my first love

keybladeprincess · 08/12/06, 08:55 PM

a/n this is kairi's point of view

I was at school and this boy walked up to me and sayed something (i didnt pay no mind at the time.) he had brown hair and pritty blue eyes of corese my best friend said we wouldnt :blush: :blushing: talk to each other with out bumping to each other

Takushi Rena · 08/12/06, 09:08 PM

-closed!-

Your story is one paragraph, its not going to get very far very fast. Dx Check out the rules before you post in here, kay? You have to have a couple more paragraphs than that.

Also, you miiight want to check out thelonepickle's thread on grammar. Its at the top and its called "Articles of Literacy".

Check those out before you work on your next story! :3

08/12/06, 08:55 PM	#1
keybladeprincess Court Mage Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: yall dont need to know Age: 14 Posts: 33 Rep Power: 0	my first love a/n this is kairi's point of view I was at school and this boy walked up to me and sayed something (i didnt pay no mind at the time.) he had brown hair and pritty blue eyes of corese my best friend said we wouldnt :blush: :blushing: talk to each other with out bumping to each other

08/12/06, 09:08 PM	#2
Takushi Rena ガラスの中で眠れる記憶 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Playing Crisis Core! ZACK IS BETTER THAN CLOUD. >:[ Age: 8 Posts: 4,584 Rep Power: 12	Re: my first love -closed!- Your story is one paragraph, its not going to get very far very fast. Dx Check out the rules before you post in here, kay? You have to have a couple more paragraphs than that. Also, you miiight want to check out thelonepickle's thread on grammar. Its at the top and its called "Articles of Literacy". Check those out before you work on your next story! :3

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