Uselessss..........

rockman · 02/23/07, 02:58 PM

well i don't think it's gonna funny (but all of my friend said it's funny) perhaps you can read it for a while ^^. Well ladies can't wait so long aren't they ? here's chapter 1

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well....did you guys always think sora is always useful because he's the main character? NO HE DIDN'T
-a message from my friend-

"....ke up...."

"Someone..or something is whispering to me....this is dream yes a dream...."

"WAKE UP STUPID!!!"

"AHHHHH!!!" rock waked up constantly and then he look around him and try to catch sora

"COME HERE YOU SON OF A *beeep*!!!I"LL KILL YOU!!!!!!"said rock while he run and throw stone to sora

"what?!what do i do?! i didn't do anything bad to you!"said sora while he try to dodge the stone and run

"OH YES! YOU ALWAYS DONE SOMETHING BAD TO ME!!"said rock

one hour ago.......

sora,riku and kairi is arrived at traverse town

"ahh....it's nostalgic"said sora to riku

"yeah i always remember that time "said riku to sora

"that....time?"ask kairi to sora and riku

"whoa what did you mean by 'that time' ?"ask sora to riku

"WHAT?!you forget it?!"said riku to sora

"hold on i don't get it could you please tell me again"said sora to riku

"the....moment....we....sleep...together.....in... the cold night "said riku to sora

"OH MY GOD!!!SORA!!!I DIDN"T KNOW YOU"RE A GAY!!!!"said kairi to sora

"N-NO!!I'M NOT A GAY"said sora to riku and kairi

"don't lying you ARE a gay"said riku to sora

"NO I"M NOT!!!"said sora to everyone

then some mysterius guy appeared at the gate and aprroaching sora and friends

"excuse moa"said the mysterius guy when he appeared behind sora

"GAH!!!don't surprise me!"said sora to the mysterious guy

"ohohoh i'm sorry please let me introduce me properly my name is rock and i can tell anyone characteristic by just one look" said rock to everyone

"okay then ROCK can you tell me is he gay or not?"said riku to rock while he pointed to sora

"hmm"

"well?"

"he's a gay yes i'm positive"

"HOW DID YOU KNOW?!"said sora

"well i saw your homo naked photo"

"*beep*HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT?!oops

hmy:"
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whew i'm exhausted, by the way for information THIS chapter is not funny the funny thing is begin when chapter 2/3 begin heheheheh just wait...:laugh:

sora_luver · 02/23/07, 09:12 PM

no this chapter is pretty funny.... but there is a bunch of spelling mistakes that you should fix..... but over all it seems like a pretty good fanfic

**snowdog** · 02/23/07, 11:13 PM

o.O

Uh... yeah. Is there a storyline to this?

If not, you need to think of one, a fic won't survive without it.

rockman · 02/24/07, 04:07 AM

ahahahahaha i know it there some mistake spelling........i think i fix it later sigh too much work here (homework ,etc) anyway here's chapter 2

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"well i have MANY source of information"said rock while he arrogantly walking around sora

"WHY YOU!!!"said sora angry

"really?could you show us that INFORMATION source you talking about?" said riku annoyed

"YEAH!!!DON"T JUST TALKING BIG!!!SHOW IT TO US!!"said sora very angry and anonoyed

"very well then but if you have seen 3 of my I.S you all have to come with me"said rock

"it's fine with me how 'bout you sora?"said riku

"ME TOO?!YOU KAIRI??!!"said sora

"umm...i think i'm not go-"said kairi

"DON"T worry madamoiselle i will take care of you GENTLELY"said rock then he grabbed kairis hand

"o-oh t-thanks"said kairi

"HEY!!GET YOUR HANDS OF HER!!"said sora

"HAH who are you?her father?"said rock

"I"M HER..her.."

"her what?"

"her...her..HER HUSBAND!!!"

everyone is gasped and sora is confused itself hah what a trouble some guy....

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OMG!!!i forgot i have to go to school to finish my class homework!!!!!!sry for the short chapter hafta hurry hahaha:toungesmile:

sora_luver · 02/24/07, 04:59 AM

it's okay that it's short... I really never expected sora to say that...lol

**Zetsumi** · 02/24/07, 10:29 AM

You never expected Sora to say that because it's something only an idiot would concieve him saying it.

Look, you illiterate little kiddy, this crap? It's not funny. You throw some swearing, gay jokes, and an abridged version fo your delusion of granduer into a KH setting...and, as per generic crappy Fic. it's set on Destiny Islands PWS. And you seem to think, in your deluded little mind, that for some reason, this has even a drop of humour in it?

