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| Don't be afraid to go too low | You said you hadn't even read it....LIES! Read it, foo... |
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| Twilight Knight Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Balamb Garden Age: 17 Posts: 954
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | I read it yesterday. FOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Don't be afraid to go too low | And? What'd 'ya think? Good or bad? |
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| | #34 |
| your forgotten memory Join Date: May 2004 Location: anywhere but here. Age: 20 Posts: 1,314
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 12 EXP: | Good job, Stavros. The last two chapters were much better than the first. And I really like the story, even though the last chapter was a cliffhanger. But I'm a sucker for cliffhangers. ^_^ Anyways, keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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| Twilight Knight Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Balamb Garden Age: 17 Posts: 954
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | I thought it was good. I said it is actiony. |
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| IKEA Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Midwestern United States of America Posts: 4,333
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| Twilight Knight Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Balamb Garden Age: 17 Posts: 954
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| IKEA Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Midwestern United States of America Posts: 4,333
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 31 EXP: | ACCUSE!!!!!! It was Ty in the Forums with the LIES!!!! Why aren't you writing? |
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| | #39 |
| Don't be afraid to go too low | Brain dead right now....need something to happen...hmm....I'll try to get a chapter up tonight or tomarrow night, ok? |
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| IKEA Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Midwestern United States of America Posts: 4,333
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 31 EXP: | I already did and no one's read so I can;t post |
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| | #41 |
| Don't be afraid to go too low | Damnit SS....now you're CA...stupid california.... |
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| | #42 |
| Disney Soldier Join Date: Dec 2006 Age: 19 Posts: 19
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Yah, I would just like everyone to know: THIS ISN'T A FANFIC, PEOPLE. IT IS CORRECTLY CALLED "ORIGINAL FICTION." I was under the impression that I replied to this with the correct term, but it turns out I didn't so I'm just saying it now. Will reply with critiques later, after I hunt down the chapters. By the way Stavros.... that's another reason why I post my chapters in separate threads. So I won't have to hunt for them between five pages of other people's posts. :) |
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| | #43 |
| IKEA Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Midwestern United States of America Posts: 4,333
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 31 EXP: | That's a pretty good idea. The Mods don't mind? |
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| | #44 |
| Don't be afraid to go too low | Obviously not...I guess the main reason most don't is because they don't have a lot of people reading their FF/OF....I don't...so I won't do that....and I think it's...kinda useless... Awesome FF by the way Raedyn. |
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| | #45 |
| Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Not if I can help it. Age: 17 Posts: 114
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Wow aar...I mean Stavros! I never knew you could write so well! That was cool! I think that you, me, Ty, and Thor should get together and put all of our books in one somehow kinda! (Oh, and I'm on the site now so you and Ty can stop buggin' me!) |
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