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| When all else fails! | Ok, I remeber that my other one didn't do well so here's one that's completely new. Warning. this contains some violent.........lines. Dark Energy 1 Raid on the Shore This is how it begins. A small town in the north called Friga is attacked and destroyed. The reason it was attacked is unknown, along with who did it. Then People go and rebuild the town. They are found torn apart. A long series of attacks ensue up in the north, but no one knows who. Because no one survived. Then the Neons, a race of brutal ceartures made to fight in war go up to the north to see who the attackers are. Once they get up there they find nothing. With disapointment they go back to there homeland. But back there they find that it has faced the same fate as the north. Out raged they look for the culpret with no luck. Then, in the dead of night, something attacked the Neons. These things looked like souls. Souls handed over from the darkness to live in this world and fight, bringing choas and hovac to everone and everything. The Neons were slautered, few escaped. The few that did formed a plan. They would find out were these things came from and attack there fortress, avenging the ones that these dark souls killed. The Neons fought against the souls, but had no luck in finding the way they came. Then, someone pointed something out. The souls always came in from the south-east. Without hesitastion the army of Neons moved to the south-eastern end. And saw asomething that was never there before. An island out there, a huge one that opscured everything else. The Neons gathered whatever thaey could to make boats to sail out there. They made them and went to see. And That is where this story begins. In the ocean right before the attack. ~~~ Mist was everywhere, water spalshing up onto the boats rim. An island in the distance about to be attacked. And twenty-eight boats, holding one hundred and sixety-five Neons. Klizer looked at all of this with a tired face, he had not been able to sleep for a week because of building the boats. The scared men looked at only the island from what Klizer could see. Some were showing brave faces and some were showing there fear. "Hey Kli, how many of them do you think there are?"Said Kengo. Klizer didn't awnser, he was to scared to even say one word. "Kli......"Kengo said again. Klizer sighed and awnsered,"Two thousand, five hundred and thirty-six,"Klizer awnsered sarcasticly. Kengo laughed and looked ahead at the island. It came closer into view and Everybody on the boats could see a fortress with huge cataplutes and crossbows on it. Klizer guleped and looked at Kazer, his father. Kazer was the general and leader of this attack. Klizer tried to modle his face off of his fathers, but he just couldn't show that much bravery at this point. He was not used to fighting in something like this(as so with most of the other men)and was sure that he was going to die, even though he was trained better then the others. As the island came into view Kazer turned around and got ready for a speech. "Men, as we appoarch our most likely end I will say, It all begins here."Klizer litsened to this little bit and felt very unsatisfied. He knew his father was not good with words but couldn't he just give them a little more of a speech, if you could call it that. With no more time the boats landed and the Neons charged in, many falling within a few minutes. Klizer was in dismay, he couldn't realize what was going on, then a sound was heard as a sword was swung at him. Klizer reached for his sword, took it out and cut the souls arm off. Shoving his sword into it he ran ahead to kengo and said, "How much longer to you think this will last?" There was no awnser. Klizer turnded Kengo around and saw that his entire face was cut off by a sword. Klizer stoped in shock and saw a towering figure apporch him. Not looking at this figure he let himself be picked up by it. The thing laghed and threw Klizer to the ground, kicked him down the hill andshot an arrow into his arm. Klizer, noticeing this, yelled out in pain lay on the ground. A blast of magic was fired from someone. It hit Klizer and threw him into the air. But it did not stop there, it threw him further into the middle of the ocean. Klizer saw the gold blood flow from his arm and out to sea. He fainted not knowing what had happened. I'd like some people to post before I post chapter two.Oh and it won't let me put anthing in the middle so it just does that to me. |
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