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| Enigmatic Soldier | Wow the story just keeps getting better and better! |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Okay i can wait... like the song you picked for my story. |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 21 EXP: | Disclaimer: Do I have to say it? Anyway, I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of it's characters...dang it! Okay, long chapter...and this is going to be fun, the poem at the end seems to be true about life. It's one long road, so let's just see where are life leads and not end it to soon. And might as well share it with your friends, 'cause it's a long trip alone. Castle Oblivion Illya watched as Riku held up a world card, the two then walked into the room looking around to see it was the world they had only been at a few moments ago. Riku then snapped, "This is Maleficent’s castle! How’d I end up HERE? Someone must have brought us here while I was sleeping. But who?" A voice then replied after it was done talking same thing with Riku, she then looked around and then looked over to see the color around Riku was dark red, she reached her hand out to touch his arm. Placing her hand gently on his arm, causing him to look down into her covered grey-violet eyes. "What's the matter Illya?" Frowning a little she whispered softly, "You're mad, I can tell by the color around you; it's dark red. I know, that even if I wasn't able to see like this, I would still be able to tell; 'cause I don't know why but my heart's screaming that you are mad." Riku was surprised by how much she had didn't let the problem bother her, smiling he pulled her into a hug and whispered, "So, who was the other person in the song you were singing earlier today was?" Looking up at him, the cloth hid the sparkle in her eyes; she let out a sigh and said, "You really want to know...." Her voice trailed off, pushing Riku away form her she dashed off and tossed, "You have to catch me to find out!" Riku then shouted one more thing to the voice, "Hey, I'm asking you a question! ....Fine. But it'd better be you we run across next, Voice. I'm sick of talking to thin air!" The two raced to Riku's bedroom reaching it, Riku had his hands on her wrists spinning her around he looked deep into her grey-violet eyes; he lend in and whispered in her ear, "So, who was the other person?" The voice then showed up again after Riku made it be quiet for a little while, "So, she did. And you two lived in the castle, tempted by the darkness she offered. You cast away your home, your friends, everything.....But at least they gave you two some nice rooms." The two then both shouted together, "Shut up!" Blushing a deep scarlet she looked into his ocean blue-green eyes, the two then walked out of the room not knowing about the fact a shaded figure watched as Riku whispered in her ear; she looked at Riku and murmured to herself, "You Riku, but what am I thinking it will never work." She then looked at Riku and then in front of her and whispered, "I don't know, for that one person who will love me no matter what." She just didn't know if Riku ever notice that she is really happy when it is just them together, she let out a sigh she then heard Riku ask, "So, shall we get out of here?" ~Upper Level~ She paced up and down looking over to Namine, she began walking over looking over to see a portal showing up; she summoned her blade but then dismissed it when she saw Roxas. "Hello Roxas, the key of destiny." Roxas looked at the young girl, who still had her hood up looking at her; he stormed over to her and pulled down her hood. Revealing, flaming-red hair and emerald green eyes tinted with blue; growling she was about to snap at him. When both of them were tossed against a wall, looking around their eyes landed on Marluxia; growling she snapped, "Let us go Marluxia!" Marluxia smirked at her, walking over to her; he held up his scythe to her throat. "You son of a...." He pressed it against her neck, wincing she glared at Marluxia the doors flew open. The one who had caused this to happen, was a extremely ticked off Axel, storming over he pulled Marluxia away and warned, "I don't want to ever hear or see that you are trying to bring her and Roxas harm!" Axel then quickly added, "Or that you have brought them harm." Marluxia dropped the both of them, Roxas was on the other side of the room; breathing heavily you could tell that if you left those two in a room with Marluxia it's a very high chance that you would come back to see him dead. Walking out of the room, she looked around trying to figure out why she was with the order; looking over her shoulder to see Roxas she murmured, "Roxas, have you ever wonder what's beyond the order?" Roxas smiled at her, placing his hands on her shoulders he replied, "No, I just became part of the order." She thought about why she was walking up and down guarding Namine while Axel was fighting Sora. ~Basement Twelve, Riku's point of view~ Riku looked over to Illya, she was thinking about something but he wasn't sure what; placing his hand on her shoulder he asked, "What's the matter Illya? What is troubling you? Is it something I did? Tell