This doesn't even belong in this board. The one it belongs in is labelled the 'Trash Bin'.

rockman · 02/24/07, 12:42 PM

UAGH!someone stabbed my heart......is the first chapter looked like a gay joke?hmm i think i need some improvement........
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"HAH no way he's her husband she never married an idiot like you"said riku

"uh.....i'm confused....when did i married sora"said kairi

"hmmm i'm a little bit confused i think i need to check it again"said rock

"(WAAAAH!!!WHAT SHOULD I DO!?I SAID IT ?!THINK SORA THINK!!)"said sora

"hmm?oh!i find something interesting!"said rock after he picked up some thing

"what is it?" said riku

"this is a miracle juice, if you tell lie you'll died after you drink this juice"said rock

"*gulp*if we tell the the truth?"said riku

"well he'll live after drink the juice"said rock

"so sora you'll drink this or not?"said riku

"k-kairi y-you believe me r-right?"said sora

"please sora i need to know"said kairi

" o-o-okay then i-i'll drink this"said sora

when sora is going to drink some teenager run to sora

"STOP!DON"T DRINK IT!!!"said the teenager

"*gulp*"sora drink the juice

"DARN I"M TOO LATE!!!"said the teenager

"MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!AT LAST! I"M FREE!"after rock said that he turned into a big dark monster

"DARN!SEEMS LIKE I HAVE T KILL YOU FIRST!!!"said the teenager

"FIRST TO DO IS...BANNISH MAGOT!!!"said the monster

after that the monster start to cast a spell but the teenager is trying to stop it

"WARPGA!!"said the monster

then the four of them is warped
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ahhh perhap this chapt is short too right?oh and if you say this trhead is a trash i don't too care about 'cuz i just want to write some story i think so far perhaps this story is not suit your tast if i you want me to change this thread into your taste jjust said it

02/23/07, 02:58 PM	#1
rockman Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: somewhere everyone could not reach if he don't know it Posts: 105 Rep Power: 0	Uselessss.......... well i don't think it's gonna funny (but all of my friend said it's funny) perhaps you can read it for a while ^^. Well ladies can't wait so long aren't they ? here's chapter 1 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ well....did you guys always think sora is always useful because he's the main character? NO HE DIDN'T -a message from my friend- "....ke up...." "Someone..or something is whispering to me....this is dream yes a dream...." "WAKE UP STUPID!!!" "AHHHHH!!!" rock waked up constantly and then he look around him and try to catch sora "COME HERE YOU SON OF A beeep!!!I"LL KILL YOU!!!!!!"said rock while he run and throw stone to sora "what?!what do i do?! i didn't do anything bad to you!"said sora while he try to dodge the stone and run "OH YES! YOU ALWAYS DONE SOMETHING BAD TO ME!!"said rock one hour ago....... sora,riku and kairi is arrived at traverse town "ahh....it's nostalgic"said sora to riku "yeah i always remember that time "said riku to sora "that....time?"ask kairi to sora and riku "whoa what did you mean by 'that time' ?"ask sora to riku "WHAT?!you forget it?!"said riku to sora "hold on i don't get it could you please tell me again"said sora to riku "the....moment....we....sleep...together.....in... the cold night "said riku to sora "OH MY GOD!!!SORA!!!I DIDN"T KNOW YOU"RE A GAY!!!!"said kairi to sora "N-NO!!I'M NOT A GAY"said sora to riku and kairi "don't lying you ARE a gay"said riku to sora "NO I"M NOT!!!"said sora to everyone then some mysterius guy appeared at the gate and aprroaching sora and friends "excuse moa"said the mysterius guy when he appeared behind sora "GAH!!!don't surprise me!"said sora to the mysterious guy "ohohoh i'm sorry please let me introduce me properly my name is rock and i can tell anyone characteristic by just one look" said rock to everyone "okay then ROCK can you tell me is he gay or not?"said riku to rock while he pointed to sora "hmm" "well?" "he's a gay yes i'm positive" "HOW DID YOU KNOW?!"said sora "well i saw your homo naked photo" "beepHOW DID YOU KNOW THAT?!oops hmy:" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ whew i'm exhausted, by the way for information THIS chapter is not funny the funny thing is begin when chapter 2/3 begin heheheheh just wait...:laugh:

02/23/07, 09:12 PM	#2
sora_luver Ruler of Light Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Some place I've never been... wait a sec... this seems familiar Posts: 445 Rep Power: 3	Re: Uselessss.......... no this chapter is pretty funny.... but there is a bunch of spelling mistakes that you should fix..... but over all it seems like a pretty good fanfic

02/23/07, 11:13 PM	#3
snowdog is a girl Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: n. 1. a place of settlement, activity, or residence; 2. a place or situation occupied Age: 18 Posts: 6,279 Rep Power: 12	Re: Uselessss.......... o.O Uh... yeah. Is there a storyline to this? If not, you need to think of one, a fic won't survive without it.

