Sign-up for my fanfic entitled "Hearts of Twilight"

[Lycanthrope]

well, im new here, so i figured a way to get people to know me better would be for me to post a fanfic im currently working on. it would help if people could sign up and make a character w/ a short description, cause ive heard that it can be a pain making up tons of new characters. it would help me alot.

and, if you dont feel like making a character, could you possiby give me few tips on how to write an extremely good fanfic?

[snowdog]

I'll give you a character if you post some details of the storyline.

And tips?

• Write the chapters out in MS Word or a similar program before posting. If there are a lot of mistakes in your spelling or grammar, then it makes your fic difficult to read. And if it's too difficult to read, people will be less reluctant to read it.

• Use description. Lots of it.

• Keep a thesaurus handy while writing. A wide variety of words in your vocabulary makes your descriptions and action much more interesting.

• Try to have a basic story planned out before you start.

• Update frequently, readers might get bored if you take too long to post a new chapter.

• Write chapters in advance. For example, before posting chapter one, try to have maybe three or so written out and ready to post. That way, you can keep updates coming, and you can add to your story when you're offline.

Hope all that helps! ^-^ And get back to me on the chapter thing.

[Lycanthrope]

thanks for the tips.

it starts out in twilight town, with Xonic, and some of my friends (Xonic is my own character) it involves a descendant of Organization XIII who tries to destroy the universe, except his own world. Xonic goes through tons of challenges and worlds, while meeting classic KH and FF characters.

is that enough for now? i dont want to give anything away.

[snowdog]

Righty-ho. So is this a main character, or just a minor one?

[Lycanthrope]

there are no main characters. all characters will have decent signifigance.

[snowdog]

Right, so like... they'll be a main character, but only on one world. So just for a short time?

[princess namine]

Sign me up,I already got a character for you. She might be a love intersert. I'll give you her name. It's Bella (Elle for short).

[Aphex]

I got a character in mind as well... when you say description, do you mean appearance with an history thrown in?

[Lycanthrope]

just enough info for me to have a decent idea about the character.

the characters will be in at least 4 of the chapters, except maybe my friends character. he said he didnt want to make his character a big part.

[Aphex]

Let's see here...

Name: Kenji Shirow
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Kenji is outgoing and mostly is the one to joke around, a lot actually. He's someone that you can put your trust into as he would watch your back no matter what happens. Just because he looks like an regular teenager doesn't mean you should take him for granted.
Appearance: Kenji has brown medium length hair which his bangs nearly cover his hazel colored eyes. However he covers his hair with a black beanie, the small visor covering his right eye while his bangs sneak out from underneath it. As for his attire, the boy wears a plain white wife-beater along with black denim shorts that reaches passed his knees. Around his left bicep is a black arm band and his hands are kept warm by a pair of black fingerless gloves. Lastly Kenji wears a pair of black sneakers with a white Heartagram on the sides of them.

This is actually one of my role-playing characters. I just figured I would donate him for your fan-fic. If you want the history to be put in then I could edit this post with it.

[Lycanthrope]

thats good. thank you very much.

yea, i use my RP name from a different site...

[snowdog]

Shadows_Fall, I used your template. Hope that's okay. ^-^

Name: Mira Li
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Personality: A cheerful, and happy-go-lucky girl without a care in the world. Always there for her numerous friends during good times and bad, she can be relied upon in any situation. She's always ready for fun, no matter where or when. However, she should not be judged on her amiable impression - her excitable, fun-loving appearance hides a deep, intense young lady. She hides incredible combat skills, and will use them mercilessly to defend those who she loves.
Appearance: Average in height, her build is slender. She has a shock of fiery ginger hair, which tumbles down her back. Her face is dotted with freckles, and her deep, green eyes are complimented with a bright, likable smile. She wears a short-sleeved, pale green shirt, with a number of bracelets down her arms. She also wears a jade green skirt, and a pair of brown boots.

[Lycanthrope]

thank you two very much.

[princess namine]

name:Bella or elle
age:16
gender:female
personality:elle is a smart quiet young girl who is in love with Xonic.:wub: she is beautiful,loving ,care free person who would do anything for her friends.she is physic,teleiapathe,and can stop time.She is known to be a witch.She can also write spells.

appearance:she has strawberry blonde hair that goes down her back with red highlights.she wears a red mini skirt with stars on it and a red shirt that starts at her chest and sheelves that end at her fingers.she has beautiful sky blue eyes with a hint of green in them.she also has black high heels with straps going up her legs.:blushing:

[Lycanthrope]

thank you. all three will be in the nex tchapter, and a few others.