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Old 08/17/06, 12:21 AM   #1
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this is my first fanfic, so dont critisize me if it isnt good.


Chapter One
Riku's Dellema

Riku stood on the dock of Destiny Islands, looking out to the sea with his shining green eyes. His silver hair flowing in the wind, Just a month coming back from The World That Never Was.
"It looks as if I will never go back. But still, at least I got to go there." He looked up at the sky. "Looks like a storm."
Sora walked up to Riku and sat beside his friend. "Hey Riku, whacha doing?" He asked.
No answer.
"Riku?"
No answer.
"Riku!" Yelled Sora.
Riku glared at him. "Thinking." Then turned back to stare at the sea.
"About what?" Said Sora scratching his dark brown spiky hair. His bright blue eyes looking at Riku with wondering curiosity.
"The World That Never Was." Still staring at the sea.
"Aw, its fine." Said Sora placing a hand on Riku's shoulder causing him to get up.
Riku stroked his silvery hair "I know, but, I was wondering what happened after we beat Zemnus. And if we ever will go back. Said Riku abnormally, and turned to his boat. "I'm going home." And rowed off.
Sora watched him fade into the distance.
Kiari walked up to Sora and sat down beside him and looks at the sunset. "Beautifull isnt it?" The sunset always looks wonderful at this time of day."
"Yeah it does..." Said Sora stroking her hair and looking into her aqua eyes.
Kairi sighed as she put her head on Sora's strong chest.
"You know, after that long adventure, looking for you, I lost hope in finding you. but when i found you, I thought it was the best time of my life." Muttered Sora placing his mustle filled arms around the beautifull Kairi.
Kairi lifted her lovley head of long red hair and looked at Sora "Sora, i never lost hope." She looked into those loving blue eyes knowing that no matter what happens, he would always protect her.
"Yeah, thanks kairi." But his voice trailed off into silence. "But my mind is on other things."
"What things are those?" Asked Kiari looking at him looking worried.
Sora stared at Kiari for a moment and smiled. "Kiari, I am glad to have you as a friend."
Kiari laughed a soft laugh making Sora laugh as well. "Yeah, me too. She lifted her head to his ear, "But maybe we are more than friends." She whispered.
Sora looked up at the sky and saw the clouds coming. "Looks like a storm. We'd better go home."
"You want to come over to my house, we can play in my gameroom?" Asked Kiari hopefully.
He glared at her for a second sensing hope in her eyes. "Sure! I'll come."


Riku sat on his soft velvety bed at his house for quite a while. His bedroom was painted a bright brown on the walls, pictures of he, Sora, and Kairi playng on their beach paradise. His dresser, lined to the brim with stickers he had collected that were starting to fade from all the years.
"I wonder what the others are up to?" He scanned the room with his dark green eyes, looked past his at his dresser, then jeked his face back to see something black with yellow eyes staring at him.
"Huh, whats that? No, it can't be, not here!"
"We have come to take you." It's breath rattled as it breathed.
"No, not as long as I have the keyblade." But as he took it out it began to change form. "What the hell!?"
Archangel is the light outcome of The Way To Dawn. The light side.
"Impressive, I shoud have known you turned to light. Oh Ansem should be proud." Said the heartless. Staring unblinkingly walking up to Riku.
"Ansem The Wise is already proud of me. He told me that a month ago." Answered a mad Riku clutxhing Archangel in his hands, his hands growing ever so tight with every second that past.
Riku charged at the heartless, but it jumped out of the way, allowing him to run into the dresser with his bright silver head. Blood streamed down his face. "D-damn you."
"Your slacking, out of practice are we?" Taunted the heartless. Riku charged again, but the heartless tackled him before he could take a swipe at it, his vision started fading away untill it was completly black. The heartless let him lie there unconsous.

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Old 08/17/06, 03:21 AM   #2
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I liked it! I hope you post more!! :thumbsup:
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Old 08/17/06, 04:55 AM   #3
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thx! i will make more. heres the second.


Chapter 2
The Truth for Sora

Once the storm stopped at Destiny Islands Sora and Kiari were still playing a game of Truth Or Dare.
"Ok, I dare you, erm," Said Sora thinkingly. "Er, to, go to our island and get a poupu fruit and bring it back." He told her
convincingly. Staring into her pretty eyes, looking for any trace of doubt.
"And you plan to do what with it?" Asked Kiari, though determined to do it no matter what the anwer was.
"Oh, nothing, I just thought it might make a good dare." Muttered Sora stupidly looking at her.
"Ok, I'll go." Then walked to go to the island.


