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| ドットハック ルーツ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Yeah the new pirate addition really added a nice twist to the story xD. |
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| | #152 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Thanks for the good comments, the next chapter should be up later today or tommorrow. |
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| | #153 |
| Love Jejung <3 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In front of my comp XD Age: 17
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Rep Power: 8 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | ^^ nice! I like it, I want to read the next part too^^ |
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| | #154 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Chapter 14: Finding out the rest Roas awoke on the bottom bunk of a bed in a brown wooden room. The bed creaked as he started off of it; he sat up on the bed “Where am I?” He moaned drowsily as he stood up. Roas lifted his up his arms and began to stretch. “Now….how do I get out of here…..and were are my friends? I’m tried of having to find them.” He said starting to get irritated. “Now let’s see….” He mumbled to himself walking over to the wall. “If there’s a way to get me in, there’s way out.” “It’s over there.” Someone said, lightly; from seemingly nowhere. Roas twisted back around to see who it was “Who was that?” he almost yelled; only seeing a tiny little red light. “Me…..come closer.” It said whatever it was. Roas started back over to the bed where the light shined “What are you?” “I’m a fairy….my name is Tinker bell.” She greeted “But isn’t Tinker bell green?” Roas asked, remembering peter pan from a book he think he read or saw; something like that. “Well….I’m imitating her….my real names is Kairi.” “Hello, Kairi; okay so where did you point to?” Roas asked hurriedly “That’s rude.” “What? How?” Roas asked, scratching his head quickly as he went along. “I told you my name; tell me yours.” Kairi stated “Roas.” “Oh okay….Hi Roas.” Kairi said with a big smile on her face. “Okay….where did you point to again?” Roas asked impatiently “Over there to the right; why are you in such a hurry? You’re not going to be able to get off of this ship.” Kairi mentioned nonchalantly. “Ship? As in boat?” Roas asked “Yeah….one of the biggest.” Kairi said while she started float down on to the bed. “Okay, um….I think I’ll just stay in here for a while….” Roas said as he slouched back down. “What’s wrong?” Kairi asked, flying over to him, little sparkles flowing behind her. “You don’t like water?” “No…I hate water, and I get sea sick easily.” Roas grunted as she flew over to his face and rested on his nose. “But in this world, you can fly using my pixie dust.” Kairi mentioned, looking as if she was going to fall asleep. “But I don’t like heights…” “Don’t you like anything? It’s your only way off this ship, unless you plan on walking the plank soon…” She faintly added with a smirk on her face. “Why am I going off the plank!?” Roas yelled, not caring who might of heard him outside. “Calm down…..why are you in this room?” Kairi gently asked flying off his nose. “You could of busted my ear drums what’s wrong with you?” She groaned to herself holding her ears. “I don’t know….I just woke up here.” “This may be a dream…”Kairi suggested “But that doesn’t matter now, you have to get off this ship.” “How?” “I already told you, my pixie dust, I’ll give you some when we get outside.” “Okay.” Roas ended Roas finally pushed open the wall to see an open hall way; him and tinker bell crept out, but there seemed no reason to, there was no one there. They started to move more casually as they saw a latter that headed strait up. Roas climbed up, Kairi following, and at the top was a boy dressed in green, like an elf. “Hey tink!” The boy yelled as he spun around “Stop calling me that!” Kairi yelled “Okay…did you give that boy some pixie dust already?” He asked “No… but I’ll give it to him.” She said calming down. “Okay....oh yeah….I’m Sora.” Sora said starting over to them; but every step he took, Roas took a step back. “What are you doing?” “Staying away from you.” Roas had stated, getting ready to move back again. “You look like some kind of child molester.” “But I’m not.” Sora responded, looking a little more serious. “I don’t trust you.” Roas said as Sora walked over. “Stay away from me.” Sora grabbed Roas by the arm and yelled. “Stop screwing around!” “Ahh! Let me go! I don’t want a popsicle!” Roas yelled, as Sora shoved him to the side, making him hit the wall of the hall way. “Just know that I’m controlling your dream and that you should move on and come back later.” Sora almost yelled “Uhh, okay.” Roas stammered “Okay….now wake up!” Sora yelled as everything to Roas seemed to disappear. The next thing he saw was Lilla leaning over him inside of the gummi ship. She lightly asked. “Have a nice nap? What happened?” “Huh? A boy named Sora told me he was controlling our dreams and to move on to the next planet.” Roas stated. “I figured that, no point and visiting a planet that haunted us. I guess were supposed to come back later.” Lilla added “To the next world then…” Range ended. ----------------------------- Please comment. |
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| | #155 | |
| raise your hands together Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Running and not looking back Age: 17
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() ![]() | Quote:
excelent chappie acein! glad you used my idea! ^^ | |
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| | #156 |
| ドットハック ルーツ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Excellent chapter it really turned out well with Angelsinflight's idea xD. |
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| | #157 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Thanks Angelsinflight and Haku. Thanks for the idea Angelsinflight XD |
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| | #158 |
| Ruler of Light Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: I live where all artists are trying to dicipline themselves - HELL! Age: 20
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | Kairi as Tinkerbell, now that is too cute! So it's Sora whose been controlling thier dreams! Well I can't sick Mecho on him, anywho great chapter! I wonder why Sora has been controlling thier dreams... (Gasp) Is he trapped somewhere?! Patiently waiting for the next chapter ^_^ |
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| | #159 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | You'll find out soon enough....but it shouldn't be long before I make the next chapter. Last edited by Shadowysights; 06/25/07 at 03:35 AM. |
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| | #160 |
| raise your hands together Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Running and not looking back Age: 17
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() ![]() | no prob w/ helping you out. i started reading it and i was like "omgz he actually used it!!?? awesomeness!" lol but its really cool how Sora's controlling their dreams. if Sora's trapped *gasp* go save him!! lol |
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| | #161 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | Its was a good idea, thanks again. And if you're really desprate to know [Spoiler] Sora is not trapped [/spoiler] |
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| | #162 |
| Organization Member | Not to bad^^ I can invision all this happening as though it were a movie playing in my head^^ you did a dam fine job man^^ come out with more of this I'd like to read it^^ |
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| | #163 |
| raise your hands together Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Running and not looking back Age: 17
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() ![]() | [Spoiler] Yay!!! Sora is Free!!!![/spoiler] lol |
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| | #164 |
| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() | It gets better as you get farther through the story...and it will keep getting better. |
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| | #165 |
| Organization Member | WOOOOT XD when will the next chap come outO.o |
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