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Old 05/23/07, 06:35 PM   #31
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Tellix is insaine, ilove it, thats AWSOME MORE MORE MORE
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Old 05/23/07, 07:01 PM   #32
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Another awesome chapter even though it was a little short I still enjoyed it can't wait for the next chapter!
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Old 05/24/07, 10:17 PM   #33
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Woot! The 10th chapter ^_^
This is getting to be a long fanfic XD


The library was dusty and stuffy like it always was, and Lillet found it to be the worst room in the entire mansion. Ever since she woke up, she had been reading over books about the Chasers, while Riku and Katze argued about where they thought the Chain would be. Lillet sat in the corner staring at the pages of a large tome, and before too long, she realized the book was completely useless.
The loud slamming of the doors downstairs could be heard, and then the sound of loud footsteps echoed through the empty mansion. Sora, Donald and Goofy came bursting through the door, large smiles adorning their faces as they waved to Lillet.

"Got some good news and bad news for you!" Sora annouced as he sat down next to Riku and Katze. "The good news is that we found Xehanort's lab..." Goofy continued as he scratched his round black nose. "But the bad news is, Xehanort wasn't there. His lab sure was a big mess though!" Donald interrupted in his loud crackling voice.

Riku smiled faintly and stared at the papers scattered across the table, then looked up at Lillet. "Do you have any idea where the chain is..?" Lillet thought hard then shook her head and frowned. As she turned towards Sora, something caught her eye. She stared intently at Sora's necklace, which was a silver, no, almost white chain with a small crown charm on the end of it.
Finally, it hit her.

Without thinking, Lillet reached across the table and grabbed the necklace, pulling the necklace and Sora halfway across the table. Riku and Katze jumped back in surprise and stared at Lillet.
"Whoa! Lillet! Could you please..let go..?" Sora said as he struggled to hold his balance. Lillet unhooked the necklace and held it up as Sora sat up and craned his neck, happy to sit up.

"This is it..! This is the chain!!" Lillet exclaimed as she showed it to Riku, who backed up as far as his chair would let him as the charm was held two inches from his face. Lillet pulled it away and grinned, but durring that spilt second a flash of light illuminated the room. As fast as it appeared, it vanished. But something wasn't right. Riku, Katze, Sora, Donald and Goofy stoof frozen in place, and a silver haze filled the room. Lillet turned towards the corner, only to find a silver-clad figure leaning against the wall.

Tellix.

Lillet jumped from her seat and glared at Tellix, who was staring at the floor and grinning manically. "What are you doing here, Tellix?" Lillet demanded. Tellix looked up at Lillet and smiled, then held out the heart charm. Shock turned to relief as Lillet stared at the charm. This meant one thing to her, Xehanort was no longer on top of the game.

"I'm guessing you're here to give that to me?" Lillet said, hoping she didn't have other plans. Tellix tossed the charm into the air and started towards Sora, who was stuck staring at the ceiling. She rested her arm on his shoulder and begin examining her nails, occasionally glancing up at Lillet.
Moments passed before either of them said or did anything. Tellix pointed to Lillet's hand, in which she held the chain. Lillet held up the chain and grinned, then said, "All I need is the charm. Will you give it to me?"

A quiet and rasping chuckle escaped Tellix's throat as she threw her head back and smiled. She put the charm in her pocket and started towards Lillet, who promptly began backing away. "Foolish girl..Just like Luna, you still haven't learned." She said in her rasping voice as she came closer.
"I don't understand...Riku told me you helped wake me up..What's going on?" Lillet demanded, staring at Tellix with uncertainty. Tellix spread her arms and grinned, "You and your friends are all fools. I gave Riku the sphere to wake you up, because I knew you would never find the Chain in your sleep. I heard what Annalya told you about Sonjoro's son. It was quite obvious was that son she spoke of." As Tellix finished her sentence she lowerd her arms and tilted her head, then vanished in a silvery haze.

Lillet looked side to side frantically and stuffed the chain in her pocket. She turned towards the door only to find Tellix coming for her with a silver dagger. As Tellix lunged for her, Lillet stepped aside and grabed her hand then threw her towards the window. Tellix caught her balance and turned back towards Lillet and held up her free hand.

The chain gleamed in the sunlight as Tellix held it up by the window. She smiled sinisterly as she ripped open a silver portal. Lillet ran for Tellix, reaching for the chain, but as she came closer Tellix grabbed her by the neck and sent her flying towards the table. Lillet looked up just in time to see Tellix's menacing grin vanish in a violently whisking portal.
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Old 05/30/07, 11:59 PM   #34
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Good job!! I love this !! Keep 'em comin'!!!!:thumbsup:

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Old 06/02/07, 07:06 AM   #35
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crazy, tellix is a bitch, who woulda knew? lol i swore on khi, im gonna get a point 4 that, but its to late, i wont back track, cept that one time when i was sitting on the floor and my brother walked in, AKKKK i back tracked. nie chapter, and nice use of soras nekalice as the key, must of hurt ur head to come up with that one XD i feel the need, the need to read..... fan fic XD more more more, feedfeedfeed gimme gimme gimme kirby dance (>)> <(+_+<) chester the ugly ^_>^ lol XD
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