After much waiting, Sora thought he'd be in the afterlife by the time she got back.
"I'm back." Piped up Kiari in the doorway when she got back, Sora jumped at the sound of her vouce.
He glared at her for a second. "What took you so long?" Asked Sora.
"I kept on falling out of the tree, that's what." Said Kiari angrily.
"Woa, woa, didn't mean to hurt your feelings." Said Sora almost as though he had made her do something she didn't want to
do, and bounced off her bed.
He sat down on the floor and took the friut, tore it in two pieces and gave one to Kiari, and kept one for himself.
"What's this?" Asked Kiari looking down at the friut.
"It's for you, the legend." Said Sora looking into those lovely blue eyes staring back at him.
She moved closer to him, then the redhead girl he loved so much moved ever so close that he vould count every eyelash on her pretty eyes. They kissed, and kissed. The more they did it the more they wanted to. Untill finally they unlocked.
"Kairi, no matter what happens, i will always protect you. I love you."
"I love you too." she wispered back, stroking his hair lovingly.

"Hey! Get off of me! Where are you taking me?" Blurted Riku bewildered at what happened. Tired from the loss of blood, his once silver hair now stained with his own dark, crimson red blood.
"We heartless are picky, this time we want you, not Sora." The heartless said under its ratteling breath.
"Wonderful, and I suppose Sora is completly useless without me, right?"
"Indeed, this time we need you more than Sora." Said the heartless. "Sora is just phase two of our plan. Hehe!" The heartless
gleefully and jumping so high he almost touched the black ceiling with is entenna.
They walked into a huge, gloomy looking room, that looked none other than the throne room, with none than the heartless flag lining the walls. The walls that he could see were painted black. The table in the center of the room was a little too long for his taste, covered with what looked like human carcasses. The floor was made of brick, and in the very back of the room was a throne made of brick, and lined with sharp red thorns. thorns.
"Like it? It's our best room in the castle, the throne room. Added the heartless.
"It's a little too ugly for my taste." Grunted Riku trying to break free of the heartless's grip. And when he finally did, he brought out Archangel. With hatred in his eyes he said, "I will fight you."
"Come on, I already beat you once! Why try again?" Started the heartless sitting on the throne and looking at the keyblade then glanceing at Riku then glancing back.
"Well, no point in not trying." Said Riku remorsfully, still staring at the heartless. He lunged, and plunged his keyblade in it's shoulder.
"Interesting, you got me by surprise. But, if you don't help us, you will die, and your firends will die as well." Said the heartless with glee and jumping up and down. "Oh how sad." Said the hearless in mock sadness, and afterwards, laughed a high, shrill, cold laugh that sent a chill running up Riku's spine.
"So, what will it be?" Added hearless squeakly with cheerfulness.
Riku stared at his shoes.


I wonder what Riku's doing?" Wondered Sora. "He went to his house to do something."
Kairi looked at him. "Well lets go over there and say hi." Said Kairi while kissing him on the cheek.


"Riku! Riku! He's not here." Said Kairi with worriedly and wuth a sad look on her face.
"Tell me about it." Added Sora scratching his spikey brown hair. "He's not anywhere in this house." He stared at the chair that was by the door with his bright blue eyes. "What?Something's there." He said, pointing at the chair. A heartless had come up out of nowhere. Its black form wiggling as it walked. "Your friend Riku is gone to the dark castel of heartless, Letliel is holding him there." Said the heartless approaching them.
"No, your lying, not Riku!" Cried Sora reproachfully.
"Yes, yes, let it all out, your anger your hate. Now if you want him back, you'll have to find him"
The heartless disappeared at that moment.
"Well, what will we do Sora?" Asked Kairi.
"We have to find him, that's what. Lets go." Said Sora angrily.
And they left to find their friend for the second time.

a note from the author.
hey everyone thx for reading this portion of the fic, hope you like the ones iv written and more are coming up. holla!

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Old 08/17/06, 11:14 PM   #4
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okay first thing fix the grammer your not the only one who has probelms with that *rasies hand* i do that really i do! look at my crapy fan fic XP but use a place where you can spell check then paste it and walla! you hvae no errors!
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Old 09/08/06, 03:19 AM   #5
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iv been editing this fic and i hope more people like it bcs it is more detailed and crap. hope you like.
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Old 09/08/06, 11:04 PM   #6
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okay it is good nice and fixed XD nice job young one now update!
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Old 09/09/06, 05:22 AM   #7
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ok, im back, and thx for that sh281. i just got done done with chapter three, so here it is.