02/24/07, 04:07 AM	#4
rockman Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: somewhere everyone could not reach if he don't know it Posts: 105 Rep Power: 0	Re: Uselessss.......... ahahahahaha i know it there some mistake spelling........i think i fix it later sigh too much work here (homework ,etc) anyway here's chapter 2 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "well i have MANY source of information"said rock while he arrogantly walking around sora "WHY YOU!!!"said sora angry "really?could you show us that INFORMATION source you talking about?" said riku annoyed "YEAH!!!DON"T JUST TALKING BIG!!!SHOW IT TO US!!"said sora very angry and anonoyed "very well then but if you have seen 3 of my I.S you all have to come with me"said rock "it's fine with me how 'bout you sora?"said riku "ME TOO?!YOU KAIRI??!!"said sora "umm...i think i'm not go-"said kairi "DON"T worry madamoiselle i will take care of you GENTLELY"said rock then he grabbed kairis hand "o-oh t-thanks"said kairi "HEY!!GET YOUR HANDS OF HER!!"said sora "HAH who are you?her father?"said rock "I"M HER..her.." "her what?" "her...her..HER HUSBAND!!!" everyone is gasped and sora is confused itself hah what a trouble some guy.... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OMG!!!i forgot i have to go to school to finish my class homework!!!!!!sry for the short chapter hafta hurry hahaha:toungesmile:

02/24/07, 04:59 AM	#5
sora_luver Ruler of Light Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Some place I've never been... wait a sec... this seems familiar Posts: 445 Rep Power: 3	Re: Uselessss.......... it's okay that it's short... I really never expected sora to say that...lol

02/24/07, 10:29 AM	#6
Zetsumi The black storm brews once more... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Rockhampton, QLD Age: 20 Posts: 3,176 Rep Power: 9	Re: Uselessss.......... You never expected Sora to say that because it's something only an idiot would concieve him saying it. Look, you illiterate little kiddy, this crap? It's not funny. You throw some swearing, gay jokes, and an abridged version fo your delusion of granduer into a KH setting...and, as per generic crappy Fic. it's set on Destiny Islands PWS. And you seem to think, in your deluded little mind, that for some reason, this has even a drop of humour in it? This doesn't even belong in this board. The one it belongs in is labelled the 'Trash Bin'.

02/24/07, 12:42 PM	#7
rockman Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: somewhere everyone could not reach if he don't know it Posts: 105 Rep Power: 0	Re: Uselessss.......... UAGH!someone stabbed my heart......is the first chapter looked like a gay joke?hmm i think i need some improvement........ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "HAH no way he's her husband she never married an idiot like you"said riku "uh.....i'm confused....when did i married sora"said kairi "hmmm i'm a little bit confused i think i need to check it again"said rock "(WAAAAH!!!WHAT SHOULD I DO!?I SAID IT ?!THINK SORA THINK!!)"said sora "hmm?oh!i find something interesting!"said rock after he picked up some thing "what is it?" said riku "this is a miracle juice, if you tell lie you'll died after you drink this juice"said rock "gulpif we tell the the truth?"said riku "well he'll live after drink the juice"said rock "so sora you'll drink this or not?"said riku "k-kairi y-you believe me r-right?"said sora "please sora i need to know"said kairi " o-o-okay then i-i'll drink this"said sora when sora is going to drink some teenager run to sora "STOP!DON"T DRINK IT!!!"said the teenager "gulp"sora drink the juice "DARN I"M TOO LATE!!!"said the teenager "MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!AT LAST! I"M FREE!"after rock said that he turned into a big dark monster "DARN!SEEMS LIKE I HAVE T KILL YOU FIRST!!!"said the teenager "FIRST TO DO IS...BANNISH MAGOT!!!"said the monster after that the monster start to cast a spell but the teenager is trying to stop it "WARPGA!!"said the monster then the four of them is warped --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ahhh perhap this chapt is short too right?oh and if you say this trhead is a trash i don't too care about 'cuz i just want to write some story i think so far perhaps this story is not suit your tast if i you want me to change this thread into your taste jjust said it

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