Darkness...

Riku's Twilight · 02/08/07, 05:22 PM

(Um, I'm just writing this for spare time. No chapters, nothing like that. It's just a KH2 fanfic about what takes place afterward.)

"What is it?" asked Riku.

"I don't know." said Kairi. Her voice was still shaky from the nervousness she felt around Sora.

"Well, let's open it and see!" said Sora. He shook it out of the bottle and onto his hand.

Sora could only stare. "It's hard to make out... I can only really see one word."

"What is it?" asked Kairi, but Riku was already over there, looking. He saw it and said that one word aloud.

"Riku. It's my name."

They all stared in shock. What could it possibly mean?

"I think he needs you, Riku. The King needs you." said Kairi.

"Okay, let's go!" said Sora, but Kairi stopped him. "I mean only Riku. You should go see what he's up to."

"Okay, I guess..." said Sora.

Riku was used to doing what he needed to. He got into the gummi ship and headed to the Castle.

(Plz post ur thoughts!)

sora_luver · 02/08/07, 05:56 PM

pretty good... you should write more.... and see how it goes...:thumbsup:

Deeman · 02/08/07, 05:58 PM

Not much to to see here, so I don't really know until you post some more >.<

02/08/07, 05:22 PM	#1
Riku's Twilight Ruler of Light Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: glued to a monitor Age: 16 Posts: 717 Rep Power: 4	Darkness... (Um, I'm just writing this for spare time. No chapters, nothing like that. It's just a KH2 fanfic about what takes place afterward.) "What is it?" asked Riku. "I don't know." said Kairi. Her voice was still shaky from the nervousness she felt around Sora. "Well, let's open it and see!" said Sora. He shook it out of the bottle and onto his hand. Sora could only stare. "It's hard to make out... I can only really see one word." "What is it?" asked Kairi, but Riku was already over there, looking. He saw it and said that one word aloud. "Riku. It's my name." They all stared in shock. What could it possibly mean? "I think he needs you, Riku. The King needs you." said Kairi. "Okay, let's go!" said Sora, but Kairi stopped him. "I mean only Riku. You should go see what he's up to." "Okay, I guess..." said Sora. Riku was used to doing what he needed to. He got into the gummi ship and headed to the Castle. (Plz post ur thoughts!)

02/08/07, 05:56 PM	#2
sora_luver Ruler of Light Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Some place I've never been... wait a sec... this seems familiar Posts: 445 Rep Power: 3	Re: Darkness... pretty good... you should write more.... and see how it goes...:thumbsup:

02/08/07, 05:58 PM	#3
Deeman out of order Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Pierrefonds Age: 16 Posts: 3,893 Rep Power: 8	Re: Darkness... Not much to to see here, so I don't really know until you post some more >.<

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