Lost Hearts

[Sonja~Soulheart]

when can you posr the next chappie? just curious but don't rush... excellent job though XD

[Shadowysights]

Thanks for the good comments......I should be able to post the next chapter soon.

[Sonja~Soulheart]

ok then XD we'll wait XD

wonder whats next...

[Black Rose]

waiting patiently for the new chapter...lol

[Haku]

Yeah so I'm I, but take your time Acein xD.

[Shadowysights]

Okay heres 12, I kind of rushed through it, I was dizzy but I wanted to finish it. There will be somemore of this planet included later.


Chapter 13:

Asking all the questions


Lilla trekked by the building; an annoyed look crossed her face. “What happened? How did I get in this stupid dress? And how did my hair get like this….I liked it standing up…now it’s all stringy, loose.” She said mumbled to herself as she walked up the broken streets. It was a dim lit town, or the ruins of a town. Lilla could see broken windows, overturned tables, and shattered barrels; and this was only outside. “This place looks awful familiar….” She said while she turned to go down the alley. “It isn’t safe in an alley….” She said as she turned to go back down the main street she was on and she kept forward, she was holding up the front of her dress so she could walk faster. She started to hum to herself to past the time at little and calm down. “I hold up dress so I can faster than the average bear.” This made her giggle as she swayed down the streets.

She walked and she didn’t inspect the territory as she went along; she thought about getting lost. “But I’m already lost so, I guess it doesn’t matter.” Lilla thought to herself.

“And put that over there. Captain Jack Sparrow will get through this.” Yelled a slightly tall man, with a big, oversized hat, a small face, with ‘dreadlock’ like chin hair; the rest can’t be made out in the dark.

“Got a problem?” Lilla asked nosily

“Yes…..why are you asking me?” He quickly said, as if he was paranoid.

“I’m wondering….you seem like you’re desperately looking for food, you-“Lilla tried to suggest but was cut off by Jack.

“We’re not looking for food, we’re looking for rum. Turns out someone drank it all up.” Jack interrupted.

“Was it you?” Lilla said looking down at the empty glass bottle in his pocket that seemed to gleam in the moonlight.

“Well, that’s one….” Jack pondered as he heaved it out of his pocket. “What are you doing out here anyway?”

“I don’t know, I guess I’m lost. I don’t know.”

“You guess? Then would you mind to come on the black pearl, little one?”

“Uh, okay. I guess.” Lilla responded dizzily, as she started forward.

“So this is what you see, huh?” Jack mumbled trying not to be heard.

But Lilla still heard him. “What do you mean?”
“Nothing; just go get on the ship.”

While she walked a crew man walked up to her as she had just got on the ship “Watch out for the captain.”

“Who, Jack?” Lilla said coming to a complete stop.

“Yes….he’s strange, er then he normally is.”

“Oh, okay.” Lilla answered as she started to walk again.

She entered a dark room that had a dim lantern hanging from the top of it; she walked over and stood in a corner.

“Do you like sneaking into people’s rooms?” Jack said walking into the room. “This is you’re mind.”

“You are strange.” Lilla responded

“Whatever made you think I was strange?” Jack asked, while scratching his head, or his hat.

“Well, one of you’re crew men said it when I was walking by.” Lilla answered, stooping down, not caring about the dress she was in.

“Well you shouldn’t believe things random people say.”

“You’re a random person.” Lilla ended with a smirk.

Jack walked over to a desk on the opposite side of the room, he took a seat the then stretched back in the chair; when he sat back normal: “Ahh, who keeps taking all the pencils?” There was a cabinet above him he ripped it open. “Oh! That’s what happened to the rum.” He said while hiding the little guilt he had; he then turned the chair back towards Lilla. “Listen, you have to go now.”

“What do you mean?” Lila asked getting light headed. “What’s going on?” She asked passing out.


She awoke to see that she was back on the ship. “What happened?” She asked herself.

“I guess we’ll have to come back when the time is ‘right’” Range answered

“What do you mean?” Lilla asked getting tried of asking questions.

“I had a dream; the inhabitants of the planet said me they were our ‘gifts’ and that they’ll help when and if there needed.”

“Oh, I had a dream where they kept saying that it was my state of mind that I was seeing.” Lilla added to what Range had said

“I guess we’ll know more when Roas finally wakes up.” Range ended
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Please comment

[Black Rose]

woot woot go Pirates! lol good chapter i'm looking forward to the next one

[Rynxeh]

Nice chapter man.
im lookin forwrad to the next one
keep up the good work!

[shadow_heartless]

YAY ,like always awesome chapter and keep going i want to know more :thumbsup:

[Silent Avera]

Squee! Captain Jack Sparrow ^_^ Someone's not playing mind games with them is there? I'll sick my dog Mecho on them!

Nice chapter ^_^ I wonder what Roas will be dreaming about...

[Haku]

Awesome chapter this story has really come a long way, keep up the good work xD.

[Gullwing Yunie]

YAY for POTC!!! xD
Great chappie! =D

[Khlover001]

Yeah new chap and one was about pirates!!!!! Loving the randomness of Captain Jack and the Alice in Wonderland too!!!

Sorry i havent been posting latly Ive had stupid basketball for 4 hrs all week and next week is volleyball

But great chaps!!!

[~Lenya~]

Yaaayy!Captain Jack Sparrow!Though I wish hed do something funny like he always does!

Cant wait for the new chapter!!

[Sonja~Soulheart]

awesome chapter man! piratespirates! woot!