Lost Hearts

[Haku]

That was the best chapter to date and awesome romantic scene as well keep it up!

[Shadowysights]

Originally Posted by Haku

That was the best chapter to date and awesome romantic scene as well keep it up!

Thanks Haku and khlover0001, I didn't know the romance would go over well!

[Skitty Cat]

Nice chapter, I loved the scene were Lia was being dragged away by her ear, and then the scene were Range was holding Lila. Anyway don't forget to update.

[shadow_heartless]

awsome fan fic i love it i'm not going to post offen cuz i read other also keep it coming

[Black Rose]

hey i loved the chapter! nice little romatic scene too. keep it up!

[Shadowysights]

Chapter 7:

The last unexplained event



“Who are you!?” Roas screamed, not know the person was doing. They didn’t answer, they lunged at him again, but this time, Roas had deflected the attack this time, knocking the person back and of there balance, almost hitting the bell, or falling of the tower. His hood came off his head as he stood back up, his face was blood stained, and his eyes were piercingly red, seeming to be intruding the natural color. His hair stood up, but pointed upward and to the right. He wore a big black jacket, as if part of some cult.

He stood stiffly, but he didn’t move like that. He leaped again, I dodged out the way, he kept going, but when landed near the edge, he jump high, like a back flip but, he soared. When started to come down as he got closer to me, he crossed his keyblades, and came down with slash, but I stopped it early, in reaction. The attack was heavy, and pushed me into the, seemingly new wooding of the tower. I ripped my feet out of the wood, severely scaring and scarping them. I was bleeding badly, but there was no way to run. The only way was off the tower and at that, I wouldn’t live if I did that. Curiosity killed the cat. But now it killed the short man, maybe there was a chance.

“I’ll just have to rough through it.” I mumbled to myself. The man showed no mercy, he jumped up high, but as he started to face downward to attack, I already jumped to face him; I caught him off guard with a horizontal aerial slash with the keyblade, smashing it into his rib cage. His face showed pain and no mercy at the same time, as if he was going to unwillingly push his body to the limit. I started to feel light headed, as if I was losing conscious, I wish I knew magic, it would help a lot. This battle will not and, van last much longer.

I started to back down with an attack, but he leaped up and smashed his two keys against mine, making me lose aerial balance. I had lost control, and smashed against the bell, cracking it. Now, I really wish I knew magic, or at least cure. He pointed his darker keyblade out at me, then a light beam shined out at headed towards me, I dodged away, not knowing what it was. The beam flung out, shining the color of the moons light rays, and it pierced right through the golden rod bell. I looked as if it could rip hearts out. I grew tenser.


There was nothing I could do to save myself; I was practically a walking, dead man, growing more light headed by the second. Curiosity is slaughtering the cat. I felt horrible.

Just then, things began to get blurry. My light headedness turned to, a complete break down of motor skills. All I can do now is stand, stand awaiting whatever…

The beam strung out again, piercing him this time, right in his heart. Roas felt a tug, but some how, his heart was spared and kept in place, but impact off it knocked Roas harshly off the bell tower, like trash. Roas fell in a spiral to the ground, not knowing if he lived or not.


“Let go! That hurts!” Lia tossed as she was being forced to walk along by the forceful pulling of her ear.

“That’s what you get for wandering off”

“I was gonna come back, you sound like my father”

“And, for talkin’ all that stuff.”

“Stuff?”

“A way to tame me?”

“That? But I was just playing; you know I like to play around. Now…can you let me go?” Lia asked as they where still walking.

“No…we need to go back.”

“But, can let go-“

“No, I know you play, and you play too much.”

“I guess you got me…” Lia finished as they kept walking along. The finally let loose her ear. In joy, Lia warped her arms around him, hugging him tightly. They walking until they got to the front of the bell tower, where the fountain was, it was there they stopped.


“Wow…see Johnny? I want to leave that dark place, to see more beautiful things like this.”

“Were going to leave, as soon as we know the all clear; we need to go back before we set up suspicion , and once where far away we’ll never have to back.” He told Lia as he started to hug her back, ruffling though her scarlet hair.

“Thanks Johnny” Lia said in tears of joy. As they started along the tower, they saw a small boy lying, almost dead on the ground. They were in shock as they ran over to him. He appeared to still be breathing.

“C’mon, Lia, pick him up, there’s no hospital for miles, and he won’t live much longer, we have to take him with us.” Johnny commanded, and without argument, she picked Roas up as, Johnny opened the gateway to their world.
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Please comment. The next chapter should clear things up.

[Black Rose]

good chapter! just watch yourself with your point of views. your switching between first and third. otherwise, very nice and keep it up =)

[Khlover001]

Hey great chap more mystery I love it! I wonder what world there takin him to? Could ya give us a hint? Please!!! Anyways great chap my favorite part of this one was the...well it was all great! Cant wait for the next chap!

[Haku]

Hey great chapter! The best so far and I liked that you added a little bit of mystery towards this one.

[Shadowysights]

Originally Posted by Angelsinflight

good chapter! just watch yourself with your point of views. your switching between first and third. otherwise, very nice and keep it up =)

I tried to but, I couldn't have a unconscious person thinking like normal.

[Skitty Cat]

Sorry it took me this long, nice chapter! Hope to see the next one soon, but don't do it too fast.

[shadow_heartless]

awsome keep posting ................dam too short

[Shadowysights]

Originally Posted by Kari'Heart

Sorry it took me this long, nice chapter! Hope to see the next one soon, but don't do it too fast.

Really, typing to much can make arms sore so, it won't be that fast

Originally Posted by shadow_heartless

awsome keep posting ................dam too short

I didn't think that far ahead to continue it...

[shadow_heartless]

Originally Posted by acein12

Really, typing to much can make arms sore so, it won't be that fast




I didn't think that far ahead to continue it...

oh well and listen to kairi'heart she is totaly right *it happend to me *:toungesmile:

[Shadowysights]

The next chapter's going to be out little later than normal...nevermind.