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Old 02/15/07, 03:21 PM   #1
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hey guys this is my first story i hope you guys like it!


Chapter 1


In some world, there are two teenagers running trhough a rocky field "AHH!" the girl suddenly fall and the boy stop and help her "thanks " "there's no time to waste! They'll catch up with us if we stay right here!" said the boy. In other place someone watched the from an aeroplane "hmph they they can run from us"said a figure in a black armor "how about them?" said a figure in black armor with a white coat "forte...hah we don't need them anymore" "fine, ALL CANNON FIRE WITH MAXIMUM POWER!" then the aeroplane shots them with fiercely "LOOK! BEHIND YOU!" said the girl "!!!!REFLECTGA!!!!" right after the reflectga casted the bullet hit the barrier but instead reflected it blown in the place "you see that ?that's happen to all who opposed use" said the FIBA (figure in black armor) to the captain of aero plane "SIR!DETECTING LIFE FORM......A LIFE FORM DETECTED!" "WHAT?!NO WAY" said FIBA. Mean while at the shooted site "ugh...you okay Hikari?" "y-yeah i'm fine....what about you Basim?" "not good" "YOU GUYS!!" said a guy with hat "ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!" "NO! BASIM IS INJURED" "darn"then the aeroplane shots again "UAGH!!" "BASIM" "THEY LOCKED ON BASIM?!" then he draw large bazooka "target locked....it's kubas fleet......MAXIMUM INPUT FIRE!" then he shot the bazooka "i'm sorry kuba" then the aeroplane began to blow and sink slowly "GRRR" "i've prepared the teleport portal" "WE'LL ESCAPE RIGHT NOW!" said FIBA then they teleporteed to somewhere "captain!what should we do ?!" "all crew escape with the emergency pod" "AYE SIR" then the aero plane start to blow from the back "i've....prepared my life for the freedom......continue our fight......Kaito" mean while in outer space "LET ME GO!!!" 'no you can't Kaito!we must find the key blade wielder" "SHUT UP!!!!I"M ALONE IS ENOUGH FIGHTING THEM!!!" "SHUT UP AND STAY QUIET!!!" then it's blast off to somewhere.

~end~

what you guys think? now time for some comment!:toungesmile:
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