me please." Pushing his hand away she looked at him, and replied, "You broke your promises Riku, how can I forgive you? Tell me Riku, how do you want me to forgive you?!" Riku knew that he had did it big time, looking at Illya he whispered, "I'm sorry Illya, I didn't mean to." He looked at her with sad eyes, tears starting to form in his eyes. Illya pulled him into a hug seeing that he was sad, she murmured, "Riku, I'm sorry. I lost my temper for a moment, I was just heard a voice that sounds so much like Sora's" Looking around for the person who was speaking, she saw that they were the only ones in the room. The two then headed to the last story room that was needed, which was the Key of Truth reaching it he didn't like what he saw. Grabbing Illya's wrist, he pulled Illya closer to him looking at Maleficent. He snarled, "Leave us alone us alone Maleficent." The two then began their battle with Maleficent, after the fight was done he and Illya head to the hall in between Basement Twelve and Eleven; reaching it they heard a voice once again. The two looked at each other, knowing that it was Ansem he let out a sigh and murmured to Illya. "Great, captain crazy is back," Nodding her head Illya looked at him and murmured, "Yeah, anyway, let's just hope he doesn't think about trying to take control over you again." Ansem showed up not to long after that, growling the two got ready for their battle. Holding their weapons tightly, looking at him Illya questioned, beating him Ansem tossed Riku five cards, and a green aura shows up and him and Illya. He glared at Ansem and snapped, "What did you do?!" Ansem smirked and replied, "I tempered with the darkness that remains in your hearts." Growling the both of them snapped back, "What, you think that we'd rely on the Darkness?" Ansem smirked and replied, "That is your chose if you use it or not," floating away form them and disappearing Ansem whispered, "I'll be waiting, Riku and Illya for you two come to your senses and yield to the darkness." Growling, the two murmured, "Forget it Ansem, we are not joining up with you again." Walking onto basement eleven, he stopped and murmured, "Something...tastes kind funny..." Looking at him with worried eyes, Illya whispered softly, "Riku? What is it?" Looking around Riku replied, "It's so familiar...darkness. The taste of darkness, what's happened to me? It even seeps into my senses." Looking around to see a orb of light, as soon as they saw Mickey Illya smiled. "Your Majesty?" They murmured together, Mickey smiled at them he and Mickey began talking for a little while. "Fight your darkness, it won't be easy. Even in the darkest of darkness, there is always a do to the light." Confused he asked Mickey, "Light within it?" Mickey smiled at Riku and replied, "You, Illya and I have seen it, the far off welcoming light inside the door to darkness. The light of Kingdom Hearts...Riku, Illya it'll show you the way. Please don't give up, believe in the light. That's all I ask." After a few more words Mickey disappeared, looking over to Illya he murmured, "Come on, let's get going." ~~~~~ Walking this long road known as life, we go through bad times and good times. We all have to walk this road alone once, but it's what's at the end of the road. Nothing can stop us when we find, the path we are meant to be on. But the only ones who can, change who we are is us. So, let's walk this long road known as life. And see what is at the end, when it's becomes our time to leave. It can be a long trip alone, so let's walk this road together. |
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| Dual Wielder Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Trying to escape the land of idiots and retards Posts: 598
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| IKEA Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Midwestern United States of America Posts: 4,333
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 31 EXP: | I've only gotten to the third chap but you are an amazing writer, really here's hoping Riku gets the girl, you know the important one. |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
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All I Ask of You Illya and Riku looked around the world, it seemed as if the voice was telling the truth; because they were in another world of their memories. Looking over to Riku, not saying a single word she waited for Riku to say something; and it seemed as if Riku didn't have anything to say to her. Shrugging it off, she followed Riku a strange silnce had filled the room; Riku stopped and looked at her. "Illya, I was wondering why did you do that back there?" Stopping as well she looked at Riku, confused she murmured, "I don't understand your question." Riku shook his head, what didn't she understand? Why did it seem that since the problem in the castle started she was drifting away from him? "What I meant is that where you so quiet back there?" Shaking her head she murmured, "I was thinking Riku, about what we did back there that is all." Knowing what was troubling her, he stopped walking and grabbed her wrist looking into her eyes; he murmured, "Illya, listen to me. I don't