Kingdom Hearts II: Dual Destinies(first KH ficcy)

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EDIT!: Ok, so I am considering a different title, as this fanfic is no longer a true alternate KH2. It actually is more of its own thing with a start similar to the game. Heck, it's even going to have its own independent sequel and stuff. However, the old chapters are still similar to Kingdom Hearts II... though a retcon is very possible. I even want to ditch Pete and Maleficent somehow... as my goal is to focus on the Organization more than other villains.

A Very Long Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Oh, and one more thing, cuz it seems I can't shut up. =P The prologue was started back in about late May/Early June, which is why the descriptions aren't as good for days 1-3. I may go in and revamp them, cuz they bug me. @_@ And, I put the ff.net links, cuz posting the whole prologue in one post would be evil.

So, please read and critique/comment. I'd love to hear some opinions, just don't flame me. And, again, if it's too similar at the start, that is because it's just starting ground. I have planned a lot of the story already, and many things end up being different. I just didn't want to have a totally foriegn beginning.

~Mega

PS: The title is just a pladeholder. @_@ I plan on giving it a better name... when I think of one. -shutting up-

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I hate double posting. Don't you? =D -shot- Anyway, I have a new chap done, so here's the link. It's one of the last few chapters with this starting ground. After a small bit of Chapter 4, it's gonna be new stuffs that doesn't necessarily even follow the order of worlds visited in KH2. What I have planned for Timeless River in paticular is rather interesting.(Instead of normal time travel, it's kinda a chain reaction with the Gummi Ship. o_o) But, that's not til chappy 4.

Chapter 3

And, again, I really would like some comments and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

~Mega

[kairi20]

Great chapters keep at it more

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Why thanketh you. XD It's about time I got a bloody comment. -shot- Anywho, Chapter 4 is almost done. Expect it up either tonight or tomorrow.

~Mega

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ZOMG, an update, and a... double post. -shrug- Ok, Chapter 4 jumps around a bit, and I'm not exactly as pleased as I had hoped. Never the less, it gets the job done, and isn't TOO rushed. Oh, and the Underworld scene was planned by my friend, so, yeah... o-O And hooray for leaving that starting ground in the dust. >=)
Chapter 4

Again, comments and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would REALLY be appreciated right now.

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Nobody really cares, but nonetheless, here is an update. It's not really a chapter so much as a inbetween thing to keep the reader busy while Chapter 5 is in progress. That, and I was having a bit of a block on chapter 5, so I wrote this up to keep myself busy. It's not really the BEST work ever, but it's decent, and stuff. -shrug- Chapter 5 will be MUCH, much better.
Pre Chapter Thingy

I probably won't get any replies or anything, but if someone WERE to C&C this fic, I'd appreciate it. I'd rather I got comments and crits on the actual chapters and prologue, though, rather than this thing. Just, remember, the only reason I am doing this fanfic is because it's a request, and a little fun thingy to keep my busy while I decide how to write a different fanfic I've been sorta planning.

~Mega

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The thread, it LIVES! Ok, so the full Chapter is still in the works, but I managed to take a portion of it and update. This is actually what I plan to do: update with halves of my uber long chapters, but at the right spot, so it doesn't seem dodgy. So, here is part one of "Chapter 5: Monochrome World". Believe me, though, part 2 is... interesting... but I shall nto spoil, not that anyone cares. XD

Chapter 5 Part 1

Oh, and I jsut realized that the link to the random pre chapter links to Chapter 4... so, I fixed that up. XD And, for once, can someone PLEASE critique my writing? ._.

~Mega

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Chapter 5: Part 2

Meh, I only keep updating this topic because I have nothing to better to do. Anyway, if anyoen actually cares, this chapter ends with an odd turning point. It's funny what happens when you add last minute details.

~Mega

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Chapter 6, foo!

Meh. I only update this out of boredom, again. Heh, so this chapter I HAD To add Zexion out of my friend's own request. XD Not that it's a bad thing, cuz, he's acutally fun to write for. o.o Not that any even reads this topic~

~Mega

[Jax-Oh1]

Not bad... you kept a good amount of plot while trying to close the gaps with CoM and new stuff. Great story!

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Gee, thanks! =D I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^ Yeah, I tried to give it a gradual start, so it wasn't too foreign, y'know. Anywho, thanks for the comment. I'll have the next update hopefully within the next few days.

~Mega

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This topic has been deadzor for too long. ;-; I know my old chapters are stale, but I could still use critique! DX I'm trying my best.

Meh, here are my recent chapters...

Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9

~Mega

[snowdog]

*waves at Mega*

Coo-ee.

Nice fanfic, I read it, just like I promised! And it's very, very nice work, I have to admit. You're a talented writer.

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Bumping the topic, I am. =D

Thanks for the comment, Snowdog. I appreciate it. ^^

Yeah, I try to be descriptive with my writing, while still moving the plot along. So far, I think this fic is definitely becoming far more unique than I ever expected with its recent twists.

Anyway, the latest chapters are here!

Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12

I really hate it when my work goes unnoticed, so if someone could kindly just post, even if it's just critique, I'd really like it.

Look and leavers make me a sad Mega.

~Mega

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Bumping, ONLY because I'm hoping that people will READ this thing.

I know it's long, but I put a lot of work into it' and I'd love feedback...

Anyway...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3120401/16/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3120401/17/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3120401/18/

~Mega