A story rough draft about Demons

Duo_forbidden · 08/12/06, 04:53 AM

Okay before I start, I just want you guys to know that this is a rough draft. The Final draft should be finish by tommrow. If you have any ideas, please PM me.

Chapeter I: Intro

Demons. They don't really exsist...do they? Demons are just something humans created in their imagination...right? No. They exsist. Humans just don't want to believe that they do. They lurk in the shadows. Waiting for prey. Human prey. Preying on the weak. On the inocent. The helpless. Whenever they can, Demons will prey on humans to suit their appetite.

In the world, Demons exsist. They come in many shapes, sizes, and forms. Some are mindless creatures. Others are highly intellegent. Mostly, Demons don't travel around in groups. Only as an individual. But the one place they love to go to on earth is The United States. Yes Demons love to eat humans there.

In the cities, they hide and wait. They wait for the time to strike.

In a particular city, New york New york, Demons are everywhere. In shadows they hide. In darkness. This is where the adventure begins.

To be contiuned....

Thats what I got so far. In some ways I'm kinda stuck. I have a genral idea on where I want to take it.

**Shinji** · 08/13/06, 08:40 PM

umm it is good but who is the main character??

or is it just about demons eating people??

Duo_forbidden · 08/13/06, 08:49 PM

"GASP" I reader!!! lol.

But to answer your question, I'll tell you this. there's an organization that fights demons. The main character is a half demon. I'm really trying to write the story but I'm in high school and I hardly have some free time. I will put the second part of on here soon.:mellow:

**Shinji** · 08/14/06, 06:39 PM

well this main character is starting to sound like dante.....

08/12/06, 04:53 AM	#1
Duo_forbidden Being mellow Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: The Legacy era. Age: 19 Posts: 2,154 Rep Power: 8	A story rough draft about Demons Okay before I start, I just want you guys to know that this is a rough draft. The Final draft should be finish by tommrow. If you have any ideas, please PM me. Chapeter I: Intro Demons. They don't really exsist...do they? Demons are just something humans created in their imagination...right? No. They exsist. Humans just don't want to believe that they do. They lurk in the shadows. Waiting for prey. Human prey. Preying on the weak. On the inocent. The helpless. Whenever they can, Demons will prey on humans to suit their appetite. In the world, Demons exsist. They come in many shapes, sizes, and forms. Some are mindless creatures. Others are highly intellegent. Mostly, Demons don't travel around in groups. Only as an individual. But the one place they love to go to on earth is The United States. Yes Demons love to eat humans there. In the cities, they hide and wait. They wait for the time to strike. In a particular city, New york New york, Demons are everywhere. In shadows they hide. In darkness. This is where the adventure begins. To be contiuned.... Thats what I got so far. In some ways I'm kinda stuck. I have a genral idea on where I want to take it.

08/13/06, 08:40 PM	#2
Shinji Out of Retirement Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Yuna's Bed... Age: 16 Posts: 3,065 Rep Power: 7	Re: A story rough draft about Demons umm it is good but who is the main character?? or is it just about demons eating people??

08/13/06, 08:49 PM	#3
Duo_forbidden Being mellow Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: The Legacy era. Age: 19 Posts: 2,154 Rep Power: 8	Re: A story rough draft about Demons "GASP" I reader!!! lol. But to answer your question, I'll tell you this. there's an organization that fights demons. The main character is a half demon. I'm really trying to write the story but I'm in high school and I hardly have some free time. I will put the second part of on here soon.:mellow:

08/14/06, 06:39 PM	#4
Shinji Out of Retirement Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Yuna's Bed... Age: 16 Posts: 3,065 Rep Power: 7	Re: A story rough draft about Demons well this main character is starting to sound like dante.....

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