want you to ge hurt at all, if anything happened...." She pushed herself away form Riku, looking at him she murmured, "Come on, let us get a move on." They got past the floor walking out into the hall, they looked around the white hall looking around; their eyes landed on a man growling the aura around her switched to red. Looking over to Riku to see the same color around him, looking back at the man who had walked past Riku; he looked at her and shoved her aside turning around to Riku the man asked, "Riku I presume?" Snarling she and Riku snapped at the same time, "Who are you?! Are you with Ansem?!" Chuckling the man replied calmly, "You are half correct, let us say that it's not the Ansem you know. He is Ansem and he is not, which is to say he is nobody." Illya remained quiet listening as Riku said coolly, "Nobody huh? Sorry, riddles aren't my thing. Try making some sense." The man shook his head and replied, "He belongs to neither the light nor the dark, but walks the twilight in between. As do I, and for that matter..." ~The Upper Level~ The hooded girl watched as Larxene and Axel were talking about Sora, suddenly she fell to her knees breathing heavily she felt Axel's hand on her shoulder. "Nia? Are you okay? Answer me." Getting up, she looked at Axel with sad eyes and nodded; looking over to Larxene she snarled, "Stay out of my way Larxene." Larxene smirked at the young mage, spinning her wrist the nobody replied, "No can do Nia, how were you even brought into the order? You don't even have a X in your name. I forgot, that's why your title is "The Forgotten One" number fourteen." Snarling, she looked away form Larxene not wanting to get yelled at by Xemnas again. Nia looked around the room, tears in her emerald green eyes walking out of the room she murmured, "Why does Sora have the keyblade? I can understand Roxas, 'cause he is Sora's nobody. But why me? Why do I have the keyblade? I just don't understand, how come we were the ones that lost our hearts? Why? How come? Why was Sora able to hold onto his emotions? Was it because of Kairi? So many questions, so little answers that I can get here." Walking out of the room she began to think about a few things, she stopped as she heard someone whispered, "So, what's the matter Nia? Did Larxene bother you again?" Spinning around, her emerald green eyes landed on a nobody with spiky dirty blond hair, clear sapphire blue eyes smirking she shook her head and replied. "No Demyx, but may I ask why you even asked me that question?" Smiling at the younger nobody who was the same age as their newest member Roxas, but he just couldn't understand why Nia was number fourteen when she was in the order longer then Roxas; she arrivied at the same time Axel did so why was she number fourteen and her title "The Forgotten One?" None of this made any sense, walking over to the young nobody Demxy was sixteen while she was fourteen; knowing that Axel would flip if he ever found out what Demyx was planning. She watched as a smirk came to number nine's lips, suddenly she found her feet off the ground and being carried through a portal. "Demyx! What the in world are you planning?!" She murmured. Looking around to see that they were at Twilight Town, looking over to Demyx she murmured, "Why did you bring me here?" Smiling Demyx grabbed her hand and lead her over to a ice-cream shop, looking at her Demyx asked, "What kind of ice-cream would you like miss?" Laughing she replied, "Sea-salt please." Demyx got his and her's ice-creams, they were at sunset hill all of a sudden she began humming a tune; and then shortly after that she began singing a song that she heard one time. "I know that destiny is a choose, but what happens if we don't want to follow the path that is meant for us? We know that the heart can lead us home, but what happens if we lose are way; I know that I can't hide who I truly am and how I truly feel for all of my life. I know that I can love you in secret, but that will never answer my question if you love me to? I don't know how I should feel, but I know that if I listen to my heart I'll find the answer. I know that my heart want you, but does your heart want me? It doesn't matter as long as I have you, nothing can change how I feel for you. I wish you know how I felt, but you will never know the truth 'bout how I feel towards you. You will never know the truth 'bout how I feel towards you, maybe one day you might; but until then you will never know the truth 'bout how I feel towards you." Demyx looked at her, shocked to hear her singing that song; where did she learn it? Where did she hear it? "Nia, where did you hear that song?" Demyx whispered softly, smiling she shook her head and murmured softly, "It doesn't matter at the moment Demyx, let's just releax please." ~Hall between Basmeant tweavle and eleven~ Illya looked over to Riku shortly after the battle had ended, she was laying against one of the walls she looked up as Riku walked over; smiling she saw that the color around Riku was a blue color showing that he was releaxed. "Riku, I see you are a lot calmer." She shook her head confused, why was Riku actting that way the color around him quickly switched to a dark blue; Riku held out a hand for her to take it smiling she took his hand. Helping Illya up onto her feet, the two headed for the next floor looking over to her to see that she was lost deep in thought. ~~~~~ We walk this road together, hand in hand I wish that it wasn't a dream. I know that we don't have a future together, but what hurts the most I don't know. I some times I wish that everything, could go back to the way it use to be. I know that I have to hold onto my dreams, but how I'm I suppose to do it? Nothing makes sense right now, I wish I had some answers that I'm looking for. Last edited by Skitty Cat; April 10th, 2007 at 11:44 PM. | |