Chapter 3
Sora and Kairi

Sora stormed out of the house, summoned the keyblade and cut a tree clean in half with it.
“Sora, all we need to do is find him again, even though that’s not even helping me.” Said Kairi sadly.
“I know! But we have not had this before since the big ball of darkness came over the island and swallowed it up! And now more heartless on the island? This is turning out to be one bad summer!” Yelled Sora ferociously.
“Well to heck with the heartless! Let’s just find him again.”
“It’s not that easy!” Screamed Sora at Kairi with a drastic stare. “Last time it was gates, the first was just gummy routes, I don’t know how to get around now!
Kairi looked to sea. “This stinks. The heartless should be gone.”
“Not as long as there is darkness in people’s hearts, they won’t die.” Said Sora looking at his shoes. “My story is not over, it will never be.” He closed his eyes thinking to himself, he opened them almost suddenly. “Let’s go!”
Kairi looked at him with a curious stare. “But how will you get around?”
“I don’t know… but I plan to find out. Where are the gummy blocks we had?
“They were in the seaside shack.” Answered Kairi looking worried with her pretty eyes.

“Well?” Asked Letliel.
Riku kept staring at his shoes, but answered in an instant. “Yeah, I’ll do it for my friends.” He said as his eyes fries with hatred and his head aching so.
Letliel jumped up and down with joy. “Great!” Then plunged its claws into his chest. “Feel the darkness within you, engulfing your heart.”
Riku felt his heart fill with darkness, and he was not at all pleased by it. “Get those things out of me! I don’t want the darkness anymore.” Riku’s eyes were filled with hatred at the heatless.
“Oohhh. You will make a fine helper. Jaxar will be pleased….” Said the inky heartless evilly.
Riku glared at it for about two seconds. “Are you serious?”
“Yes, he will be pleased. Why?” Letliel asked him stupidly.
Riku watched the heartless stare at him unblinkingly. “Shuddup! Just get on with it! ... … You even touch my friends, you will get your inky-black butt whooped!
The heartless kept on staring.
“Why do you keep staring at me like that?” Asked Riku staring at the heartless’ ugly face.
The heartless kept staring
“What is wrong with you? You stupid little bi-“Then the heartless started growing, it grew to the ceiling to where it fell off from the force.
“What the?... Whoa, now you are big” Said Riku staring at it with his green eyes. He summoned archangel and lunged at the huge heartless. He screamed with insanity as he did and plunged his keyblade into the heartless.

“Hey, Kairi, where did you say they were again? Sora scratched his spiky head and looked some more.
“They were there. But I don’t know where they went.” She said as she looked into his bright blue eyes.
She pecked him on the cheek, his heart raced. He spun her around and they locked lips. Holding her close to him, he felt her heart beating in her chest, he stroked her pretty long red hair. He felt her feeling his body as if to see if this was a dream. They hugged and kissed for long after that.
She giggled. “You will always protect me right?”
“Yeah! Why wouldn’t I?
“I dunno stupid question. She smiled as she stared into his starry eyes, lovingly stroking his head.
“You never have stupid questions. Now to get those gummy blocks.”
They looked all over the island. Then Sora looked in the last place he expected, the secret spot under the tree.
“Found them! Let’s get building.”
“Good going Sora! You found them!” Said Kairi staring at the blocks of gummy like substances.
After a long time of selecting blocks and building, the gummy ship was almost finished.
“One more piece.” He placed a block on and the finished was done. It shined in all its glory… the old Kingdom Model. Sora smiled at his creation. “Well were done, finally.”
“Finally”, is the word.” Answered Kairi slumping in her beach chair, her blue eyes looking at the old ship.
Sora climbed in and turned on the engine. It rumbled and growled in the hood. “Come on!” He yelled at Kairi down on the ground.
She climbed in beside him and got comfortable. Sora pushed on the gas pedal, they were pushed into their seats with such great force it felt like his face was going to be ripped off. But he was used to this feeling. Sora looked back down to his island, he felt an icy diamond tear run down his cheek.

End of Chapter 3

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Old 09/11/06, 01:41 AM   #8
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