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Old 12/08/06, 10:47 PM   #31
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i'm gonna try to post the next chap tonight i hope i can get it in but for now g2g
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Old 12/09/06, 03:11 AM   #32
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Ok Niwa, just get it here ASAP
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Old 12/11/06, 04:18 AM   #33
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BWhahahhahahahhaha yes it I and im back on insider so Niwa everyone how it going
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Old 12/11/06, 09:38 PM   #34
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not much KM42 how ya been ok yall here's chapter 3


Chapter 3 Link saved Niwa is in danger

Niwa and Kinra stopped and looked at each other then back at the camp full of ganon's follower's."Look's like we have to go into the camp and find link and kain I will hold off the follow's you find link and kain ok kinra."Niwa said as kinra agreed and they ran towards the camp niwa jumped into the center of the camp as kinra searched the tents.

Niwa looked around and saw follower's all around him he smiled and started scratching his head."Well this might not have been the best plan I have ever had but who care's I will take pleasure in killing you all."He said as he ran at some of the follower's and started slashing them with his sword.

In the middle of the attack one of the main follower's kicked Niwa back and he rolled across the ground and looked up."So you came here to save Link and Kain well you will have to go through me kid I am Zark General of Lord Ganon's army."Zark said as he pulled out his sword and laughed as he walked toward's niwa.

Niwa got a better look at zark to see he was a lizard like creature with sharp teeth wearing silver armor and a silver sword."So your a general well after i'm done with you they will need a new one and that's no lie."Niwa said as he stood up with a smile and zark got his sword ready to attack.

Niwa ran at zark and swung his sword at him but zark blocked it and punched him in the face.They both kept attacking each other the clash of the two blade's echoed through the area.One atack after another the two did not stop they seemed matched but Zark was more powerful.Niwa swung at zark again but this time he moved out of the way and slashed niwa across the chest.They both jumped back zark laughed as blood dripped down his blade then he ran at him again.Zark jumped into the air and lunged his blade right at Niwa he put his sword in front of him to block it in time.

Zark's blade broke through niwa's and he fell to his knee's as blood dripped out of his side."Look's like I missed your heart that's a real shame i was looking foward to watching you die so quick."Zark said as the other follower's cheered for niwa's death he smiled and looked at zark."You.....have a real...really big mouth.....so shit it already.....you stupid lizard."Niwa said as he grabbed the first piece of his broken sword and stabbed it into zark's foot."You little i should have killed you when i had the chance you die right now you stupid bi...."Zark's word's were cut short and blood dripped out of his mouth and the rest of Niwa's sword was sticking out of zark's neck.

The follower's looked at zark as he fell to the ground bleeding and niwa stood up and looked around."He defeted zark this can't be how did this happen let's kill that kid he killed our general."They all started walking toward's niwa holding their sword's in front of them ready to attack.

As they approched him they all started falling one by one they started running but were tooken out.Kinra and two other guy's appeared in front of niwa looking around then they looked at him."Niwa are you ok i'm sorry it took so long but i finally found them but your hurt."Kinra said as she looked at him with sadness in her eye's and the other two walked up to him.

"So you are Niwa i see you took out zark good job but now ganon will appear to avenge him."The boy in the green outfit said as the other one looked at him and smiled."The name's kain and this is link we are the one's kinra saved from ganon glad we made it in time."

As they all talked the ground started to shake and the ground started to split then a man appeared."It's ganon he is here we need to run or else he will kill us all with no trouble."Link said as niwa started to walk toward's ganon with a smile on his face.

Ganon looked at niwa and smiled as he pulled out his sword laughing as a barrier went around him and Niwa."Niwa no this is bad he is stuck in the barrier with ganon and he won't be able to get outunless someone die's."Link sad as ganon's army appeared behind them walking towards them.

As the army walked towards them the other kids appeared beside kinra, kain and Link."You guy's are here then this should be a little easier for us but we still won't be able to take them all out."Kinra said as they heared yelling coming from the forest, the mountain's and the sea.

The koriki kid's started walking from the forest holding weapon's and shield's ready to fight."My friend's felt the earthquake and have come to aid us in this battle for our world we shall fight."Link said as goron's appeared from the mountain's and Zora's from the sea.

The koriki kid's stood next to the other's as did the goron's and zora's ready for the war."Now we can win i just hope niwa can hold off on his own against ganon i'm sure he came though."Kinra said as the army started running at them and they all ran toward's the army.

"The start of a war."A voice said from the shadows

another hang off don't worry this war will be great and everyone is in it
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Old 12/11/06, 09:41 PM   #35
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Cool its porobaby ganon lol
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Old 12/13/06, 04:17 PM   #36
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:bored: dont tell me he is gonna turn into a pig
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Old 12/13/06, 04:21 PM   #37
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what lol no he won't don't worry i seen that enough
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Old 12/15/06, 02:27 AM   #38
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Great chapter cant wait till the next chapter. The war should be sick!!!
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Old 12/18/06, 09:21 PM   #39
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Chapter 4 The Battle of Hyrule part1

The sound of two army's running across a feild ready to battle yelling as they clash into one another each side attack's without letting up.The ground shake's as thunder roar's and lighting strike's the ground near the two army's.The sky get's dark as rain pour's down over the world and blood is shed from each army.Kinra slashes ganon's follower's one by one as her friend's back her up in the fight.Zi slashes a group of follower's as more come from nowhere and attack him.Levi block's them and throw's them back as he jump's at another group and slashes them then shoot's fire at other's.

Fan then run's behind kinra and cover's her by slashing the follower's then kicking some out of the way.Kiroshi jump's in the air and shoot's a energy ball at the other army in hope's it will slow them down.Maggie run's through the line's of ganon's army slashing anyone who get's in her way.Zex stay's still and throw's knive's at the army then start's slashing and kicking them as they attack.Link and Kain stayed together and attacked together slashing at the follower's together.Ganon's army started to fall in number's but they started killing the koriki kids,gorons,and zora each side was falling fast.

As the battle went on ganon's army brought in weapon's to fight back they had catapult's to shoot fire rocks.Fire rocks started to hit the ground and the goron's started breaking them before they hit.The koriki's could not stop the rocks so they started to run but many were hit and killed.The zora's used water to shoot the rock's back at the follower's and the rock's rolled over many of them.Both side's kept attacking without stopping as more and more kept falling in the middle of battle.More of Ganon's forces came to fight but these one's were archer's they started shooting arrow's at kinra and the other's.The arrow's started hitting the ground and many hit the goron's,zora's and koriki kid's.

As arrow's flew into the air the army of Hyrule were ready with shields the arrows broke on contact with the sheilds.Some had no sheilds and the arrow's hit them kinra was hit in the leg with an arrow.Kinra pulled the arrow out and ran at the army and started slashing them as the hyrule army followed to take out the army once and for all.Ganon's army started to fall faster and faster in time the army was gone and everyone cheered.As they cheered the ground started to shake as four of Ganon's most powerful followers appeared they were bigger then the others.The four attacked the army and threw everyone in the way across the feild Hyrule's army started to fall.

Kinra and the other's ran at the four and split into team's to take them out and end the war.Kinra and maggie started attacking the follower that look's like a snake as they attacked the snake hit them with it's tail.Levi and fan stopped in front of the follower that looks like a lion as it slashed them with it's claws.Zi,kain and link looked at the follower that looks like a T-Rex and sighed as it roared and they slid back.Kiroshi and Zex watched the follower that looked like a dragon fly above them and shot fire.As everyone attacked ganon started laughing at them then Niwa looked at him.

Niwa and ganon watched the battle then looked at each other and got ready to attack each other."Your friend's think they can beat my most powerful follower's they really are fools."Ganon said with a smile as he ran at niwa and started attacking him.

Niwa blocked ganon's attack and kicked him in the face then slashed him across the chest and jumped back.Niwa and ganon ran at each other again and started attacking each other their blade's clashed every time.Ganon tried to slash niwa's leg's but he blocked it in time as ganon shot a dark ball at him.Niwa was hit by the dark ball and it exploded on contact with him he flew back and rolled across the ground.Ganon laughed as he walked toward's Niwa and kicked him in his rib's as he yelled in pain and rolled across the ground.Niwa sat up and looked at ganon as he walked toward's him again and swung his blade down at him.


yes another hang off lol o and bought the voice who said that you will find out who that is in the next chap let's just say the next chap is gonna be full of surprises hehehehehehe
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Old 12/18/06, 11:59 PM   #40
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Lots of fighting is always good. Hopefully no one dies like in the other wars
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Old 01/03/07, 10:18 PM   #41
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Oh, I didn't know you had a chapter up Niwa.

Cool...
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Old 01/04/07, 03:52 AM   #42
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i don't think anyone did but hey wat can ya do i'll get the next chap up as quick as possible
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Old 01/12/07, 11:23 PM   #43
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........Hurry...im dying here
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Old 01/15/07, 05:21 AM   #44
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*tapdances and chants* Update update, it's time for an update!
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Old 01/15/07, 05:32 PM   #45
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i'll get the chap in either later today or tomorrow so keep ur pants on lol wait a little longer ok
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