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| one winged angel Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: It's just mind over matter. If you're out of your mind...it doesn't matter! Posts: 212
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Great, so how does Nia know the song Illya's writing? |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 21 EXP: | Disclaimer: You people should know it by now! Okay, I know that you guys are use to me starting off my chapters from Illya's point of view...but this time it's being started off from Nia's point of view! I know that the end is a bit strange, but oh well. I have finelly updated! Yes, I know took forever! At least I know what I'm pretty much going to be doing in the next chapter! Axel: If you don't listen to me, I'll turn you into firewood! Me: Good going Axel! You just gave them a hint on what's going to be happening in the next chapter! Nia and Illya: Shut up before you guys give away more of what's going to happen! Me: Alright! Anyway on with the chapter! Training Time Nia looked at the setting sun looking over to Demyx she asked, "Isn't it about time for one of our training matches?" Smiling Demyx nodded, the two stood up from where they were sitting on the clock tower; summoning a portal Demyx lead Nia through the portal looking at him. It didn't take to long for them to get to the training room, they looked around to see that the only one that was there was Vexen; who looked at them and grinned. "Demyx, you know that you have to ask Axel if it's okay if you can go through and take Nia out on a date." Growling at Vexen, she looked at Demyx who had a worried look in his sapphire blue eyes she glared at Vexen and snarled, "Leave us alone Vexen, unless you want me reporting you to Xemnas." She looked at Demyx and murmured, "Don't worry if Axel try hurting you, he'll find himself pinned against the wall by my nobodies." Just then a white cat showed up, it had the nobody symbol on it's forehead she then dismissed the nobody; looking at Demyx she whispered, "See, I told you...I won't let Axel hurt you." She and Demyx both summoned their weapons, they then went at it one after the other they attacked each other; sliding back she looked at Demyx just then Xemnas showed up and barked, "So, you two are training without even telling me!" Lowering her head, Nia shook her head and summoned a portal she and Demyx then walked through it; looking at Axel to see the ticked off look on his face. "Nia, get to your room right now...while me and Demyx have a talk." Shaking her head she snarled, "Stop acting like your my brother Axel!" She summoned some nobodies and had them pin Axel, the two then walked away making it where she couldn't hear Axel whispered, "But that's the thing Nia, I am." ~- Basment nine! -~ Illya looked at her silver-headed warrior that was travailing with her, she then looked ahead of her trying to figure out the next stop for them; she watched as Riku held up the next world they would visit looking around the small room she tried to focus hard on the fact that it was just a memory. But it was so real, that it hurted to remember that they attacked Sora. She closed her eyes the color around her was still that icy-blue color, she looked at Riku hiding the pain that was in her eyes she and Riku made their way to key of beginning. They soon finished and then headed to the last story room fighting the boss there she looked around the area with Riku standing next to her. "Riku..." Her voice trailed off, she didn't know what to say to him. Just then she fell to the floor, she never reached it do to Riku catching her Illya blacked out; she heard Riku whispered, "Illya, what's the matter tell me?" She was going back to when she was four years old, before she arrived on the islands. Flashback: She looked around the orphanage that she and her brother were left at, looking up at him she closed her eyes and hid her face in his shirt; she looked up at him to see the comforting smile on his face she smiled back at him. Her bright grey-violet eyes shining slightly in the room, her brother headed off to his room 'cause he was six while she was four; she frowned softly as she watched her brother leave her behind. "Hello, you must be the new girl named Illya, right?" A voice from behind whispered, spinning around her eyes landed on a girl with strawberry-blond hair and blue eyes staring into her grey-violet ones; she looked at the girl and nodded in reply. The girl smiled and held out her hand and