Hearts of Twilight; Official Thread - Page 4

Lycanthrope · April 8th, 2007, 05:17 PM

Sorry for the long wait. I've been away and this is the first time I've been ableto make it online.

Expect an update VERY soon.

Lycanthrope · April 9th, 2007, 01:49 PM

Here it is. Sorry for it being short. I needed this as a part of separation.

Hearts of Twilight Chapter 14

Xonic was going so fast, he was far ahead of his friends.

“Xonic, slow down!” Draco shouted.

Xonic stopped for a brief pause. “You just don’t get it. No one seems to get it. Femix was the only on to know of my past. The riddle of my existence. She knew what I needed to know. Probably the only reliable source. I need to get my vengeance on the Order of Shadows. That will be the only thing to make me feel better. Now, leave. I need to do this on my own.”

Elle caught up with them. “Xonic… you can’t do everything by yourself. You need us to…”

Xonic cut her off. “Elle, you don’t understand me right now. You are also underestimating my power. I know I am the only one who could defeat the Order. I can’t risk anyone’s life but my own. I don’t even feel right taking Riku or Sora with me. But, I’ll tell you what. I will take ONE person. That will be Cloud. He seems to be the only one to protect him well.”

Cloud shook his head. “No, take Draco or Mega. They have hidden potential. They also know you better.”

Xonic nodded. “I’ll take both. I could never make a decision. Now, you two better hurry. As for the rest of you, I want you to leave. Take safety.”

Xonic, Draco, and Mega dashed off to the north, where the skyline showed a dark castle. They left everyone and everything behind.

Once they were gone, Elle said, “They are screwed without us…”

Sora agreed. “Yeah. We need to follow them. I don’t like the way this is looking to work out. I bet there are traps, members, everything on patrol to destroy them.”

Riku took out his Way to Dawn. “Now you’re talking.”

Cloud looked at Javo, the newest member to the group. “Do you know one person who could help us out?”

Javo nodded. “Well, there’s this kid named Lancer. Everyone else is loyal to the order.”

“Get him right now. Meet us at the castle,” Cloud said.

Javo ran to the west in attempts to get Lancer. The rest were following the trio of warriors from the distance.

Aphex · April 11th, 2007, 07:12 PM

Well, I've manage to read the rest of the chapters considering I haven't been keeping up with all of the Rp's I'm in, including my fanfic, but I have to say I'm liking how this is turning out. Keep up the good work.

Lycanthrope · April 11th, 2007, 11:20 PM

Thanks Shadows. Also, I really want to thank you again for loaning me Kenji. I have something planned out later where he does something pretty sweet.

princess namine · April 12th, 2007, 12:48 AM

Ummm, you forgot to thank someone for 4 people in your story

Lycanthrope · April 12th, 2007, 01:32 AM

Lol... I already thanked you... I think I did via PM at some point...

Well, thanks again if my memory is being a liar and I didn't thank you.

Gullwing Yunie · April 13th, 2007, 08:33 AM

Great chapters!! XD I kinda missed a few cause I was away..lol

Lycanthrope · April 14th, 2007, 03:28 AM

Meh. I wrote 14 while I was away. I posted once I got my Internet to work at my beach house.

Anyway, expect an update as soon as I get a decent chance to do something with my fic.

Twilight_Roxas · April 23rd, 2007, 09:31 PM

Wow...nice fic...I read the 14 chapters so far in a hour or more. Keep it up.

Lycanthrope · April 26th, 2007, 03:30 AM

Thanks twilight Roxas.

Sorry for the long wait everyone. I should definately have it up by the weekend. Track has been taking up most of my time.

Lone Wolf113 · April 28th, 2007, 01:28 AM

NICE like the concept and it verywell written pm me and i cn give great help and also get or make some pictures for your main characters with there armor and weopns that wouldd be a great help understanding.

Lycanthrope · May 1st, 2007, 11:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lone Wolf113

NICE like the concept and it verywell written pm me and i cn give great help and also get or make some pictures for your main characters with there armor and weopns that wouldd be a great help understanding.

Well, a friend o fmine from a different site (the person wh ocreated Femix) said that she would try to work on some fan art for it.

TheLastKnight · May 5th, 2007, 03:28 AM

pretty nice, good chapters

Lycanthrope · May 6th, 2007, 03:26 PM

Thanks, ShadowKnight47.

NOTE TO EVERYONE: Expect an update within 48 hours.

Gullwing Yunie · May 7th, 2007, 07:20 AM

YAY!!! Update!!
That reminds me, I really should finish the third chapter for my fic:toungesmile: