KH LODI A New Story - Page 2

**Zetsumi** · 10/31/06, 02:50 PM

If you bother to count the number of times you've whored off the name A.J in the first paragraph, you've got the percentage, out of one hundred, that I'm rating this fiction. Grow an imagination cortex, you talentless drone.

IceBlueWings · 10/31/06, 03:04 PM

Niwa!! We haven't talked for a long time...anyway, I'm reading your fic now!! Though it is kind of hard to see, but I'm looking forward for the next chapter!! Hip Hip Hurray!

**Chaotic Misery** · 11/03/06, 07:25 AM

*Nearly kills Niwa* You may control Every Heart's character Kinra's destiny in the fic but, I control your fate so, don't do anything to Every Heart's character that I wouldn't like. Mini skirt is okay with me and Kain better be in the next chapter wearing his eyepatch over his right eye. HURRY UP WITH NEXT CHAPTER!!!

**Every Heart** · 11/03/06, 07:47 AM

*nods head* Yeah!!

.....*rereads* Hey wait....

NO MINISKIRT IN NEXT CHAPTER

**Chaotic Misery** · 11/03/06, 01:18 PM

Okay okay. Sorry Honey. Niwa no miniskirt in next chapter. Next chapter = no miniskirt.

giuocob · 11/03/06, 07:33 PM

I can't read this. From the little bit I tried to read, it seems that the writing is pretty good, but remember...they give you the enter key and space bar for the reason. MAKE PARAGRAPHS.

riku157 · 11/05/06, 12:42 AM

Great story. Ive been waiting for the sequel to the original LOD for awhile now.

Niwa · 11/09/06, 03:48 AM

ok ok ok i get it next chap will be here tomorrow most likly if it is not then the weekend ok people

**Every Heart** · 11/09/06, 04:06 AM

Ok. Remember to be posting in the rp too...

Niwa · 12/04/06, 04:27 PM

Chapter 2 Destination Hyrule

A few days later everybody except niwa are outside looking at a weird portal."What is that it look's so weird and colorful."Fan said as he looked at Zi."It's a portal but why is it here unless something or someone is coming here?"Zi said as Niwa walked outside by them and looked at the portal with a smile."Look's like someone want's us to go through to meet them or kill us one of the two."Niwa said with a laugh as he walked through the portal without looking back."Niwa wait up don't leave us behind and go on your own something might happen."Kinra said as she ran through the portal to follow niwa."This kid is gonna get me killed in no time although he won't realize it."Zi said as he shook his head and walked into the portal.As Zi walked into the portal all the other's followed behind him with no fear only fan was confussed.

They all appeared in a big room with many computer's and five big screen's around it."It's like a nerd's dream come true in this room i wonder who lives here?"Niwa said as he looked around room as he started walking."What is this place and why did someone bring us here in the first place?"Kiroshi said as Fan looked at all the big screen's with a big smile."Hey can we take one of these they look great and it would improve our hangout."Fan said as a door opened and a man with black pants and a blue button up walked out towards them."Who are you did you bring us here to kill us or what?"Niwa said as the man smiled and fan started to shake."I am paul and yes I brought you here Niwa."Paul said as he sat in a chair in front of a coputer."How do you know me and why did you bring us here?"Niwa said as he walked up to paul."I have been watching you for many years and I brought you here because I need your help."

Paul looked at niwa then back at the computer and started doing something."Why do you need my help and what is it you need my help for?"Niwa said as he watched the big screens turn on."Ok you know that many different world's are out there beside's yours or mine well I discovered some new world's nobody has found yet.The new world's are in trouble of being destroyed because the darkness is overtaking them.I need you and your friend's to go to the new world's and save them by destroying the darkness."Paul said as a alarm went off and a picture of a world appeared on a big screen."What is that about paul what's going on why is the alarm going off?"Niwa shouted as the alarm turned off and paul pulled up data of the world on the big screen.Niwa looked at the data as fan rolled around on the ground holding his ear's cause the alarm.

"Another world is in danger you gotta go and save it before it's too late."Paul said as a portal opened up behind him."Ok we will go to the world and destroy all the darkness and save it."Niwa said as he started walking toward's the portal with the other's behind him.When they reached it the portal closed before they could go through."You can only take one person with you just incase another world is in trouble."Paul said as the portal opened up again and Niwa turned around.Niwa looked at him then at the other's thinking aout who he should take with him."Ok well kinra let's go and save that world so we can get out of here."Niwa said as he walked through the portal with a smile and paul smiled as well.Kinra looked at niwa and noticed he walked through she ran through the portal fast so she was not left behind."Good luck you two save that world and make sure too come back alive."Kiroshi said as he smiled and the other's sat down too wait for them to come back.

Niwa and Kinra appeared in a little forest with a village in it.They looked around and saw kid's walking around the village but then the kid's stopped and looked at them."I have never felt so out of place like this before they look at us like we are bad."Niwa said as he looked at kinra and then looked around again."Niwa this is paul i'm talking to you through your mind your in Hyrule this is koriki forest and those are the koriki kid's.They may seen too hate you but they don't they don't see many people different then them.You have to find Link as fast as you can he can help you destroy the darkness here find saria and ask her where link is she will know."

Niwa and kinra started walking around asking the kid's about saria.After awhile they found out saria was in link's house so they went there and found her."Saria we need to know where link is we need his help."Niwa said as he looked at saria and she looked at him with tear's."Link was captured by ganon and nobody can save him everyone has tried but they can't.Can you please save him he is in the camp not to far from here he is with another guy named kain."Saria said as Niwa and Kinra ran out of the forest and towards the camp.

**Every Heart** · 12/04/06, 08:42 PM

Thanks for updating Niwa...

wisdom&valor · 12/04/06, 09:49 PM

YES FIANNLY! Why is my chacter the weried one ? Lol

<Roxas> · 12/05/06, 01:13 AM

Hey Zex wasn't in this one but still I liked it.I wonder where your going with this story?:sleep: :confused:

Niwa · 12/05/06, 04:38 AM

you will find out eventually and yes zex will be in the next one

riku157 · 12/08/06, 10:14 PM

Good chapter. I cant wait till they fight the darkness

10/31/06, 02:50 PM	#16
Zetsumi The black storm brews once more... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Rockhampton, QLD Age: 20 Posts: 3,175 Rep Power: 9	Re: KH LODI A New Story If you bother to count the number of times you've whored off the name A.J in the first paragraph, you've got the percentage, out of one hundred, that I'm rating this fiction. Grow an imagination cortex, you talentless drone.

10/31/06, 03:04 PM	#17
IceBlueWings Let's Dance~! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Live! Age: 16 Posts: 1,249 Rep Power: 5	Re: KH LODI A New Story Niwa!! We haven't talked for a long time...anyway, I'm reading your fic now!! Though it is kind of hard to see, but I'm looking forward for the next chapter!! Hip Hip Hurray!

11/03/06, 07:25 AM	#18
Chaotic Misery Players adapt not survive Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In a world I created for my friends. Wanna join? Age: 18 Posts: 8,590 Rep Power: 15	Re: KH LODI A New Story Nearly kills Niwa You may control Every Heart's character Kinra's destiny in the fic but, I control your fate so, don't do anything to Every Heart's character that I wouldn't like. Mini skirt is okay with me and Kain better be in the next chapter wearing his eyepatch over his right eye. HURRY UP WITH NEXT CHAPTER!!!

11/03/06, 07:47 AM	#19
Every Heart Sexiest Thing Since Sex Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Inside an empty room, my inspiration flows, now wait to hear the tune. Age: 17 Posts: 6,674 Rep Power: 11	Re: KH LODI A New Story nods head Yeah!! .....rereads Hey wait.... NO MINISKIRT IN NEXT CHAPTER

11/03/06, 01:18 PM	#20
Chaotic Misery Players adapt not survive Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In a world I created for my friends. Wanna join? Age: 18 Posts: 8,590 Rep Power: 15	Re: KH LODI A New Story Okay okay. Sorry Honey. Niwa no miniskirt in next chapter. Next chapter = no miniskirt.

11/03/06, 07:33 PM	#21
giuocob Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Cincinnati, OH Age: 18 Posts: 348 Rep Power: 3	Re: KH LODI A New Story I can't read this. From the little bit I tried to read, it seems that the writing is pretty good, but remember...they give you the enter key and space bar for the reason. MAKE PARAGRAPHS.

11/05/06, 12:42 AM	#22
riku157 Organization Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario Age: 18 Posts: 368 Rep Power: 0	Re: KH LODI A New Story Great story. Ive been waiting for the sequel to the original LOD for awhile now.

11/09/06, 03:48 AM	#23
Niwa DDR Expert Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: On the DDR Pad Age: 16 Posts: 2,249 Rep Power: 6	Re: KH LODI A New Story ok ok ok i get it next chap will be here tomorrow most likly if it is not then the weekend ok people

11/09/06, 04:06 AM	#24
Every Heart Sexiest Thing Since Sex Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Inside an empty room, my inspiration flows, now wait to hear the tune. Age: 17 Posts: 6,674 Rep Power: 11	Re: KH LODI A New Story Ok. Remember to be posting in the rp too...