whispered, "Come on Illya, I want to show you around." She placed her gloved hand in the girl's hand, she then followed her looking around the orphanage she looked at her and whispered, "So, what is your name?" The girl stopped dead in her tracks, looking at Illya that's when she saw that the strawberry-blond haired girl couldn't see. "Name's Lilly, may I ask how you got here?" She shook her head she didn't want to speak about it, Lilly wasn't much older then herself she was only four. She looked at the girl and whispered, "Why are you here? You must only be either four or five, I heard that adults usual only go for the younger kids never the older ones." Lilly laughed at this, it was true looking at her Lilly replied softly, "I can't see, people don't want me...I'm nobody's child; I will stay here until I become an adult I know it. No one wants me, I have such a sweet personality but no one wants me." She looked at Lilly she didn't know what she was suppose to do, she tried to say something that would help, closing her eyes she found some strength and whispered, "Don't worry, I'm sure someone will want you...I'm not going to be leaving without my brother if I can help it." Lilly nodded and the two then headed outside to look at the stars, surprisingly the sky was always these way she and her brother weren't from Traverse Town but there was a heartless rid on her home planet. She looked at her strawberry-blond headed friend, she really did enjoy star gazing Illya quickly turned her head back to the orphanage, she then looked back at Lilly if there was one thing that bothered her more then anything it was this; she wanted to know if there were other worlds out there. "Hey Lilly, do you think there's other worlds out there?!" She blurted out, she looked at Lilly she knew that the young girl wasn't expecting this. Flashback ends: She looked at Riku and murmured, "Lilly? Do you know anyone by that name Riku?" Riku shook his head worried about Illya, it seemed as if all these fighting was getting to the young warrior he sat down and told Illya that they were taking a break. "What do you mean by we're taking a break?!" Riku looked at her and replied calmly, "You are tired, I don't want to push you." She looked at Riku knowing that he was only trying to do what was best for her, she sat down right next to Riku looking at him she lied, "I am fine Riku really." She knew that Riku would be able to see straight through this act, shaking his silver hair Riku said clearly and firmly, "We are taking a break and no buts." She knew that it was a losing battle, sitting down on the floor she whispered, "Riku, I guess you are right." ~- Upper Floor -~ Nia looked at Demyx she knew right away what was troubling him, looking out at the sunset which was happening 'cause it was nearly nine o cloak she then looked at Demyx and whispered, "I remember a song my mom use to singing to me, would you like to hear it?" Demyx looked at her smiling he nodded, she smiled to and then looked out at the sunset then something struck her. She shook her head and replied, "I will tell you it later okay?" Looking over to Demyx to see a nod in reply, the two then headed inside. Demyx grabbed her wrist and pulled her closer to him, smiling a little he whispered, "Nia, I know that we are nobodies and that we can't feel. But I love you." Then the spiky dirty-blond haired nobody gave her a kiss on the cheek, her face turning a light shade of pink she looked at him and whispered stunted, "Demyx, did you just do what I think you did?" Nodding Demyx held his hand out for her and bowed, he then asked her sweetly, "May I please take you to your room miss?" She smiled and placed her gloved hand into his, she then bent down and looked into his bright blue eyes. "Yes you may, but only to my room. You aren't allowed to come in, 'cause I would like to have some time to myself." The two nobodies then began to walk down the hall their hands still in the other ones. ~~~~~~ You asked me if I wanted some ice-cream today, I agreed to the date but what I never said was that I couldn't. I knew I should have told you no, but I didn't listen to my heart. Now 'cause of this you have stepped into my world, I'm worried about how I would feel when we take our different paths. I know that next time you ask I will say yes, you took me by surprise by saying that you love me. Is this a trick or is it truth? |
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| Hopelessly Confused | Ok i read everything on the first pg so im still pretty, ok really far behind, but from what i have read it seems like a really good story! Keep it up! |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 21 EXP: | Disclaimer: Do I have to say it! I don't want to, 'cause that means that I can't keep Riku, Roxas, Demyx and Axel! I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of it's characters. *whimpers* Guys, remember later to hold your Riku plusies, I don't know why I'm telling you this eailer but yes I'm going to be mean to my poor Riku-kun. The poem will be at the end of the last part for Party Time! Party Time part 1 Illya watched as Riku got up and held his hand out to her, taking it she stood up and