia could hear him.

"It looks great Julia, I'm happy for you."

He smiled, forgetting all about the night before.

"I know, isn't it just great! Hey... Tai... What's that weird thing..."

Of course, Julia was pointing to the Kingdom Key.

"Oh this... It's nothing... Don't worry about it..."

He opened his hand, letting the keyblade fall. As it fell, it became a glow and dissappeared. Julia stared at where the glow had been.

"I know what that is! That's a keyblade, like from the stories! Where'd you get it Tai!"

Tai smiled, shaking his head.

"Don't ask, Julia, it's too long of a story. I should get going, see you around..."

"Yeah, see you later Tai!"

With that, Julia ran off, probably heading back home. The smile faded from Tai's face as he turned and began his walk home. What was going on? Who was it that saved him? Was it over? He doubted that it was over. With a groan, Tai arrived home to see that his parents weren't home. Knowing them, they had probably run off to the police to file a missing person's report.

"Just my luck..."

Tai opened his front door and kicked off his shoes as he closed the door. Rubbing his neck as he walked into the living room, Tai thought over what had happened during the night. He was about to sit down when an unfamiliar voice came from behind him.

"Hello again, Keyblade Master."

At the sound of the voice, Tai spun around...

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Old February 16th, 2005, 06:37 PM   #22
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C'mon!!! Write more!!! More, more, more! Never ending, you shall write good stories forever. MWAHAHAHA-*cough, cough, COUGH* Ahem.

But it is great, please do write more.
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Old February 16th, 2005, 09:06 PM   #23
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What an honour to see Julia in your awesome fanfic ^^
i have to agree with DragonRiku: WRITE MORE! *lol*
it's just awesome and i want to know what happens neeeext!
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Old March 18th, 2005, 03:57 PM   #24
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I hope I haven't lost my fan base for this...


Chapter 5 - Nothing to Lose

Before Tai stood a man wearing the cloak of an Unknown. The man's face was hidden in the shadow cast by the hood, but the voice sounded reassuring.

"Who are you?" Tai asked, as a glow formed in his hand, ready to summon Kingdom Key.

"I saved your life... remember?" As the man spoke, he circled the room with his arms crossed.

"You what?" Tai thought back, remembering the night before. "Your... Your that guy!?"

"Yeah... I'm the guy..." The man responded, not really looking at Tai. With a sigh, Tai spun around and let himself fall down onto the couch.

"Why'd you save me?" He asked, wanting more to see the man's face then the answer.

"Because... You weild that keyblade... Besides, I would have done it anyways." The response from the man shocked Tai. Even in the City of Light such kindness was rare.

"Tell me who you are!" Tai demanded, returning to his feet and coming eye to eye with the man.

"Do you really want to know who I am?" The man responded, with an almost amused tone of voice.

"Yes!"

"All right... But on one condition."

"Depends.... What is it?"

"If you see who I am, you must come with me and fight by my side..."

"As what!? Your servant!?" Tai was becoming frustrated, he hated being controlled, and this guy was pushing his buttons.

"No..." The man spoke in a softer tone was he walked towards Tai, putting his hand on Tai's shoulder. "As my friend." With that, the man took a step back and removed his hood. Tai couldn't believe his eyes, this must be a dream. That's right, it's all a dream, I'm still asleep in my bed! With that thought, Tai did two things at once. He pinched himself, and slapped himself across the face.

"Sh*t! That hurt!" Tai stopped and looked around, then back at the the man who couldn't be who he looked like. "I guess this isn't a dream... then that means you're... You're..." Tai couldn't finish the sentence, he was too shocked.

"That's right... I'm-"

~End of Chapter~
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Old March 18th, 2005, 06:26 PM   #25
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*eats paper*
"I'm....the one who's name will be said in the next chapter...."
*sighs*
Well done,...! too bad this site is going down and I will only be able to see how you're doing now and then....
However, nice work ^^
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Old March 19th, 2005, 04:52 PM   #26
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Chapter 6 - Come Again

Tai had never been so shocked in his life. "That can't be true, your just a fairy tale... Like the hear-"

"Heartless, right? Do you really think they are a fairy tale now?" The man who was standing before Tai, who was in utter disbelief, was Sora, a legend.

"Well... All right, you win! But why me?" Tai had so many questions, and most of them probably couldn't be answered.

"Because... The keyblade chose you, now you have to take responsibility, 'cause it's yours now." Sora was grinning away, like he almost always did. He hadn't changed much in the 10 years, Sora just looked older, taller, and more built. He was after all, ten years older.

"But I've never used a keyblade before in my life, what am I supposed to do!?"

"Don't worry, Tai, I'll help you... Besides, your not the only one with a keyblade..." Sora put out his hand, a familiar glow burst forth from Sora's hand and then condensed into Oathkeeper. "See?"

"All right, you've made your point..." Tai sighed and lazily fell back onto the couch. "But what am I going to tell everyone... my parents... my friends...?"

"That's up to you, but you'll have to leave this place sooner rather than later."

"But what about Julia? She's already seen the keyblade... and her dad..." Tai trailed off, not wanting to talk about it. "It's hard... Isn't it... Being a keyblade master..."

"It's a hard life to live... just like everything else that's worthwhile." Sora turned towards the window, dismissing Oathkeeper and crossing his arms. "We can't live the simple life, because then nothing will be worthwhile, life would have no meaning. That's why we have to walk the hard road, because we know that at the end of the road, it will all be worth it because we worked so hard to attain it..."

"What about you... Are you still walking the hard road?" Tai was suddenly interested in what the living legend had to say. Sora laughed slightly, a sad tone coming to his voice.

"I'm still trying to keep a promise to an old friend... And to find another..."

"Don't worry about it Sora, you'll find them... You always do..."

"I hope so, Tai... I really do..." It had suddenly become very quiet in the room, and it was one of those uncomfortable silences that was filled with sadness. Those kinds of silences always agitated Tai. It started slowly, he began to figet and move around. Then he started to make grunts and other small noises. Then he snapped. "That's it! No more bad thoughts!"

Sora was slightly taken aback by this, a somewhat shocked look on his face. "What?"

"I hate uncomfortable silences!"

Sora laughed and walked over to Tai. "So then... Let's go find this Julia and get out of here, eh?"

Tai looked up at Sora, thinking about it for all of one second. "Let's go!" He hopped to his feet and made his way to the door.

"Oh, Tai, take this." Sora tossed an unknown cloak to Tai. "Put it on."

Tai thought about it for a moment, then threw it on. "Like that?"

"Yeah, let's go." With that, the two keyblade masters left the house and into the city. Though, they were unaware that a darkness was growing just beyond their vision, and it was slowly engulfing the City of Light.
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Old March 19th, 2005, 05:10 PM   #27
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...omg, my timing to get here always just to find a new chapter is just as awesome a your chapters...
*looks around...*
you could also post it on omni's forums...^^ there you'd get more feedback and not only your restless fans...^^

however nice work once more...
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Old March 21st, 2005, 10:21 PM   #28
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Okay, this Fanfic is officially kaput on these boards. If you want to see any later chapters, either go to omnislasher_VII's main site, under other fan fics, or go to the forums there, other then that, c ya.
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Old March 21st, 2005, 11:44 PM   #29
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NOOOO!! I need to read more... What is the url for Omnislasher_VII's site? Seriously, you sure know how to hook a crowd.
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Old March 21st, 2005, 11:45 PM   #30
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I have my moments, look in Yun's sig for the links.
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