12/04/06, 04:27 PM	#25
Niwa DDR Expert Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: On the DDR Pad Age: 16 Posts: 2,249 Rep Power: 6	Re: KH LODI A New Story Chapter 2 Destination Hyrule A few days later everybody except niwa are outside looking at a weird portal."What is that it look's so weird and colorful."Fan said as he looked at Zi."It's a portal but why is it here unless something or someone is coming here?"Zi said as Niwa walked outside by them and looked at the portal with a smile."Look's like someone want's us to go through to meet them or kill us one of the two."Niwa said with a laugh as he walked through the portal without looking back."Niwa wait up don't leave us behind and go on your own something might happen."Kinra said as she ran through the portal to follow niwa."This kid is gonna get me killed in no time although he won't realize it."Zi said as he shook his head and walked into the portal.As Zi walked into the portal all the other's followed behind him with no fear only fan was confussed. They all appeared in a big room with many computer's and five big screen's around it."It's like a nerd's dream come true in this room i wonder who lives here?"Niwa said as he looked around room as he started walking."What is this place and why did someone bring us here in the first place?"Kiroshi said as Fan looked at all the big screen's with a big smile."Hey can we take one of these they look great and it would improve our hangout."Fan said as a door opened and a man with black pants and a blue button up walked out towards them."Who are you did you bring us here to kill us or what?"Niwa said as the man smiled and fan started to shake."I am paul and yes I brought you here Niwa."Paul said as he sat in a chair in front of a coputer."How do you know me and why did you bring us here?"Niwa said as he walked up to paul."I have been watching you for many years and I brought you here because I need your help." Paul looked at niwa then back at the computer and started doing something."Why do you need my help and what is it you need my help for?"Niwa said as he watched the big screens turn on."Ok you know that many different world's are out there beside's yours or mine well I discovered some new world's nobody has found yet.The new world's are in trouble of being destroyed because the darkness is overtaking them.I need you and your friend's to go to the new world's and save them by destroying the darkness."Paul said as a alarm went off and a picture of a world appeared on a big screen."What is that about paul what's going on why is the alarm going off?"Niwa shouted as the alarm turned off and paul pulled up data of the world on the big screen.Niwa looked at the data as fan rolled around on the ground holding his ear's cause the alarm. "Another world is in danger you gotta go and save it before it's too late."Paul said as a portal opened up behind him."Ok we will go to the world and destroy all the darkness and save it."Niwa said as he started walking toward's the portal with the other's behind him.When they reached it the portal closed before they could go through."You can only take one person with you just incase another world is in trouble."Paul said as the portal opened up again and Niwa turned around.Niwa looked at him then at the other's thinking aout who he should take with him."Ok well kinra let's go and save that world so we can get out of here."Niwa said as he walked through the portal with a smile and paul smiled as well.Kinra looked at niwa and noticed he walked through she ran through the portal fast so she was not left behind."Good luck you two save that world and make sure too come back alive."Kiroshi said as he smiled and the other's sat down too wait for them to come back. Niwa and Kinra appeared in a little forest with a village in it.They looked around and saw kid's walking around the village but then the kid's stopped and looked at them."I have never felt so out of place like this before they look at us like we are bad."Niwa said as he looked at kinra and then looked around again."Niwa this is paul i'm talking to you through your mind your in Hyrule this is koriki forest and those are the koriki kid's.They may seen too hate you but they don't they don't see many people different then them.You have to find Link as fast as you can he can help you destroy the darkness here find saria and ask her where link is she will know." Niwa and kinra started walking around asking the kid's about saria.After awhile they found out saria was in link's house so they went there and found her."Saria we need to know where link is we need his help."Niwa said as he looked at saria and she looked at him with tear's."Link was captured by ganon and nobody can save him everyone has tried but they can't.Can you please save him he is in the camp not to far from here he is with another guy named kain."Saria said as Niwa and Kinra ran out of the forest and towards the camp.

12/04/06, 08:42 PM	#26
Every Heart Sexiest Thing Since Sex Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Inside an empty room, my inspiration flows, now wait to hear the tune. Age: 17 Posts: 6,674 Rep Power: 11	Re: KH LODI A New Story Thanks for updating Niwa...

12/04/06, 09:49 PM	#27
wisdom&valor wanna be like me Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: NY Posts: 1,592 Rep Power: 4	Re: KH LODI A New Story YES FIANNLY! Why is my chacter the weried one ? Lol

12/05/06, 01:13 AM	#28
<Roxas> The Silent warrior Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,471 Rep Power: 5	Re: KH LODI A New Story Hey Zex wasn't in this one but still I liked it.I wonder where your going with this story?:sleep: :confused:

12/05/06, 04:38 AM	#29
Niwa DDR Expert Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: On the DDR Pad Age: 16 Posts: 2,249 Rep Power: 6	Re: KH LODI A New Story you will find out eventually and yes zex will be in the next one

12/08/06, 10:14 PM	#30
riku157 Organization Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Ontario Age: 18 Posts: 368 Rep Power: 0	Re: KH LODI A New Story Good chapter. I cant wait till they fight the darkness

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