looked at him unsure what she should do she whispered, "Riku, you sure you don't know anyone by that name?" Riku nodded saying that he was sure that he didn't know anyone by that name and then the two moved onto the next hallway which was the hallway in between nine and eight. Looking at Riku she thought about a few things, why does she knew someone by that name and Riku doesn't? She shook it off and contiuned to follow Riku, shaking her head Illya looked at him she knew that Riku knows best. "Riku, I..." She broke off she looked at Riku who had turned around to look at her, she turned her gaze to the floor and walked right past Riku. It seemed as if they have been drifting apart since this started, lifting her head she stared through the blindfold. "Why did this happen Riku?" ~- Castle That Never Was -~ Nia giggled as Demyx began singing she always did enjoy listening to him sing, just then the other members showed up. She looked to see the grin on Xemnas' face which was a surprise 'cause he never showed emotion, she then listened along with Demyx to hear what would be said. "Umm, Xemnas why are you grinning?" She asked timidly, smirking at her Xemnas turned to face Axel. "Axel, it's your job to get the firewood for our bombfire tonight." Xemnas said, Axel looked over to Marluxia with a evil glint to his emerald-green eyes. "No problem Xemnas, I can get the firewood in no time." Axel then summoned his chakrams and went after Marluxia, who quickly dashed off not wanting to get turned into firewood himself. "Axel, don't you dare!" Marluxia shouted. Nia and Roxas were rolling on the floor laughing their butts off, looking up through emerald-green pools she choked, "Man oh man, Axel what the heck are you planning?" Axel then came back with some pieces of a tree that he had cut up with his chakrams, smiling still with that glint to his eyes he said, "I got the firewood!" Marluxia then shouted from his room, "Axel, you are so dead when I get my hands on you! How dare you hurt my friends?!" The next thing that Nia knew was that Marluxia came running past with his scythe rised and ready to hurt Axel, Axel who was in his room by then and super-heated the doorknop stoping anyone from trying to get into his room. "Axel, open this door right now!" She choked again from this order looking at Marluxia she tossed, "Axel won't do it!" Standing up she and Roxas looked at each other, they then watched as first Marluxia and then Vexen tried to get into Axel's room. But the same thing happened: they both got burnt 'cause of the heat. Summoning her keyblade along with Roxas who summoned Oathkeeper, the two walked over to the door and unlocked it. Pushing it open with their keyblades she glanced over her shoulder and tossed, "And that's how you open his door when he 'superheats' it." She then watched as Axel walked out the firewood no longer in his arms, smiling she looked back at the others. ~- Basment eight -~ Illya smiled at Riku things were deadly quiet, not really caring she noticed that it suddenly got really cold. She then felt Riku put his arms around her to keep her warm, her eyes then glazed over surprised by this she whispered, "Riku, what's the matter?" Riku smiled a little knowing that Illya was only half a head shorter then him, he then replied softly in her ear, "Nothing's the matter Illya." Not beliving him she watched as he walked away from her, frowning she ran to catch up to him looking at him. A smirk then played it's way across her lips, she then asked, "Did I tell you that you could let me go?" Smirking as well Riku shook his silver head, wrapping his arms around her to keep her warm he looked passed the blindfold and murmured, "No, but you didn't say that we shouldn't get closer to the exit, we can rest there for the night." Nodding in reply she followed Riku to see that sure enough they had reached the last room, looking at him she murmured, "Riku, are you sure you are okay?" ~~~~~ Part two will contiune from here, and I will try to make it longer...hehe gonna get something good in that chapter. *looks at Saix* |
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| Screw that action Join Date: May 2006 Location: In a movie theater no where near you Age: 16 Posts: 2,055
Rep Power: 6 ![]() Level: 16 EXP: | Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter. Could you read mine? The new chapters out. |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 21 EXP: | Disclaimer: I don't need to say it do I? You guys should know it by now! I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of it's characters, all I own is the plot, the poems at the end, and the ocs *continues to whimper* Wait! Kadji-kun, I will hold you if you want! :) Kadji: ...Okay, I guess this can't be to bad. *holds Kadji* Me: Get lost you crazy Kadji fan-girls, and I think this chapter might get a bit creepy. Man, I have got to stop being mean to Illya. And this isn't as mean as I can get trust me. And hands off the lyrcis they're MINE! Man, bad dreams much for Nia and Illya, a scary side to some down right hotties of Kingdom Hearts! Party Time part two Illya got closer to Riku looking up at him through the blindfold, she then sat down