A Little Taste of Life

[Gullwing Yunie]

It didn't seem rushed to me at all!

Great chapter! Really enjoyed reading it! =D

[Aqua]

I also enjoyed this chapter! Very good job, and as always I am looking forward to the next one.

[Anonymous]

well, sorry to dissapoint, but I haven't started writing it yet...
fortunately, I did manage to outline about 4 upcoming chapters today....

(IN OTHER NEWS!!! => I GOT AN iPOD!!!!!! HUZZAH =DDD )
Sorry, but I'm happy... my old one was stolen awhile back ><

Anyway.... the next chapter revolves around Axel...
And as a preview, the title card!! =>

Chapter 8:
The Fires of Sunrise

Hope that little tid-bit holds you over XD

[Aqua]

Originally Posted by Anonymous

well, sorry to dissapoint, but I haven't started writing it yet...
fortunately, I did manage to outline about 4 upcoming chapters today....

Well, do not feel like you have to rush for me. I am looking forward to reading it whenever you have it done. I enjoy your work.

[Anonymous]

Thanks Aqua =D
I wasn't really directing that comment towards you btw, it just came out that way, so sorry (god I'm far too apologetic)...

Aside from that, in other news, I finally got to start writing the battle I WISHED had been in KHII (and after you read it, I hope some of you will say the same =D).....
It won't be in the next chapter (which is unfortunately even shorter than the rest ><), but it may be in the one after that.....

Anyway..... yea..... that's it =D
I'm really sick... no updates tonight ><

[Taokitty]

Meep! How'd you manage to get sick?

Anyway, I do not think many of us think it felt rushed. Though, if you would like to, I could try to find the reasoning why you find that it seems rushed if you would like, or try to give constructive critism if that is what you wish. >_<

Ori? How long ago was your old Ipod stolen?

Ah? *Perks ears in interest* I will look forward to this battle.

Anyway, if you would wish for it, I will try my best to make sure the story does not end up on page 4 again. ^-^

I am still quite fond of all the battles you have thus far and the interactions with characters that really do seem plausible. I'm unsure if I can yet see why you believe it felt rushed, though I will try my best to see why you feel it was rushed so I can react accordingly.

It appears the King is quite oblivious of his own world's affairs.
I wonder if there is the slightest chance anyone had been awake? Though doubtful [and being unknown how many residents are in the Mouse's house] it would be interesting, though it doesn't appear it will play that way.

Please excuse the speculation.... ^^;;;

And if it causes you to tarry in anyway [though I do not see how it could tarry exactly but...]

~Taokitty~

PS Scuse my random babbling.... >___>

Hmmm... by any chance, have you received the pms I sent? 'Scuse me for my curiosity.

[Anonymous]

your speculation is welcome Tao! (as is anyone else's by the way =D)
(but no... I haven't gotten any pms.... O.o)

Well, the only animate objects that were around to hear the commotion were the brooms.... and since they are mute, I don't think the king will find out through them XD

So anyway, yea, I like the battle... but its not in the next chapter... which won't be up for awhile due to schoolwork >< (i.e. finals/regents/last minute projects to get my grades up XD)

[Taokitty]

xD Good to know ><

[o.O Ori?
... The site's against us, I should have known! >___>
Shall I send it again? o.o
{How odd for it says it sent too... checked my pm box to make sure it was sent.... o___o;;; ]

xD True, true. They may point excitedly perhaps at the King's entranceway I suppose but...
And they probably can't write either? >__>
Or have a mind for that matter....
xD Probably not [less they defied their purpose, got some nice paint and wrote words, but last time I checked, brooms could not see nor write... despite these brooms knowing where to go! D: ]

Ah. *Pat, pat*
All the fun stuff, eh? xD
I wish ye luck on that! D:
Perhaps I should try to update Wish [the revised version] I put on here for the one nice thing about my school, is that we can get exemptions.

Well, have fun! ^0^

-Taokitty
PS For a moment, I almost put `Tornished, an acount of mine on gaia.... >___>
Anyway, my mind fails to think of anything random! D:
Someone feed my mind something to work on.... Dx
[The following comments on the top are due to the recalling of when I used to post random thoughts of the day and such when my mind liked to organize random thoughts that would have no purpose in it's own thread].
Hmmm... the only thing I can think of is that I think frogs are growing in the graveyard. >___>

[Anonymous]

Lol, thanks for that Tao.

And again, I'm sorry guys, school ends tomorrow (monday) for me... =(

I've got a term paper that I'm doing right now... and my life's been.... stressful lately... ><

anyway, let's hope for an update sometime next week, cause I'll be DONE WITH SCHOOL!!!!!! =DDD

[Taokitty]

>.< No problem!

xD Don't stress yourself too much though, eh? [Why has life been stressful as of late?]

-Taokitty-

[Anonymous]

SCHOOL IS OVER!!! *light shines down from the heavens and little children screech with delight all across the globe* =DDDD

Ah, I got all my last minute work in too boot =D
So now, I can at last return to the fic!
Huzzah!
Sometime this week there will be an update, most definitely, for even as I write this I have the file open and am editing the upcoming chapter =D

[Taokitty]

xD All the little children 'cept I and my school seeing I still have one week left of school after exams [granted I am only coming on Tuesday for the field trip and Friday, but that's besides the point]

xD YAAY! Glad to here you were able to finish your last minute work!

-Taokitty

Cha! Do a dance! [Random]

[Anonymous]

Hey guys, sorry about the lack of an update (again) ><

But there's actually a different reason... one that some may enjoy! =D

I've started working on a new fan fiction... except not regarding kh.

As some of you may know, im a pretty big fan of avatar the last airbender, and Im working on an orginal story now =D
So hold on a bit, I'll finish up the opening of that, and then I'll get back to this.
(btw- do you think I should post that on this forum? I was thinking I may put it elsewhere....)

[Gullwing Yunie]

Post it here, or at least give us a link to it. =)

[Snow Candy]

Wow, good story.....I like the way you word it and set it up and everything! Can't wait for more!