and chimed in, "Riku, I.." Growing because she couldn't get the words out she snarled, "Dang it, why can't I get the words out?!" She then rested her head on Riku's shoulder she didn't know what to say or think. She knew that something wasn't right on the top floor, she soon fell asleep on his shoulder. Dream: Illya looked around something wasn't right, she spun around to see that she was covered in Darkness. Panicked she looked around for Riku or anyone that would help her, she saw Sora taking a step closer it turned into a heartless. "What?!" She snarled, something wasn't right and she knew it big time. "Illya, this is were you will stay." A voice from behind said, turning around to see Sora and Riku her heart was pounding faster. "Guys, what's the matter?!" Just then she noticed that their eyes were yellow like the heartless, snarling she summoned her keyblades looking down at the second one she whispered, "What? Two keyblades?" Getting ready in case one of them attacked, and sure enough Riku did the last person she wanted to attack. Rising her blade to block his attack, Sora came around from behind and got her in the back she saw that the color around them was red. Her own color being that of orange out of fear, she blocked again and not meaning to she spun around and hit Sora in the chest. He fell to the ground spinning around to do the same thing, she did it to Riku fear shinning in her eyes and across her face. She watched as Riku's eyes went back to normal, he looked at her with confusion and whispered, "Why Illya? I thought you loved me." He then disappeared she looked around to see the heartless coming closer, rising her blade she screamed, "Stay back! Leave me alone!" She then began to fighting the heartless, falling to the ground she lifted her head up to see that the heartless had stopped. Looking at Ansem to see the grin on his face, she then noticed that she didn't have her keyblades anymore. She couldn't block his attack, so she watched as he brought the sword down to finish her off. Dream ends: "Sora! Riku!" She screamed, looking around she saw the concerned look on Riku's face. She got up and began to walk away, glancing over her shoulder she whispered, "I'm going out for a walk, I will be back a little later." Riku only nodded not wanting to let her see the fear, concern and worry that was troubling him. "Be carful Illya." Riku said, she nodded and walked away she couldn't let anyone see that she was afraid 'cause of the dream. She was now two rooms away from Riku, she just didn't want him to see the concern and fear that she might do what she did in the dream. "Riku, I can't stay near you, what happens if I hurt you to bad?" She whispered to no one, she then lend aganist the wall and slid down to the floor. Breathing heavily she looked through the dark room, deciding it would be safe to take off the blindfold she lifted her hand up and pulled it off. ~- The World That Never Was -~ The order where just enjoying, well at least trying to when Nia glanced around and saw the look on Axel's face. "Oh no, Axel don't you dare steal Demyx's sitar." She whispered, and sure enough Axel swiped Demyx's sitar 'causing the whole order other then Nia to laugh as Demyx tried to get it back. "Axel give me that back this mintue!" Losing her temper she barked, "Axel! Enough, give Demyx back his sitar this mintue!" Lifting her gloved hand into the air, she formed her own sitar which wasn't that much different then Demyx. Her's is that of a dark blue and a white heart on it, walking up to the stage. She took her seat and started out softly, "You will learn to fly one day, but until then you will learn that life isn't fair my dear child. But I shall always be with you no matter what. I know what must happen, the prophecy can't be stopped young child. But that doesn't mean that you can't have fun, we'll always protect you I promise. I know that you can take anything." Stopping she saw that Larxene had put some thunder around the sitar, Demyx who took it back got shocked falling to his knees. The others laughed losing her temper once more she snarled, "It's not funny, how would you like it if it was done to you!" She then shook her head as the laughing died down Saix was even laughing, she then looked down and began playing once more. "I know that I can't help you, but I will try. Trapped in a world of confusion and anger, trying to find the truth and love. You know the light will always be there to guide you, but rain and other things will try to get in your way. Why is the world so cold? Reaching for a guiding star, one that will lead you forever and ever." She stopped, she couldn't contiune with the song. "Why mom? Why did you leave me and my bro?" Her element was that of emotions, so she could feel more then most nobodies. She saw that Demyx was now going after Axel trying to hurt him, smiling she knew her mom would be proud of her for the fact that she just was singing in front of the order and she was afraid. Just then she felt light headed, falling to the floor everything around her began to fade. She barely heard Axel asked, "Nia, are you okay? What's the matter?" Dream: She looked around the dark room, her eyes then landed on Roxas' door walking over to it. She knocked on the door, she then heard from the other side, "Who is it?! I'm really busy!" Timidly she opened the door, she then stepped in to see Roxas was covered in the Darkness. He spun around and had yellow eyes, taken back by this she asked, "Roxas? What's happened in here?" A smirk came to his lips and he took a step closer, taking a few more steps back she bumped into the door. Glancing over to see that it was locked, she looked back at Roxas he still had those yellow eyes like the heartless. "Roxas, what's going on?!" He was now standing in front of her, grabbing her chain he pulled it up so that way they were looking eye-to-eye. He then lend in and whispered, "You know what Nia? You really shouldn't be here in the order, let me help with that." He then lend in even closer so that way their noses were touching, trying to push him away she couldn't fear was clearly in her eyes. "Nia, why are you being so stuborrn? You use too do as I told you." Pushing him away from her she spat, "That was before you became like this!" Rising one of his keyblades Roxas snarled, "Is that true? Then let's end this right here you brat!" The two clashed blades summoning Oathkeeper, he went for her side summoning her second one she whispered, "No you don't Roxas, I won't let you do that." She then use the blade to stop his second, rising her foot she kicked him and sent him flying out of the window. Knowing what she did was going to get her in trouble, she panicked looking around for something, anything that would help her. Spinning around she saw Axel standing there he had a look on his face that meant: wait until Xemnas finds out about what you did. There was a glow to his eyes that meant that he couldn't wait to see what would happen to her, she grabbed his wrist and pleaded, "Please, don't tell Xemnas. I didn't mean too, he was aimming to hurt me." Dream ends: Opening her eyes she let out a sigh, it was just another bad dream she then pushed herself up and murmured, "Just another bad dream, that's all that was." She then walked over to Demyx and Roxas, tossing her arms around Roxas she whispered, "Don't go crazy on us please, promise me that Roxas." Roxas smiled and returned the hug, stroking her hair he whispered, "Don't worry Nia, I promise I won't go crazy on you guys." Demyx was tapping his foot, she smiled and pushed Roxas and taunted, "Aww, what's the matter little Demyx? Afraid that I like someone else?" She smiled as she thought about the sea-salt ice cream he bought her, she then whispered loud enough for only him to hear, "Can we do that again some time?" Demyx smiled and nodded, the other members all looked at them confused. Demyx then went running after Axel to try and hurt him, feeling anger towards Xemnas she went chasing after Demyx. "Demyx, let's get him together!" She tossed, Demyx nodded and then tossed back to her, "Sure, and that song you were singing. Was that the one you wanted to show me?" Nia caught up to him, smiling she knew that yes that was the one. "Yes, a little bit of it anyway." ~- Floor Nine, Riku's point of view -~ His ocean blue-green eyes looked through the dark, turning his gaze up to the starlit sky thinking about what Illya had told him. "I wonder why she screamed, I will ask her later." He thought, he closed his eyes but didn't fall asleep he was too worried and concerned about Illya. He knew that she could take of herself but he couldn't help but remember the promise he made himself. "I won't let anything or anyone hurt you Illya, I promise." He whispered to himself, that was why he broke his promises to her. It was to keep her safe, but would she understand this? Probaly not why would she want to understand him? He didn't know it, but she was afraid that she might hurt him. Getting up he heared someone open the door, he then saw the grey-violet eyes of hers. "Come on Illya, it's bed time." Illya walked over and fell asleep he then sat back down and watched her, hoping that she wouldn't wake up again if she did he would ask her why. "I promise, I won't hurt you ever Illya. I don't like seeing you upset." He then gave her a kiss on the cheek and fell asleep himself, he knew that first thing when they woke up they would be heading up to the next floor. ~~~~~ Dreams seem to come and go, Having a bad dream once and a while, I don't get it when did this happen? Hurting you and others, afraid that it might happen. I know that I can't be afraid, but what happens if it does? Afraid and concerned for you, I don't get it why can't I say it? I tried to tell you how I feel, But once again the words, Didn't want to come out, What's the matter with me? |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Okay I finally came up to speed. Nice job with the chapters and poems. |
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| Kudos to Bumblebee for the avater Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Run Kittypaws! Run 'Cross Keyboard! Posts: 3,894
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 21 EXP: | Yes, I was wondering if you might have forgotten about me. *pouts* |
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